The new year in the countryside is very long. After the Lantern Festival, the year is not completely over. There is also a program that every family invites to drink spring wine, which once again causes a climax. In my feeling, its atmosphere is sometimes more lively than the New Year's Day from the first day to the fifth day. The reason is: during the Spring Festival, children are not allowed to play in the hall and kitchen for fear of bumping into each other and breaking bowls and lights. Especially, I am a girl. When steaming cakes, you are not allowed to put your feet on the edge of the furnace hole, and you are not allowed to grab food casually, because many of them must be offered to the Buddha first. I was very careful when I spoke, and I was lucky, so I felt very constrained. After the Lantern Festival, adults thought we were all obedient and didn't make trouble. The offerings exchanged from Buddhist temples and shrines are all piled up in a big jar for us to eat. In particular, every household invites them to drink spring wine in turn. I represent my mother. I always take the lead, come uninvited, eat like a bee and go home with a big bag in my hand.
But to tell the truth, my family eats a lot, even the golden dates, chocolate candy, peanuts, longan and pine candy sent by Beiping are not rare. So what do I like best? This is the eight-treasure wine brewed by my mother on the winter solstice. When it's time to drink spring wine, I'll open it for everyone to taste. "Buqi, spleen and eyesight!" Mother always said proudly. She turned to me again and said, "But you can only lick one nail seam. Children who drink too much will have nosebleeds, which is too much. " In fact, before she finished, I had secretly put my finger in the cup several times, and I had licked a lot of sweet wine under my fingernails.
Babao wine, as its name implies, is made of eight kinds of wine, namely black jujube (I don't know whether it is south jujube or north jujube), litchi, longan, almond, dried tangerine peel, wolfberry fruit, coix seed and two olives. It takes a month to soak, open it, add medicine to the wine, and I can't wait to drink it three times at a time. Mother only poured me a little at the bottom of a small cup. I carry it, smell it, and walk around. Once, I accidentally fell over the threshold, and the wine glass was in my hand, but all the wine spilled on my skirt. When holding Xiaohua Mall, it licks and falls asleep. It turns out that my Xiaohua Mall is also Brewmaster!
When I come back from drinking spring wine, my mother always smells my mouth and asks me how many glasses of wine I drank. I always say, "Just one drink, because there is nothing sweet in it." Mom was very happy to hear that. She treated her neighbors to spring wine and made sure to pour each of them a glass of sweet wine. As for me, I will lean in everyone's arms, order wine with chopsticks and lick it.
In addition to spring wine, my family has a special program, which is to have a drink. Whenever someone in the village is in urgent need of money, a meeting will be held to get 12 people together. In the first month, the head of the delegation always invited these eleven people to drink spring wine as a reward, and the place had to borrow my big drawing room. The banquet is called from the city, which is different from the so-called eight dishes, five dishes and eight dishes in the countryside (that is, eight cold dishes, five dishes or eight bowls of hot dishes). The banquet in the city is called "Twelve Dishes" (about four cold dishes, four stir-fried dishes and four bowls of stew), which is the most exquisite banquet. Therefore, if a countryman expresses his gratitude to others, the verbal words are "I'll treat you to twelve dishes". So every year in the first month, after drinking the spring wine from my neighbor's house, I eagerly look forward to the twelve-dish banquet in the big drawing room.
Mother never attends meetings, but she is always happy to invite everyone to the living room, which can add a little joy to the Spring Festival. Uncle Abiao, the gardener, also painted the glass cover of the gas lamp with butter, lit it and hung it in the center of the flower room, so that everyone could punch and shout while eating wine, which was particularly cheerful. As for me, there must be someone sitting next to the meeting leader who has to eat and drink. At this time, my mother will hold a bottle of her own eight-treasure wine for everyone to taste.
At the end of the banquet, everyone will be given a printed handkerchief. My mother and I have one, too, so I got two. I am very happy. Everyone drank the sweet eight-treasure wine and asked their mother what was in it. Mother spoke proudly over and over again, her cheeks flushed with joy, as if she had drunk wine. In fact, mother never touches her lips.
It's not just wine, my mother is diligent all year round, doing this and that, making fresh and unique things, always giving them to others, but rarely eating them herself. When people ask her how much to put in each material, she always smiles and says, "Just touch it, I don't have a certain weight." But as always, she was careful to tell others. It can be seen that everything she does has a steelyard in her heart. She often says: "shoes are different, clothes are different, you should be careful."
This year, I did the same thing. I made eight-treasure wine for my ancestors and poured a cup for my son, telling him it was "vintage wine". After drinking it, I grew one year old. He said critically, "You used American wine, not the wine brewed in your hometown when you were a child."
A word reminded me that it is not authentic hometown flavor. But where can I find my real family?
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Picky: Criticizing details is too strict.
High spirits: high spirits and warm emotions. Processing: the process of making medicine from Chinese herbal medicine. This is a metaphor for doing things as they are. Domestic fermented grains [pēi]: home-brewed wine. Fermented grains generally refer to wine here. Buttering up [bā jie]: dialect refers to people's efforts; Diligence about touch: dialect, general meaning. Charge first: Ride a horse and charge first in a battle. Describe leadership, take the lead. As the name implies: when you see a name, you will associate it with its meaning. Authentic: ① It's really a famous product. 2 true; Pure. This paper chooses the meaningful project ②.
Basic introduction
The author of Spring Wine is: Qi Jun Chinese name: Pan Xizhen; Alias: Qi Jun; Nationality: China; Ethnic group: Han nationality; Birthplace: Quxi Town, Ouhai, Wenzhou; Date of birth:1965438+July 24th, 2007; Date of death: June 7, 2006; Representative works: Sleeping on the Pillow, Rain of Sweet Flowers, Rain of Nose Smoke, Reading and Life, Qi Jun, (19 17~2006). Women writers in Taiwan Province Province. Formerly known as Pan Xizhen. People from Wenzhou, Zhejiang. 14 years old, studied in missionary middle school, and later graduated from the Chinese Department of Zhijiang University in Hangzhou, where he studied under the lyricist Xia. From 65438 to 0949, he went to Taiwan Province Province, worked in the Justice Department for 26 years, and served as a professor in institute of chinese studies, Taiwan Province Province and the Chinese Department of Central University. After settling in the United States. Qi Jun began her creative career by writing prose. His representative works include more than 30 kinds of essays, novels and children's literature works, including Smoke Sorrow, Spinning Lantern (won the literary creation award of Zhongshan Prize), Sleeping for three nights with a dream book as a pillow, Fragrant Flowers in Rain, Nose in Smoke and Rain, Reading and Life, A Thousand Miles with the Peak in January, Riding with Me, and Dreaming in the Next Year. In the past 30 years, she has been writing nonstop and published nearly 30 books on prose, novels, children's literature and Ci. Some of her essays were selected into middle school textbooks, and her works were translated into English, Japanese and Korean, which were well received by readers at home and abroad, and were praised as "the shining star of Taiwan Province literature".
Text discussion
Overall perception
Qi Jun's prose focuses on childhood memories, mother-daughter affection and friendship. But this is not a simple memory. Childhood, in her articles, has extraordinary brilliance, reaching the realm of harmonious and unified life of "truth, goodness and beauty". Children's holy soul and beautiful life interest are quite like eulogizing and yearning for human nature in her articles. Especially in the dirty realistic background, