Looking at Luofu Weng Fanggang
Only Meng Mengyi, people and Diaoji.
When the temple door bell rang, the woodcutter’s path was still different.
All four hundred floors fell, and three thousand feet of green sky flew.
With whom to participate in painting theory, half of the face is full of slanting light.
"All four hundred stories fell, and three thousand feet of green sky flew. It is called the "magic pen" for describing waterfalls. Please appreciate the three writing techniques used.
Answer: The poem describes the Luofu Mountain waterfalls from a distant perspective, with "four hundred floors" and "three thousand feet". It uses exaggeration to describe the number and height of the springs; "Cui Fei" uses a metaphor to describe the waterfall pouring like jade splashing. , writes about the beauty of the colors of the waterfall. Two sentences depict the beauty and magnificence of the Luofu Falls from multiple angles (7 points, 1 point for each part)
Additional points:
Method 1: Use exaggeration to describe the number and height (or levels and height) of waterfalls (or write about the beauty and magnificence of waterfalls.)
Method 2: Use metaphors , compare the waterfall to jade, and write about the green and moving color beauty of the waterfall.
Or: use metaphors to describe the waterfall as "emerald flying", and write about the crystal clear splashing of the waterfall. The beauty of the form.
Method 3: Use imagination to describe the beauty of the shape and color of the waterfall.
Method 4: Use the combination of reality and reality to describe the fall of the waterfall realistically. On the one hand, the beauty of the waterfall is written with a virtual pen.
Technique 5: Practice calligraphy accurately and use the words "fall" and "fly" to write the dynamic beauty of the waterfall splashing down. , giving people an immersive feeling [The expression of method five is not very rigorous, points will be given as appropriate, for reference only]
Scoring criteria:
2 points will be given for each correct method. ; (Including: technique + function or effect) 1 point is given for the overall language expression
Note: only technique, without analysis of functions and effects, 1 point is deducted; only technique, without analysis of verses or images in the poem , 1 point will be deducted; no points will be given if the technique is not explained clearly; 1 point will be given for the "duality" and "antagonism" techniques, because the following explanation will not work if it is not explained from a phonological point of view. From a phonological point of view, antithesis and antithesis are not like this Two lines of poetry highlight the expression points.
Full score example: The poem describes the waterfalls of Luofu Mountain from a distant perspective, with "four hundred layers" and "three thousand feet". It uses exaggeration to describe the number of flying springs. "Cui Fei" uses a metaphor to describe the waterfall pouring like jade splashing, and describes the beauty of the waterfall's colors, expressing the beauty and magnificence of Luofu Falls from multiple angles.
5-point example:
This sentence uses metaphor, exaggeration, and duality. The author compares the spring water to jade, showing the clear green of the spring water. In the sentence "Three thousand feet of green flying", the author uses ". "Three thousand feet" exaggeratedly depicts the majesty of the spring when it falls, highlighting the characteristics of the scenery. These two sentences are dual sentences, which make the poem more charming and symmetrical, making it catchy and catchy. [Two methods for correct answers. 4 points for complete analysis, 1 point for language expression]
Example for 4 points:
Example: ① Use duality to make the structure compact, contrast neat, and the language to be written concisely and implicitly ②Using exaggeration, "three thousand feet" is extremely high, and "flying" is full of dynamic beauty, giving the waterfall vitality and explosive power, vividly describing the magnificent splash caused by the water falling from a high place. On the side, it says how high the waterfall is and how powerful the water is. ③Using contrast, the words "fall" and "fly" are written in the former to pour down, and in the latter to soar and dance, which clearly highlights the majestic momentum of the waterfall and expresses the author's admiration. [1 point for "duality"; 2 points for "exaggeration" plus analysis; 1 point for "flying" to write dynamic beauty]
Example of 3 points: The poet used duality, exaggeration, scene blending, etc. Three writing techniques express one's admiration and joy for the waterfalls they saw. [2 points for duality and exaggeration, 1 point for admiration]
Example for 2 points:
Example: ① "Three thousand feet" uses exaggeration to show the magnificence of the waterfall, ② " "Four Hundred" uses metaphors to vividly describe the appearance of the waterfall. ③ "Cui Fei" uses symbolism to describe splashing water.
[① Give 2 points; ②③ No points will be given for errors]