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Buzuozi Huanghuiyuan Mansion (1)
When the moon is short and the trees are sparse, people are Jing Chu. When (who) sees you alone (3), you can see a lonely shadow (4).
Startled, but turned around, no one hated [5]. Pick up all the cold branches and refuse to live [6], and the lonely sandbar is cold [6].
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(1) The inscription reads "Living in Dinghui Temple in Huangzhou". Dinghui Garden: A Dinghui Garden, located in the southeast of Huanggang County, Hubei Province. Su Shi lived here when he was demoted to Huangzhou.
⑵ Leak: refers to the leaky pot used by the ancients for timing. The "leakage" here means late at night.
(3) There is a version with "when" and "who"; Stranger: a recluse who describes a lonely goose. You: "Louis Gua": "Friend Zhen Ji", which means friendship and education. It means quiet and elegant.
(4) vaguely: vaguely, if there is nothing. Gu Hong: Zhang Jiuling's "Twelve Feelings" Part IV: "A lonely swan flies from the sea." Hu Zaiqian's "Tiaoxi Fishing and Conceiving Conghua" episode 39: "This word was originally used to praise the night scene, and it was only said to be red when changing the head, just like the word" flying like smoke "in He Xinlang, which was only said when changing the head. ..... "According to the two words are all chanting, there is no so-called" night scene ". Talking more about red pomegranate is harmless, and it may not be wonderful. Hu's comments seem untrue.
5] province (xǐng): I understand, I understand. "No one can save", as the saying goes, "No one knows".
[6] or think that "picking up all the cold branches" has bad words. Hanabe's Wild Traveler series: "Look at Li Caoyuan's Wild Goose Walk, and he said,' On the cold branches at dusk, fly to an empty well'." Is there no evil in Poe? "This is a solid. Cold branches have a wide meaning, saying "they won't live", which is ok. This sentence also means that a good bird chooses wood to live in. " "Zuo Zhuan's eleven years of mourning for the public": "Birds choose wood, and wood can't choose birds. Du Fu's Sorrow: "Choose the wood to know the secluded birds."
(7) Sand bar: land formed by sediment deposition in rivers. The last sentence is "It's cold when the maple leaves fall in Wujiang River", and every sentence is broken by Cui, a native of Tang Dynasty, which is not connected from top to bottom, I'm afraid not.
Vernacular translation
The curved moon hangs on the treetops of buttonwood trees, and the sound of the dead of night. Sometimes I see people living alone, like the ethereal figure of a lonely goose.
Suddenly I started up and looked back, but no one knew about my resentment. Picked all the cold branches and refused to live, willing to endure loneliness and cold in the sandbar.
Creation background
According to historical records, this word was written in December of A.D. 1082 (the fifth year of Yuanfeng) or Huangzhou in December of the first year of A.D. 1083 (the sixth year of Yuanfeng in Song Shenzong). Dinghui Garden is located in the southeast of Huanggang County, Hubei Province, also known as Dinghui Garden. Su Shi has another article, You Ding Hui Yuan. As can be seen from the above, this poem was written by Su Shi when he first demoted Huangzhou to live in Dinghuiyuan. Su Shi was demoted as the deputy envoy of Huangzhou Youth League Training because of the so-called "Wutai Poetry Case". Su Shi moved to Huangzhou from February in the third year of Yuanfeng (1080) to June in the seventh year of Yuanfeng (1084), and lived in Huangzhou for more than four years.
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After Su Shi was demoted to Huangzhou, although there were problems in his life, he was optimistic and open-minded and was able to lead his family through their own efforts. But my inner loneliness and loneliness are beyond others' understanding. In this poem, the author uses the image of loneliness and glory on a moonlit night to express his feelings of aloof, self-confidence and contempt for the world.
It's the scenery I saw in the yard in the middle of the night written by Shangcheng. "The lack of the moon hangs the sparse tung, which makes people quiet." It creates a lonely atmosphere in the dead of night, and the moon hangs on the tree, paving the way for the emergence of' You Ren' and' Gu Hong'. "Leak" refers to the leaky pot used by the ancients for timing: "Leak" means late at night. Su Shi stepped out of the courtyard and looked up at the bright moon. It was a very lonely night. The moon seems to have a sense of interest, showing its brightness from the sparse tung trees, like hanging on the branches. These two sentences are extraordinary, rendering a realm of loneliness. The next two sentences, "I feel so lonely when I see you alone." It's so quiet and quiet around, everything is a dream. At this moment, no one is wandering alone in the moonlight like himself, just like a lonely goose flying across the sky. Firstly, the image of a lonely person with a heavy heart is pointed out, and then loneliness is felt from the lonely person, so that the two images correspond and fit, making people feel that the lonely mood of the lonely person is like the lonely shadow of a fairy. These two sentences are not only true writing, but also through the correspondence and grafting of human and bird images, which greatly strengthens the transcendence of "wandering" and has symbolic significance and poetic beauty. Things and I are the same, complement each other, and make the image of loneliness more concrete and touching.
