How to write about a key scene in Zhangjiajie

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1. Almost all scenic spots in Zhangjiajie are “wild”. The mountains are wild. The mountains in Yuanjiajie are thrilling and beautiful: take the Bailong Ladder straight into the sky. In the blink of an eye, we reached an altitude of several thousand meters. When we got off the ladder, we discovered that we were surrounded by cliffs. What’s even more daunting is that there are peach-like rocks on the cliff that sway. The front garden and the back garden are actually the most beautiful and steepest places in Yuanjiajie. The mountains in Yuanjiajie are of refreshing beauty: the tall and graceful rock peaks do not add any burden. The mountains in Yuanjiajie are of wild beauty: "Shili Gallery" and "Golden Whip Stream", the names of which make you feel extraordinary. The two old people depended on each other, as if they were in "twilight love". The mouse looked up at the sky, so it was called "The Golden Mouse Looking at the Sky". The water is wild. The water of Golden Whip Stream is of pleasant beauty: the water never becomes stable and always runs around like a wild child. It runs around the winding mountains, it runs along the winding mountain roads. The water of Golden Whip Creek is wonderful water: look! The yellow tributary and the white tributary blend together miraculously and separate miraculously. The water of Golden Whip Stream is naughty and beautiful: it hits the stones and splashes. Animals are wild. The macaques all over the mountain are not afraid of people. If you hold a snack in your hand, it will rush towards you at all costs. When you drop the food and run away, it will happily eat the loot! The mountains and rivers are wild with wild animals, and we have also become wild: walking by feeling the stones and wading through the streams. Our teachers seemed to be rejuvenated and rejuvenated amidst the chatter and laughter in the mountains and the pushing and pushing in the rivers. Comments from famous teachers: The author uses "wild" to summarize the characteristics of Zhangjiajie, which is really a novel word. The composition describes the mountains, water and animals of Zhangjiajie from a "wild" perspective, vividly showing the "wild" beauty of Zhangjiajie. For example, when writing about mountains, "That mouse looks up at the sky, so it is called 'Golden Mouse Watching the Sky'"; when writing about water, "The water never becomes stable, and always runs around like a wild child"; when writing about animals, " The macaques all over the mountain are not afraid of people. If you hold snacks in your hand, they will rush towards you at all costs." This makes readers feel the "wildness" of Zhangjiajie and echoes the theme. The composition is clear in structure, novel in writing, and consistent with the title. The young author not only observes carefully, but also makes vivid summaries, and his writing level is also relatively high. "It will rush up at all costs" in "get" is changed to "ground".

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Silhouette of Zhangjiajie

As soon as you step into Zhangjiajie, you feel like you are in an ink-wash painting. At the entrance of the scenic spot, a peak stands on the wall, like a knife and an axe. The cliff body is mottled and scattered, a hundred meters away. Up and down the peak, in the dim light, a few wisps of clouds are floating, like light gauze, like silver... According to the accompanying tour guide, Ms. Shi, there are up to 2,000 such peaks in the scenic area. They vary in height and shape, but most of them have no support and form independent peaks, rising from the ground like a giant sword piercing the blue sky.

There is a Golden Whip River in Zhangjiajie, which is more than 40 miles long. It is lined with strange peaks and rocks. It is the main passage into the mountain. The Golden Whip Rock on the bank of the stream is the king of peaks. I saw this giant peak with a height of more than 300 meters, with steep cliffs and towering rocks. The top of the peak was covered with mist, with several strong pines standing in the wind, and occasionally a few red leaves mixed in. After looking up for a moment, I felt the heaven and earth move. I felt dizzy and almost staggered. Walking slowly along the ancient path of Jinbian River, you will see springs and waterfalls along the way, deep green shade, singing birds in the canyon, and shadows of monkeys in the forest. Above the dense shade of the cliff, a narrow sky is exposed, stretching for several miles, giving the ground a A meandering strip of light is revealed, its emotion and interest are indescribable.

