High-quality teaching design of Yangzhou Slow

Original text:

Cherish the Spring Bing Xin Day and give it to Wei Yang. At the beginning of the night snow, the wheat is looking forward to it. Entering the city, you will look around for depression, cold water is green, dusk is rising, and corners are sad. I feel sad and sad. Because of this song, the old man Yan Qian thinks there is sadness in "millet separation".

Huaizuomingdu, Zhuxi is a good place with few saddles on the initial journey. Ten miles after the spring breeze, the wheat is green. Since Huma and peeping at the river, I abandoned the trees in the pond and still talk about soldiers tirelessly. It's getting late and everything is empty.

It is not surprising that Du's reward is too heavy now. Vertically speaking, although the dream of a brothel is good, it is difficult to be affectionate. The 24th Bridge is still there, the waves are swaying, and Leng Yue is silent. After reading the red medicine by the bridge, you will know who you should live for every year!

Translation:

Yangzhou is a famous metropolis east of Huaihe River. It's a beautiful residence in Zhuxi Pavilion. Taking off the saddle and staying less is the initial journey. After the spring breeze blows all over Yangzhou for ten miles, shepherd's purse and wheat are green. Since the nomads from the Yangtze River invaded and retreated, they abandoned the pond garden and cut it. So far, they still hate talking about the battles of the old days. The weather is getting dusk, and the bleak corners are blowing cold, all in Yangzhou after the robbery.

Du Mu has a good taste, and I expect him to be surprised when he comes here again today. Even if? Cardamom? The writing is exquisite, and the poetry of the brothel dream is very good, but it is also difficult to express deep feelings. Twenty-four Bridges are still there, but the river under the bridge is mighty, and Leng Yue is silent everywhere. I miss the red peony by the bridge, but I know who it blooms for every year!

Teaching objectives:

(a) Knowledge and skills objectives:

1. Grasp the ideological content of Yangzhou Slow, understand the feelings expressed by the poet, and improve the ability of poetry appreciation.

2, understand the writing techniques of text contrast and combination of reality and reality.

(2) Process and method:

1, understand Jiang Kui and his ci.

2. Strive to implement the teaching ideas of independence, cooperation and inquiry, and guide students to personally interpret Yangzhou Slow according to the learning plan.

(3) Emotional attitudes and values:

1, experience word? The sadness of separation? Cultivate students' patriotism.

Teaching emphases and difficulties:

1, experience word? The sadness of separation? .

2. Experience scene blending, virtual reality and other writing methods.

Teaching methods:

Discuss, tap and read.

Class arrangement:

1 class hour

Teaching process:

First, the introduction of new courses.

More than 800 years ago, a 2 1 year-old poet witnessed the broken mountains and rivers, and his sadness in his heart was hard to suppress. He is self-disciplined, writes his own lyrics, looks back on the past and worries about the present, and sighs. He is Jiang Kui of the Southern Song Dynasty. [Subject and author of blackboard writing]

Second, problem solving, author and background introduction.

1, Jiang Kui introduced and answered. See article note 1.

2. Background: In the third year of the Southern Song Dynasty, Jin Bing invaded the south on a large scale, attacking Yangzhou, Jiankang, Lin 'an and other cities, burning and looting. Since then, attacks on the Southern Song Dynasty have been launched. In the thirty-first year of Shaoxing, the Jin people broke Yangzhou with 100,000 fighters and plundered it. Lying dead for 20 miles? Yangzhou was once again devastated and turned into an empty city. In the second year of Longxing, Jinbing invaded Huainan again, and Yangzhou was again affected. 1 176 On the winter solstice, the poet passed by Yangzhou, witnessed the depression scene in Yangzhou after the war, recalled the past, and expressed his nostalgia for the prosperity of the past and his grief over the desolate and broken scene today.

3. Read the preface of the analysis.

Content: Writing time, what I saw and heard, writing reason, others' evaluation, emotional tone: Does Yan Qian think "The Farewell of Millet" is sad? Sentiment about the ups and downs of this country's past.

Third, the overall appreciation.

(A), students read by themselves, read together.

Tip: slow word? The tune is slow, and the pronunciation should be slow and slightly longer.

Content? Deep, sad and full of emotion.

Rhyme? Different levels and levels have distinct rhythms.

