What you need to improve is to change from writing small characters to writing big characters or Chinese characters, so as to enhance your writing ability and control and easily understand the nuances of the original post. There are many benefits. When you write in capital letters, you can try to use lowercase letters. In the selection of posts, I suggest you come to Zhong You or Wang Xizhi's regular script posts first, and then to Ou Yangxun and Zhao Mengfu's regular script posts.
The hardest thing about learning books is that you can't stand loneliness and remain resilient. Learning books is not a hundred days' work, especially learning models. Therefore, we must overcome our eagerness for success and persist for a long time before we can make progress!
(The following is my calligraphy practice)
I think it's good that your calligraphy has been written like this for half a year. Don't be discouraged, keep writing. I've been writing Chinese calligraphy off and on for 30 years. I feel bad, but I have also honed a little experience. I want to share with you:
First, choose the right copybook, choose the right copybook. It is very important for beginners to choose the right copybook. As the saying goes, "women are afraid of marrying the wrong person and men are afraid of entering the wrong line", which is also the reason for practicing calligraphy and choosing copybooks. Beginners start with regular script and lay a good foundation. I think Yan Zhenqing's copybook should be the first choice. My teacher said that Yan-style characters are easy to get in and out, while European-style characters are difficult to get in and out. Yan style is easy to practice and easy to stick. It is not easy to get used to practicing European characters, and it is not easy to paste them when practicing. In the world of calligraphy, practicing Yan-style characters is easy to produce results, while practicing European-style characters is not easy to produce results. I practiced calligraphy through detours, practiced Yan for several years, practiced Liu (public rights) for several years, and practiced Europe () for several years. After practicing, the more you write, the worse your handwriting looks. Compared with the words written ten years ago, I found that the words written in the past looked good. So I dug up Yan Tie again and practiced it again from the beginning. This is my lesson.
Second, we must persist and persist. To practice calligraphy, it is important to work hard on the word "practice". After choosing the copybook, you should calm down and practice. I used to work in an office, and my unit was near the station, so I basically didn't spend time on the road. Every day, I get up at half past six and practice for an hour. Go home at noon and practice for another hour, practice for a few hours after dinner, and go to bed at night. Ten years of persistence, the more you write, the more confident you become. I gradually formed the habit of writing, and sometimes if I don't write for a day, it seems that something is missing. So I came all the way.
Third, the post should be serious. Besides long-term persistence, you must also have a correct and serious attitude. First of all, we should be serious, stick to our original posts one by one and be loyal to one post. Practice with Mi Zige to master the angle and position of each stroke. The position of strokes in words is very important. There is a big gap between the words practiced by most people and the original posts, that is, they ignore this important link and write more and more. Some people practice calligraphy for three years and can't even write their own names. This is caused by not paying attention to the position of strokes in the word structure.
Let's call it a day.
(The pictures in the text are all my calligraphy works.)
In half a year, you can explain the strokes clearly, which shows that you have worked hard and are also a smart person with good understanding. But, unfortunately, you are going the wrong way.
1, method unknown. At first glance, what you wrote seems to be Ou Kai's, but it contains many characteristics of Yan Zhenqing and Liu Gongquan, and few figures are written in the way of Zhong Shaojing.
When learning calligraphy for the first time, you should focus on one family, especially don't mix different styles of fonts, which will only make you more confused as you learn.
2, the brushwork is not fine. When practicing calligraphy for the first time, we should take the center as the center, with the nib in front and the pen slightly behind. This is often said that "pushing the pen is clumsy", so that the ink can be pushed into the paper and the lines can be calm and powerful.
In your calligraphy, many strokes are slender and weak, and the ink color floats on the paper, which is a sign of not working hard enough.
3. Incorrect posting method. For beginners of calligraphy, after selecting a post, it is necessary to classify the words in the post according to its structural characteristics, and then make a temporary study to make it convenient to draw inferences.
And from beginning to end, forgetting the front behind the face is often inefficient.
Judging from your calligraphy, you are a smart person, but to learn calligraphy, you must first be an honest person, calm down and work hard, and get to know one family before you know other families.
For beginners, it takes six months to practice calligraphy, not necessarily every day, but at least your hands don't shake; I can't write easily, but I am definitely more confident than before I learned to write. Although it was selected from the word set, it was not written correctly. I still can't see whose regular script I wrote, but I'm probably studying Tang Kai.
So you see, there are at least three major improvements, which is a good thing. Congratulations!
Persistence depends on whether you are interested and motivated.
You should water some cold water first. If you continue to improvise like this, it is estimated that there will be no good results, which is foreseeable. Because at present, you are still in the primary stage of "high-minded".
Then how can we solve the problem of "high eyes but low hands" first? In fact, it can't be solved simply by copying it over and over again, but we must first achieve "high-minded and low-minded". To put it mildly, it is to begin to understand the beauty of the learning object!
