1. Briefly introduce the background and theme of on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou, and explain the feelings and significance expressed in the original text.
2. Choose a specific scene or role, which can be the author himself, the crowd on the stage or the surrounding natural landscape, etc. to rewrite.
3. Describe the appearance, action and atmosphere of the rewritten scene or character, so that readers can feel the real existence of the scene or character.
4. Use vivid language and rhetorical devices, such as metaphor and personification, to enhance the artistic effect of writing.
5. express feelings and thoughts about nature, life and human feelings in combination with the characteristics of rewriting scenes or characters.
6. Summarize at the end, emphasizing the emotion and meaning expressed by rewriting.
7. Pay attention to conciseness, fluency and clear structure, and use poetic expressions appropriately. Composition
1. Title: Rewriting on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou
on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou is a poem written by Du Fu, a writer in the Tang Dynasty, which depicts the magnificent scenery on the frontier fortress battlefield and the lofty aspirations of heroes. The poem incorporates thoughts on life, humanity and history, and shows the author's patriotic feelings and firm will.
I choose to focus on the soldiers on the stage. By describing their appearance, movements and atmosphere, readers can deeply feel the real existence of heroic soldiers in this scene.
The soldiers standing on the stage are tall and powerful, wearing armor. Their faces are dignified but there is a determined look. Armed with swords, they clenched hard, as if they were ready to fight at any time. They stand as loose as soldiers standing upright on the battlefield, with courage and glory flowing in their bones.
Under the sunshine, the soldiers' armor is shining with metal light, which seems to echo their determined eyes. The blood on the blade is like ink, dancing in their hands, as if it were a solemn and stirring poem. Although they are in the battlefield, they are the guardians of the earth. They not only defend the land, but also are loyal to their vows to the country.
The soldiers standing on the stage not only do their best to defend the country, but also are models and spiritual pillars in our hearts. They guard our peace with their youth and life. Their bravery makes us respect and gives us courage and hope. Facing the invincible warriors, I can't help feeling deeply and thinking about my responsibilities and responsibilities in life.
By rewriting the images and emotions of soldiers in on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou, the heroic spirit of brave soldiers and their loyalty and responsibility to the motherland are displayed. This rewriting method provides a real and profound perspective, which makes readers deeply feel the power of patriotism and firm will.
2. Title: Feelings of Going to Youzhou Station
on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou is the work of Dai Shulun, a writer in the Tang Dynasty, which describes the scene of taking the stage in Youzhou, a frontier region in the north. This poem, with the background of "Wandering Away", expresses the author's yearning for his homeland and worries about the war. The theme is to convey the poet's deep affection and emotional concern for the chaotic situation through the description of natural landscape and human situation.
I choose to rewrite the crowd on the Youzhou stage, and let readers feel the real existence of people in this scene by describing their appearance, movements and atmosphere. At the same time, combined with the characteristics of rewriting, express feelings and thoughts about life and human feelings. The idea is to reflect people's joys and sorrows in time and space and their yearning for a stable life through meticulous description.
When I boarded Youzhou Taiwan, I saw a sea of people around me, and people of different ages, genders and occupations gathered together. An old man sat on the steps, his face wrinkled to reveal the traces of years. His robes are old, but there is no trace of decadence, as if he can keep a firm pace in the face of all vicissitudes. A young scholar was absorbed in reading, and his brow showed a desire for knowledge. There are also several women nagging around the children, revealing the brilliance of maternal love in their smiles. A calm expression seems to be in a stable home. The crowd on this secluded stage is like a huge heart, full of worldly wisdom and conveying infinite hope of life.
Looking up, you can see the vastness of the north. The sky is blue as a wash, and white clouds wander leisurely. The mountains are rolling and rolling, and they are connected as an iron wall that guards this land. The wind passed by, gently stroking my face, bringing a little coolness. Standing on the platform of Youzhou, I seem to see the magnificent scenery of the desert frontier and feel the yearning and cherish of people in this land for a peaceful life.
