Stories about scrutiny in the history of literature:
1. It is said that when Wang Anshi wrote this poem, he changed many words in the manuscript before, first using "to", then "to", then "to" and then "to".
The word "green" is well used. A word "green" puts the spring breeze on the south of the Yangtze River, which is vividly written and gives people a moving feeling. This poem is a description of the scenery, touching the scene and feeling, which lays a good foundation for the lyric of the next sentence.
2. Clouds break through the moon to make shadows "(Song Zhangxian's Fairy). This word is short of meaning and full of meaning. The words "cloud, moon, flower and shadow" describe three objects and four scenes, and in the middle, three continuous trends are written with the words "broken, coming and getting": the cloud is broken and there is a moon coming, the moon is coming and there is a flower shadow, and the flower shadow leads to the word "getting" and getting ".
just seven words, written from the sky to the ground, the clouds are shining brightly and the wind is playing with flowers, forming a beautiful and hazy picture, personifying the clouds, the moon and the flowers, giving them rich emotions and life, and at the same time making the quiet picture fly.
3. There is a monk named Qi Ji who is very interested in poetry. He admired Zheng Gu's talent for a long time, so he came to visit with his own poems. Qi has invited Zheng Gu to read the poems one by one. When Zheng Gu read the poem "Early Plum", he couldn't help thinking.
Zheng Gu chanted, "Last night, in Zita Law, the former village, a few branches bloomed ..." Zheng Gu said to Qi Ji, "It's not too early to blossom a few branches." Zheng Gu hesitated for a while and said, "It is better to change the word' number' to the word' one'." Qi has listened and exclaimed with surprise: "It's a great change!" Bowed respectfully to Zheng Gu. Literati understand, they call Zheng Gu the "teacher of one word" of Qi Ji.
4. "Old warbler chicks in the wind, plums in the rain" (Man Tingfang by Zhou Bangyan in Song Dynasty). Our ancients used to use words flexibly, adjectives and nouns can be used as verbs, and they are vivid and vivid as soon as they are written.
It's not a day-to-day time for the yellow-billed nestling bird to grow up from its head held high to be fed, and then to spread its wings and leave its nest. It's a long time for the hard work of its parents, and it's only an "old" word, which is really intoxicating. Our thoughts wander in the word "old", and we have spent a few months without paying attention.
Another rain "fattened" plums. How many rains have it been? It should be from "the light rain is fine and the wind is fine" to "the willows are drunk with spring smoke", to "an apricot comes out of the wall", to "the flowers fade and the red apricots are small", and finally it is rich in rain. Write the dynamics, write the form, and think that the plums are from the slight shyness to the mellow yellow and fat, and the fullness of the yellow is not coveted!
5. According to legend, Su Dongpo once discussed poetry with his sister Su Xiaomei and his poetry friend Huang Shangu, and tried each other. After the younger sister said "breeze and willow" and "pale moon and plum blossom", she asked her brother to add a word to each of them and say poetry. Su Dongpo immediately said: "Shake" in the former and "reflect" in the latter sentence, that is, "the breeze shakes the willow and the light moon reflects the plum blossom".
unexpectedly, Su Xiaomei rated it as "inferior". After careful thinking, Su Dongpo proudly said, "Yes,' the breeze dances with fine willows, and the moonlight hides plum blossoms." "Little sister smiled and said," It's good, but it's still not top grade. " Huang Gu couldn't help it and asked, "What's your opinion?" Su Xiaomei read it: "The breeze helps the willow, and the plum blossoms are lost in the light moon." Su Dongpo and Huang Gugu were chanting and pondering, and they couldn't help saying that they were wonderful.