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The Stars in Spring (1)

Excerpt:

Residual flowers are attached to the branches;

The bird flew away,

Scattered all over the floor-

Is life also a glimpse?

Comments: Lao Bingxin compares life to a scene where birds fly in a hurry and fall red all over the ground. She doubts that life will come and go as quickly as she sees it in this world. Old Bing Xin may be sighing for someone that her (his) life is so embarrassing. Have pity on her (him)!

The Stars in Spring (2)

Excerpt:

The flower of success,

People only marvel at her present glory!

However, at the beginning, her bud,

Soaked with tears of struggle,

The blood rain of sacrifice is scattered everywhere.

Comments: As the saying goes, "You can't judge a book by its cover". Although the flowers displayed in front of everyone are so exquisite and beautiful, who knows that there are endless efforts behind the beauty, and some people will shrink back in the face of difficulties and then go back to poetry to see the brilliant flowers. Should we learn from their fighting spirit and bumpy past?

The stars in the spring (3)

Excerpt:

Green shoots,

The young man said:

"Development: yourself!"

Pale white flowers,

The young man said:

"Contribute yourself!"

Deep red fruit,

The young man said:

"Sacrifice yourself!"

Comments: From the "confessions" of Yael, Wahl and Guoer to the youth, we can not only see Yael, Wahl and Guoer's expectation and longing for the youth; From the words of Ya Er, Hua Er and Guo Er, we can also see from the side what their usual life is like. Usually it is silent dedication.

The stars of spring (4)

Excerpt:

Sunlight enters the cracks in the stone,

Small thorn fruit said:

"lend me your head,

Liberated your imprisoned self! "

The box came out,

A hard rock,

It split in two.

Comments: In the second sentence, the author (Mr. Bing Xin) takes the tiny thorn fruit as the protagonist, and later the thorn fruit liberates his prisoner with the help of the power of sunshine and his self-confidence; Because with the help of the power of sunshine and the confidence of firm victory, the thorn fruit finally came out, and the solid rock (rock) split in two. In this poem, I wrote down my firm belief that I should speak well and overcome evil.

The stars in the spring (5)

Excerpt:

The fish came up,

A bug is floating on the water-

In this do or die, my fragile heart,

Suddenly I trembled.

Comments: This poem fully shows Bing Xin's sympathy. Bing Xin can make a tiny fish touch his heart and make him feel pity for the fish. From this point, we can see a new noble character, which is very valuable. Some people are in sharp contrast with Bing Xin. Some people don't touch their hearts like Bing Xin when they kill people, let alone people! ! One of the most wonderful parts of this poem is: this little success or death, my fragile heart,

Suddenly I trembled. This sentence fully describes the eleventh small fight to the death. Only in this way can we fully appreciate Bing Xin's treasure of life and sympathy for the weak!

"Stars in the Spring" ⑥

Excerpt:

Farewell!

I can't bear to leave you,

But I miss my mother.

Comments: This poem is about the pain of parting. I'm afraid everyone felt the same way when I left. I think "you" in the poem refers to his bosom friend. Although I was reluctant to leave him, I chose my mother among my friends and my mother. I think the best word in this poem is bitter memories, which should be very painful memories when he was separated from his mother for too long ~ ~!

The stars in the spring ⑦

Excerpt:

Loneliness increases depression.

Get busy and get rid of troubles-

My friend!

Happiness lies in continuous work!

Comments: When we are lonely, we only think about things that bother us, while when we are busy, we have no time to think about things that bother us. Naturally, busyness will eradicate troubles. Some people don't like being busy, but when they are not busy, they will increase their troubles. Is it annoying, too ! ! So happiness is in constant work! The best thing about this poem is the word "increase" in the first sentence. The word itself means to increase on the basis of the original, not just to be depressed in loneliness.

The stars in the spring 8

Excerpt:

Smart guy!

In this lonely world,

Can only carry the lamp of "confidence",

March in the dark.

Comments: This poem is like Bing Xin's warning to smart people not to be self-righteous. There are many self-righteous smart people in this world, but as Bing Xin said, they can only carry the lamp of "confidence". How many people are smarter than others. I think the best word in this poem is: Mo Mo, novel and poetic!

Pet-name ruby spring with stars

Excerpt:

Haibo kept asking rocks,

The rock is always silent and never answers;

However, his silence

Millions of people have been able to think.

Excerpted from-1 16

Comments: This poem mentions rocks and waves. On the beach, we carefully observed that the waves came up with the tide, hit the rocks, hit and retreated. In this way, the waves hit the rocks violently, and the rocks resisted the attack of the waves again and again. When asked about the rocks in the earthquake-stricken area, the rocks remained silent. Rock and roll thought a lot, but didn't answer.

Everyone will hold grudges, and so will animals. What does the rock think when the sea waves hit it again and again? The silence of the rock is to let Haibo know his ignorance and feel guilty. For these reasons, rocks have withstood and paid a price. And what will the rock think when Haibo goes to sympathize with the rock? The rock remained silent. It is not that he has nothing to say, but that everything he wants to say is buried in his heart.

In fact, it is the same in life. Some people like Haibo will harass you from time to time, and I am as silent as a stone. For example, a classmate in my class is sitting next to me, and it is not just something. He runs on me everywhere, satirizes me everywhere, reads my jokes everywhere, is extremely sad, and wants to break up the feelings between me and my friends. I was silent and ignored him. I want him to know that he is doing well.

"Spring Star" attended

Excerpt:

Darkness,

How to draw?

Deep down,

Deep in the universe,

A resting place with bright sunshine.

Comments: This poem is very apt to the metaphor of darkness. It doesn't use many flowery words, but it is very clear than darkness. Let's start with the depth of the soul. If you have no distractions in your heart, I believe there is no darkness in your soul. Then I talked about the depth of the universe, but I don't think so. Most of the universe is dark, but there are also stars like the sun that bring light and warmth to people. Finally, a sunny rest place, isn't it? The only place where sunlight can't reach is darkness. The rest place he said is only night, and night is the time for sunshine to rest, but darkness is short after all, and darkness can never overcome light.