Xia Tan even wrote Hong with others, "When you start, you turn back and no one can save you." This is to write directly about your lonely mood. When people are lonely, they always look around, look back and find more loneliness. "No one hates", and no one can understand their lonely hearts. Loneliness is unbearable without a confidant in the world. "If the cold branches are not born, the lonely sandbar is cold." Writing about Gu Hong's misfortune, he was deeply resentful and terrified. He flew between cold branches, picked up all the cold branches and refused to live. He had to stay on a lonely and cold sandbar and spend such a cold night. Here, the poet uses symbolism and ingenuity to look back, hold a grudge and choose a place to cross the loneliness of Hong, expressing the lonely situation of the author during his relegation to Huangzhou and his noble and confident state of mind that he does not want to go with the flow. The author and Gu Hong appreciate each other, personify Gu Hong's psychological activities and objectify their subjective feelings, showing superb artistic skills.
This word is exquisite, and its predecessors called it "like eating fireworks, like eating people." This lofty realm of freedom beyond the secular world benefits from exquisite artistic skills. The author "eulogizes the story with the spirit of nature", digress from the theme of God, set the context in his mind, and support people with things; In the description of the environmental background of Lonely Rainbow and Moonlit Night, the narrative of scene selection is concise, ethereal, implicit, vivid and vivid, which is very typical.
Famous comments
Commenting on this word, Huang Tingjian said: "The meaning is high, like eating fireworks and eating people. There is no thousands of books in the chest and no tacky things in the pen. Why is this!"
Huang's Selected Poems of Guoyuan says: "Pun is pun, the words are singular, the words are sincere, and thinking is the best product."
Commenting on this word in Ci Ze Da Ji Ya, Chen Tingzhuo said: "The meaning is lofty, the brushwork is ethereal, and the words are sincere. It is the only place where Poxian can go, and Meicheng and Baishi can't go. "
Wu Zeng's "A Random Record of Nengbian Zhai" said: "Its meaning is obscured by Wang's woman, and readers can't understand it. After being demoted to Huangzhou, the old man who went to see him heard about it. His poems are based on the cloud of ambition: the empty Ming Jiang fish and dragons sleep, and the lonely moon is graceful. Some people stood by in the clear river, and Kudzu's cane peeped at the sky. In the dim light of night, Leng Yue was crying in the dark, and Hong Ying was tilted and his clothes were wet. Immortals take poems as empty steps, and the Jade Emperor drinks them. "
Hu Zai said in the preface volume 39 of Tiaoxi Fishing in Conghua: "This word was originally used to eulogize the night scene, but it became red when it changed its head. Just like the word "Flowers in Smoke" in He Xinlang, this poem praises the summer scenery, but it only talks about Liu Hua. The beauty of the article is everywhere, and it can't be limited to rope ink. "
Brief introduction of the author
Su Shi (1037 ~110/) was a writer in the Song Dynasty. The word Zizhan, also known as He Zhong, is called Dongpo lay man. Meizhou Meishan (now Sichuan) people. Su Xun's eldest son. 1057 (the second year of Jiayou) Jinshi. In addition to the Chinese book Sheren, Hanlin Bachelor, Duanming Temple Bachelor, and the history of the Ministry of Rites. He was successively sentenced to Hangzhou, Zhimi, Xuzhou, Huzhou and Yingzhou. 1080 (Yuanfeng three years), Huangzhou was demoted by the new libel law. Later, he was exiled to Huizhou and Danzhou. Song Huizong, forgive me. Died in Changzhou. Chasing Wenzhong. He is knowledgeable, versatile and good at writing, engineering poetry and calligraphy. Yu Ci is "uninhibited and uninhibited, and doesn't like to cut and follow the rhythm", with rich themes and broad artistic conception. He broke through the traditional barrier of "Ci is a colorful subject" since the late Tang Dynasty, the Five Dynasties and the early Song Dynasty, and took poetry as his ci, which created an uninhibited school and had a great influence on later generations. There are seven episodes of Dongpo, Dongpo Ci, Dongpo Yi Zhuan, Dongpo Yuefu and so on.