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Poet, the essence of literature, is hard to get from the pen, but should flow from the heart. There is no passion in my heart, I can't exert myself, I just put pen to paper, afraid it's not a dog's ear. Even if there are a thousand words, what is the price?
two
Is to take a little, dig a little, and don't be greedy for perfection. Perfect and easy to lose weight, a lime or two, how can it be useless? A hundred cups is not as good as one cup, so have a strong taste.
three
It is best for poetry to avoid punching on all sides and hurting the muscles and bones. Yongmei's poems were written by a public official in the previous dynasty, and there were hundreds of them at once for fear that the essence could not be understood. I savored it under the lamp, and when one of them was published, it was still called poverty. When I read the whole article, I feel that I will turn my head and say more. Mei's image is not full, but it is like a pastoral behind a soldier, fragmented. This disadvantage of punching on all sides is inevitable for poets.
four
Be sure to leave room for poetry and not be too arrogant. If you do your best, you will be exhausted and you will feel tasteless. If you want to catch sparrows all day, I'm afraid its efforts will not satisfy you. People should be careful.
five
Rhyme is difficult, so you must shout at the beginning and have a long ending. The two couplets in the middle should support the facade with beams and columns. The first silence is to stop; If the end is not long, it is a bald tail; If the two associations are ineffective, it can be said that they are as poor as a church mouse.
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Rhyme is the most taboo to be outspoken, and to make up for it, such as a rotten wooden column, which seems tangible, but in fact it delays major events, and beginners must know it.
seven
If you take out the two couplets in the middle and make the first and last two sentences into quatrains, you will be in the cold; From beginning to end, those who become quatrains should be sent to reeducation through labor; Those who are cut into two quatrains in the middle can't accept the cold palace and reeducation through labor. It's hopeless!
eight
The confrontation must be evenly matched, and those who can't match the strength will be lame. The morning clouds are beginning to sink, the rain is coming, and the wind is full of buildings', and the front foot jumps,' The moon is near the water tower, and flowers and trees are easy to spring in the sun', and the back foot jumps. Over time, most people only remember one leg, so I don't care!
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Idioms can be used in poetry, but there is no trace. "Just like a wild horse, the pen is like a dragonfly." This sentence of Yuan Suiyuan is also very natural. Shen Guiyu's poem, "The Tomb of Xiao Feng's Remnant Moon Wasteland, With Zero Dew Clouds Surrounding the Platform", is also a bit dull. I tried to make a couplet and said,' When you wake up, wait for the chicken to dance; If you have nothing to do, you will ask for it. It is no good hanging idioms at the end of sentences and diluting them with the words' Yao' and' Yao', but they can still be used to make a gentleman laugh. Moreover, it would be better if idioms could break poems. I've tried it, too, and' Don't play the piano to provoke cattle' is also true.
One zero
Social poetry must not be written, but should be written carefully. Entertainment is not coping, it always needs some personality to be good. Take giving an answer as an example. If a poem is an ordinary gift, you can give it to Zhang San or Li Si, so don't bother to do it. You must give a stick to the old man, a skirt to the young woman and a cake to the boy before you can do it.
one by one
Poetry forbids raving, and King Kong glows, which makes people unbearable. The same person is chanting chrysanthemums,' Wait until September 8 in Qiu Lai, and I will kill the flowers after bloom', which is heroic and daunting; If I were Di Qing next year, my ambition would be extraordinary, but studying is still good. What is the reason? Flexibility and talent are also important.
several
There are five ways to bring the words of predecessors into poetry:
It's been like this since I moved here. It's really' if the sky is affectionate, if the sky is old', everyone can do it, which is not enough.
The next day, I had a minor operation. Today, Liu Shousheng has a saying:' If there is love in the sky, it will be annoyed'. Only the word "Yi" is a great victory.
Third, pruning and grafting,' cock crow makes the world white', Li Changji also said that Run Weng cut it for his own use; This method is good, but it can't be used more. If you use it too much, it will stretch.
On the fourth day, I was dressed and said,' There is no way to doubt the stone, and there is a different sky in the clouds'. In Du Shaoling, I also said that' there is no doubt in the mountains, and the village is no longer bright', which means something, but it looks completely different from the ancients. Everyone can do this, but the method might as well.
