1, young people don't work hard, and old people are sad. -Han Han Yuefu "Long Songs"
Appreciation: Everything in nature has a process of spring and autumn, and life also has a process of young people working hard to get old. Everything in nature, as long as there is sunshine and rain, can bear fruit in autumn, but people are different, and it is impossible to succeed without their own efforts.
Everything withers in autumn, but the value of life is realized, so it is not sad: people are not, because being young and not working hard does not mean taking a trip to the world in vain. Mobilizing readers to think is undoubtedly better than replacing readers to think. It is precisely because of this that this poem avoids boring life preaching.
Make the final epigram appear vigorous and powerful, deep and implicit, and deeply touch the readers' hearts. The word "disciple" at the end of the sentence is meaningful: first, it says that the boss has accomplished nothing and life is a waste; Second, waking up in old age will not help, but there is no way, which is intended to emphasize the need to work hard in time.
2. The big string hums like rain, and the small string whispers like a secret. -Don Bai Juyi's Pipa Trip
Appreciation: We not only use the overlapping word "noisy" to describe the sound, but also use "like a downpour" to visualize it. The same is true of "whispering as a secret". That's not enough. Humming, Whispering-Then Mixed reproduces the interweaving of two melodies, Like a shower and Like a whisper. The visual image and auditory image are exposed at the same time, which is dazzling and dizzying.
The endless grass on the plain comes and goes with each season. -Tang Bai Juyi's Farewell to Ancient Grass
Appreciation: The first sentence is the word "ancient grass". The rambling grass across the plain captures the vitality of "spring grass" and can be said to be detached from "spring grass growth and growth" without trace, which opens up a good idea for the following. Weeds are annual plants, which flourish in spring and wither in autumn.
"Come and go with each season" seems to be nothing more than that. However, writing "withered-glorious" is very different from writing "glorious-withered". If the latter is autumn grass, you can't make three or four good sentences. The word "one" overlaps together, forming a sigh, showing an endless feeling first, and three or four sentences will follow.