1, original:
Distant Altair, Jiao Jiao Hehan girl. Skillful hands, make a loom. There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down. The river is clear and shallow, with many differences. Between water and water, there are no words.
Explanation:
Altair can be seen far away in the southeast of the Milky Way, and Vega is bright and bright in the west of the Milky Way. The weaver girl is waving her long white hands, and the loom keeps ringing. I didn't knit a piece of cloth all day, and tears rained down. The Milky Way looks clear and shallow. How far apart are the two banks? Although only separated by a galaxy, we can only look at each other with deep affection and silence.
Appreciate:
There are ten sentences in this poem, six of which use overlapping words, namely, distant, charming, slender, firm, ying ying and pulse. These reduplicated words make the syllables of this poem harmonious, concise and beautiful, full of interest, and naturally and appropriately express physical properties and feelings. Especially the last two sentences, if the image of a young woman full of sadness appears on paper, it is a rare meaningful and muddy sentence.
2. Original text:
Clouds and bright moons are in the sky, and silver, Han and autumn are the same. How many joys and sorrows, year after year, on this night.
Explanation:
Looking up at the bright moon, I feel that Tanabata and autumn are the same in the long river of history. On this day every year, the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl appreciate the joy of meeting and the sadness of parting.
Appreciate:
The first sentence "Clouds and Moonlit Nights" begins with the scenery. A crescent moon hangs high in the night sky, looking lonely and desolate. This provided a background for the meeting of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl on the seventh day of July, and at the same time rendered an atmosphere consistent with the mood of the characters. Judging from the description of the environment in the first sentence, readers will feel the sad tone of Tanabata even if they don't know the story of Cowherd and Weaver Girl.
The story of Cowherd and Weaver Girl's annual Tanabata Meeting is a household name in China. This poem, which is based on such a sad tragic story, expresses the sadness and separation of a man and a woman who love each other, and the poet has deep sympathy for the couple.
3. Original text:
The thin clouds in the sky are changing, the meteors in the sky convey the sadness of acacia, and the endless galaxy I quietly crossed tonight. On the seventh day of autumn dew and autumn, it is time to meet, mostly those who are together in the world, but the appearance of husband and wife. Tender as water, like a dream, you can go home from the bridge! As long as two people love us to the end, why covet my Heron?
Explanation:
Lightweight colorful clouds are transformed into various ingenious patterns in the sky, and meteors in the sky convey the sadness of acacia. I quietly crossed the vast Tianhe River tonight. Tanabata meeting in the autumn wind and white dew is better than those couples who are together in the world. Tender feelings are like flowing water, and the day of reunion is like a dream. I can't bear to see Queqiao Road when I leave. If two of a kind, till death do us part, why do you love each other deeply?
Appreciate:
The discussion of this word is free and smooth, easy to understand, but graceful and meaningful, with endless aftertaste. The author combines the finishing touch with the prose syntax with beautiful image and deep emotion, and eulogizes the beautiful love in the world with ups and downs, which has achieved excellent artistic effect.