Fifth, it is like love between people and mountains. Taibai said,' Meet each other late, only Jingting Mountain'; Jia Xuan turned it into a sentence:' I see how charming Castle Peak is, but I expect Castle Peak to see me like this, with feelings and looks slightly similar'; Trang Van even changed it into a song: "I love mountains, so I can watch the time and steps, and Yunshan loves us". These cases are enough to kill the common eyes of the world.
Clouds coming to the mountains are better, and clouds going to the mountains are picturesque. Mountains are bright because of clouds, and clouds compete with mountains. Leaning against a stick can make the sand pile stand up. See you later, Sam. Wild deer sleep in mountain grass, and mountain apes play with wild flowers. Xia Yun, I like mountains for no reason. Look at the time, take a walk, the mountain loves us. ? Yuan/Zhang/No Trang Van
One three
Don't worry that the ancients did all the poems, and don't worry that the ancients ate all their ears as food. It is inevitable for social development that the world is cold, ancient and modern, different poetry materials and different languages. Li Taibai is only vertical. How can you write about the seclusion of the universe and the exploration of the moon palace? Sit still and worry about poetry. If that's the case, then no one needs to live.
Easy
There is no fixed way to write poetry, and there is no fixed way to comment on poetry. If the genre is bold and graceful, there is no difference between good and bad. Generally speaking, a noble person is a noble person, graceful and restrained is graceful and restrained, and there are many ancient sages. Dongpo's' River of No Return' is solid and luxurious, but it also has the elegance of' greasy jade rubbing around the neck and tender lotus root weaving fairy clothes'; Isn't it very graceful for Li Yian to "undress lightly and go to Lanzhou alone"? Xuan also sang' Life is a hero, and death is a hero'. If you prefer a certain school, you will be lucky to be the champion of a certain school. I'm afraid it won't flow in after all
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The expression of poetry is both implicit and straightforward, and self-righteous. I think both methods are excellent, but they should be used in different occasions. When and where to use what method is appropriate, not in itself, but in the object. Mrs. Hezhou should be soft and soft; If the evil bandits follow Ling, they will win the battle of "chopping the devil's head with a broadsword"! Sometimes it's good to look for incense in the fog, and sometimes it's good to get straight to the point.
Yi Liu
To write poetry, we must first be a man with high character and high quality poetry. Moral articles, two into one, can't be divided? Poetry is passed down by talent as well as by quality. Qin Gui was Zaifu of the Song Dynasty, born in the top three, unworthy, but humble, and later generations did not know that Qin Gui had poems.
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A moment's work is easy, but a lifetime's virtue is hard to cultivate. Those who owned Wang Zhaoming in modern times tried to assassinate the Regent to overthrow the imperial system. There is a saying on the prison wall:' Sing Yan generously and be a Chu prisoner calmly. Lead the knife into quick success and instant benefit, and live up to the head of young people. "At that time, people were ambitious. However, when the country was in danger, he behaved like a tiger and bowed to the enemy. Isn't it sad that a teenager is irresponsible and his old age is irresponsible? The poem says,' Decadence has no beginning, but talent has an end'.
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The author is not necessarily, and the reader is not necessarily', which is true for theory. Critics can get this method and greatly increase the research space. However, there must be a limit for those who are' not necessarily otherwise'. If there is no restriction, won't poetry become plasticine, which can be rounded and flattened? The true colors are gone.
Yijiu
There are redundant words in the poem, which can be recognized by sick people; There is a lazy word in the poem, which is also morbid and hard to feel. Covering the rest of the word like an old man's crutch shows that the body is declining, and the lazy word is like a young woman leaning on a fence, but she feels mentally exhausted. I have a pair of couplets of Qiu Chan. The first work is' first frost maple leaves are red and the night dew is cold and astringent'. It is not enough to use the words' place' and' time', but if you don't try your best, you will inevitably be lazy. Later, the words' Butterfly' and' Pearl' were changed to' Bi'. When the lazy word goes away, it becomes a poetic look. Mr. Lian Qiu, a senior poet, was deeply impressed and deliberately wrote a poem praising the cloud:' Spring and Autumn is rich and thoughtful, and it is really proud. There are many shows in the altar, and everyone talks about the east alone. "
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Function words in poetry should be used with caution, especially not in the same position in the sentence. The cover is weak, and it is difficult to support the skeleton. For example, Zhang's "A drunkard's sake is not wine":' It's better to be drunk than not to be drunk'. Touching is dancing, and words make up poetry. "Four deficiency in tendons, make the waist soft and tired, head and tail drooping, and consumption ghost ear, why poetic?
