The topic is self-drawn. Style is not limited, except poetry.
It rains everywhere-only sand is the least valuable thing, however, the most precious thing-gold is in it [ideas] This essay topic is very similar to the college entrance examinations in several provinces last year, that is, it provides a meaningful material and gives some hints, but there is no topic. Candidates are required to write according to their "feelings" about the materials.
Some people call this kind of composition "meaningful composition" For this kind of composition, accurate interpretation of the meaning of the topic is the key, and candidates should be good at understanding the writing topic from the materials.
We should fully understand and accurately grasp the connotation and theme of poetry as we treat the composition of materials. Materials-comprehensive understanding, how to achieve "comprehensive understanding of materials" from a macro perspective? "Comprehensive understanding of the material" means that candidates should grasp the meaning of the material as a whole, summarize the center of the material, refine the point of view of the material, and then determine the center and point of view of their own article accordingly. "Comprehensive" means macro-thinking on the basis of "whole".
On the surface, the overall meaning of materials in topic design is the relationship between "gold" and "sand", but the practical significance of this topic should be considered when designing. How can we be "not divorced from the meaning of the material" or "related to the moral of the whole poem"? Candidates should fully mobilize their reading knowledge and reading ability during the examination, and their thinking should conform to the viewpoint or center of the material and the philosophy realized after the macro analysis of the material, that is, the figurative meaning or symbolic meaning of the material.
Intention-look at the overall situation from a distance. For a reading material, we can often extract multiple viewpoints from different angles and summarize multiple centers. You should choose the best angle and the best intention. The so-called best angle and best conception refers to choosing an angle that conforms to traditional knowledge and viewpoint on the premise of fully understanding and grasping the overall meaning of the material, and this conception should also conform to the cognitive law or natural law recognized by most people.
Those who accurately focus on the overall meaning of the poem and analyze the deep meaning of the material are judged to be "in line with the meaning of the question." For this question, the ideas of "fitting the meaning of the question" in the exam are "the ordinary breeds greatness (Excellence)", "the great love is embodied in the ordinary details" and "the simple life contains great truth".
The conception is based on the overall meaning of the poem, but if the depth and breadth are not enough and the social significance is not obvious, it is judged to be "in line with the meaning of the topic". For this question, the original intention of "conforming to the meaning of the question" in the exam is to "discover (excavate) the inner beauty with your eyes" and "not feel inferior and not afraid of smallness".
Based on part of the meaning of the poem ("gold" or "sand"), it is judged to be "basically in line with the meaning of the topic". The viewpoints of "basically meeting the meaning of the question" in the exam include "inner beauty is the most important" and "ordinary needs to be honed to become great".
It is judged as "deviating from the meaning of the question" if only a few words in the material are used to make a meaning without the whole or local meaning of the material. The ideas of "deviating from the topic" in the exam include "gold always shines", "seeing the essence through phenomena" and "being ordinary sand".
We can start with the following points: 1 In order to find the key words (sentences) that suggest the meaning of the topic from the materials, we should attach great importance to several key words in the poem: "the least valuable", "the most precious" and "gold". The first two keywords symbolize ordinary things, and the last two words symbolize a beautiful mind or great and outstanding things.
What is the relationship between ordinary and ordinary? This answer is revealed by the key sentence "gold", which is among them. Ordinary things often contain great things.
Ordinary things also have noble hearts, which should be the basis of the best idea of this material. 2. Have a holistic consciousness. This poem contains a set of contrasts, the least valuable sand and the most precious gold.
According to this group of comparisons, things are connected with people and social reality by imagination and association, so as to sum up things with the same connotation as poetry and endow the article with the flavor of the times. 3. Taking raw materials as the dominant topic and grasping the artistic conception of poetry as a whole.
You can express the meaning of the material in straightforward language, so that seemingly endless topics have a fixed topic. [Exhibition 1] Ten miles from the spring breeze, Shang Huashi can easily recognize the east wind, which will always be the color of spring.
-inscription forsythia friend, have you noticed the pale yellow in the flower bed in early spring? Yellow flowers, sparse leaves, four yellow flowers, very thin and ordinary. Forsythia suspensa is the most common flower in early spring in northern China.
