Keywords: 400 words in the fourth grade of Cheng Primary School
Words: 400 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 400 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is merit. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Success is a combination of "success" and "merit". People always think that they are equal. As we all know, "fairness" is the basis of "success". Without "public", there is no "success". Wang Xizhi, a great calligrapher in the Jin Dynasty, studied painting in Linchi for more than 20 years, washing brushes and blackening the pool water. Sima Qian achieved perfect calligraphy. The historian Tan Qian was born with dry food for a little historical data 100 miles. When he was nearly 60 years old, he was still writing. ..... It is better to stand up and accumulate your own merits than to sit and watch others succeed. Success is selfish, it will never care about anyone who is lazy, it is selfless. It will shine brilliant starlight on the winners without reservation. Teacher's comment: This article has a clear point of view and novel conception. The author explains and demonstrates the word "success" alone, telling readers that success can only be achieved if they persevere and endure hardships. "Success is selfish, it will never care for anyone who is lazy, but success is selfless, and it will shine bright stars on the winners without reservation." This sentence at the end is well written and profound in philosophy, which points out the theme of the article. The theme of the article is clear, but the argument is not sufficient. It is suggested that young authors talk about what they have encountered or seen with their own eyes to support their views, so that the article will be more convincing and the content of the article will be more substantial. (Master China: Teacher Wang) 20 10-2-4 18:58:00