Eryi
Reversing the case in another machine, not innovative, not ironic. Just like digging up an old case in history, Luo Yinyun said:' Why do Wu people complain about history when the country rises and falls? If Stone overthrew the State of Wu, who will be the vanquished of the State of Yue?' Yuan Jianzhai said,' The death of the prince of Wu is a city and a flower with a heavy name. When my concubine complains to her benefactor, she often feels confused. "One is rigid, the other is flexible, and all of them can make female disaster theorists feel ashamed. When people are good at this, they often' use it against their will' and observe what they do, but black is white and white is black. If so, then all the cases in the world can be overturned. Is it right or wrong?
two two
It has been since ancient times to change other people's poems at will according to one's own ideas. It is also true that Yang Shengan changed' a thousand-mile warbler' into' a hundred-mile warbler'. But I'm still pretending to be an ancient book, and I dare not be a teacher. The person who is good at this today is not. Whenever you see other people's poems, don't ask questions, first wave an axe to show your' master' status. An open editor of Selected Contemporary Poems of China in Gansu has done the best in this respect. I wrote a small ode to a crane:' Rain, snow, wind and frost for several years, rivers and lakes dance freely. Even if it is rare to go to Wan Li in a clear sky, it is better than a cormorant with a fishing boat. "Meng Gong cut out from a magazine and edited it, and changed it to' rain, snow, wind and frost, regardless of year, wandering alone in the rivers and lakes. Even if it is difficult to get into the clear sky, it is better than a fish boat cormorant. The words "solitary" and "independent" are repetitive, not to mention that "rare" is easy to "difficult" and particularly unfair. It is rare that there is no clear sky Wan Li when the four pests are rampant; People who are' difficult to climb' can't fly high in clear skies in Wan Li. The former is used for documentaries, while the latter is complaints. I dare not thank you for your kindness. Poetry is not mine, but my crown. Does it mean that I robbed the beauty of a certain public? This is for reference.
Ersan
Jia Xuan's "Qingpingle Village Residence" is very interesting to write about the happiness of farmers' families, but it is difficult to solve things. At the beginning of the cloud,' hoeing beans flows east' covers spring scenery and blends with' green grass'; However, following the saying of "serving at a salary and tasting courage", it is inevitable to speculate. It's spring, and the lotus has not been released yet. How can we peel the lotus? Zeng Minxing's "Awakening Alone Magazine" included Dai Song's painting "Bullfighting Picture", which made Tianfu laugh. When you build a bullfight, push hard, and your tail is sandwiched between two strands, so you can't get up. The painter's mistake is caused by poor observation. Is Jia Xuan sick, too? From the point of view, the physical object is the most important thing for the poet, and it cannot be vague at all; A little negligence, although the master can't help it.
Si Er
Those poems that are taken for granted, especially those that are terminally ill and have no details. The body is not refined, or its fur is available; If you take it for granted, you will find no trace. I replied to a friend's couplet, and the first draft was' Gulls and herons come and go in the forest, and the sea is as heavy as dragons and dragons'. Mr. Yang Lu pointed out: "Seagulls and waterfowl also live on the banks of the river and will not enter the forest." I was shocked and changed the word' crane', and his illness began to take off. Yu's loss is also great, so I think this is a lesson for a gentleman.
Erwu
The reform of traditional poetry is a hot topic at present. For example, revising rhyme books, updating vocabulary and expanding themes. It's really necessary at the moment, and I feel the same way. Or those who advocate breaking the rules and regulations are biased. Innovative body is suitable, old body is unnecessary. The reform of replacing poetry with poetry? The reform of Qu Fei's Ci? I haven't heard that Song people abandoned poetry because of words, and Yuan people abandoned words because of Song. What's wrong with several parallel bodies? As an old body, it is natural that we should stick to the old laws. If breaking the law is reform, then free verse has already been done, so why bother? People who don't want to obey the law can write non-binding free poems. Who can say no to you?
Erliu
It is also unwise to stick to the precepts of predecessors and write poems. Taking rhyme as an example,' East' and' Winter' are clearly combined and must be strongly divided; Yuan' and' soul' are distinct and must be strong. Why is it unwise to make such cocoons? You should know that your poems are for today's people, not for the ancients. If modern people think it is, why not take it as the ancients?