It blooms, but it is not as charming as peony; It grows early, but it is not as elegant as daffodils; It's cold-resistant, but it doesn't have Han Mei's ice muscles and bones. Ordinary forsythia, even no one wants to go back and care for it.
But, my friend, have you noticed the heat-clearing formula of traditional Chinese medicine? Have you ever remembered this common name and smiled at you in the corner? Forsythia suspensa, as ordinary as sand, is our most respectable Chinese medicine, which tortures itself and benefits all beings! Under the ordinary appearance, forsythia suspensa is the "gold" to maintain people's life and health. Oxalis, a rather circuitous flower name.
Friend, you must not have noticed, have you? In mid-spring, the garden is full of green grass and flowers. Friend, you must have not noticed the clusters of bright red and lavender smiling faces under your feet, have you? There are many nameless grass flowers, but they are far less than spring grass "to go further and live better"; Warm, but far less than apricot flowers, "the branches are full of spring"; Bright, but far less than "Liu Hua shines in May". But, look carefully, where are the three petals of Xiaohua and when did they disappear? Fade out of people's sight, but still bloom warmly; Decorated all the love, but not famous.
The nameless flower, without you, how can it be beautiful in spring? Although ordinary, your role is not comparable to the public! After being ordinary, you are the "gold" to decorate spring! Enjoy the flowers together, and the flowers will be fragrant. There is no shortage of beauty in the world, just the lack of eyes to find beauty.
Wait a minute and you will know that the east wind is always spring! Friend, spring is coming, let's go and enjoy the flowers together! If you are a flower viewer, please be sure to pay attention to the nameless grass flowers on the roadside. They are ordinary.
On the topic of "the most worthless thing in the world is a grain of sand, but there is gold in it", an ordinary and great life is just a process, a fleeting process, as short as a meteor disappearing in the sky.
However, this is not important. The key to life is what you can leave for future generations in this short life. Philosophers have left us profound and broad thoughts, and many years later, the world is still shrouded in their words; The poet left a soul-stirring emotion, and the poet fell down, but the poem was recited for the world; Great people left behind monuments, engraved with the greatness of life and the glory of performance; The hero also left courage and strength, sentiment and personality in an instant, which made the world shed some tears. However, we may be just one of the sentient beings, just like humble shells on the beach.
Shells don't want to be as beautiful as corals, but God didn't give them any color except ordinary ones. However, it did not give up because of this, but used its own blood and meat to sharpen the beautiful pebble in its heart. It is a kind of magnificence that rises slowly after a long pain, and it is also a kind of enthusiasm for brewing infinite life.
Finally, one day, it completed the mission of nurturing beauty. By chance, I was washed up on the beach by the waves and was discovered inadvertently. Thus, the shell finally proved its beauty to the world.
Maybe we should really learn the spirit of shells, the persistence of never giving up, and the strong will of never giving up. People who travel against the wind want to give up whenever they see bumps and mud in front of them. However, if you can be as brave as a shell and don't give up easily, maybe you will understand that life actually doesn't believe in tears, and failure doesn't mean killing success. There is no eternal luck to make you complacent forever, and there is no eternal misfortune to make you miserable.
The glory of life is not ordinary, but mediocre! Just because of the ordinary, we can make our thoughts, feelings and personalities bloom in the picturesque Yuan Ye in March and sing warm and full songs on the lonely road of life. Because of the ordinary, we are free to develop and innovate.
Because of the ordinary, we can sow the seeds of extraordinary personality and sentiment, dignity and responsibility in the ordinary land. Therefore, no matter how ordinary and regrettable a person's life is, as long as he works hard and strives for self-improvement, the process will be beautiful, just as the maple leaves dedicate the whole youth to the sun, there will be sunshine, and so will the whole world.
Don't you see the beauty behind this ordinary? Comment: The author of this paper links the pearls bred by shells with the dedication of life and the gestation of beauty, and connects the shellfish phenomenon with all kinds of human beings. These two connections make the meaning of the article show the power of thinking, and the theme of the article shows a certain profundity. The language is concise and fluent, full of philosophical meaning.