For example, to learn a calligrapher's works, we must first understand where the beauty lies, why people can feel a certain style and characteristics, and which words, word groups, lines and articles can show the calligrapher's style and characteristics.
The works of a calligrapher in a certain period were influenced by the ideological trend at that time. Read the function of calligraphy art at that time from the aesthetic feeling of works, read stories from characters and read unique personality from font structure, and you will really like calligraphy. It is also the first step out of the "eye height".
Only when you know what beauty is, have discernment, and practice specific words, will you become familiar with it, and then you will change your writing problems in batches, and you will be clear about the direction and path.
I recommend a book on calligraphy aesthetics to you. Douban score is above 8. The book is called Calligraphy Class: Where is the Beauty of Characters. After reading it, you will understand what kind of words are beautiful.
Seeing clearly and practicing writing can add wings to the tiger and make rapid progress!
I hope it helps you!
It's not bad to write like this in half a year. Come on.
Judging from the exercises, his works have begun to take the form of regular script, and there is a glimpse of Liu Gongquan's brushwork in his works. However, there are some confusion and uncertainty in the choice of brushwork, the skills of pasting are not solid, the calligraphy of the whole work is not harmonious, and there are also many shortcomings in structure and brushwork. It is suggested that if you just learn calligraphy, you should start with pasting, and then create poetry collections after mastering the brushwork of calligraphy. Sticking is the only way to learn calligraphy, and the direction and method are mastered.
1, first determine the inscriptions you want to learn, such as Liu Gongquan, Yan Zhenqing, Ou Yangxun, Zhao Mengfu and other classic inscriptions, choose one; As a beginner, I chose Yan brand. I have been posting for almost two years, and I have been studying tablet computers in Ou Yangxun for about two years (as an intern). I will read it over and over again, and I will learn only when I see the wonderful places written on each tablet;
2. Before posting, it is recommended to look at the words of the inscription, such as the words (ups and downs of brushwork thickness) and the length of structural strokes. The closer you look, the closer and slower you will be, and master the pen skills of the center and winger. If you don't know the brushwork, you can find some knowledge about calligraphy theory. Calligraphy theory is also a beginner in calligraphy and needs to learn more.
3. To sum up, posting is a process, and inheritance is innovative. Therefore, calligraphy emphasizes the importance of taking the method, and your calligraphy has the problem of taking the method. We must first decide who I want to learn (choose my favorite book style). This kind of thinking will definitely make great progress after posting for half a year.
Although the handwriting is not home yet, my attitude is correct. In any case, you can't write well for half a year. Writing is not the best, only better. It requires long-term training and frequent release. To write well, the key is to have hobbies and feel the beauty of strokes, structure and composition. With aesthetic feeling, there is unremitting pursuit, which is the driving force for persistence.
Generally speaking, the better you write, the more you love to write. Because he has appreciated this kind of beauty. Writing is not a temporary passion, nor a simple interest. Once you have a hobby, you will be the same all your life. This has nothing to do with your occupation, and it has nothing to do with the rich and the poor, just because you have a sense of beauty and the pursuit of beauty.
Why do some farmers write well? Because he has both beauty and pursuit. Of course, poor conditions and incorrect methods have a great influence on success, but as long as we persist in pursuing, there will always be progress, although progress is diffuse.
As a hobby, writing is undoubtedly a kind of elegance, which is conducive to cultivating sentiment and improving cultural level. But don't be associated with fame and fortune, it's a simple hobby. Have a rest after dinner, recall the original post and draw a picture on the spot.
The brushwork changes greatly because of the different styles of books, and the weather is infinite. As long as you are imaginative and energetic, you can show it between stippling and painting, and you will have an emotional tendency. Good calligraphy is vital and alive, like evergreen pine and cypress.
You can practice grass, read less regular script and write slowly.
Although I am a layman, I think your handwriting is good, and I just started practicing it. First of all, you need to know what you are practicing calligraphy for. If you are a hobby and like to write calligraphy, then continue to practice, mainly to enjoy the process of writing, and don't care too much about how the handwriting is written.
Calligraphers have not written for more than ten years, and it took decades to achieve their present achievements. You've just been practicing for half a year, and it seems that you haven't put down your mind yet. What are you pursuing? Show off your calligraphy in front of the whole world, will you?
Come on, brother, find some balance for you. Your handwriting is much better than mine.
"Make the best use of everything", words are used to convey information. As long as we know each other. Your handwriting is already very good!
"there is specialization in the industry." If you are a calligrapher, you are not enough. Because calligraphers' major is calligraphy. Create beauty from the professional field!
Of course, Cang Xie has written books for thousands of years, and China Chinese characters have their unique charm. In addition to transmitting information, we can also feel spiritual practice from the writing process. This is great! Practicing calligraphy can cultivate self-cultivation, keep fit and understand philosophy. Such as its shape, its sound and method are natural, and its meaning is completely Taoist.
It seems that you still have to practice your handwriting!