-Taihu Lake, drifting away.
When I have to say goodbye to your intoxicating face, my beloved girl, you know how broken my heart is.
"Taihu Lake is 36,000, all in smoke". Dr. Fan, who retired after his success, was in high spirits and rowed 72 peaks with him, lingering in Dongting. How beautiful it is.
Two thousand years later, when I stopped in front of Deng Weishan in the sunset, I wanted to see the stunning face of this girl who died in the country, but I found that she had gradually drifted away.
The lake is no longer clear, the fragrance is green, and the evening is tired and hazy; Meiying is sparse, I think I'm tired of too many mediocre people's comments; On the lake, there is no longer the laughter and laughter of the fisherman girl who came home late in the past, which is so quiet that it is scary; In the distance, a few homing birds chirped and dragged long and narrow shadows. I wonder if they found dinner for the cubs waiting in the nest. Suddenly I remembered a poem, "Three turns around the tree, no branches follow".
Is Dongting Mountain "blue lake and blue sky, with peaks and shadows floating in water" safe? Will there be too many ordinary people disturbing the peak Xianke? Is the head of Taihu Lake still full of cherry blossoms? Is there too much trivial world of mortals to cover up your feelings of hurting spring?
Not far away is the bustling city, where there are glamorous men and women and charming fans. "Businessmen don't know the hate of national subjugation, but they still sing backyard flowers across the river." Who can enjoy the songs of sad people on the banks of the five lakes, and who cares about the sound of the beautiful piano two thousand years ago?
So, Taihu Lake, my beauty, you quietly turned around and drifted away in the twilight. On that side, colorful men and women are enjoying another exciting game called "Wuxi water is very expensive".
When I have to say goodbye to your intoxicating face, my beloved girl, do you know how broken my heart is!
Another way to walk
□ Ni is from Ke Qiao Middle School (walked to Peking University)
I remember the words of Li Jing, a master of the Southern Tang Dynasty: "Fragrant fragrance sells green leaves, while the west wind worries about green waves." Yes, in the face of beautiful scenery, human feelings are always happy when they are gained, and sad when they are lost. However, from another perspective, this is a sad word.
The disappearance of life is just another existence of life and another way of life.
Always moved by the philosopher's words: Don't be surprised by the gains and losses, but look at the flowers and flowers in bloom before the court. Such a calm mind (editor's note: it seems to be "calm") can make him deeply understand the way of reincarnation. Master Zhao Puchu left a sentence before his death: Life is happy, death is calm, flowers are still blooming and water is still flowing. Yes, the lost life is not gone forever, it will always be reborn in some causal form. Therefore, in the face of the bleak west wind and the withering of many fragrant flowers, we might as well think that next year, it will still be a group of fragrant flowers vying for spring, with the same flowers and the same singing and dancing. In the face of an autumn pond where "the lotus leaves wither and only cover the sky", why not think about the freshness of spring and the prosperity of the summer rhyme of "the lotus leaves are infinite and the lotus leaves are different colors"?
The end of one cycle is the beginning of another. In this way, life holds an eternal feast in a fleeting way.
In this grand feast, the disappearance of individual life makes the life of the group go into eternity. "Falling red is not heartless, but turning into spring mud is more protective of flowers." Gong Ding 'an's poems not only show the deep affection of falling flowers, but also show the preciousness of life. Flowers are similar year by year, so that they will wither year by year. This year's flowers are walking enthusiastically in the fading. It exists in the form of genes, soil and nutrients ... to ensure that the flowers in the coming year are as beautiful and robust as it, even more beautiful and robust than it. In this way, the chain of life of flowers is interlocking and will never break. And imagine that if there is a kind of life, its individual will not disappear, and this life group will flourish?
In this grand feast, the disappearance of an individual life makes another life great. This is particularly evident in human life. Of course, some stars are shining in the starry sky of human history and reality. They are either political giants, literary giants or masters of science ... but there must be countless physical life, artistic life and scientific life to lay the foundation for them ... The ancients said that "once you succeed, a thousand bones will dry up" (editor's note: it should be "once you succeed, a thousand bones will dry up"). How many successful generals shed bitter tears in the face of radiant generals.
Therefore, in the face of lost life, you can be sad and indifferent, but don't forget to kneel down and hold a tear!
