The long-awaited autumn tour to Pudong Aquarium has finally arrived. After more than two hours' drive, we finally arrived at the destination of this autumn tour-Shanghai Pudong Aquarium, which is located next to the Oriental Pearl.
As soon as I entered the aquarium gate, the dazzling array of goods inside made people see things in a blur. Next to it is a clown statue, which is really lifelike, lifelike.
Further inside, all kinds of marine life are an eye-opener. There are colorful corals. Shiny little jellyfish, naive big turtles and so on. See things in a blur. Beautiful fish shuttled back and forth beside the coral, and green grass drifted with the tide in the water. The most beautiful are crested fish and guppy. The peacock fish's tail is colorful and beautiful. The crested fish has yellow fins on its head, just like a crown. There are two dangerous fish. They are electric eels and arowana. Electric eels have electricity. When the enemy comes, it generates electricity to defend itself. Arowana spits venom and sometimes kills people.
Then, I took the submarine elevator to the second floor. I walked, somehow, getting colder and colder, which made me shudder. As soon as I saw it, I came to the penguin area. Some fat penguins stood there as if to say, "Why are these people looking at us?" The penguin in the water can be called a "swimmer", playing and frolicking freely in the water. People have to like these cute little penguins.
Then, I came to a submarine tunnel, where there were all kinds of huge and fierce sharks. Great white sharks, serrated sharks, tiger sharks ... when I see these sharks, I think of people catching sharks and making shark fins to eat. There are also some endangered animals, all caused by a large number of hunting. I have to protect them.
Then we went to the dangerous Amazon River, where there are all kinds of delicious ocean restaurants ... As time goes by, we also want to go back. Finally, we had to leave reluctantly.
What a short and unforgettable day!
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One-day trip to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium Last Sunday, my family went to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium for a day. At 6: 45 in the morning, the bus left for Shanghai.
The tour guide introduced us a lot along the way, from which I learned that Shanghai Aquarium is the second in the world and the first in Asia. Needless to say, there are 12500 kinds of fish. These fish come from different countries and different oceans. Aquarium I has three floors above ground and two floors underground. If you spend the whole morning visiting, you can't read them all carefully.
Unconsciously, the aquarium has appeared before our eyes. There are five oversized words on it: "Ocean Aquarium", and a group of colorful small fish are painted next to it. As soon as the tour guide bought the tickets, we rushed to the third floor of the aquarium. During the whole visit, I saw ghostly nigger fish, miniature pocket fish, fantastic jellyfish, swaying lovely penguins and beautiful and colorful fish. .......
Among all kinds of fish, turtles, sharks and bat fish impressed me the most. Maybe the biggest tortoise you have ever seen is only as big as a pot, and the tortoise I have ever seen is as big as five or six pots. It is conceivable that if it carries two, I can swim freely in the water. Shark, I guess you may have seen it on TV. It is about three or four meters long and one meter wide. Through the transparent glass, I can see the shark's teeth, which have three layers inside and outside. If you let it bite a steel wire, it may be easy to bite off. It is really chilling to look at its sharp teeth. I believe everyone is a little strange to bat fish. It is gray-black, with a pair of flat and wide wings, much like a bat. I don't know its real name, so I call it "Batfish", but its slender tail is not like a bat.
Time passed by, and soon, the time arranged by the tour guide arrived, and we reluctantly left the aquarium.
Now there are fewer and fewer rare fish, so I advocate that it is the responsibility of human beings to protect fish, maintain ecological balance and let them live happily.
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As soon as I visited Shanghai Ocean Aquarium and walked into the Aquarium, I was attracted by all kinds of blues, including light blue, dark blue, pure blue and sky blue. ...
Further down, I saw many strange fish. ?
The first fish I saw was Chinese sturgeon, a living fossil in China. It lives in rivers, and the largest can grow to 500 kilograms. His body is covered with large hard scales, his eyes are as big as walnuts, and his mouth is long and sharp, which looks very strange.