By rewriting the crowds on the Youzhou stage and the surrounding natural landscape, the author expresses his deep nostalgia for his homeland and worries about the turbulent times. Kindness, courage and perseverance are the heirlooms of many frontier children. The vastness and magnificence of the northland arouse people's patriotic feelings. No matter when and where, you can feel the longing for a peaceful and stable life in your home when you climb up and look far on the Youzhou platform. On a Gate-Tower at Youzhou is not only a poem praising the magnificent scenery in the north, but also a reflection on the situation of home and country. When readers appreciate this poem, they can feel the author's deep homesickness and eager for peace.
on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou, with its true feelings and delicate description, expresses the author's yearning for his homeland and his worries about the war situation. By rewriting the crowd on the stage and the surrounding natural landscape, readers can feel their real existence in this scene. The poem is permeated with affectionate pen and ink and thoughts and feelings about life and human feelings, which causes readers to think and reflect on home and peace.
3. Title: on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou's Rewriting and Thinking
on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou is the work of Du Fu, a writer in the Tang Dynasty, which describes what he saw and felt when he traveled to Youzhou during the war and boarded the platform of Youzhou. This poem is presented in a narrative way, which mainly expresses the author's deep feelings about war, exile and human suffering.
The author himself is chosen as the rewriting angle. In the original text, Du Fu looked at the distance on the platform of Youzhou, filled with emotion.
Du Fu was dressed in shabby clothes, and his hair hung untidily on his forehead. His eyes revealed a deep and worried look, accompanied by his trembling arms. Looking around, I saw the north wind whistling and the sand rolling, and the air was filled with a heavy sense of oppression.
Du Fu used metaphor to integrate the natural landscape with the sadness of people's hearts, and compared the bleak war to a desolate land and barren land, expressing his remorse for the war and his inner pain. At the same time, he personifies the image of windy sand and north wind, which enriches readers' emotions.
The rewritten scene shows the author's sympathy and remembrance for people and the natural environment during the war. Being in the war, Du Fu deeply touched people's sufferings, deeply regretted the sufferings brought by the war, and at the same time expressed his helplessness for life and his desire for happiness.
By describing specific scenes and roles, this rewritten on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou enhances the artistic effect with vivid language and rhetoric. Through the description of people and natural environment during the war, the author expressed his thoughts and feelings about social reality. In addition, this rewriting also reflects people's thinking about war, nature and life, and arouses readers' singing and thinking.
4. Title: Rewriting and Thinking of on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou
on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou is a long poem written by Chen Ziang, a writer in the Tang Dynasty, which depicts the scene of boarding Youzhou Taiwan to enjoy the magnificent scenery. This poem is based on the natural landscape, with the theme of expressing the author's feelings for the lost time and reflection on the vicissitudes of the world. By depicting Youzhou Terrace and its surrounding landscape, the poet expressed his lament over historical changes and his worship and admiration for the order of the universe.
I choose to rewrite the crowd on the stage in the poem, so that readers can feel the existence of this scene more truly by describing their appearance, movements and the atmosphere of the landscape on the stage. Through rewriting, I hope to express the theme that life is short and time is fleeting, so that readers can think deeply about the impermanence of the world and the majesty of natural laws.
Standing on the Youzhou stage, I saw all the sentient beings surging like a flood. Some of them had firm eyes, tall and straight figures and took confident steps. Some keep their heads down and keep moving forward, small but unwilling to be mediocre in the long river of years. In the crowd on the stage, a teenager is tall and straight, his eyes are shining brightly, as if to reveal his vision for the future.
I set off the rolling waves and compared the crowd to countless walking waves, shining brightly in the sun. People's footsteps resounded through the sky, like the earth telling people's stories; People's laughter is like the spring breeze blowing, warming the land. The wind on the stage of Youzhou, like an old man, gently caressed people's cheeks, revealing the traces of time.
In this beautiful scene, I deeply feel the greatness of nature and the shortness of life. People walk in the journey of life in a hurry, and some people are full of confidence and walk forward; Some people are worried and don't know where to go. However, no matter whether it is lofty aspirations or confusion, it is like a floating cloud, which will eventually dissipate in the sky.
By rewriting the scenes and characters in on a Gate-Tower at Youzhou, I hope that through the natural landscape reflected in the mirror of real life, readers will feel that life is short and time is fleeting, and then have a deeper thinking about nature, life and human feelings. This rewriting not only enhances the artistic effect of the works, but also echoes the themes and meanings in literary classics.