Xi Murong's Tong Hua
With a muffled sound, the whole world was shrouded in white Huayin.
South Korea's sky, rolling hills and clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river. It seems that everything in the world should be alive. At this moment, alcohol, honey and sunshine are transparent and cheering, but they are fine-tuned and freely floating into countless light spots.
This afternoon is full of white flowers, and I always feel familiar with it. I always feel that it is a space where any kind of flowers can gather. The song can be said that you can put Chu in the post-impressionist works of neoclassicism-anyone with a good record should have such an afternoon in this summer season.
Appreciate:
The paragraph depicts the beautiful cherry blossoms in full bloom with vivid brushstrokes. The combination of vision and hearing is full of vitality and vigor. The use of metaphor compares the prosperous scene in full bloom to a flowing river. Compared with alcohol and honey, the scene the sun will watch depicts beauty. The last sentence strengthens the language situation and makes people feel that peach blossoms are in full bloom, just like bloom, which is covered by the whole hillside, and the tension of life is infinite.
And the author's imagination is full of romantic fantasies.
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Zhang Ailing's Autumn Rain
Rain, like silver sticky silk, weaves a soft net and nets the whole autumn world. The world is dark, and the spider silk screen tied to the roof is like an ancient residence. There are gray clouds in the sky, like white powder falling from the roof. In the shadow of Mrding, everything is very boring. Pomegranate, mulberry and grapevine in the shady garden represent something, but the prosperity of the past summer has now become the remains of Roman architecture, shivering in the rustling rain and recalling the glory of the past. The grass has moved to the melancholy yellow, and no flowers can be found underground; The wall of the dormitory is like a delicate daffodil. They hung his head and covered his mouth, and his eyes were full of tears. They lamented the lewdness there, and it took only two sunny days to meet such a beautiful day. Only the sweet-scented osmanthus in the corner, a few branches have been inlaid with golden precious buds, carefully hidden in the green oval leaves, revealing the hope of Xiao Xin's life germination.
Appreciate:
Sometimes I don't like Zhang ailing's writing so much, just like this autumn, someone will write a warm and humid atmosphere. Her writing is gloomy and light, which makes people feel cold and chilling.
But perhaps this is Zhang Ailing's text. She is independent and dark, but she really tests the deepest charm of human heart. The details in the paper are only metaphors and personification, which makes the autumn writing vivid, but it also enters a dull and lonely color. In this paper, it is full of gray, melancholy, sad, sparse and interesting nonsense life, and the only ray of hope is a bunch of budding, only growing on the neglected osmanthus tree.
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The first snow in Zhang Xiaofeng
Now, the sun has risen, the fog has gradually dispersed, and the green in the wilderness of Ottawa looks soft, so I think that even if I accidentally fall down the mountain, I won't scratch my skin. In most cases, I will bounce back twice, and then put on green socks that don't fade. There is a river on the left and right feet, but it also emits green light. That's another kind of green and bright, like a mixed oil sample. The mountain is still green, but it is a pile of rich and beautiful green, which makes people feel that no matter where you start, you can't pull out a crack, even if you dig twice, it will still not reduce the green.
In addition, my screen is green, very light green, and the photos in the sun, like ancient beauty, are really balanced, like a veil. You think I drank it when I dyed it green in the morning? You write, in my mind, how can he not be full of vibrant green everywhere?
Appreciate:
Fully mobilize vision and touch to write the green of spring. The metaphors used many times are vivid. I like this passage because it looks warm. Where does this warmth show up? I think it comes from the warm words in my eyes, "shiny", "rich" and "fresh". As a written child, it is more poetic and beautiful. His words are like green life, flowing, as if they had just appeared in the letter. I like Green, too. I like his works. Their vitality makes people feel joy and hope.
