First, ancient poetry and prose use whole sentences together.
In some excellent compositions, it is often found that some students use ancient poems and quote them in time to form whole sentences, which not only shows the rich cultural background of candidates, but also shows their charming and smart style.
Example 1: History records countless such "fools", ranging from "living in a humble alley, people can't bear to worry, and they won't change their interests when they go back" to "opening up wasteland in the south and returning to the garden"; From "Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials whose sincere faces will never be seen" to "I can turn the garden into a peach with all my blood and diligence." These fools are willing to remain poor, dirty and powerful until they are martyred for a moral but immoral word "Tao". They really remain lovely and respectable! (2000 Shaanxi examinee "The answer is floating in the wind")
Example 2: Qu Yuan's political proposition of "uniting Qi against Qin" was not adopted, but he was slandered as a loyal minister, but he was still able to "mourn for leaving Sao and repay loyalty to Chu". Sima Qian suffered from corruption because he wrote a straight book, "not flattering beauty" and "not hiding evil", but he was able to "write down the history of faith with grief and indignation"; Although Du Fu is "wet at night" and "clothes are like iron", he is still "the people are suffering, and the bottom of the pen is rippling", chanting the eternal swan song of "ensuring the world is not poor". They did not dilute their sufferings in the passage of time, but fought against fate with all their enthusiasm and wisdom, sublimated themselves and embellished history.
Example 3: If someone asks, "What is spring like?" Qiu Chi would say, "The grass grows and the warblers fly, and the peanut trees are miscellaneous"; Bai Juyi said that "at sunrise, the river is redder than fire, and in spring, the river is greener than blue"; Su Shi said that "Artemisia sphaerocephala has short buds all over the ground, which is the time when the puffer fish wants to go up"; Li Bai said that "the grass in your north is blue as jade, and the mulberry here is curved and blue"; Du Mu said that "thousands of miles of warblers sing green and red, and the water town is full of fruit wine flags" ... (The answer of Guangdong candidates in 2000 floated in the wind)
It will be a good way for students to use ancient poems properly in their compositions, especially in the form of whole sentences, which will be even more icing on the cake.
Second, parallel whole sentences
Parallel whole sentences are mainly expressed by rhetorical means. First, the content is arranged in parallel, which enhances the rich connotation; Second, the meaning is progressive, enhancing persuasiveness, rendering atmosphere and improving momentum.
Example 1: Suffering is the stepping stone of genius, the wealth of capable people, the abyss of the weak, the milestone of those who never slacken off, the burden of the complacent and the disaster of those who do not strive for progress. For ambitious people, it is a ladder to climb up, and for ambitious people, it is the glory of life; For those who have no ambition, there is no abyss; For those who work hard, reward; For the cultivator, harvest; For proud people, this is just a passing sight; For those who have lofty goals, stop at a small station; For the strugglers, a lighthouse; For lazy people, a beautiful dream; For those who strive hard, another arduous journey has begun; For the contented, the peak of happiness; For a loser, an unreachable dream.
Exodus 2: If you have all kinds of intentions of "fishing" but no intention of "casting a net", then you will certainly accomplish nothing. Although this truth is simple, it is not clear to everyone. Some people want to be Edison's "king of invention", but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; Some people want to win the title of "short story" after Mo Bosang, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to become a "master of music" by making a blockbuster, but they are too lazy to bury themselves in the field of staff; Some people want to be sports stars themselves, but they are too lazy to "smell the chicken and dance" for training. So ambitious, and it is a sparrow trip, even a small fish can't be caught, let alone realize that grand ambition!
