After reading a classic, I believe everyone has a lot to share. At this time, the most important feeling after reading can't be forgotten. Do you want to know how to write your thoughts after reading? The following is my thoughts on the Tianshan scenery, which I collected for you. I hope it will help you. 1
Tianshan Mountain not only gives people a rare and beautiful feeling, but also gives people an infinite tender feeling. It has abundant aquatic plants and a forest with green hair. When it is covered with thin cloud gauze, it is as shy as a girl; When it is very clear by the sun, it is like a young mother's full chest. People will love it at the same time with two kinds of sweet feelings intertwined, both as a baby loves his mother's arms and as a man snuggles up to his lover.
The beauty of Tianshan Mountain shows that people there love Tianshan Mountain very much, and the author is from there. His introduction to Tianshan Mountain makes me crazy!
Tianshan, why is it beautiful? Zhenjiang, why is it bad? Although Tianshan Mountain is not a famous tourist attraction in the world, its scenery is picturesque, Zhenjiang is proud of its three mountains, but its air is not good. Why? Why?
This is because people in Tianshan Mountain are of good quality, while people in Zhenjiang are of poor quality. Wake up! All those who are still obsessed with the phantom, wake up quickly and work hard, so that we can embrace nature again! The artistic feature of prose is the blending of scenes, and the author's emotions are pinned on specific scenes, so the author often has a variety of handling methods when dealing with these scenes. In the teaching process, teachers guide students to master these methods through corresponding guidance, which is very important to help students learn to read and understand prose. Now it is summarized as follows, so as to teach it to a generous family.
1. Optimization
Different scenery naturally creates different situations, but what kind of scenery to choose should be consistent with the emotional tone of the full text in order to make the article blend with the situation.
For example, in paragraphs 2, 5 and 6 of Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, many words are used to describe the trees on the road and beside the pond, but only poplars and willows are mentioned many times with names, while some of them are not mentioned at all, or "I don't know their names". Why should the author handle it like this? Because, what this article wants to show is the author's discontented with reality, the faint sadness of fantasy detachment, and the faint joy of stealing for a moment, and its atmosphere is quiet and quiet, so it is most appropriate to choose the feminine plants Yang and Liu to express the simple and hazy artistic conception.
Another example is Autumn in the Old Capital. Because the author pursues a specific mood of clearness, quietness and sadness, he doesn't write about the red leaves of Xiangshan in warm colors, nor does he write about the parks and shopping malls where tourists are everywhere. Instead, he rents a house to live in, facing the blue morning glory in the broken waist, and thinks that the color of flowers is blue or white, followed by purple and black, and the pink one is the lowest. The rest of the scenery is also dominated by cool colors. This shows the author's painstaking efforts.
2. Combination
The combination of a single scene should win with a panoramic view. For example, in the fourth natural paragraph of "The Banyan Tree in My Hometown", streams, pebbles, girls, ducks, stone bridges, stone tablets and small stone lions form a unique rural scenery, which is full of poetry and painting. Some articles contrast people's activities with monotonous natural scenery. For example, the "Cave Rain Scene" in "Landscape Talk" shows the inner life of a man and a woman who have a heart-to-heart talk with dull rainy days, lonely barren hills and primitive caves, and also makes nature suddenly colorful. In fact, there are more such famous sentences in ancient poetry. Wen Tingyun's "Morning Walk in Shangshan", "The cock crows in Maodian Moon, and the frost on Banqiao is deserted by people", outlines the artistic conception of the eastern countryside at dawn with six typical images, and writes "Morning Walk" vividly, which is really picturesque in poetry. Another example is Ma Zhiyuan's "Tianjingsha Qiu Si", "A dead vine and an old tree faint crow, a small bridge and flowing water. The old road is thin and thin, and the sun sets, and heartbroken people are in the end of the world. " Ten nouns touch the bleak and sad atmosphere, and the image of a wanderer wandering in a foreign land is vividly on the paper. The above poems do not use verbs, but all use noun combinations.
3. Setting
That is to set the painted scene in a specific atmosphere, and use the background with a specific background color to make the picture full. For example, "charming summer pasture" in Scenery of Tianshan Mountains, the setting sun and red light give the mountains, grasslands, yurts, herds and shepherds a resplendent warm light, showing the richness and peace of a thousand miles pasture and the joy of herders. The setting sun and red light here are the background colors at dusk. In Scenery Talk, when the flowers are selected but there are no peaches, the scenery itself is plain and rustic, but the young people in the tea club make the scenery worth nostalgia, which shows the lofty spirit of human beings to fill the poverty of nature and highlight the' people who have a full life' to dye and dominate the scenery, which well reflects the theme of the article.
4. Contrast and contrast
The scenery in prose is sometimes difficult to express its unique charm by direct description, so the author often uses the method of contrast and contrast to make the music wonderful. For example, in Green, the shade of green in plum rain pool is appropriate and the light and shade are moderate, with the green poplar in Shichahai in Beijing being too light, the green wall in Hupao Temple in Hangzhou being too thick, the waves in West Lake being too bright and the water in Qinhuai River being too dark. In Landscape Talk, "Desert Camel Bell" selects extremely monotonous flat images such as long yellow sand, noisy hot air and camel's dead bones, which are in sharp contrast with camel array, scarlet flag and sweet ringing bell, making the realm full of life and encouraging. In addition, "Scenery of Tianshan Mountain" uses the sun shadow to line the dense branches and leaves of the forest, the sound of water to line the quietness, the birds to line the deep, and the red light to line the darkness, so as to show that the trees in Tianshan Mountain are high and dense, which is also the same.
5. Imagination and association
Some scenes are relatively ordinary, and there is no special attraction. The pictures are static, and there is little room for expanding thinking, but the essayist can not be confined to the narrow space and time, and skillfully arrange to turn decay into magic, so that the pictures move and come alive. Here, imagination and association have become the necessary means of treatment. In Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, the phrase "Suddenly I think of picking lotus" brings the author and readers from tsinghua campus to the remote water town in the south of the Yangtze River, and to a picturesque and wonderful realm. It is with imagination and association that the author creates a poetic artistic atmosphere, so that readers can get wonderful artistic enjoyment.
In addition, imagination and association often refer to myths and legends. Because the simple scenery itself is mostly static and contemporary, and the ancient myths and legends have a sense of historical depth and richer connotation because of their long history and more magical romance. For example, "Scenery of Tianshan Mountain" thinks of the tears of Kazakh girls from the natural lake, which not only points out the magic of the lake, but also compares misfortune and happiness, showing that the life of Tianshan herders has changed dramatically. The Wushan Goddess in Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, the big fish carrying Qu Yuan, the shampoo basin in Climbing Mount Tai in the Rain, and swimming in the bay are also evidence.
Prose wins with scenery and moves people with emotion, and finding the key to enter the prose palace is indispensable to accurately understand the meaning of the text, and the role of mastering the method of prose description lies in this.