Erqi
Poetry is old and new, Jews have brothers, brothers should not be divided, and old and new should not be opposed. Those who have good new poems and despise old ones, and those who have good old poems and despise new ones, all lose. I think the old and the new have their own advantages and disadvantages, and it is appropriate to learn from each other's strengths. Brothers are useless to poetry.
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If a poem is willing to give up what it loves, it can be passed down for generations. Even a first-rate poet can't guarantee a second-rate or third-rate work. Rice and barnyard grass mixed together, looking green, less harvest; Going to barnyard grass to save rice, the grain will be bright after autumn, although there are some regrets. There are six poems by Wang Zhihuan, and people cannot shake his position as a great poet. Who wants to be a poet? Therefore, the complete works are not as good as the selected ones.
Erjiu
Poetry is praised by Ji Shengyou and Tong Diaoqing, which is understandable. However, it is vulgar to simply label it with time. For example, the Spring Festival couplets are sung by the zodiac: the Year of the Loong eulogizes the dragons, horses and monkeys in the Year of the Horse, and the cycle is endless. By analogy, until the year of the rat, there will be no praise for the mouse. If so, I really don't know where to start.
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Poetry is higher for those who can teach what the predecessors did not, and higher for those who can teach the predecessors. This so-called "further progress" is also true. This' one foot' is different from the previous' one hundred feet' and cannot be calculated on the road.
the Trinity
Writing heroic poems depends on loyalty and slow breathing. Don't shout like a field battle. The former seems to have a faint thunder, the sky returns to the ring, and the strength is far away; The latter is like an empty mountain firecracker. When it rings, it falls silent.
Mentally sound
"Poetry can't be a hero without new changes" is the theory of nature; However, its changes must be controlled. If we keep changing and innovating, we are afraid that it will become an "astronaut" and an "ape man".
three three
When you sing things, you should stick to them for nothing. If you are too persistent, you will write beautifully and have no aftertaste.
Three or four.
There must be some accommodation at the end of the poem, especially what is recited. If it is only a purely naturalistic description, it will block the reader's imagination and be thankless.
Sanwu
Dai Li and Zhang Guan, the usual poetic method, but the premise is true, don't stick to details. Dongpo's "Red Cliff Nostalgia" only focuses on what happened in history, without asking what melody Jiayu and Huanggang wrote. Later generations recite their words and admire their ears. Who will re-examine whether their data sources are reliable?
Sanliu
Poetry is not afraid of being flat, but of being weak; An equal footing is just a hollow bullet, and a weak knot will make you lose your helmet and armor. As soon as I saw it, people chanted Shi Yun: "Li Guang can't seal the Han family, and Feng Tang wants to use the dragon bell;" Talents are also like the scenery of the Yangtze River. When they are out of Wusong, it will not be the peak. " This sentence is very simple. But the conclusion is very interesting to compare the wonders along the Yangtze River with outstanding talents in various historical stages. When the Yangtze River exits Wusongkou, there will be no strange peaks on both sides. The same is true of talents in history. If they are not appointed in time, the times have changed and it will be futile. Ordinary truth, once expressed in image language, feels endless.
pseudo-ginseng
Using the old style and new rhyme is like wearing shoes in Hanfu, which is neither fish nor fowl.
Sanba
For the way of poetry, we should use more objective descriptions and less subjective comments. Picturesque scenery should be appreciated by readers, not by the author himself. The "poetic feeling" that readers feel from poetry is implicit; By the author's own "picturesque" is shallow.
The third nine-day solstice after beginning of winter-the coldest day in winter.
Poetry pays attention to natural taste and does not avoid small flaws. There is something wrong with the new bud with taste, which is far better than the old goods with no problem and no taste of Master Sanchun Acetic Acid.
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The quatrains are the most important at the turning point. Only when the third sentence is "arched like a full moon" will the fourth sentence receive the effect of "shooting like a meteor". Beginners need to understand this carefully.
Siyi
There is no other trick to writing poetry. If you can try to exclude what most people want, you will win by surprise. For example, driving, while everyone is crowded on a road, the wider road surface will also cause congestion; Whoever can find another country road without joining in the fun will reach the finish line first. It's strange that everyone is crowded on the expressway without touching the car. This is the reason why we often see the same images in poems with the same theme.
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