After watching the Chinese sturgeon, we came to the South American exhibition area, where I saw the largest freshwater fish in the world-giant bone tongue fish. Why is it called giant bone tongue fish? Because it has a big mouth.
At this time, we saw a cross-harbour tunnel and walked in without hesitation. In the undersea tunnel, it's like coming to the underwater world. Through the blue glass, I saw bull shark, sand tiger shark, doctor fish and long tail rainbow ... The escalator in the tunnel is still moving forward. Why is it not over yet? It turns out that this is the longest artificial undersea sightseeing tunnel in the world, with a length of150m. After listening to my father's explanation, I learned a lot. ? Walking out of the cross-harbour tunnel, I felt a little cold, so we came to the polar exhibition area. What animals can you see in the polar exhibition area? It looks like a penguin. This is not an ordinary penguin, but a ring penguin with black and white fur. When we walked out of the gate, we saw the spotted seal again. It lives in the cold water of the Arctic Circle.
I got to know many marine animals by visiting the Marine Aquarium. I think Shanghai Ocean Aquarium is really a reluctant place.
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The cold of a day trip to the aquarium is still raging in the north, and our hometown is already in full bloom in spring. The sky is blue, like a sapphire, thick white clouds, like cotton candy, and like Yunshan, the sky is picturesque. On this day, my mother will take my sister and me to visit the aquarium. We made some preparations and set off happily.
Coming to the aquarium really opened my eyes. There are all kinds of strange fish and aquatic plants here. The first thing that caught my eye was this beautiful fish. They are colorful, including red, blue and yellow, which dazzles me. I like countless fish. Among them, there is a strange fish whose famous brand says "lionfish". Its scales are black and white. When swimming in the water, it looks like countless black and white silk threads intertwined, just like a lovely zebra, and its head looks like a fierce lion, which makes people feel a little scared. I was attracted by its strange appearance. Next, I saw the clown fish again. Although it is called clown fish, it is not ugly at all, but very cute, which makes me like it very much. I saw it covered with red and white fish scales. From a distance, it looks like wearing a bright evening dress, which is very beautiful.
There is also a fish, which is the most beautiful fish I have ever seen. It is crystal blue, and the most beautiful thing is its tail. It is about an inch long and consists of blue and black. Just like a proud peacock, it shines slightly in the sunshine and stands out in the water. This beautiful fish tail rippled on the water surface, and the fish swam around as if dancing with it in an underwater ballet. Looking at this beautiful and harmonious scene, I seem to be involved in it and dance with them.
With curiosity, I walked on and saw many naughty, lovely, beautiful and rare fish. They are like spirits falling into the mortal world, with colorful bodies, adding beautiful scenery to the world and bringing endless beauty enjoyment to people.
The day's play is over and we are on our way back. The dream of this aquarium has become my eternal memory.
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Visiting Shanghai Aquarium Today, my mother and I went to Shanghai. We visited the aquarium, where there are many aquatic animals! There are horned frogs, turtles, sharks, crocodiles, and some can't even name them. Some are like bats; Some look like bearded old men, which is very interesting!
Have you ever seen a horned frog? It is similar to a frog, but it is bigger than a frog, and its pattern is much better than that of a frog, which is a bit like a colorful coral reef.
Sea dragon, it looks like a seahorse, but it is much smaller than the seahorse, and it has two more horns on its head. Hailong, the name sounds terrible, but it is not terrible at all, and it is also timid. I tried to touch it through the glass, but as soon as I touched the glass, it turned and ran away.
Spider crabs look like spiders, but they are smaller than the spiders we usually see. It's bigger than an adult's palm. It's incredible. It also has a big mouth. I think it can bite off a large coral reef in one bite. I looked up and got a fright! Spider crabs can climb to the top of coral reefs, and their climbing ability is extremely strong. We really can't underestimate it!
We are going to buy a souvenir after leaving the aquarium. I looked left and right, picked and picked, and finally chose a board painting. Because the board painting is full of marine life, it can also exercise my hands-on ability, which really kills two birds with one stone.
I learned a lot during this trip to Shanghai. How happy I am!
