When he was demoted, he wrote "Quiet Night Thinking". But it doesn't match your question, because the requirements are on board. Besides, "Early Release of Baidicheng" was also written on the way of being demoted, but it was when I came back.
Zaofa baidicheng
Tang Libai
Early in the morning, I bid farewell to Jiangling city, which is high into the sky, thousands of miles away, and the boat is only one day away.
The cries of apes on both sides of the strait are still unconsciously crowing in their ears, and the canoe has passed the heavy green hills.
[translation]
In the morning, I bid farewell to Baidicheng in the colorful clouds, and returned to Jiangling thousands of miles away in one day. Baidicheng is on a higher mountain. Looking back at Baidi City from the riverside is like taking an integer thousands of miles between colorful clouds. I only heard the sound of apes singing from the mountains on both sides of the strait. Just as the apes kept singing, the canoe had passed by the river in the overlapping mountains.
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1. Bai Di: On Bai Di Mountain in the east of fengjie county, Chongqing. Yang Qixian's Note: "Baidi City was built by Gongsun Shu. At the beginning of Gongsun Shu, the fish recovered, and a white dragon emerged from the well, so it was called Bai Di, and the fish changed to Bai Di City. Wang Qi's Note: "Baidicheng is located in fengjie county, Kuizhou, which is very close to Wushan. The so-called colorful clouds refer to the clouds in Wushan. "Predecessors may have written this poem for Li Bai's youth when he left Sichuan. However, a closer look at the poem "A thousand miles a day goes to Jiangling" shows that I went to the Three Gorges from Jiangling and should return. It should be that Yelang was exiled in the second year of Gan Yuan (759), and he was suddenly pardoned when he arrived in Baidicheng, that is, when he returned to Jiangling.
2. Caiyun: Because Betty is on Bai Di Mountain, the terrain is very high. Looking from the river at the foot of the mountain, it seems to be towering into the clouds.
3. Jiangling: jiangling county, Hubei Province today. It is about 1200 Li from Baidicheng to Jiangling, including 700 Li of Three Gorges. Li Daoyuan, Three Gorges: "Since the Three Gorges is 700 miles long, there are mountains on both sides of the Three Gorges, and nothing is lacking. Heavy rocks overlap obstacles and block the sunshine in the sky. Since noon, there has been no sunrise and moon. As for launching Xiangling, it is along the back block. Or the king ordered an emergency announcement. Sometimes I go to Baidicheng, and at dusk I go to Jiangling. During this period, although he was well off, he did not get sick. In spring and summer, the green pool is surging and the reflection is clear. Duoqibai, hanging spring waterfall, flies in it. Rong Qing Junmao, it's fun. At the beginning of every sunny day, first frost is in the sky, the forest is cold and quiet, and high apes often whistle, which is a sad thing. The empty valley echoes, and the sorrows and sorrows are long gone. Therefore, the fisherman sang:' The Wuxia Gorge of the Three Gorges in Badong is long, and the ape sings three tears and touches the clothes'. "
4. Chao: Good morning.
5. Remarks: Goodbye.
6. Also: return the goods.
7. Crow: Singing and calling.
8. Live broadcast: Stop.
9. Chung Shan Man: Mountains have many layers.
The seven famous wonders are not without exaggeration and whimsy. It is beautifully written, shocking and beautiful, but it is not artificial, casual and natural. Ordinary readers don't need to know the author's mood when writing a poem, as long as they simply appreciate the pleasure of sailing along the Three Gorges River conveyed in the poem, they will feel beautiful. In fact, the poet used the magnificence of the countryside and the smooth sailing along the river to express his happy mood when he was pardoned and returned to Jiangling. Understanding the connotation of these situations will enrich the aesthetic feeling. Predecessors have received rave reviews of this poem, such as "Poems of Tang and Song Dynasties", Volume 7: "Sail on the Wan Li Road with the wind, but knowing the scenery in front of you, you doubt that there is a heavenly help between pen and ink." Three or four colors are propped up to feel at home. "Ding Longyou said," this is the tone of god. Wu Changqi's Annotations on Tang Poems Volume 13: "With the sound of apes, colorful scenery". Timely Li Shiwei Volume 4: "It's easy to say, but it's confusing".
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In the spring of 759, in the second year of Tang Suzong, Li Bai exiled Yelang because of the Yong case and went into exile in Sichuan. When I went to Baidicheng, I suddenly heard the forgiveness, which was a pleasant surprise. I immediately put the boat down to Jiangling, so the title of the poem is "Down to Jiangling". This poem expresses the happy and carefree mood at that time.
The first sentence "between colorful clouds" describes the high terrain of Baidi City, which is ready for the whole article to write about the dynamics of underwater ships walking quickly. If we don't write about the extremely high level of Baidicheng, we can't reflect the huge slope gap between the upper and lower reaches of the Yangtze River. Baidicheng is high above, so the following sentences describe the speed of the ship, the short journey, and the overwhelming welcome from ears (ape voice) and eyes (Chung Shan Man), all of which have landed. "Colorful Clouds" is also a description of the morning scenery, showing a good weather from cloudy to sunny. At this dawn moment, the poet bid farewell to Baidicheng with excitement.
The two words "a thousand miles" and "a day" in the second sentence are obviously compared with the distance of space and the timeliness of time; Its beauty lies in the word "return"-"return" and return. It not only shows the poet's joy of traveling thousands of miles a day, but also reveals the joy of forgiveness. Jiangling is not Li Bai's hometown, but the word "return" is as kind as going home. A word "Hui" is vivid in the dark and worth pondering.
The realm of the third sentence is even more wonderful. In the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River in ancient times, "there were often high apes whistling". However, why not "cry"? We might as well think of a long day in midsummer, driving an express train on a tree-lined road and listening to the cicadas chirping between trees on both sides. Cicadas are different, trees are different, and songs are different, but because of the speed of car dealers, the shadow of cicada trees has become "one piece" between eyes and ears, which is probably how Li Bai felt about the shadow of ape mountain when he left the gorge. How carefree and excited the poet is on this boat, which is like an arrow leaving the string and going downstream! Gui Fu, a poet in A Qing, couldn't help admiring: "The beauty lies in the third sentence, which can make a child old and innocent." ("Zapp")
In an instant, the "canoe" has passed the "Chung Shan Man". In order to describe the speed of the ship, the poet added the word "light" to the ship itself in addition to the ape sound and the mountain shadow. It is naturally stupid to say that the ship is fast; And the word "light" has different meanings. When the Three Gorges was in danger, the poet went upstream, not only feeling that the ship was sinking, but also feeling sluggish. "Three dynasties scalpers, it is too late. It doesn't feel like silk. "
(Upper Three Gorges) Now it's as light as nothing, and its speed can be imagined. As soon as the "Chung Shan Man" ended, the canoe entered a smooth road, and the poet's pleasure of going through difficulties and obstacles was self-evident. These last two sentences are not only a description of the scenery, but also a comparison, an expression of personal feelings and a summary of life experience. They are exquisite and incoherent.
The whole poem gives people a feeling of straightforwardness and ethereal. But it can't be won by its bold momentum and elegant brushwork. The whole poem is permeated with a kind of passion that comes from hardships, so it is full of pride and joy. The speed of the clippers keeps people away. Later generations are full of praise for this article, saying that "you cry when you are frightened by the wind and rain" (Yang Shen's Poems of Sheng 'an). It has been regarded as a treasure for thousands of years. In order to express his carefree mood, the poet deliberately uses "deleting" the rhyme of emptiness, return and mountains as the rhyme, which is melodious and light, making people never tire of hearing it.