Lift the veil of ordinary things. Ordinary things always seem to be forgotten. It seems that only sand is the least valuable thing in the world. However, the most precious thing-gold is among them.
Who will notice this humble fool when gold is buried in the sand? Precious things are always wrapped in ordinary things. It is precisely because of this that it is precious.
Just like litchi, if you don't tear off the ordinary "coat" that is dissatisfied with the folds, how can you drool for its tender, attractive and exquisite flesh? The endless sand sea is really an ordinary natural scenery for the UAE. Drought, heat and desolation created the harsh environment there.
However, "God" favors the United Arab Emirates, and he buried nearly 1 100 million barrels of "black gold" in this ordinary desert that breeds miracles. This is a gift of pearl, which needs the people of UAE to explore and uncover the mysterious treasure.
The industrious and brave people of the United Arab Emirates have not let God down. They didn't envy the beautiful scenery of the south of the Yangtze River because they lived in the windy sea in the desert, nor did they smell pessimism and disappointment because they lived in ordinary and harsh environment.
By their own efforts and exploration, they unveiled the mysterious veil of the sand sea one by one and discovered the gift of God. They have spanned centuries for decades, leaving many long-standing desert cultures in rich countries.
It is not so much the magical treasure that has changed the UAE people in the desert, but rather that they have unveiled the veil of ordinary people with their own spirit of exploration and gained real wealth. Miracles have been created on 360,000 square kilometers of land.
In the boundless desert, the sun sets, camels hum, leaving a string of deep footprints in the sand ... precious things are not easy to find, but they are hidden in all ordinary things. When the apple on the tree suddenly falls to the ground, you may feel flattered by this unexpected gift, and even can't help burning your teeth by the tempting smell, but Newton didn't.
He thought deeply about this common phenomenon, and his strong curiosity drove him to uncover the mystery, thus giving birth to the famous law of gravity. When the chandelier on the ceiling swings back and forth because of lack of chain, you may not be able to stop it, but Galileo didn't.
He grasped this common phenomenon that was ignored by people and conducted in-depth research, thus drawing a simple pendulum isochronous law that shocked the scientific community ... When the ordinary veil is lifted layer by layer, precious gold will shine brilliantly. There is a kind of greatness called ordinary. When Truman was successfully elected president of the United States, what was it like for a reporter to visit Truman's younger brother? He exclaimed, "I am proud of my brother. He will be one of the best presidents in America.
But I am also proud of myself. I am a farmer. I support myself with my own hands and take care of my parents. "I secretly gave Truman's brother a thumbs-up sign.
He doesn't want to be famous as president, and he is not ashamed of his mediocrity. He accepted the ordinary frankly and showed a firm mental attitude. Isn't it worthy of respect? There are Gorky and shoeshine workers in life; Edison, newsboy; There is Zhuge Liang, and three heads are better than one.
Greatness is constantly emerging in reality, but daily life is more ordinary. In the face of the ordinary, we must first accept the ordinary, accept ourselves and cultivate a spirit of self-improvement.
Gold and sand are on a beach, and a piece of gold is buried in the soil.
After a long time, no one found it, but the gold didn't give up, and it still believed that it would be found. One day, the sand said to gold, "Give it up, man!" " You won't be found. It's been so long. "
But gold said, "But gold always shines, and someone will find it." If a person wants to do something, if he has no confidence, then everything is in vain. "
After some time, the gold was still not found, but it didn't give up. Finally, after a while, the gold was discovered by a person who was visiting here.
After that, the sand always sighed and said, "We are not gold and will not be useful." Later, an architect came to visit here and saw the sand. He was surprised and said, "It's a pity to put such good sand here. I have to use them to build the motherland. "
Later, the sand realized a truth: whatever it is, it has its use value.
4. "Sand and Gold" composition (650 words) Sand and gold are unfortunately buried in the sand. Sand gloated: "Gold friend, I didn't expect you to stay here forever like me, and no one cares!" " Gold firmly replied: "As long as I shine with ten thousand golden lights forever, people will always find me!" " "Richard sand retorted," you have lost your heart. Has anyone been here for so many years? "Gold is silent because it still insists on its own opinions and is slowly waiting.
