Hukou Fu
The wind howls and the waves fly,
A surge of a hundred feet roars, and the sky roars.
There are rainbows and clouds on all sides. Tuohong Valley
Pronunciation:
hú kǒu fù
fēng shēng xiào xiào làng huā fēi,
pù bù yíng lái lóng sān qiān.
yī yǒng bǎi zhàng zhèn tiān hǒu,
sì miàn shēng hóng yún wù lǐ. tuò hóng gǔ
Evaluation:
Bullshit.
Reasons for evaluation:
1. The sentences are inconsistent.
2. The sentences do not rhyme.
Suggested modifications:
The wind whistled and the waves flew,
The moonlight steamed and the waterfall fell.
A surge of hundreds of feet shook the sky,
Two rows of thousands of miles shook the earth.
Pronunciation:
fēng shēng xiào xiào làng huā fēi,
yuè sè zhēng zhēng pù bù luò.
yī yǒng bǎi zhàng zhèn tiān hǒu,
liǎng xíng qiān lǐ dòng dì pò.
Evaluation: The sentences are dual, rhyming with "o", that is, "fall, soul" rhymes.