Example 3: There are no two identical leaves in the world, let alone two identical eyes. Different countries have given me different perspectives. Perhaps the sunshine of the United States on the other side of the ocean is reflected in your eyes as a lively and confident smile forever; Perhaps the ice and snow in northern Europe are melting into silence and depth in your eyes; Perhaps the breeze of the Kunlun Mountains in the Yangtze River is turning into Chinese-style introversion and mystery before your eyes. Different countries have different lands, different winds, different rains and different sunshine, which irrigate different thoughts and spirits and firmly label them as nations. (2002 Shanghai examinee "Reading the Eyes of the World")
Exodus 4: A great man said, "A people who like to listen is a people of wisdom." Arrogant people don't like to listen, they just like to conquer, and arrogance blocks their sight; People who build cars behind closed doors don't like to hear it, but they will only be complacent. They sat in the well and looked at the sky, which hindered their knowledge. People who are eager for quick success and instant benefit don't like to hear it, but only know the surface. They have tasted it, but it lacks profound connotation. So, learn to listen. This will make us open-minded, learn from others and forge ahead; This will make us broad-minded, broad-minded and innovative; This will make us far-sighted, concentrate on exploration, and have profound connotations.
There are so many interpretations of parallelism in candidates' writings, but more importantly, it is profound, rich and enlightening.
Third, the metaphor of the whole sentence.
Metaphor is to use a series of metaphors to express abstract, profound and meaningful paragraphs with vivid, concrete and emotional things.
Example 1: What is life? Different people have different opinions. Some people say life is like wine. Childhood is like a cocktail, colorful and sweet. Youth is like chilled beer, deep in color, cold and bitter; Middle age is like spirits, pure and colorless, and the spicy taste makes your insides burn; Old age, like wine, has been stored in Micari for a long time. Didi makes you feel the sweetness in the fragrance. ("What is Life")
Example 2: Dreams are leisurely Huang Yun floating on the horizon. Dream is a faint smoke rising in the canyon. Dream is a leisurely white fog on the wall of Wushan gorge. I don't know when to come, when to go and where to go. The dream is a gorgeous bald branch dyed green by the wind in March, which blows away the fragrant skirts of hearts, Bai Mei, pears and apricots. Dream is a looming rainbow, stretching to the river ... "
Example 3: Language is a silent Leng Yue, a quiet lotus pond, a fishing boat in the raging white waves outside Qinhuangdao, an egret in the blue sky, a 10,000-point white sail beside a sunken ship, and a bright future for the mountains.
Exodus 4: Touched like a refreshing spring. After drinking the spring, our hearts become clear and bright.
Touched, such as the intoxicating sea breeze, feel the sea breeze, and our hearts become pure and broad.
Touched by heartbreaking snow, enjoying the snow makes our hearts quiet and peaceful.
Metaphor is a daydream and a footnote of literary language. If you can have a true heart and a beautiful heart that captures nature in the college entrance examination, we believe that all good things will flow out from your pen.
Fourth, suppose the whole sentence
Hypothetical whole sentence is a relatively neat sentence that uses hypothetical sentence patterns to organize paragraphs and uses parallelism reasoning.
Example 1: History often gives people a warning. If Shang Zhouwang can speak freely and listen to opinions, why did he betray others and die in the fire? If Cai Huangong followed Bian Que's advice, why did he die of a terminal illness? On the other hand, if Zou Ji's sarcastic suggestion was not adopted, how could Qi be "defeated by the imperial court"? If Qin Xiaogong does not listen to Shang Yang's advice and implements political reform, how can it dominate the six countries? If Emperor Taizong did not listen to Wei Zhi's advice, how could there be a political situation of "chastity rule"? This shows that people who are not good at accepting people's words will die; Often a good listener.
Example 2: If you only see the black spots of the sun, your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish has really come true, then your shortcoming is that there is no shortcoming.
Example 3: If his fate is that shabby flower stand, it becomes colorful and dazzling because of his strong will; If his fate is a dark night sky, then because of his strong will, the stars are shining and shining; If his fate is that barren land, it has become lush because of his strong will. ("The Fighter of Life" Fujian examinee)
Ex. 4: When you choose wings, you embrace the whole blue sky.
If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea.
If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest. (2002 Shandong College Entrance Examination Excellent Composition "Choose Cage")
Verb (abbreviation of verb) compares the whole sentence
Contrast the whole sentence, that is, form a paragraph with neat sentences in the form of contrast, and the positive and negative sides are distinct, thus achieving the effect of highlighting the meaning and strengthening the theme.
