cui daorong
Sit and watch the dark clouds and heavy rain, spraying the only eye in front of the mountain.
Suddenly, there were dark clouds overhead and it was stormy, but it was the night before the mountain came out.
Summer rain has the characteristics of summer rain: it comes quickly and violently, and the foot of the rain is uncertain. These points were accurately grasped by the poet and expressed in his works. The sudden rain in front of the mountain and suddenly into the stream makes people avoid it. How can it come so fast! Start with "sit and watch" calmly, and write the sudden change of summer rain with "sudden shock" and "surprise" as ups and downs. And a "title" and a "spray" not only personify the dark clouds (as if they were splashing water and being naughty), but also write the strength of the rain, which has a feeling of pouring. It is extremely difficult to describe clouds with "black" and rain with "fierce". Sometimes it falls east and west, sometimes it falls west and east, and it also writes a natural wonder caused by the rapid transfer of rain feet. That's not enough. The poet also explained that the sudden change of summer rain was unpredictable by "sitting and watching" and then "suddenly surprised" through the expression change of those who met the rain. The whole idea is agile and flexible, the pen is fresh and lively, and the words are sharp, novel and gratifying, which has won Xia Yu's interest.
As far as the approximation of the scene is concerned, it is more likely to be reminiscent of a poem in Su Dongpo's "Drunk Book of Looking at the Lake Building on June 27": "Dark clouds turn over the ink and fail to cover the mountain, and white rain jumps over the boat. The wind comes and blows away, and the water under the lake looks like the sky. " Through comparison, we can find a structural feature of this poem. Although Su Shi wrote about the rapid, powerful and changeable summer rain, it can be described as beautiful, but he only wrote about the changes of scenery in a place (outside Wanghulou) in different periods. This poem takes two places ("Qianshan" and "Stream") as the center, and adopts a two-pronged approach, which not only has the changes of scenery in different periods, but also has spatial contrast. For example, in terms of the rhyme of poetry, Su Shi is better; If the structure is surprising, this poem should not be allowed.