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Autumn in Zhang Xiaofeng
Then, in Nanjing, I just started to remember some things that treat the head and feet, and often a beautiful picture will appear in the suburbs. I quietly walked away from the adults and sat alone on the grass. The rustling leaves of the phoenix tree began to drop significantly, falling into my heart with many mysterious aesthetic feelings. I was suddenly confused, and my little heart couldn't bear such excitement. I picked up a messy leaf. The leaves are brown and curved, like a boat, carrying a dream, but beside it, there are two beautiful buttonwood trees.
Every time it rains, I shuttle between the leaves and pick up the plane tree on the ground. There must be one or two. I didn't find the buttonwood? For two years, I can hear the west wind in the distance, like leaves rustling in the wind. I can also see those seeds carrying dream boats, sailing on the grassland and sailing in hope.
Appreciate:
The beautiful brushwork of this passage expresses the favorite buttonwood leaves. The onomatopoeic words of "Sasha Vujacic" are vivid and enable readers to guess. Mysterious beauty, wrote: "The phoenix tree in autumn is mysterious and beautiful, and the phoenix tree leaves in the eyes are full of infinite charm and beauty, which is very infectious. This metaphor vividly depicts the shape of leaves. The author's color, modeling and other aspects are explained. Compared with a ship with only one side, there is a plane tree on one side of the ship, which makes people fascinated. I want to see this beautiful buttonwood tree. The author's ingenuity will be reflected in beauty.
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Where there is water, the tea cave mountain builds a city, and the other side of the mountain is like a snake. You can climb the mountain with savings. On the seashore side, there is room to accommodate the river outside the city. Bay park pier, small tent boat. When the boat came down, it was tung oil and green salt, but it was bravery. Uplink cotton yarn and seafood grocery cloth factory. What is the whole pier? Their house is half on land and half in water. Because of the limited scope, those people do have houses and walk on stilts. The river rises with the spring, and the water gradually enters the street. People on River Street left a long ladder with one end on the roof and the other end on the wall. Everyone swore to cry, blankets, rice jars, enter the city from the ladder, and exit the city gate from the water of time. If the water is particularly fierce in a certain year, there must be two stilt houses rushing along the river, and everyone is staring at Chengtou.
Appreciate:
Good scenery is simple and full of respect for the power of description, but you can clearly feel the indescribable taste of the live silhouette "Snake Wall, Edge Climbing" from these tricks, and the faint breath complements the article.
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What bothers Xiangzi most is that he can't get rid of Tigress's entanglement. From the beginning, he was unwilling to accept this relationship imposed on him and tried to avoid her. Although compared with soldiers and spies, Tigress has no right to kill him at will; He took the arrangement of accepting Tigress as "surrender". In this case, he saw his incompetence and powerlessness more clearly: "Life is his own, but let others take care of it." This has played a more serious role than before in eroding his will to survive and breaking his desire to survive, from striving for success to self-doubt and self-degradation.
Appreciate:
Here, the oppression of class by class is not manifested as political persecution or economic exploitation, but as the destruction and torture of the characters' body and mind. Xiangzi can get what he wants, but he can't refuse what he hates. All these fully depict the complex content of life and Xiangzi's humble situation, which is the part that can best express Lao She's specialty in the book.
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Short Story of Philosophy of Life —— Ren Jin
Once there was a man from a small country who came to China to pay tribute to three identical gold people. The golden wall was brilliant and the emperor was very happy. However, the people of this small country are not kind, and at the same time, a question arises: who is the most valuable of these three gold people? The emperor thought of many ways to ask the jeweler to check, weigh and watch the work, all of which were exactly the same. What shall we do? The messenger is still waiting for a return. A vast country, you don't even understand this little thing? Finally, an old minister who abdicated said that he had an idea. The emperor invited the emissary to the main hall, and the old minister confidently took three straws and inserted them into the ear of the first gold man. The straw came out of the other ear. The straw of the second gold man fell out directly from his mouth, and the straw of the third gold man fell into his stomach without a sound. The old minister said: the third gold man is the most valuable! The messenger was silent and the answer was correct.
