What's wrong with this poem?

The word "Noisy" in "Red Apricot Branches in Spring" is used accurately and aptly, and a word "Noisy" describes the lively and warm scene of all things competing for beauty in spring.

In general, the analysis is as follows: 1. Personification rhetoric is used to personify spring, which vividly depicts the lively scene when everything recovers in spring. 2. The word "Noisy" is written with motion and static, which shows the vitality of spring and gives people a wonderful enjoyment. Wang Guowei said in "A Tale on Earth": "The branches of the red apricot are noisy in spring", and the realm is full of the word "noisy", "clouds break through the moon to make a shadow" and the realm is full of the word "Nong".