Walk in decline
□ Liza from Zhuji Middle School (walking to Nankai University)
I don't know which direction the wind is blowing. People go forward, chasing the wind. Memories are like the wind. When you stop and go, you may playfully camp on a sunny grassland, bathing your heart in warmth and tenderness, or you may stay in a valley full of haze, leaving only tears on your face. However, this stop-and-go memory does not seem to be tempted by the scenery along the way. They spend most of their time walking. Someone once said, "Forgetting is an instinct of self-protection." It makes sense to savor it carefully. Everything is disappearing, sad, happy, important and unimportant.
Can you watch it again, lost hero? Surrounded by songs and sounds, the tears of beauty are rippling in front of my eyes. The overlord who summoned and responded once lost his ambition and domineering in the face of this tragic situation under siege. Killing Wujiang became the final outcome, and the dominance of nearly a hundred years vanished in an instant.
Can you see it again, lost rose? I had the biggest wedding in the century, walked into the marriage hall in the eyes of the whole world, envied other people's lovers, and was as beautiful as a fairy-tale prince and princess. However, this almost perfect marriage ended awkwardly in a few years. What is even more unexpected is that the protagonist of the story also died in a car accident, and the most beautiful rose in the English garden also died.
Can you listen to the lost swan song again? "Peach-pink and willow-green, flowers and grass, maple leaves and reeds, wrapped in silver, the four seasons curl in your fingers." The lingering sound of the piano made the two fallen people in the world achieve a perfect ideological unity, and a pipa line made Sima Xiangru's shirt wet. However, thousands of years later, through the thin pages, we may only use imagination to construct this artistic conception and weave this beautiful melody.
It seems that everything is so easily lost and forgotten. What is left in the troubled world that can be firmly in your own hands? A firm voice answered: love! Yes, only love can travel through time and space, and the incarnation is instantaneous and eternal.
We will never forget our love for literature, walking on the Gobi Desert, holding camels and shaking camel bells. We will never forget the lonely figure who had no choice but to go to the temple. What we can't let go is the eternal feelings of the Red Chamber. We will never forget the soul that jumped into the Guluo River and how much responsibility it assumed for the country.
Love is on the left, love is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing seeds everywhere and blooming at any time, so that this thorny road is full of business, so that those of us who wear flowers and brush the moon will not feel stinging, tears can be waved away, and we are sad!
Walking in the fading, love walks with you!
Walk in decline
□ He Luyang from Zhuji Middle School (walked to Beijing Foreign Studies University)
For the post-80s generation, it seems that there are always several adjectives: rebellious, melancholy, selfish, arrogant ... Compared with those who experienced the war and the "Cultural Revolution" and went to sunny days in our previous generation, we are more fragile and impetuous, because we deeply feel that we are going far.
No matter from some outrageous behaviors or sad words, we can see our inner world: the agitation and deep fear brought by growth. In our view, growing up means losing childhood partners, losing childhood innocence, and losing parents' meticulous care. As an only child, we have a bunch of shiny keys around our necks, a big room of our own and piles of toys, but we are still poor children because we lack a pair of hands of our peers. The more you lack, the more you cherish, and the more you cherish, the easier it is to lose. It seems that life is so mean to us. From elementary school to junior high school and then to high school, our good friends kept leaving us, and the good friendship at that time had been washed away by the turbid water in the long river of time. No matter how hard we try, the final result is always the same: people leave the building empty, leaving only nostalgia. When we all clearly realize that everything in this world has a shelf life, we are silent, blindly trying to grasp the tail of the past, afraid of facing the fleeting reality, and being at a loss and uneasy about the future. Then I used the transparent and sad words written by Jing M. Guo and Zhang Yueran to enlarge a small eye in my heart and turn it into a sea in winter.
It's not just the disappearance of the heart, we really live in an era of real disappearance. With the rapid development of science and technology and society, we are constantly forced to abandon those old things that are regarded as backward and accept many high-tech products. At a loss, we became a new group of new people. We need to recall the old street with the help of other people's words and pictures. We need earplugs to feel the so-called nature. We need to ease our inner loneliness through the virtual network world. Nature and truth are disappearing, just as we are advancing.
The most cruel thing is that we have to face the disappearance of life every day. The endless war makes us deeply feel the fragility of life. As human beings, we don't know how to sympathize with ourselves and ignore the value of life. What a stupid and heartbreaking fact this is. Although there are anti-war protesters shouting and marching everywhere, the devastating gunfire still resounds through the earth. Pollution caused by human activities, excessive invasion of forests, and mass extinction of species are all making our earth home gradually die out. In all kinds of speculations, we once again fell into fear of the future.
