Monk Zhinan
The shade of ancient wood is a short awning, and the stick thistle helps me cross the east of the bridge.
The clothes are wet and the apricot blossoms are raining, and the face is not cold.
Appreciation (originality):
"Apricot flowers and rain wet the skirt, and the breeze does not cold the face", and writing "Spring Breeze and Spring Rain" is an apt and vivid metaphor, and it is a famous sentence that has been told through the ages.
The first sentence: In February, the ship stopped in the shade of the ancient forest, tied the cable and went ashore. A short canopy is a boat. The ancient wood was dark, but the author changed his pen and tied the boat safely and calmly.
The second sentence: climb the bridge with a stick and run to the east of the bridge. The sentence "the stick helps me" shows that the author is not alone, because the stick helps me. Why did you go to Qiaodong? Combine the first sentence with three or four sentences, and you will understand that this is a turning point, because the east and west of the bridge are cold and the east and west of the bridge are warm, which are two completely different worlds. Another spring is the east wind, and the east of the ancients represents the direction of hometown. Because the author came for a spring outing, he went to Qiaodong, not Qiaoxi.
The third and fourth sentences: people's clothes are wet, which is the spring rain when apricot flowers are in full bloom; It is a slight spring breeze blowing between willows, which blows straight to people's faces and does not feel a trace of coolness. Apricot blossoms are quiet, spring rain is like smoke and fog, willows are delicate, and spring breeze is like a dream, which is a unique comfort and harmony in early spring and February.
The skill in writing is excellent, and it is really great to have such a state. I hope I can help you adopt it.