(2), analysis and appreciation

1. Yangzhou was once a famous bustling place in Sui, Tang and Northern Song Dynasties. What about Yangzhou city in front of the poet? Which word uptown can best summarize the present characteristics of Yangzhou city?

Clear:? The empty city is ruined and desolate.

2、? Empty city? What? Empty? Where is the performance? Find out the relevant poems.

Qing dynasty: green wheat, waste pond trees, clear corners to blow cold (24 bridges, silent Leng Yue, red medicine beside the bridge) and so on. Poet? Take off the saddle and stay in the beginning? Standing on the edge of Yangzhou City, I saw the green wild oats, the ancient city, the tall trees, the lonely Twenty-four Bridges, the silent Leng Yue, the lonely peonies and the piercing sound of the horn in the cold. One? Empty city? Create a sad atmosphere, tie one piece and pick up the next. It's really a whole word.

3. In the next chapter, the poet imagines that Du Mu of the Tang Dynasty came to Yangzhou. How will he feel? Why?

Clear:? Surprised? . Because? Empty? And then what? Surprised? How sad and heartbreaking Yangzhou is! There have been countless poems praising Yangzhou in Du Mu's works. At this time, who was Du Mu, a poet in the late Tang Dynasty? Surprisingly heavy? ,? Difficult to be affectionate? . And Jiang Kui is really shocking and heartbroken. Is this what the poet advocates? Poetry is expensive and implicit, but it doesn't show directly? Don't talk about yourself, talk about others. Du Mu is still like this. Why can't I?

4. Yangzhou today makes Jiang Kui sad, so what was Yangzhou like in the past? Please find a match. Empty city? The corresponding words summarize the characteristics of Yangzhou in the past.

Qing Dynasty: The once prosperous Yangzhou City can be called Du Ming.

5. Besides, what other languages were there in Yangzhou in the past? What are the characteristics of Yangzhou in the past written by these words?

Clear:? Huai Zuo, Zhu Jiachu? 、? Is the spring breeze 10 mile? 、? Cardamom ci worker? 、? Is the brothel dream good? 、? Bridge 24? Wait a minute. Qing: It's bustling and very lively.

Summary: one? Du Ming? , one? Empty city? In stark contrast. The use of Du Mu's poems in Ci reminds people of the prosperous scene of Yangzhou in the past. Today's Yangzhou is so depressed and lonely, in sharp contrast, reflecting on the past and expressing the author's sadness about the prosperity and decline of Yangzhou in the past. Quoting poems can deepen the artistic conception of words and promote people to connect their thoughts with words.

6. The present is completely different from the past. What caused it?

Clear:? After Huma peeked into the river?

After the Southern Song Dynasty, Jin people crossed the Huaihe River many times, and Yangzhou became a ruin.

7. What expressive techniques did the poet use to write about Yangzhou in the past and Yangzhou in front of him?

Yangzhou in the past: empty writing.

Yangzhou in front of us: real writing.

One is imaginary and the other is real, which is the writing feature of this word. On the one hand, it is prosperous, on the other hand, it is depressed, on the one hand, it is virtual, on the other hand, it is true. The two contrasting pictures convey the poet's ups and downs in the past and his feelings of hurting the world.

(3) Problems that may be involved in students' personalized reading.

1 Ten miles after the spring breeze, the wheat is green.

? Is the spring breeze 10 mile? From Du Mu's Farewell? The spring breeze travels ten miles along Yangzhou Road, so it is better to roll a bead curtain. Poems show that Du Mu's poems express the beauty of the realm, so they are compared with poeticization: I heard that Yangzhou is prosperous and rich, but all the way up, it is full of green wild buckwheat and a desolate scene.

2、? Since Huma went to see the river, he abandoned the trees by the pool and still hated talking about soldiers. ?