Perhaps people in every era will feel disappearance to varying degrees, but we feel it more deeply. Although we are fading, we can't escape, but I believe we will become strong.
Walk in decline
All things are similar, and all beings are born together.
The chapter about "tiger" in the popular science collection I have read has always haunted me. Tigers are the perfect combination of beauty and courage on earth. It is located at the top of the natural food chain. It is the real king of forest animals and the flagship of species. Tiger, a symbol of natural ecological balance, maintains dense forests and clean water sources. Colorful tigers crawling in the forest are not only human dreams, but also the patron saint of nature on which human beings depend.
However, according to the statistics of the United Nations International Union for Conservation of Nature and Natural Resources (IUCN) and the World Wildlife Fund (WWF), the survival of wild tigers in China in China, the birthplace of tigers, is crucial. It has been listed as one of the top ten endangered species on earth! In Britain and Europe, we can't find any life records and activity traces of wild tigers. There are less than 10,000 recorded wild tigers in the world. The tiger's roar faded away. Is this the sorrow of the tiger or the sorrow of mankind?
Nature is really a close and complete ecosystem. Without forests, where can there be wild animals? Where can there be continuous reproduction of biological populations? Decades ago, the muddy tears of tigers finally enveloped the natural ecosystem.
Look at the ecological changes of this planet in recent decades!
Not to mention, Africa and India are short of water. In China, the Yangtze River Delta, Pearl River Delta and Bohai Rim, once water towns, are now facing the survival crisis caused by water shortage. At the beginning of June, the news of cyanobacteria outbreak in Taihu Lake came from my hometown, Jiangnan Water Town, China. The lack of water in the water town made millions of people immediately face a crisis of survival.
Air pollution-Although the relevant international organizations and sovereign countries have already signed the "emission reduction" treaty, and have taken or are taking measures to reduce pollutant emissions, air pollution is still increasing, with blue sky and haze, ozone layer decreasing and ultraviolet rays violent. The competition between developed and developing countries on "emission reduction" is still in full swing.
Climate anomaly-the frequency of El Nino phenomenon is accelerating, and the global greenhouse effect is getting more and more serious. Global warming makes it difficult for me to see snow and ice in the Yangtze River Delta in China since I was a child. Hurricanes in the United States destroyed the homes where people lived for generations; The typhoon in the western Pacific tore the fragile heart of the East Asian continent.
Frequent disasters-floods and earthquakes; Land desertification and sandstorm; Insect pests and crop failure. The disaster phenomenon, which used to be called "once in a hundred years", now only takes ten years or even less. While mankind is grabbing great wealth from nature, nature's demand for human wealth has also become more "greedy".
People have a natural fear of the roar of tigers, and the deep and penetrating roar of tigers is enough to tear people's souls. Now, the tiger's roar has faded away, but it has ushered in a crazier roar from nature!
People always try their best to kill and protect tigers, and even tragically keep them in captivity to stifle their wildness. So, what about the destroyed nature? If it is allowed to deteriorate, who will keep humans in captivity?
Save the tiger! This is not only because they have been with mankind for decades, but also closely related to the evolution and development of mankind. Moreover, only by saving tigers can we save forests, save the balance between water and natural ecology, and finally save ourselves!
People are walking, shouldering a heavy debt to nature! Walking, walking, walking in confusion ...
[Full score reason] This article has a clear point of view, ingenious structure and high conception.
The topic "Walking in Disappearing" itself is elegant, concise and meaningful. It combines the vividness of reality with the heavy sense of history, the profoundness of philosophy with the poetic beauty of literature, the unique personality experience and the universal observation of * * *, which undoubtedly builds a broad platform for candidates to display their talents. By writing about the human tragedy that the tiger roars, the king of the forest and the king of beasts gradually disappear, the examinee points out that the living environment of human beings is deteriorating due to the reduction of forest area: water shortage, air pollution, abnormal climate and frequent disasters ... The article has a good starting point and a deep intention.
Full mark example 2
Nowhere to say goodbye.
I can always see agarwood flowers and white petals from one tree to another, falling with the wind and flowing in a lonely manner, as if they were young and ignorant, and they were ignorant childhood.
Walking past the old house on the south side of the old street, I stopped involuntarily. The iron gate has given birth to a dark red pattern, and the wall is covered with green Parthenocissus, which seems to be entangled in the past; The cool breeze blows open the door of memory, and the previous light and shadow scenes reappear.