Example 1: some people plead for the people and do their best; Some people pursue fame and fortune and intrigue with each other. Some people think that "people die for wealth, birds die for food", while others insist on "being selfish and patenting people". Some people choose mediocrity, while others refuse mediocrity. Beauty, ugliness, good and evil are all in one thought. Is it an immortal moment, a vigorous moment or an unremarkable moment? (Candidate in 2002)
Ex. 2: Only by refusing can we pursue something. Rejecting fashion is the pursuit of individuality; Refuse to be lively, in order to pursue a quiet life; Rejecting temptation is the pursuit of moral perfection; Refusing to go with the flow is the pursuit of independent personality; Refuse to go with the flow, in order to pursue the quality of honesty ... we refuse servility, surrender to evil, remain rational and timid, extort greed and seek profit ... reject falsehood, ugliness and evil, and pursue truth, goodness and beauty. The process of rejection is to give up, resist and criticize some things, but to choose, persist and publicize others. In this process, we gain more free space and get rid of many constraints, so that we can take care of ourselves clearly and participate in society. It should be said that rejection is a skill in life.
Example 3: In the face of troubled times, Confucius chose to actively join the WTO to preach, lobby the monarch and educate the people, while Laozi chose to avoid the world, do nothing and do something. In the face of chaotic officialdom, Li Bai shouted, "Alas, how can I bow and scrape to those high-ranking officials whose sincere faces will never be seen?" Riding a deer, Wang Anshi sang "I'm not afraid of clouds covering my eyes, but I'm afraid of the peak." Lead an honest and clean life, completely running around. Different choices, but all because of inner purity and integrity, shine with their own colorful brilliance.
Six, four-word continuous whole sentence
Example 1: famous mountains and rivers, small bridges and flowing water can please people; Cicadas sing insects, and wind and rain can make people happy; The waves are gone, and the tides are moving, which can make people think; Precious antiques, poems, calligraphy and painting can all be beneficial to human feelings. This gorgeous thing gives us the most intuitive cognition. High mountains and flowing water, the end of the world is adjacent, touched our bosom friend; Take Qi Mei as an example, we are moved by our lover. Family happiness brings warmth to our family. Isn't this an emotional experience? Sigri, a contemporary English poet, once wrote an immortal swan song: "There is a tiger sniffing a rose in my heart." This shows that people have two sides: sensibility and rationality. Emotion is emotional, and cognition of things is rational. Strolling from the source of history to modern times, we humans have interpreted a touching philosophy of life between sensibility and rationality. (Chongqing examinee)
Example 2: During the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, a hundred schools of thought contended, which was as deep as rivers and seas and nourished China. Confucius and Laozi were like "rivers flowing forever"; During the Tang and Song Dynasties, there were many poets and poets, such as stars, shining in China, and there were Du Lisu's letters, just like "the flame never stops"; Drama novels in the Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties are beautiful, rich in Qiang Bing, Han Qing and Qin Xue, and they are already "relying on mountains to eat mountains".
Example 3: My Fair Lady, a Gentleman is a lover of pure love; In the middle of the night, the lights are on, and what you want is to learn to be rich and have five cars; Running around, non-stop, seeking wealth. ...
Ex. 4: A bluebird whizzed past the window, bringing music from heaven as clear as pearls.
In a trance, someone drew his sword. Long song said, "Are we Artemisia people?" He walked away with a smile, rolling eastward across the Yangtze River, across the Wuxia gorge under the dam and across Dongting Yangzhou. Drunk into Chang 'an, waving his hands in the golden palace, pretending to be crazy and selling stupidity, my uncle grinding ink, and Lux taking off his boots, mocking the world; Visit Kyushu, look at Sichuan and sing about the Milky Way, mourn the surging waves, make friends with you, stay with Wan Li, and weep for your feelings. ...
Li Bai, who came nine days ago, has been flying down with great pride, and has interpreted a colorful picture of life all over the world with his poems. (Life is a responsibility)
Seven, turn the whole sentence
Example 1: Without the depth of the blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass. There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own place, our own light source and our own voice.
