Imitate "Tian You Feng Sweeps Passers-by"

I don't know if you want to continue writing or ~ ~ continue writing: in a blink of an eye, 30 years have passed, and I have come to Tianyou Peak again. I met another charitable old man. He is much thinner than 30 years ago and his hair is gray. But he still sweeps the stone steps of Tianyou Peak every day. I walked up to the old man, who looked up at me and said, "Ah, it was a young man thirty years ago. When you said you would come to see me in 30 years, you really kept your word. " The old man enthusiastically led me into his shabby hut and made me a cup of strong tea, which was very hot and fragrant. I smiled and said, "You keep your word. You promised to invite me to tea in thirty years, so you invited me to tea, too. " Suddenly, we all laughed, and laughter spread all over the house. Even the birds in the bushes flew and quietly returned to their original places. I had a wonderful day with the old man. Related teaching videos (website): /v _ show/ID _ co 00 xtm ti 4 odesmjq =. Html lesson plan: 13, Feng Tianyou street sweeper teaching goal: 1, reading the text correctly, fluently and emotionally. 2. Learn 7 new words in this lesson, then know 4 new words and understand the words in the text. 3. On the basis of understanding the content of the text, read aloud and understand the thoughts and feelings expressed in some sentences. 4. From the reading interest of specific language materials, I can appreciate Tian Youfeng's self-confident spirit and open-minded and cheerful attitude towards life in sweeping monk. Teaching emphases and difficulties: 1. Guide students to understand the profound philosophy contained in the text through the language of characters. Through reading aloud, I can appreciate the author's praise for the sweeper of Tianyoufeng. Teaching preparation: Pictures and materials about Feng Tianyou, reading aloud and recording texts, etc. Teaching time: three class hours blackboard design: Are the street cleaners in Feng Tianyou (high, steep, dangerous and beautiful) (optimistic, cheerful, open-minded, confident, passionate about work and diligent in exercise) tired? Teaching process: the first class, lead in the dialogue and reveal the topic 1. Listen to the teacher carefully. you do not get it , do you? (blackboard writing: tianyoufeng) look at the pictures of tianyoufeng scenery, and then talk about your feelings after seeing them, or what poems you think of. 2. I believe that after reading the text, everyone will definitely leave a deep impression on Tianyou Peak. Today, we will go with the author to meet a respectable old man, a cleaner in Feng Tianyou. He is sure to impress you. 3. Look at the topic together, and then ask: What do you want to know about the elderly? Do you have any questions to ask after reading the topic? (Students are free to ask questions) Second, read the text for the first time 1. Read the text with questions in your favorite way, read the sounds of new words correctly and read sentences. 2. Read your favorite paragraph several times and prepare to read it to your classmates. 3. Communication refers to reading favorite paragraphs, telling their own reasons, allowing students to comment on the reading situation, combined with error correction. Read the text again 1. Students read the text silently, think about the meaning of words in the context, circle the good sentences in the text, find out the sentences they don't understand or have questions, and prepare to ask questions. You can write down your own understanding and feelings next to the sentences you understand and prepare for communication. 2. Discuss your own problems in groups to see if you can solve others' problems, and be prepared to question the problems that cannot be solved after group discussion. 3. Communication: Can read sentences well and give reasons; You can also ask or answer other people's questions, or you can talk about your own understanding. Teachers can combine comments to solve some simple problems and encourage and praise students who can ask questions and use their brains. 4. homework 1. Ask students to identify the glyphs of new words, find out the words that are easy to make mistakes, and remind a classmate after work. 2. Students write new words in red. 3. Copy the new words and words in this lesson. The second class, 1. Review 1. What impression did Feng Tianyou leave on you through the study in the last class? What impression did the old man leave on you? 2. Students talk about their impressions of Tianyoufeng and the old people. Second, read the text 1. Read the text silently, find out the sentences that can reflect the characteristics of God Blessed Peak and the elderly, and read out your feelings. 2. Read the sentences and talk about what you feel from them. Combine the comments, guide the reading and practice reading the following paragraphs. (The second, seventh and third paragraphs "I was greeted by a voice" ... The sixth, eighth and tenth paragraphs are written on the blackboard in combination with the students' answers: (High, steep, dangerous, dangerous ...) 3. The teacher has a question. Can you help me answer it? Is the old man tired of sweeping the tianyou peak? Divide into two groups: one group thinks it is tired and the other group thinks it is not tired. Read the text again and find out the reasons for being tired or not. 5, exchange reading sentences, give reasons, make people tired of listening. 6. Evaluate students' reading situation, encourage students to think while reading and read their own understanding. Third, homework 1, extract sentences describing the appearance of the elderly and sentences describing the characteristics of Tianyou Peak. 2. Be familiar with the text. After reading the text, what do you want to say to the sweepers of Tianyoufeng? (Students speak freely) Second, read the text 1. The author finally said this sentence to the old man. (Read a sentence from the author) Is the author joking with him? 2. Discuss and give reasons for "yes" or "no". Read the author's words again and realize the author's blessing to the elderly. 3. Do you think the elderly can live to 100? Why? Read the old man's words again and feel his optimism and self-confidence. 4. What kind of feelings do you have for the elderly after studying here? What do you want to say to the old man? 5. Question: Do you have any problems that you can't solve now? Third, enjoy reading the text 1. Students can practice reading the text freely and pick out their favorite paragraphs to read more. 2. Read in groups and read your favorite paragraphs to the students in the group. 3. Read the text with emotion. 4. homework 1. Write your biggest feeling after learning the text in one sentence. 2. Read The Woodkeeper after class.