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An unforgettable spring outing-When I visited Shanghai Ocean Aquarium in the fourth grade, our school organized a spring outing. It was raining lightly that day, and we came to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium in Pudong. We seem to be in the underwater world, and I still remember it.
Walking into the exhibition area, I saw many underwater creatures swimming freely. I found a group of classmates crowded together in front, and I squeezed in. "Hey, what is this fish? Why haven't you seen it before? " I saw a few milky white fish, all with metallic luster. Then the commentator came over and said kindly, "This is a parent fish. You see, their mouths are tilted like kissing. "
Then, we went to the Antarctic exhibition area to visit penguins. Through the transparent glass window, we saw the little penguin. Penguin's back is black, its belly is white, its legs are short and thick, and it swings from side to side when walking. It looks funny and lovely. The commentator told us: "Penguin is a kind of bird that can swim. Although it belongs to birds, it can't fly, but it can swim freely in the water like a fish. " At this moment, a little penguin leaned out of the water, and the stumbling steps after landing made the students laugh. From the commentator's introduction, I also learned that penguins not only live in the Antarctic, but can actually be seen from the Antarctic continent to the equatorial Guerra baggs Islands. Penguins look clumsy and incompetent, but they have many amazing stunts! It can dive underwater at 100 meters, walk continuously on the ice for 200 kilometers, and swim to the sea 50 kilometers away to find food. We can't help but marvel at this.
Then we went to China, Amazon and Australia ... There were Chinese sturgeon, rainbow fish and salmon in the exhibition area ... I was dazzled.
The longest viewing tunnel in the world leads me to roam the colorful ocean wonderland; This new neighbor of the Oriental Pearl brought me a vivid breath of five continents. This magnificent tourist attraction, let me appreciate the mysterious style of kissing fish and penguins. ...
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During the summer vacation, my parents and I went to Shanghai.
After arriving in Shanghai, we went to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium. From then on, I had another unforgettable memory.
On that day, the weather was exceptionally good, and a magnificent and beautiful building was seen from a distance, that is, Shanghai Ocean Aquarium. Shanghai Ocean Aquarium is one of the largest marine aquariums in Asia, with the longest underwater sightseeing tunnel155m in the world. With a total construction area of 20,538 square meters, it is a modern large-scale marine aquarium with world-class standards.
Walking into the hall of the aquarium, we seem to have entered the underwater world. All kinds of fish, big and small, red and green, yellow and blue, some even have several colors. They wag their heads and tails at the tourists, so warm! However, there is a kind of fish, which looks friendly, but it is actually very powerful, and that is piranha. They mainly live in the Amazon river basin in South America.
By the interesting pool, holding the hand of the starfish and knocking on the back of the turtle, you can communicate with your marine friends heartily.
I saw tuna in the aquarium. Tuna has yellow eyes and two fins like wings. Tuna has Mao Mao. When it swims forward, its "feathers" will stand up. It's amazing and awesome!
Then, we saw sharks again. Sharks look terrible. When it opens its mouth, people can see its sharp teeth. At this time, a keeper put some dead octopus into the water, and sharks began to snatch food. Several sharks scrambled to grab the octopus, and finally the biggest shark took it away.
Later, we went to see chinemys reevesii. Chinemys reevesii is much bigger than the tortoise. It has four flat claws and a small tail. It swims slowly.
Finally, we walked into a labyrinth, which is like the underwater world. The conveyor belt sent us to the deep sea. I saw colorful corals in the ocean, and charming fish were floating overhead in droves. This is really a beautiful and vibrant marine world.
After the visit, I couldn't calm down for a long time. I think we should call on children all over the world to act together to prevent pollution, protect the environment, protect animals and protect the earth on which we live.
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Happy aquarium holiday. What I look forward to most is asking my parents to take me out to play after finishing my homework. Today, our plan is to go to the aquarium, where we can see other animals besides fish!
