Even if there is a first month in other countries, it is difficult to compare with a lamp in Jiashan.
Shen yun Xuan da Shi
Metric poetry is the treasure of China literature, and Tang poetry and Song poetry are the pinnacle of China's poetry. A good poem can immediately take you into a different situation, which is the charm of metrical poetry. There are many poets on the Internet now, and their works are countless. Unfortunately, there are too few excellent works. Perhaps because people are used to singing and dancing, people's thoughts and feelings have deteriorated. I suddenly saw a little poem recently, which is unpretentious but full of charm. Especially when the year is approaching, Wan Ru's pot of hot wine in the cold winter warms her long-lost nerves. This is My Feeling, a quatrain written by contemporary people in the artistic conception of Tang poetry.
Even feel
Xiangni (no guest)
In the middle of the night, the phone rang suddenly, and I was glad to hear the dog complaining.
Even if there is a first month in a foreign country, it is difficult to compare with the lamp in the mountain.
Why is this little poem with only 28 words so popular on the Internet? Especially the last two sentences, are widely circulated. In fact, it is because of two words: true feelings.
As we all know, an article is easy to be long but difficult to be short, and a quatrain is the shortest existence in all poems. It is difficult to express infinite feelings with limited words, but as a quatrain, of course, we must abide by the requirements of metrical rules and the means of connecting the past with the future. The title is "Accidental Feeling", which is not difficult to understand, and occasionally there are feelings.
Beginning sentence: The phone suddenly rang in the middle of the night. This poem is very ordinary, the sentence is very dull, that is, someone suddenly calls in the middle of the night. Although it sounds ordinary, the effect is not ordinary. Imagine that in the middle of the night, the phone suddenly rings, which seems to be a common scene in some movies. Very exciting, seemingly ordinary seven words, creating an atmosphere of temptation. Attract readers to wonder, who is calling? Can I help you?
Sentence: I'm glad to hear the dog's confession. It turned out that it was the child who called. Why did the child call? Do you want money? No, I am very close to my father, so the poet used the word "Xin" here to express his joy. It was painful to be woken up in the middle of the night, but when I heard it was a child's phone call, I didn't feel pain immediately, and I was "glad to hear it" because the child told him the truth. Maybe this is a long-lost "truth"? It is also the nature of father and son (of course, this has something to do with strangers living with their children all the time), but now that father and son are not together, they can only "pour out their hearts" by phone, so this article has an accidental feeling. Put the phone down, what do you think?
Turn a word: even if there is a first moon in a foreign country, this poem, which is popular all over the Internet, came into being. This poem is the finishing touch of the whole poem! And turn naturally, put down the phone, the poet "accidentally", what is the feeling? Here it is. These seven words reflect a lot of information. "Other country" means that the poet is far away from home now, and there is a bright moon in other countries. The bright moon is often used to express beauty in his poems, such as "the sea changes, the bright moon is in the sky" and "when will the bright moon exist". So what is expressed here? This "first month" should also be beautiful. What is beauty? I had a good time abroad. If you just want to express that you have a good and passable life in a foreign country, then this poem will not be so popular. There is a sentence in this poem that tells the helplessness, bitterness, hardship and pain of all our people from other places. This is the word "vertical", a word "vertical", full of artistic conception! "Vertical" means even if there is, even if there is, although there is, but the meaning of the turning point is expressed incisively and vividly with this word "vertical"! What if you have a first month in another country?
It is difficult to compare a lamp with a mountain. Of course, the moon is brighter than the lamp, but the poet explains that the moon is not as bright as the lamp? Why? Because this is the lamp of Jiashan! Even if the scenery is mixed in a foreign country, it is a lamp that is difficult to compare with the hometown mountain. Here, the poet used a slightly obscure word: Jiashan, actually it should be hometown, but there is another place in the above sentence. If villagers are used here, then "villagers" will be repeated. One advantage of Chinese characters in China is that they can express the same meaning with different words. Since the word "hometown" is repetitive, it is enough to change the word "hometown" or hometown. Qian Qi, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, sent a gift to Li. From this, we can see that the poet's ability to control words is very skilled. Also, the poet used a seemingly insignificant word here: lamp. As we all know, lamps have warm meaning and symbolic meaning, such as the "little orange lamp" we learned when we were young. So, what does a lamp in Jiashan mean? I think it should be family. What the poet wants to express here is the "feeling" of the child's phone. Children can call themselves at midnight, but no one can call themselves. I have lived alone with my children for a long time, and now I have run away from home and suffered so much, and finally achieved something. My hometown also has the first month. When my children called in the middle of the night to complain about their affection, the poet naturally rejoiced, but when I put down the phone and looked around, the poet's parents were gone, and he didn't even have anyone who wanted to "complain". The feeling of desolation, tragic and desolation arises spontaneously, so the poet "accidentally feels" that "an oil lamp is difficult to compare with a mountain in a foreign country, even in the first month."
The language of this poem is plain, the artistic conception is meaningful and the connection is smooth and natural. The whole poem seems to be blurted out in one go, catchy to read, unforgettable, thought-provoking and fascinating.
Good works always have penetrating power. In this impetuous society, few people will precipitate their own thoughts. However, no one has ever precipitated their thoughts. This self-taught poet, a vagrant living in modern times, has created metrical poems with great artistic conception in the Tang Dynasty, which shows that even modern people can write good metrical poems. Judging from the popularity of this poem on the Internet, it has attracted many singers. I believe that as long as it is a boutique, it will be accepted and sung.
The uninvited guest is the fifth son of five tigers in northern Liaoning. He has always adhered to his original intention and has been writing metrical poems. I admire him. I am the fourth son of Wuhu, but my business is busy and I haven't written a poem for a long time. I feel guilty when I see a poem without a door today. I don't have the simplicity without doors, and I don't have the persistence without doors. The greatness of a poet needs not only good works, but also the charm of personality. There is no way to give me the confidence to create again.
The bright moon lights in my hometown are like rivers and lakes.
Don't drive the water away, Qingshan still looks forward to your trip.
-Shenyunxuan is from Tongzhou, Beijing.