Finally, one day, gold was found and washed away. The sand is very sad: "the golden lantern can't be buried, I'm afraid I'll be alone here all my life."
The sand thought gloomily and fell asleep slowly. I don't know how long it took, but the sand was awakened.
The sand is held by a pair of warm hands, and a pair of bright eyes look at the sand. The sand listened to the man and said, "What good sand! It is a pity to leave them. I want to transport them to build tall buildings immediately and let the sand create happiness for people! " Sand finally understood a profound truth, because gold is precious, it will not be buried after all, and it should not feel inferior. Although ordinary, it can also bring happiness to people! I hope I can help you. If you have any questions, you can ask.
5. How to write a composition about sand and gold? Unfortunately, the gold was buried in the sand. Sand gloated: "Gold friend, I didn't expect you to stay here forever like me and no one would notice!" "
Gold firmly replied: "As long as I shine with ten thousand golden lights forever, people will always find me!" " "Richard sand retorted," you have lost your heart. Has anyone been here for so many years? "Gold is silent because it still insists on its own opinions and is slowly waiting.
Finally, one day, gold was found and washed away. The sand is very sad: "the golden lantern can't be buried, I'm afraid I'll be alone here all my life."
The sand thought gloomily and fell asleep slowly.
I don't know how long it took, but the sand was awakened. The sand is held by a pair of warm hands, and a pair of bright eyes look at the sand. The sand listened to the man and said, "What good sand! It is a pity to leave them. I want to transport them to build tall buildings immediately and let the sand create happiness for people! "
Sand finally understood a profound truth, because gold is precious, it will not be buried after all, and it should not feel inferior. Although ordinary, it can also bring happiness to people!
6. Composition related to gravel and gold If people are compared to gold and gravel, then those who have special skills are gold, and those who have no special skills are gravel, because they are mediocre.
However, I believe that if the above assumption holds, there will be no sand between people, because everyone has his own strengths. Since there is no sand, why do only a few people shine and get the appreciation of most people? Because gold itself, like sand, will not "glow" by itself, and one of its prerequisites is light source. Without a light source, neither sand nor gold can "shine", and it is impossible for others to explore it. How gold can "shine" depends on whether someone gives it a light source in the dark.
The second premise, rarity, determines its essential difference from sand. Because it is rare, it is precious, just like light in the dark. These two conditions add up to the environment. Without the environment, gold is nothing, just like the difference between the night pearl and gold: one can attract attention at night and one is nothing during the day; During the day, one may be dazzling, while the other is pale and weak compared with the sunlight.
If there is sand, sand with light source can also shine, and sand can also show its value where it is needed. Gold is as outstanding as our ability, not that we don't have outstanding ability, but that we didn't find it at the right time and explore it.
Now too many people are still wronged themselves, in exchange for a little bit of interest that is urgently needed, doing what they want to do. They have too many disappointments, but they have been buried in their hearts. A person just suffers silently, then accumulates ... only complains occasionally without doing anything, because he has not discovered his talents or found that he needs his own environment, so he gives up his actions, does nothing all his life, and voluntarily demotes to. Instead of giving up the idea that we can create miracles, we will gradually forget the "anything is possible" as a child or before, which may be the sequela of our slavery for thousands of years, or even today, who knows. Some people just haven't found their own environment yet, but they know that they can create their own world. As long as they have a firm belief, there will always be a bright future. Such people may not be very top-notch, but they definitely know: "even sand can shine, and even sand can find a place to reflect its own value!" Even if it's not gold.
Because even gold does not necessarily shine, because they lack the belief of waiting and looking for light. If there is an opportunity, I will choose to hone in mussels and eventually become a pearl. "
And some people give up without looking for their own strengths. In the end, they live a life cycle because they have fixed a perspective, a way of thinking and a way of life. Instead of turning gravel into pearls, this is probably why so many people don't shine and can't be appreciated by most people.
Gold needs environment to stand out, while sand needs not only environment, but also courage and patience to accept the test of life. What if I were a grain of sand? No one can stop me from becoming a pearl! If I don't even have the courage, how can I face my oath and the vicissitudes of this world?