Example 2: Although you are still a small sapling. However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky.
Exodus 3: If you have all kinds of intentions of "fishing" but no intention of "casting a net", then you will certainly accomplish nothing. Although this truth is simple, not everyone can clearly realize it. Some people want to be Edison's "king of invention", but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; Some people want to win the title of "short story" after Mo Bosang, but they are afraid of the hardships of practicing calligraphy all the year round; Some people want to become a "master of music" by making a blockbuster, but they are too lazy to bury themselves in the field of staff; Some people really want to have a pair of Lang Ping's "iron hammers", but they are lazy in countless spike training. //If you are too ambitious, you can't even catch a small fish, let alone realize your great ambition!
Eight, symmetrical whole sentences
Example 1: Standing on the coast of history, we can trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu is thinking about the river, and he does not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.
Example 2: The true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, like the moonlight shining on the flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, no matter good or bad, no matter the detachment of success or failure, it is a post station with a whip and a horse, climbing high and looking far; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone and merges into the sea. There is a kind of pride that is poor and strong and does not fall into the blue sky. There is a kind of stubbornness of "being a self-taught person and constantly striving for self-improvement". Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy and arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, know how to take a step back and broaden their horizons, and refuse to give up eating because of choking.
Example 3: When you cover up your thoughts, the first thing that emerges from the lake of memory is the glorious background at the end of history. The desolation and heaviness through time and space. Reach the depths of our unforgettable memories. The black silk scarves of feather fans in the Three Kingdoms period, the Moon Pass in the pre-Qin and Han Dynasties, the Zi Xia in Chang 'an, and the hunger and sorrow on both sides of the river are all vivid in the recorded history. If memory can be transplanted, I would like to feel the ups and downs of the nation and the bumps in the road ahead in this dignified memory. When the song and dance in the Tang and Song Dynasties were peaceful, when Kublai Khan's fighters galloped across the land of Central Asia, we could rejoice and cry with joy in that glorious memory. When the national strength of the Qing empire declined and the butchers of the great powers slaughtered our Chinese sons and daughters, we could awaken the nation in that painful memory, work hard and get rid of national humiliation. It is this series of memories of blood and tears that give us tenacious fighting spirit and firm belief, and let us never forget it. ("Remember the suffering and glory of the nation-if memory can be transplanted")
Example 4: Life is like the sea. Tolerance is a boat. Only by boating in the sea can we know the width of the sea. Life is like a mountain, tolerance is the path, climb along the path and you will know the height of the mountain; Life is like a song, tolerance is a song, and only by singing with it can you know the beauty of this song.
Example 5: Emperor Taizong accepted the suggestions of Wei Zhi and others, and a prosperous time of enlightenment emerged. Zhu Yuanzhang accepted Zhu Sheng's suggestion of "building high walls and accumulating grain", so he was also happy for the country and people. ("Believe in yourself and others")
Example 6: Life is like an ocean, and life is just a canoe, raising the sails of thinking and shuttling through the ocean of life. ("Thinking and Interpreting Happiness" Hainan candidates)
Ex. 7: Ban Chao served his country wholeheartedly. He was calm in the first world war against Xiongnu, and finally carried forward the national prestige and did not teach Huma to cross the Yinshan Mountain. Lin Zexu has a firm attitude and is determined to ban smoking. He was supercilious and resolute in negotiations with foreigners, and finally destroyed opium in Humen, which made foreigners tremble. ("Winning in Stability" Jiangsu examinee)
Example 8: Honesty is like the sea, which can hold hundreds of rivers. If you get a name, you can be famous all over the world and be immortal; Profit, there should be a proper way to gain the benefits of future generations; Only with talent can we uphold justice and embark on the right path. (200 1 college entrance examination composition "honesty-the foundation of life"
Nine, conditional sentences
Example 1: Only when we are willing to open the window in our hearts can we see the treasure in our hearts. Only when we are willing to open the window in our hearts can we see the clear scenery outside; Only when we are willing to open the window in our hearts will the flowers and light of the world float into the window one after another; Only when we are willing to open the window in our hearts can we walk out of the door calmly and bravely and step by step towards the bright place.