Appreciation: This story tells us that the most valuable person is not necessarily the most talkative person. God gave us two ears and one mouth, which was supposed to make us listen more and talk less. Being good at listening is the most basic quality of a mature person.
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Write the failure on the back
There was a young man who dreamed of becoming an excellent racing driver since he was a child. He used to drive a truck when he was in the army, which greatly helped him master driving skills.
After retiring, he chose to drive on the farm. After work, he still insisted on taking part in the skill training of an amateur racing team. Whenever there is an opportunity to meet a car race, he will try his best to participate. Because he can't get a good ranking, his racing income is almost zero, which also makes him owe a lot of debts.
That year, he took part in the Wisconsin car race. Halfway through the race, his car ranked third, and he is very likely to get a good place in this race.
Suddenly, two cars in front of him collided, and he quickly turned the steering wheel of the car to try to avoid them. But it failed after all, because the speed was too fast. As a result, he ran into the wall beside the driveway and the car stopped in flames. When he was rescued, his hand was burned and his nose was gone. The surface damage area reached 40%. The doctor operated on him for seven hours before he broke free from death.
After the accident, although his life was saved, his hands shrank like chicken feet. The doctor told him, "You can't drive any more."
However, he did not lose confidence and despair. In order to realize that distant dream, he is determined to pay the price for success again. He underwent a series of skin transplants. In order to restore the flexibility of his fingers, he kept practicing grasping wooden strips with residual limbs every day, sometimes sweating with pain, but he persisted. He always believes in his ability. After the last operation, he returned to the farm, re-polished the calluses on his palms with a bulldozer, and continued to practice racing.
Only nine months later, he was in back in the game again! First, he took part in an open racing competition, but he didn't win, because his car unexpectedly stalled halfway. However, in the following 200-mile car race, he won the second place.
Two months later, he confidently drove into the stadium, or the stadium where the accident happened last time. After fierce competition, he finally won the 250-mile race
He is the great racing driver in American legend-Jimmy? Harry Bosch. When Jimmy first faced the enthusiastic and crazy audience as a champion, he shed tears of excitement. One by one, some reporters surrounded him and asked him the same question: "What made you bounce back after that heavy blow?"
At this time, Jimmy is holding a poster picture of the game, which shows a racing car speeding against the sunrise. He didn't answer, but smiled and wrote a dignified sentence on the back of the picture with a black pen: Write the failure on the back, I believe I will succeed!
Appreciate:
"Write the failure on the back, I believe I will succeed." Jimmy. Harry Bos succeeded with his pursuit of dreams and his desire for success.
"Jimmy? Harry Bosch's hands shrank like chicken feet, and the doctor told him,' You can't learn to drive anymore.' "The greatest suffering in life is this, just like an ambitious bird trying to fly. Suddenly, someone told him, "Your wing is broken and you can't fly any more. "But in spite of this, he suffered ten times more pain than ordinary people, and finally succeeded in realizing his dream of becoming an excellent racing driver.
This is a legend and a reality. His success tells us that people can't bow to suffering and write their failures on the back. As long as they have dreams, they will have success and hope. We all have a dream of our own, and we have woven many beautiful dreams for our dreams, but many MengMeng's were broken at the moment when we experienced failures and setbacks, because we were all thinking, "If I fail, my dream is gone, can I still succeed?" ? Can my dream come true? "We have forgotten that our failures are written on the front of our dreams, and dreams are constantly hitting us: If you fail, can you succeed? Why not learn from Jimmy? Harry Bosch, we are much luckier than him, because our bodies are still healthy, and we still have healthy bodies to realize our dreams. Write the failure on the back, let the dream fly in the suffering, and success is just around the corner.
"If fate breaks the sail of hope, please don't despair, the other shore is still there. If fate withers beautiful flowers, please don't be helpless, because the road is still there, life is still there, dreams are still there, and hope is still there." Write down the failure on the back, let the wings of dreams fly in the misery, and believe in yourself: you will succeed.