In the following sentences, what is not wrong is (b)
A.？ Besides, in my humble opinion, the formation of many poems in the collection is also deeply influenced by the tradition of classical poetry.
B.？ Errors in general writing are easy to find, but errors between numbers and proper names should be paid more attention to, because most of them are difficult to identify.
C.？ After entering the new century, due to the over-concentration of population, the problems of employment, housing, water and electricity consumption in many cities have become increasingly serious.
D.？ There is a pre-racial glutinous rice mixed litchi tree in the village, which is over 500 years old. According to historical records, litchi with glutinous rice paste in Xiaocun has been cultivated for more than 500 years, and it was widely planted in Ming Dynasty.
What are the common language diseases?
1. The composition is incomplete, mainly due to the lack of subject and object:
When I heard this story, it reminded me of many past events.
(there is no subject, remove the "stone". )
The administrative department for industry and commerce immediately found out that the mall raised the price without authorization.
(lack of object, add "problem" at the end of the sentence. )
2. Improper collocation, including improper collocation of subject and predicate, improper collocation of verb and object, improper collocation of modifiers and head words, and improper collocation of related words in complex sentences:
His sharp eyes rested on the crowd.
(Improper collocation of subject and predicate, change "eyes" to "eyes". )
This novel fully reveals the beauty of the hero's soul by being ordinary and full of life details.
(Replace "disclosure" with "performance". )
This truth is not difficult to understand as long as you think about it a little.
("Deliberation" takes time and is a process of repeated thinking. It is impossible to have thoughts, so the use here is inappropriate and should be deleted. )
We should not only be partial to his mistakes, but also criticize them.
(This related word should be changed to "not only should it not be biased, but also biased." )
3. The word order is reversed:
We can't forget the history of the British and French allied forces burning and looting Yuanmingyuan.
The expression "burning, killing and looting" is unreasonable and should be adjusted. )
We saw trains and ships running on water and land.
The arrangement of word order should not only be reasonable, but also be consistent in writing. This sentence should switch between "on water" and "on land" )
4. Repeat:
Uncle Li is old and his hair is white.
Where is the hair without it? It can be seen that the word "head" is unnecessary, otherwise it will be verbose. )
Ma Lao and Lao Li have conducted rice high-yield experiments for many times.
("Repeated" and "repeated" have the same meaning, so there is no need to use them repeatedly. One of them should be deleted. )
5. Inconsistent or contradictory expressions:
The key to the success or failure of this basketball match is the player's cooperation with Qi Xin.
The first half of the sentence says "win or lose", and the second half only says "win". If the two sides disagree, it should be changed to "the key to success or failure" or "whether the players can work together in Qi Xin". )
Because classmate Wang Fang hasn't come yet, it is inferred that she may be ill.
There is a contradiction between "conclusion" and "probably". Delete "probably" or "let's draw conclusions". )
6. Fuzzy concept:
For example, dozens of literary books such as The Journey to the West, The Water Margin and Xinhua Dictionary are neatly placed in Sharla Cheung's bookcases.
Xinhua Dictionary is not a literary book and should be taken off the shelves. )
7. The abuse of adverbs and prepositions and the chaotic use of negative words: this will ensure a large-scale harvest of grain.
The tenses of "Jiang" and "Le" are different. Remove the adverb "Jiang". )
Such as: three bogeys when sleeping: first, don't get angry before going to bed, second, don't eat enough before going to bed, and third, don't lie in the wind.
("taboo" means "can't", and the "no" in the last three sentences should be removed, otherwise the meaning is completely opposite. )
In order to avoid similar accidents in the future, we should improve the safety system as soon as possible.
The words "avoid" and "don't happen" in this sentence mean "happen", which means just the opposite, so the adverb "no" should be removed. )
I wrote this composition for a whole hour.
The preposition "for" is redundant and should be deleted. )
8. Ambiguity:
For example, two short training courses in mathematics and physics held by our school both offer agricultural mathematics and agricultural electromechanical courses.
There are two understandings of this sentence: (1) These two courses are offered in the short courses of mathematics and physics respectively, that is, these two courses are offered in the short courses of mathematics and these two courses are also offered in the short courses of physics.
(2) These two courses are offered in short courses of mathematics and physics respectively, that is, agricultural mathematics course is offered in short courses of mathematics and agricultural electromechanical course is offered in short courses of physics. It seems that it should be the second understanding, adding "respectively" before "open". )