┳┻ Answer adoption rate: 41.3% 2008-1-21.18: 48 Walking hundreds of meters from Wuyi Jingshe, there are 65,438+peaks under the western wall of Sun Jiefeng. At dawn in winter and spring, wisps of faint clouds often appear in the cave. They float gently between rocks, sometimes gather and sometimes drift away, which is pleasant and unpredictable. Therefore, the place name is Wo Yun, including Noisy Rock, Collapsed Furnace Rock, Fairy Rock, Tianzhu Peak, Dressing Table, Cloth Drying Table, Tianyou Peak, Lane Pingfeng and Hidden Pingfeng. The words "Uncle Gui Jingshe" are clearly visible on the forehead. Gui Shu, whose surname and first name are known, is a filial official from the Northern Song Dynasty. The original ancient buildings here are to commemorate Jiang Zhi in the early Qing Dynasty. Now only this stone gate exists. Crossing it, the pavilion on the left is called Ishinuma Qinglian Pavilion. Besides, this mountain peak is Hidden Screen Peak, which is attached to Hidden Screen Peak, and its waist is split. It seems to be a broken mountain called Xiezhufeng. The two peaks are shoulder to shoulder and close as brothers. * * * holds the blue sky with extraordinary momentum. The pavilion under Yinping Peak is called Shuiyue Pavilion. It is said that when the moon and stars are scarce, four moons can be seen in the pavilion, one in the sky, one in the water, one in the cup and one in the heart. This artistic conception is really intoxicating. The dark boulder in the middle of the cloud nest is like a recumbent elephant, commonly known as an iron elephant rock. It splits in the middle and passes through it, but the sky is like a line to distinguish the southwest Lingyan. In the 11th year of Wanli in the Ming Dynasty (AD 1538), Bobby Chen, assistant minister of the Ministry of War, built a young brook thatched cottage between the upper and lower cloud nests, including more than ten buildings, including Binyun Hall, Qiyun Pavilion, Chaoyun Building, Shengyuntai, Chiuntai and Tingyun Pavilion. Unfortunately, these buildings have long been abandoned, and only the cliff inscriptions left between the rock walls can vaguely remind people of the past. Seeing this, a scholar wrote a poem on the wall: "Ziyang Academy is clear of waves, and the broken wall is partial to women." I love to win the pavilion next door and draw a column cloud nest. " Chen Sheng smiled at the poem: Is this obviously stimulating me? On the same day, he donated money to hire employees, build large-scale buildings and renovate Ziyang College.

The mountain peak on the left of Tiexiang Rock is the Sun Cloth Rock that we saw on the bamboo raft. Please pay attention. Sun Buyan has spots in the middle of the rock wall, like the palm of a human hand, with dozens of lines more than 3 meters long. According to legend, this is left by the gods, so Sun Buyan is also called Xianzhang Peak. Due to the long-term erosion of running water, the rock wall is covered with hundreds of straight traces of running water. Whenever the west oblique sunlight shines on the wall, the street sign is particularly clear. Looking down at the stream, the reflection of the rock wall swayed with the waves, like countless swimming silver snakes coming straight up from the bottom of the river. If it rains, the rain will fly down from the top of the rock along a straight track, as if hanging in the sky, and thousands of silver dragons are flying, which is a spectacle. According to legend, a long time ago, Tianguan's Weaver Maid carried tapestries and sang songs every day, collecting colorful tapestries and giving them to the Queen Mother. One morning, fairy Bigfoot, who was in charge of transportation, carried a cart of brocade woven by Weaver Maid, stepped on the clouds and passed the cloud nest in Wuyishan, and came down unintentionally, and was immediately fascinated by the wonders of Danshan's clear water. He put down his cotton shoulder and went to play. When he heard the drums in the Heavenly Palace, he thought of brocade shoulders. At first glance, no, silk and satin have been defeated by the morning dew. Afraid of being scolded by the queen mother, he shook down the brocade and hung it on the big rock wall. Brocade is too long, hanging down to the Liuqu River, wrinkled and uneven. He pulled and pulled until a pile of brocade was flattened. After several efforts, bigfoot was so sleepy that he found the shade and fell asleep. When I woke up, the sun was setting. When he got up, he saw a piece of Hui Jin, which was radiant. It turns out that brocade shines in the sun, which makes the clear water of Danshan more charming and enchanting. When bigfoot touched the rock wall with his hand, it was very hot. He panicked and hurried to collect the cloth. However, strips of brocade have dissolved into the smooth rock wall, and even the palm prints of Bigfoot Xianbu are embedded in the rock wall forever. "Now there is a fairy palm on the stone, with ten fingers of moss", which is the scenery of the fairy palm peak. This beautiful scenery and beautiful legend may leave traces in your memory like the palm of a Bigfoot fairy.

