Determine the center and write the profound meaning. We should try our best to dig out the philosophy of life contained in the written events or find out its bright spots, think repeatedly and determine the central idea of the article. Is that he is good at writing profound meanings from ordinary little things.
The six elements of the article should be made clear. The occurrence of a thing can not be separated from six aspects: time, place, people, cause, process and result of the thing, which is the so-called "six elements". Only by explaining these aspects clearly can readers have a clear and comprehensive understanding of the things described.
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In the middle of winter, the north wind roared and it was freezing. Although the air conditioner in the room warmed my body, I couldn't feel the devastation of the weather, but I remembered my father who was buried in the bleak grave in my hometown. My heart was colder than the weather and the earth.
Tomorrow is my father's centenary. In these days when my father left, I always wanted to write some words to commemorate my father. He was ordinary but strong all his life and constantly struggled with his fate. However, every time I have such an idea, tears blur my eyes and my thoughts are so messy that I can't write.
I know that it is the most painful place in my heart that I can't touch, and how can my pale pen and ink describe my father's rich life? When my father left, I really understood and felt the meaning of the word "life".
Before I heard or saw the death of familiar and unfamiliar people, I only vaguely realized a kind of sadness, a kind of regret and lamented that "life is impermanent." However, my father only spent 82 years in this world. If he is not seriously ill, he should enjoy life and live a long life.