The author uses anthropomorphism, and abandoned ponds and trees are unconscious things. The poet personified them, meaning that they were witnesses to the big robbery 15 years ago. The horror of war and the ferocity of the enemy remain in their hearts. Even? Abandoned pool tree? Both? Or tired of talking about soldiers? In the war waged by people who hate gold, the thing is this, people! Of course, people who know and have feelings hate and curse this war more than that? Abandoned pool tree? A thousand times. This writing profoundly reflects the people's extreme hatred of the war of aggression. Du Mu's poem "Farewell"? Getting together seems to be painting, but it is ruthless; I just feel that the wine has to smile and keep silent. The candle on the table lit the heart, and it also saw the parting; You see, it shed tears for us and flowed to the morning. ? Similarly, personification is to express feelings with ruthless things, which is a common technique in poetry to enhance the expression effect. From the point of expression, the author adopts personification here. This technique is used in several places in this word. Like what? The 24th Bridge is still there, but Leng Yue is silent? ,? After reading the red medicine by the bridge, who will you know every year? . Here? Abandoned pool tree? It is also the anthropomorphic technique that personifies the pool and the wood and endows them with human feelings to fully show the tragic scene of the war.

3、? The 24th Bridge is still there, and Leng Yue is silent. ?

What are Mutu's letters to Han Chuo, Yangzhou magistrate? On the moonlit night of the 24th Bridge, where can jade people teach to blow Xiao? Sentence, because it is said that there were twenty-four beauties blowing Xiao on the bridge in ancient times, so there is this sentence. The author is full of sadness here and writes with tears: The Twenty-four Bridges are still there, but there is no beauty blowing at the bridge head. Only the cold full moon is reflected in the middle of the river, and the whole picture is silent and desolate. ? Leng Yue is silent? The moon is silent, but now I think it should be. Why? Because once upon a time, on the moonlit night of the Twenty-four Bridge, tourists laughed and beautiful women played the flute, and the moon was intoxicated when it saw this scene. She also laughs with people. But what about now? Is Bridge 24 still there? But I can't hear singing and laughing, even the moon has no sound, just immersed in the cold lake, with the waves rippling, how can I not be sad? The artistic technique of scene fusion is used.

4、? After reading the red medicine by the bridge, who will you know every year?

Red medicine begins to grow in spring. No matter what happens in the world, the nature of natural things will not change. In previous years, tourists can enjoy it, but now the city is empty and there are fewer people, not to mention the national disaster, and no one can bear to see it. Sort of. The green grass in spring has dyed the steps red, and the birds are chirping happily under the leaves? Taste. The poet took this opportunity to show the tragic life of Yangzhou people after being robbed and his feelings of being hurt by the times. The virtuality here is very intriguing. On the day of winter solstice, red peony is not in full bloom, but even if winter returns to spring, who will appreciate it in the next year's red medicine bloom? Bloom remains the same, the personnel have changed, and Bloom only adds to the desolation of the empty city. The strong feelings of words enhance the artistic appeal.

5. Contrast technology

There is a very different word between the lines, such as? Huai Zuo, Zhu Jiachu? , is to write the bustling Yangzhou. ? Is the spring breeze 10 mile? ,? Is the brothel dream good? ,? Cardamom ci worker? ,? Bridge 24? Although he didn't write about the scenery directly, it was reminiscent of the bustling scene of Yangzhou at that time. They are all poems written by Du Mu in Tang Dynasty. Poets use these sentences a lot, but? Sad? Not contradictory. The author compares the desolation of Yangzhou with the prosperity of Yangzhou before. The poet boldly used a large number of Du Mu's poems, recalled the prosperity of Yangzhou in the past, and made a sharp contrast between his handsome reward, cardamom's poems and the dream of a brothel. It was hard to find a room, with beautiful scenery and deep affection, which vividly showed the poet's anxiety about national affairs. Three of them are well used. What are they? Count? Vertical? Reading? . ? Count? It means to speculate or expect. Vertical? what's up Even if? Meaning? Reading? what's up Remember? The meaning of. They expressed a hypothetical tone. The poet began to associate, made a concession, and then turned the above meaning into a layer, creating a more empty and deeper artistic conception.

Throughout the whole word, there are feelings and scenes, virtual reality, repeated cycles, ups and downs, and it is really immersive to read. An important step in poetry appreciation is to understand imagination, which requires grasping key words, grasping main images, paying attention to rhetorical effects and being good at associative imagination. Only by doing this can we truly understand poetry. Please feel free to choose the poems that you deeply understand and appreciate.

(IV) Summary of the full text

Many years have passed, Yangzhou city is still stubbornly desolate there, and the 24 th Bridge is still lonely for a long time. The river under the bridge is cold, swaying past sadness, like a long dream. Only the red medicine by the bridge opened its thanks, thanked it and opened it again, as if telling a distant and sad dream flowing in the river.

(5) Blackboard design