There are so many so prosperous agarwood bloom in every corner of my memory, and the fragrance wafts away. Inadvertently, they will stretch out their soft tentacles and touch the heartstrings.
Childhood is a ladybug sleeping quietly on the garden leaves, an innocent smiling face in the bright sunshine, a panic waiting for blame after breaking a porcelain bowl, running all the way's breathlessness after getting a 100% test, the sincerity of holding hands, the transparent and clear tears, the sweet joy, and the fearless embrace of dreams with open arms ... Everyone's childhood is different, but how similar everyone's childhood is! What time is so magical that we can look for it again and again? The purest and most flawless things in life are buried in that place called childhood, buried in kindness, buried in ignorance, buried in the first throb, buried in fear of sweetness.
Oh, how can I wave goodbye to you, my childhood
Time like tide, coolly overflows every inch of skin, and like spring pollen, a gust of wind overflows every delicious and vivid corner, and I don't know how many years have passed.
Growth is a beautiful and painful process. Along the way, our memories were discarded one by one, and we sang and walked. Those ups and downs of the past, we have nowhere to say goodbye, but also forgot to say goodbye.
My eyes fell on the gravel road in front of the old house and my heart ached suddenly. I always thought that there would be tomorrow the day after tomorrow. However, just as we kicked pebbles all the way and walked forward without looking back, our peerless innocence and beautiful years have passed away in the ebb and flow. Today, I suddenly felt lost forever, only to know that I was so reluctant to let go.
Oh, those beautiful and innocent feelings have nowhere to say goodbye. What kind of smile should be used to comfort those nights that have lost their songs?
After a short pause, I set foot on the road again. Because there is more sunshine and more beautiful scenery ahead.
I lived in an old house in my childhood, and my youth and my ideal are far away. We must move forward, unswervingly, even if our happiness has faded behind us, we can't let our steps have the slightest confusion.
No need to shed tears, just look up at the flying time. Those childish eyes, those years fluttering in white, peach blossoms in March, ginkgo biloba in June, lilacs in October, those running footprints, those sweats, those childhood commitments, those songs in the wind, and dreams in songs are all intertwined at this moment. Sweet confusion and sour release, like a movie that has not yet been released, stretch away and finally disappear.
Yes, we have nowhere to say goodbye, and we don't need to say goodbye. Look ahead and seize every minute in your hand. The train of childhood is drifting away, and the bright future that belongs to us has just begun.
Now I want to have a good sleep, and tears flow in my dreams. When I woke up, I could see the sun shining in front of me from a distance, next to Bloom, tree after tree. ...
Then, smile calmly, bend your mouth into a beautiful crescent, stretch out your arms, stand on tiptoe and embrace the future. ...
[Perfect reason] The scene is the voice of love, and the words are the heart. The most wonderful thing about this paper lies in its ingenious conception and beautiful artistic conception. Candidates use the method of "painting scenery and expressing feelings" to shape the two core images of "old house" and "childhood". The combination of one reality and one emptiness, one point and one line, and one point and one line not only provides a solid support for emotional expression and philosophical thinking, but also turns abstraction into an image, making "walking" and "disappearing" in the topic elegant and vivid, with meaningful charm.
Full mark example 3
Hold the lost soul
The Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, in which the heroes competed with each other, have gone away with the smoke, the three-legged Sun Caoliu has gone away with the running water, and the prosperous Datang Jiangshan has disappeared into the dust. When I turned around, it seemed that all the grandeur had disappeared, and all that was left was a dim sight.
The clenched hand can't grasp the strong will that has long been buried, but there is still a stubborn persistence in my heart. Hanwu is gone, Kanggan is gone, but the country of China is still unparalleled. If you can't catch the lost soul, catch the proud heart. The princes are glad that they are getting farther and farther away, and they are arrogant enough. Even this pride went with the wind until the cannon that knocked on the door shook.
Out of the water, lost a lean ambition, lost the soul of earth-shattering creation. Walking is disappearing, and people are not grasping the spirit, but being arrogant and ignorant. In exchange, it is a greater disappearance.
Sigh Chunchun doesn't come back. A few years later, homeless people were talking in Kan Kan. Once prosperous, Temujin's iron hoof crossed more than half of Europe and Asia; The glory of the past and the emergence of the four great inventions have created the glory of Jiuzhou today; Once the authority, the glory of chastity shines a hundred years of advanced.