When I arrived at the aquarium, I saw Nelson's milk snake. It has bright red, black and white, but when it crawls slowly, I feel terrible! I also saw poisonous scorpions and super cute little green turtles It's really interesting to watch them swim in the water and stick their heads out of the water. I also found a kind of crown anglerfish called super glass cleaner, which can remove the dirt on the aquarium glass and make the glass look cleaner and clearer!
In the aquarium, we got to know many fish and learned about them. Although the small fish is cute, if we want to raise it, we should take care of it with love.
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Aquarium On May 2nd, we visited the aquarium in Shanghai.
Entering the aquarium is like entering the underwater world. Wherever you go, you can see many fish swimming around in the pond. A group here, a group there, quite a few. They swam around happily, as if in a race. A fish is far ahead, and I think it will definitely win the championship.
Walking, walking, we came to a big fish pond. There are six fish in the pond, which are different in species: these two are giant salamanders, which one is crested fish, this one is a water shark and those two are loaches. Although they come from different families, they are friendly and play together, which makes this pool full of vitality! We came to another fish pond, which was another scene. There are only three fish here, and the pond is very small. The fish here are motionless, as if resting. We left quietly so as not to disturb these marine citizens.
Leaving the fish pond, we came to the jellyfish area. Jellyfish's home is a fish tank, where six compatriots live. Their clothes have different colors: red, white, blue, yellow, green and even translucent. Every jellyfish has a "small umbrella", which opens and closes as if afraid of the sun.
The most noteworthy is the cross-harbour tunnel, which is the most famous in the aquarium. Director Chen led us into the tunnel and got on the plane elevator. The elevator slowly drove into the cave, surrounded by glass. Through the glass, we can see large and small fish playing. Look up and look around, as if you were in the underwater world. As for me, I seem to have become a happy fish, playing freely in this world that belongs to me. A lot of fish! Batch after batch, one after another, we were dazzled. There are all kinds of fish: big, small, flowered, black, flat, slender ..... They are free to shuttle between aquatic plants and hide and seek beside rockeries. Director Chen said that this tunnel is 153 meters long, with more than 60 kinds of fish, nearly 2,000, and is known as the "paradise of fish". After listening to these amazing data, I can't help sighing.
It was getting dark, and we reluctantly said goodbye to the aquarium. On the way home, I had an endless aftertaste.
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The Spring Festival is coming, so we crowded the train to Shanghai Aquarium. The festive Shanghai Aquarium is particularly beautiful: the word "Fu" is hung upside down on the pointed roof, and groups of lifelike "marine friends" are painted on the blue walls; The aquarium of the festival is even more lively: the sound of running water from the aquarium is intertwined with the noise of tourists, adding to the festive atmosphere.
We followed the crowd into the aquarium. This is really a magical underwater world. We walked into the temperate zone and saw a giant salamander from Asia, crying like a baby and looking terrible. Then we saw terrible piranhas from South America and colorful tropical rain in the tropical rain forest area. We came to the frozen South Pole again, and several "elegant" penguins were playing like no one was watching. Finally, we stood on the magical submarine elevator and entered the wonderful underwater world; A big shark came at me with its big mouth open, and its hippocampus was bulging and dancing in the water. Some corals are like chrysanthemums, some like antlers, and some like dense forests.
Among them, my favorite is penguins living in the ice and snow. Penguin looks really cute: its plump body, high belly, black "tuxedo" and white "shirt" look like a gentle gentleman! Through the glass, I saw a crystal clear world of ice and snow. Some of the five or six penguins waddled in the snow; Some put their bellies on the ice and snow and move forward as fast as skiers; Some fly out of the water and slide in the air for a distance; Others are bending over to peck. Look! That little, tottering penguin must have just been born. Its feet are swinging back and forth in the water, and its ass is pursed. Its movements are clumsy and lovely. It seems that it has just learned to swim. This group of naive penguins attracted many tourists to stop and watch carefully.
Visiting Shanghai Ocean Aquarium is like entering the magical ocean world and feeling the beauty and mystery of the ocean. Looking at these carefree marine animals, I don't want to leave for a long time.
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