Example 2: Facing the sea, all the dwarfs become giants; Facing the sea, all giants have become dwarfs. Only by facing the sea can we know when it is vast and when it is fraternity; Only by facing the sea can we feel what is risk and what is conquest; Only by facing the sea can we truly understand what is the ups and downs of life and what is the ebb and flow ...
As long as you don't refuse the humble grass, the field of hope won't refuse your dream of flying.
As long as you don't refuse the majestic snow-capped mountains, the holy snow lotus will not refuse your inner purity.
As long as you don't refuse to be ordinary step by step, attractive brilliance won't refuse you to have them.
As long as you don't refuse to help others, kind people won't refuse to love you. (Gansu examinee "The Connotation of Life")
Ten, causal sentences
Example 1: Because of love, homeless people can return home; Because of love, a tired soul can be full of vitality as always. Longing for love is like starlight longing for each other to shine; Longing for love is like the song of the century, longing to be sung forever.
Ex. 2: Liu Bang is happy because he won. Wu Zetian is happy because she is in power; Yang is happy because he has the right. ("Thinking, please keep happy" Hainan candidates)
Example 3: The eagle fluttered its wings and flew high across the sky. That blue contains its unruly, bearing its stability, which is why the blue sky is more mysterious and beautiful.
Carp tail migration, through the blue waves. That part of Wang Yang enlivened it and absorbed its agility. Therefore, the sea is more charming and clear.
The branches of the oriole sang loudly and cut through the dense forest. That darkness accommodates its uneasiness and protects its agility, so the forest is deeper and more comfortable.
Mutual understanding and accommodation is win-win wisdom. (2005 Shandong examinee "Win-win wisdom")
Xi. Judgment of the whole sentence (crossing with the metaphor in the metaphor part)
Example 1: Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that doesn't need to look at other people's faces and colors, an atmosphere that finally no longer attracts the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hubbub, an extreme indifference that washes away, a thickness that doesn't need to be told, and a height that is not steep.
Example 2: Love is the wind, "It is good for the poor to hear the wind". Love is rain, "Love peony contains spring tears". Love is soil, you can dig it out by bending down. Which soil has no blood and sweat of ancestors and no green dream of future people? Love is a cloud. When you look up, you can see one. Which cloud has not seen the yearning of children and the memory of old people? Because of love, we are grateful, because of love, we are full of grief and indignation; Because of love, we are willing to be indifferent to quiet days; Because of our love, we dare to wear boots to meet them. A life of humiliation, life is love; Deserve the righteousness above family, death is love; Clear and refreshing, live seriously, living is not love! ("Love Life")
Ex. 3: In life, we need sublimity. With it, we will get rid of mediocrity, emptiness and even numbness. Moreover, once you have this understanding, you will find that sublimity is around you: it may be a high mountain that makes you feel sublime; It may be a sea that makes you feel vast; It may be a symphony that makes you understand and stir; It may be a stone carving, which makes you understand the grandeur; Even a person who makes you understand greatness and purity. It may be a gust of wind that makes you feel cool; It may be a spring water that makes you taste sweet; May be a cup of hot tea, let you enjoy the fragrance; It may be a flower that allows you to enjoy bright colors; Maybe it's metrical poetry, which makes you feel lingering.
Ex. 4: Friendship is a beneficial savings in life. This savings is generous help in times of trouble, sincere advice when going wrong, sincere help when falling, and spring breeze to wipe away tears when suffering.
Love is an inexhaustible investment in life. This investment is the careful care in life, an umbrella on the stormy road, a panacea when injured, and an arm to rely on when crying.
Honesty is an inestimable wealth in life. This wealth is not left after picking things up on the road, nor is it turned back after making a promise. It is the sincerity of Liu Bei's three visits to the cottage and the enthusiasm of Han Xin.
Warmth is the fluttering spring rain; Warmth is the shadow of a smile written on the face; Warmth is a response without hesitation; Warmth is a meticulous cooperation.