1. Introduction (Flower and Bird Painting)
Have you ever admired traditional Chinese flower and bird paintings? (Show the flower and bird paintings) What did you discover from these flower and bird paintings? ( Flower and bird painting)
Flower and bird painting includes: flowers and birds, animals and fish, woods and fruits and vegetables. It is not painted for the sake of painting, it is not about depicting flowers and birds, copying nature, but to express one's own emotions.
Fish and Plum Tree: Characteristics of Zhu Da's paintings (show pictures). It leads to "a flower and a bird are always related to feelings". Using flowers and birds to express one's feelings is called borrowing things to express feelings. The famous writer and litterateur Mr. Guo Moruo Deeply influenced by traditional culture, his prose "Egret" embodies the characteristics of expressing emotions through borrowed objects.
2. Lecture
1. Please turn to page 2 of the book and read which sentence in the text or article summarizes the characteristics of the egret? Use a wavy line to outline it. 2. What are the key words in the sentence "The Egret is a delicate poem"? Please mark it with a triangle symbol. (Exquisite. Poetry)
3. What are the characteristics of the poem? (Short and concise, beautiful rhyme, imaginative)
4. From where in the article can you feel that the egret is a An exquisite poem? (Show the structure diagram of Egret)
An exquisite poem (1):
? Exquisite (2-5)
Figure Size (3) Pigment matching (4-5)
? Poetry (6-10) Qingtian's unique rhyme (6) Morning whistle (7) Dusk flying low (8) Not a song (9- 10)
Beginning
End? Like
Hu? Beauty
Ying
A rhyme in the bones Prose poems
1 Let's first appreciate the ingenuity of the poem "Egret".
A. Study the second paragraph (shown: the combination of pigments and the size of the body are all appropriate)
B. What is appropriate? Contact the following to think about which paragraphs to write. The combination of pigments is appropriate, and which paragraphs are suitable for the body size. Mark the corresponding paragraphs in the text.
[1] "The egret is too big and stiff...and unusual." What is appropriate in writing? (The figure is too small. How does the author use to express this appropriateness? ( Contrast)
〔2〕What is contrast? (Put two opposite things or the same thing together, and describe or illustrate them by comparison) (White Crane? Ibis? Compare the heron and the egret to highlight the exquisite beauty)
C. How does the author write the appropriate combination of pigments? [1] Show "The snow-white feathers..." "For a moment, it seems too dark." This passage uses a parallel phrase to describe which parts of the egret are described (please circle the feathers, structure, long beak, and feet). What are their colors?
〔2〕 The author's evaluation of egrets is particularly interesting (e.g., "One point longer is too long... One point darker is too dark)
A. Can you describe this sentence in your own words? Do you mean? (If the egret increases by one point, it will be longer; if it decreases by one point, it will be shorter; if it is plainer, it will be too white; if it is greener, it will be too dark)
B. Use one word to describe it. It's called just right. This is suitable
2 Isn't this description particularly interesting? In fact, it was copied by Mr. Guo Moruo (Song Yu during the Warring States Period described a neighbor like this in "The Lustful Ode of Dengtuzi") The author of the Song Dynasty's "Deng Tu Zi Luo Fu" borrowed Song Yu's description of the beauty's body to describe the exquisite beauty of the egret.
3 Shows "the combination of pigments and the size of the figure." Everything is suitable." No wonder the author said "Egret is an exquisite poem." However, Egret is not only an exquisite poem, but also a poem with endless charm. The natural paragraphs 6-8 of the text depict three beautiful pictures. The pictures show different scenes.
A. Let’s look at the first picture (showing "In Qingtian...Mirror Box"). What picture comes to your mind? Do you want to give this painting a name? Please mark it next to this natural paragraph. 〔1〕The teacher named it. Fishing alone in Qingtian? What name did you give it to compare with the teacher's. In comparison, which name do you think is more appropriate and vivid?
〔2〕What are the names of the next two paintings? (Leisurely)
〔3〕 (Flying low at dusk? The beauty of clarity) This is the name given by the teacher. I believe your name will be better. These three pictures are full of poetry. Come closer to these three pictures. The painting is like walking into a poem full of charm. No wonder the author couldn't help but praise it again at the end (show: Egret is really...a prose poem)
4. What are the characteristics of the poem? Let's review it again?
(Short and concise, beautiful rhyme, imaginative) These egrets have the same characteristics, so the egret praised by the author is a poem, a delicate poem, a poem with rhyme in the heart. < /p>
5 The beginning and end of the text use the technique of echoing the beginning and the end, which sublimates the author's love and praise for the egret, making the author have a deeper impression of the egret's beauty.
6 The egret is also a symbol of purity and nobility, shown in Zhang Zhihe's "Yu Gezi" or Du Fu's "Quatrains", or in Wang Wei's "Jiyu Wangchuanzhuang Zuo" and Li Bai's "Qiupu Song" Poems about egrets. The egret is very vivid in the poet's writings, leaving us with endless imagination. What other ancient poems related to the egret do you know?
3. Expansion
(1) Dear classmates, we know that we can express our feelings by drawing (writing) flowers, birds, insects and beasts. This is called expressing emotions through borrowing objects.
(2) The texts in this unit all write about things or contain the author’s deep feelings, or cause the author to think deeply. In this prose poem that rhymes in the heart, Mr. Guo Moruo revolves around the egret. This sentence of an exquisite poem uses the egret to express my yearning and pursuit of beauty.
4. After-school homework
Borrowing objects to express feelings
Things (reasons)
Egret’s yearning and pursuit of beauty< /p>
? Peanuts?
? Osmanthus Rain
? Pearls