Climb the Golden Whip Stream to Huangshi Village, which is composed of many giant peaks. You can have a panoramic view of Zhangjiajie, with winding mountains and waves, which is extremely spectacular. This mountain with an altitude of 1,100 meters is surrounded by dozens of viewing spots. From different angles, you can enjoy the view of thousands of peaks and hundreds of mountains. You can have a panoramic view of all the wonderful and lifelike images: Wanglang Peak, the Three Sisters, the Solitary Monkey on the Single Peak, the Golden Turtle in the Sea of ??Mist, the boy worshiping Guanyin, the forty-eight generals... Each image is lifelike and has a legend. The story of Wanglang Peak is very touching. It is said that many years ago, there was a girl Zheng who could cut paper flowers by the Golden Whip Stream, and she fell in love with Baoyuan, a boy who had been herding sheep since she was a child. Local gangster Zhang coveted Zheng Mei's appearance and falsely accused Baoyuan of being a rebellious son to the government. Baoyuan was caught by the officers and soldiers and sent to serve at the border. In order to escape Master Zhang's lustful power, Zheng Mei hid in the most remote mountain. Whenever the morning light did not show, she stood at the entrance of the cave, looking towards the place where Baoyuan was far away, looking, looking... I don't know how many years she looked. , looked through a hole in the rock on the opposite side, and she herself became a stone man. The local Tujia and Han people still sing a folk song: "O Masang tree, how many rocks can I see through the lampstand? If you don't come back for three years, I will wait for three years. If you don't come back for ten years, I will wait for ten years." , I can’t go back to the mountain without seeing the man, and the flowers won’t bloom without the spring rain...” Pine trees and sea of ??clouds are all available here. The difference is that the stone peaks in Zhangjiajie are more dense, varied, and majestic. More than a hundred acres of ancient pines form a vast sea, with trees tens of meters high. Surrounded by the two of them, the pines burst into waves and the blue waves emptied out, creating a majestic atmosphere. Standing in Huangshi Village, I saw milky white clouds appearing and disappearing between the peaks, rising and falling. For a moment, the clouds and sky were all the same color, with nothing in sight, and for a moment, the peaks and mountains appeared, resplendent with gold and jade. When the top of a peak protrudes above the clouds, it looks like a solitary sail in a sea of ??mist, or like something from the sky coming slowly.

A ray of sunlight zigzagged through the mountains, passed through the clouds, and immediately flashed golden light. The clouds were steaming and the clouds were glowing, which was extremely beautiful.

The upper and lower Huangshi Village is surrounded by dangerous mountains and narrow roads, often with fish-ridge-style passages. There are cliffs and abyss on both sides. It is hard to fathom the bottom, which is frightening. Fortunately, our tour guide, Ms. Shi, guided us and reminded us from time to time. . Ms. Shi graduated from the Department of Foreign Languages ??of Hunan University and is interested in the development of tourism. She recommended herself as a tour guide. She spoke pure Mandarin and not only told us vividly and vividly, but also sang Xiangxi folk songs to entertain us. On a stone wall in a dangerous place, we saw a poem written by a tourist in the 1980s: "Since ancient times, the five mountains have been the heroes of the world, and the ancient cliffs have been neglected until now. I borrowed the blue sky and flew a colored pen to express my gratitude to the mountains. "The artistic conception of his words, although not very elegant, expresses the unanimous voice of tourists." All the injustices in the world have happened to this beautiful resort. I really don't understand why Qu Yuan, the Sanlu doctor who once traveled to the Yuan River and Lishui and left immortal poems such as "There are orchids in the Yuan River and there are orchids in the Li River, I miss the son but dare not speak", why did he care about the Golden Whip Creek that flows from the Lishui River? , turning a deaf ear to the thousands of peaks and rocks on the banks of the Golden Whip Stream; I really don’t understand that an ancient Qin cave described by Tao Yuanming has attracted poets and writers from all over the ages to come here and write beautiful poems, facing the peach blossom garden that is only two hundred years away. However, Zhangjiajie here is regarded as a dangerous road and will not be set foot in! Traveling all over Zhangjiajie, you can't see a single inscription or stone carving left by the poets, nor can you see any historical relics left by the Taoist monks. Regarding this, Ms. Shi told me that after searching through written records, there was only a poem written by Xia Zi, a poet from the Ming Dynasty, after his travels to Zhangjiajie, "The moss marks remain in the secluded valley forever, and the walls are hung with strong pines for thousands of years." There is no other word.

However, Zhangjiajie’s first-class mountain and rock scenery has actually existed here for thousands of years, tens of thousands of years... It does not lose its beauty because of the lack of chants by elegant people, nor does it lose its beauty because of the lack of chants by elegant people. It will never shrink from its majesty just because there are no traces of tourists. It does not need to listen to the beautiful poems written by divine craftsmanship, and it does not need to accept the worship of good men and women. It is intimate with the stars and the moon, accompanied by the forest sea, silently listening to the joys and sorrows of the world, and being baptized by the wind and rain. While coexisting with the heaven and the earth, it embellishes a corner of China with its natural and original beauty.

Going up the mountain and down the mountain, there are twists and turns, there are wonderful scenery and beautiful scenery everywhere. I found that there were no pavilions, pavilions, pavilions or waterside galleries in the entire scenic area. Except for the stone steps up the mountain built by forest rangers, there were no artificial carvings. Then, I remembered the famous painter Wu Guanzhong’s praise that Zhangjiajie has “the robust beauty of barefoot mountain village girls”. Yes, Zhangjiajie is not a graceful, painted and graceful beauty, but a pretty, a little wild, rugged but elegant barefoot mountain girl - a Xiangxi woman who shows her simple wild beauty and natural beauty. . 9$8

The prosperous age is here. Zhangjiajie, which was isolated from the world, finally lifted its veil in the spring of reform and opening up, stepped out of the boudoir, and became famous all over the world with the trend of "coming from behind"! !

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