Please note that the word "Khufu" is engraved on the front rock wall. The author of the inscription is Chen Sheng, the owner of Youxi Cao Lu. In the 11th year of Wanli in Ming Dynasty, Chen was excluded because of his disagreement with Prime Minister Zhang. He resigned and retired, feeling deeply incompetent. When he saw a stone that looked like a crouching tiger in Wo Yun, he carved the word "crouching tiger", implying that he was like a crouching tiger, hoping to make a comeback one day and show his future. The bamboo bush on the right side of Crouching Tiger Rock is the square bamboo mentioned by Mr. Guo Moruo in Wuyi's poems. Let's find out. When you enter the Shimen, you suddenly see a hole in the sky. This is the tea cave, which is known as "the first place in Wuyi" because of its tea production. From the cave, you can see the Bamboo Shoot Peak, Hidden Screen Peak, Yuhua Peak, Qingyin Rock, Tianyou Peak and Zhangxian Peak, as well as the Xianyou Rock in the trilogy, and the dangerous cliff standing on the cliff, just like a pile of high-rise cities. Surround it like an ambush. Listen carefully, maybe you can hear Chu's song. The only access is a cave in the west. People in caves can only see the blue sky when they look up. As Xu Xiake wrote in the Travels of Wuyishan: "The peaks are steep, the lowest ones are stacked, and there is no way out. More correct than the rocks on the roof. " Therefore, there have been literati living in seclusion in caves in the past dynasties, such as Song's small seclusion, Li's Zhu in the Ming Dynasty and Dong Maoxun's bookstore in the Qing Dynasty. There is a pool in the north of the tea cave, called the fairy bath, where the snowflake spring falling from the peak of God bless will gather. It is said that the fairy of Diaotan bathes here, hence the name. The stone road leading to Yinpingfeng in the south is more than 10 meter away from our position. There is a stone door with the words "Liu Yun Bookstore" engraved on its forehead. This is the former site of Dong Maoxun's Liu Yun Bookstore. More than 200 years ago, Dong Tiangong completed Wuyishan Zhi in Liu Yun Bookstore built by his father Dong Maoxun, which left us a valuable cultural heritage, passing through the stone gate and the chicken breast. It means that this is the dividing line between fairyland and human beings. Only those who dare to cross the dangerous road of Wuyishan-"chicken breast" and "dragon roll" can step into the peak fairyland. I wonder if you have this ambition? The pavilion standing on the top of the mountain is called Xianyi Peak. Climb tens of meters, and then reach the peak of Yin Ping. The original mosque at the top of the mountain, built in the fifth year of Wanli of Ming Dynasty (AD 1577), has been abandoned. From top to bottom to south, there is one and a half holes called Nanjing. Liu Duanyang, a native of Ming Dow, once lived here, and still retains a mirage.

Dear team members, please get ready. We are going to climb Tianyou Peak. There are 800 stone steps from Tea Cave to Tianyou Peak Pagoda. Interested friends may wish to climb while counting and see who can count accurately. Tianyou Peak is 465,438+00 meters high, connected to Tianyou Rock in the east and Zhangxianfeng in the west, standing in Wan Ren and towering above the peaks. Whenever it clears up after the rain, the morning light begins to appear, and white clouds fill the ravine; The wind blows the clouds and fluctuates, just like the waves of the sea. Located in the center of the scenic spot, the observation deck is a good Wuyi landscape observation deck. Standing on the observation deck to see the sea of clouds is like being in Penglai fairyland and swimming in the Palace of Heaven and Qiongge, hence the name Tianyu. As time goes by, you can watch sunrise, sea of clouds, Buddha's light, sunset and bright moon. From the balcony, you can see the peaks. Looking to the west, that peak is the peak of eight bends and three religions. Looking to the east, this peak is the Jiuqu Dawang Peak, overlooking the winding bamboo raft, with a panoramic view of Wuyi landscape, which is open-minded and unforgettable. Xu Xiake commented that "if you don't meet the flow, you can win the ninth flow, and this peak is the first."

Walking down from the observation deck, the palace-style building in front of you is the sky patrol view. On the wonderful platform after viewing, the tree with the old and famous tree brand you see is a rare red bean tree. Every mature season, the mountain breeze is as light as Buddha, pods are scattered on the ground, and red beans are shining, bright and lovely. Wang Weiyou, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, wrote, "When those red berries come in spring, how many flowers will spring bring?"? For me, take a hug home as a symbol of our love. " I hope you can find more grains to go home and become a beautiful souvenir of your trip to Wuyishan. The stream next to the red bean tree is called Humaxi, and there are more than 30 cliff carvings in the past dynasties on the stone wall next to the stream. One of the largest paintings, The First Mountain, was inscribed by Xu Qingchao, a general of Daoguang, in the winter of 1832. After enjoying the cliff carvings, we climbed a rugged hill. The archway in front of us was originally engraved with the words "Zhongzheng Park", which was demolished during the Cultural Revolution. Now the relevant departments are preparing to restore this landscape.