16． (1) Being a guest for a long time makes me feel homesick. (2) As time goes by, I am sad to see the passage of time.
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Angle 1: Seeing the scene makes you fall in love. Flying away from the "Guyun" and "Returning Bird" quickly, I think of myself not to return for a long time; as the sunset sets on the mountain, I think of myself getting old. The association is natural, and the lyricism is genuine and natural.
Angle two: comparison. The contrast between the rapid departure of the cloud bird and the long stay of the cloud bird expresses the deep longing for hometown.
Angle Three: Bixing. The first couplet and the neck couplet are both exciting and contrasting. "Guyun"
"Returning Bird" both arouses nostalgia and self-comparison; the sunset
draws out old age and uses the setting sun to express oneself. Ratio reflects the loneliness of leaving home and the sadness of growing old. (It’s okay to just answer metaphors)
Angle 4: Situations are written separately, with distinct levels. The first and third couplets depict scenes, and the second and fourth couplets are lyrical. Written alternately, the poetry is divided into two steps. First, the scene of clouds disappearing and birds flying at sunset evokes nostalgia, and then the sunset. The scene of walking down the mountain and looking back at the light evokes the shock of late life, and it is wonderful to express its meaning in a song. (1 point for correct answer skills, 2 points for analysis and combination with poems, and fluent language expression)
Analysis
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Test question analysis: This poem is written by a wanderer who is nostalgic for his hometown. The poet captured the scenery characteristics of the autumn sunset and wrote out his subtle and complex ideological activities at this moment. First, "look longingly" at the scene of birds flying away from the clouds, triggering nostalgia and travel regret; then "looking longingly" at the scene of the sunset, aggravating the nostalgia, and thus triggering the sadness of aging deep in the heart. This poem has scenery and emotions, and the scenery and emotions are highly unified and integrated into one. The language is as clear as words and has strong generalization power.
Test points: Evaluate the ideological content of the article and the author’s views and attitudes. The ability level is Appreciation Evaluation D.
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Test question analysis: Scenario writing is indeed a feature of the layout of this poem. This way of writing has a special artistic effect for this poem. If you think about it carefully, you can find that this poem is quite original. The whole poem is about the feeling of "looking longingly at the setting sun". Two lines of scenery and two lines of emotion are written alternately. The poem is divided into two steps: first, the scene of the clouds disappearing and birds flying before the sunset evokes the "missing" of hometown, and then The scene of the setting sun returning to the mountains evokes the "surprise" of late life, showing the development and deepening of emotions. If we don't care about the rhythm, the poem can be written in a slightly reversed order: "The lonely cloud and the returning bird travel thousands of miles for a while. The trees under the faint sun burn into the autumn mountains in the distance. I wonder why I have lingered, I haven't returned home for a long time. I dare not shine near the water, for fear The first half of the scene and the second half of the emotion are also common writing methods, but they appear a bit flat and do not have the advantage of progressively conveying the meaning mentioned above. And "The home bird is flying home in a hurry" causes the heart to return like an arrow, followed by "I have not returned home for a long time" and so on. It is not only natural, but also has the contrast between speed (thousands of miles in an hour) and delay (long stay), detached and vigorous. If it is changed to the pattern of half scene in the front and half emotion in the back (as mentioned above), this benefit will be lost again.
The subtext of Lianzi is vivid in image, such as "lonely cloud", "returning bird", "slight sun" and "autumn mountain", creating the desolation and coldness of the autumn evening, embodying the author's sadness. The use of the word "burn" shows movement in silence; the word "yuan" also expresses the spaciousness of the artistic conception and enhances the expression of loneliness.
Test point: Appreciate the image, language and expression skills of literary works. The ability level is Appreciation Evaluation D.