The poem begins with the word "you"

Bottom line: God bless our village and seek the top line with favorable weather. The first word on the top line is Zhai.

-first of all, because the word "shun" is squeaky, according to the couplet "squeaky" (the word at the end of the sentence is squeaky, which is the first couplet; A flat voice at the end of a sentence is the basic requirement of the bottom line. The "bottom line" you wrote is actually the top line; What is correct is the bottom line.

God bless our village with good weather;

The village is blessed with a long life.