One or two sentences mean to ask the woodcutter Lu Xiu where he lives, and then look for directions from a distance. Through the writing of "asking the firewood guest" and "knowing from a distance", it implies the seclusion of Lu Xiu's mountain residence. The author does not call the woodcutter a woodcutter, but a woodcutter, which shows that the woodcutter is not a layman, which also plays a certain role in rendering the atmosphere of the poem.
What I saw in three or four sentences along the way was a close-up view. The old roots are intertwined with stones as if they were born with stones. The swift and clear spring water washed away the floating soil and leaves on the surface, exposing the sand at the bottom of the spring, making the water clean and sandy. These two sentences vividly describe the unique scenery and colors in the secluded mountain road. Correspondingly, the author uses the awkward sentences in metrical poems, and the words "old" and "clear" are flat and contradictory, which also strengthens the lofty and quiet atmosphere in syllables.
Five or six sentences are written into the vision of hope. "Thousand Peaks" says there are many peaks, because it looks very dark in the rain and can't be seen clearly. The contrast between "all the way into the clouds" and "a thousand peaks darken with the rain" shows that the path leading to Luxiu Mountain Residence is high and deep, and it winds all the way to the depths of the smoke clouds. These two sentences are changed into coordinate syllables, on the one hand, to increase diversity, on the other hand, it is also suitable for the breadth of writing vision.
Seven or eight sentences with awkward syllables are still suitable for highlighting the special color of mountain scenery throughout. The special color of scenery is used to describe people, and also to set off the simple and noble image of "Chu Shi".
Buckwheat is a common crop in poor mountainous areas, with small white flowers in spring. On sunny days, small white flowers are inconspicuous, birds disperse at dusk, and buckwheat flowers are white all over the mountain. Buckwheat Flower is not only suitable for describing the mountain scenery in Chu Shi, but also shows that although Chu Shi's life is lonely, it is not completely isolated. In this way, the author points out the season of the author's visit-spring.
The level of the whole poem is very clear, although the scenery is written a lot. More importantly, through the special colors of the scenery, readers will be deeply impressed by the simplicity of life in Lu Xiu and the aloof personality of Chu Shi. The author's special technique of expression should be said to be very successful.
Supplement:
(1) What the author of the couplet saw on the way to Shanju was a close-up. Ancient trees grow in the cracks of stones, as if they were connected with stones; The spring water is swift and clear, and the sand and stones at the bottom of the water are clearly visible. These two sentences vividly describe the unique scenery in the mountains and show the simplicity and tranquility of the living environment in the mountains. Or: the prospect seen by the author of the neck chain in the mountain. A spring rain came quietly, and many peaks looked dark in the rain; The mountains are shrouded in clouds, and the path leading to the mountain residence twists and turns, straight into the depths of the clouds. These two sentences describe the high mountains, deep mountains and the living environment in Shan Qi.
(2) The Residence of Luxiu Mountain is located in a place with high mountains and light clouds, beautiful scenery, quiet environment and far away from the world. This poem expresses the author's admiration for the mountain house and praise for its owner.