Beginners of calligraphy, send a picture, welcome to correct me.

The cursive writing of many words of this word is good, and it can be seen that there is still a certain calligraphy foundation. Personal feeling is that the strokes are slender, and the strokes are slightly insufficient when using the pen. In addition, when writing, pay attention to leaving pores, pay attention to the combination of density and density, and flow smoothly. This will add more charm to calligraphy.