People hold hands in the past in vain and praise the lost achievements. It seems that this is the capital of a nation's self-reliance. Walking away, people are too greedy for the beauty they once had, but forget how to seize this beauty to create new hopes.
As time goes by, nothing will be far away from us as time goes by. The glory of the past is only the past, and we are proud of it. It is our respect for the achievements of our ancestors and our inheritance of the national spirit. However, walking is drifting away. Excessive wandering will bind our steps and blind our eyes. We must learn from it in order to truly have a new world of our own.
"The most meaningless thing is to get drunk in the past years." Ulysses said so. The vast unknown world beckoned to him, and he put aside all the glory of the past and started a new voyage.
Yes, walking is disappearing, holding the eternal fire of knowledge, holding the will and belief that once it appears, it will be like quenching iron and sinking stone.
"The waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves before." Our ancestors once said. It still rings in our ears today. Wei Wu waved a whip, and Huang Wu Linjiang and Tang Zongang held their heads high. Everything that disappears is actually moving forward in another form today, as long as you hold the hand of creation tightly.
Standing in Zhongyue's small room, there is a feeling that you can see the whole world, and the past is still everywhere. The same blood is stirring in the chest. Walking, we are holding soul of china and braving the waves for thousands of miles.
【 Good reason 】 This paper adopts the method of "wanting to rise first and restraining" and "staying" with "flowing", which makes the article ups and downs and fascinating. From a historical perspective, everything is "disappearing" and irreversible, which highlights the importance of "holding" from the opposite side. Then, with a change of pen, the positive expression is "holding on to" soul of china ",not lingering, not arrogant and impetuous, going forward, pioneering and innovating, and skillfully raising the theme to a new height. (Yan Tao)
The feeling has disappeared (full score composition of Zhejiang college entrance examination)
"Epiphany is the patent of smart people, and idiots like us have to rely on the word' gradual'."
It is in such a long-lost sunshine afternoon that she, like an elf, easily occupied my whole mind and my whole thinking without any warning.
I remember Shi Tiesheng once wrote in Living Things: The only thing you can have in this world is the process, and time is always passing.
Yes, maybe you have been amazed at the infinite beauty of the sunset, but you will never catch her beautiful image; Perhaps you have lingered in the charm of epiphyllum, but you can never catch her life; Maybe you have been lost in the hazy beauty of the moonlight, but you can never catch her light. Life is wonderful, life is magical, and life is great. However, life will eventually pass away, leaving only a mass of prosperity, a sigh, a sigh. This also seems to indicate that we will eventually walk in fading.
Life is gone, and we are walking in the passing of history. As Shi Tiesheng shouted, "Ah! These times have passed! Our inner Millennium is so ancient! " I don't remember which historian it is, but I always remember clearly the sentence "history stands in a fracture" Perhaps because of this, Shang Yang, Ouyang Xiu and Wang Anshi made a groundbreaking move to promote the old system in line with history. Perhaps because of this, the heroism of Liu Bang, Li Shimin and Zhu Yuanzhang was revealed, thus making the new dynasty stand in a corner of history. I admire the courage of Bobby Chen and Guangwu. "Swallows know the ambition of a swan", so I braved the criticism of the world and put myself and their spirit on the stage of history. Perhaps this is the beginning of the decline of "the supremacy of imperial power" in history and the beginning of the disappearance of imperial power. However, after thousands of years, we are still feeling the courage of this day!
Life is gone, and we are walking in the disappearance of life. "The only thing we can't control in life is time, and the only thing worth cherishing most is time." I vaguely remember my father's skirts that I clung to in the crowd when I was a child. Still missing the unique breath of my mother in the middle of the night; Of course, there is also the red and enchanting sugar-coated gourd in grandma's hand to coax me to drink medicine. At that time, you may stop crying because of your mother's eyes; Maybe I will refuse my father's closeness because of his prickly chin; More likely, you will give up your favorite sweet and sour pork ribs because of a moment of anger. Of course, you can make a hullabaloo about eating them when you are angry. However, as you grow up, those beautiful things can only be used as memories. You should learn to bear, share and live. Just because you grow up, you can't hold dad's skirt, you can't play with your little temper like a child, just because you grow up.
Life walks in disappearance, and life is rich in walking. Maybe you really can't seize the time, but you can seize every moment you can while walking. Maybe one day, when you look down at the bookmark of memory, you will find that life is always without regrets for yourself.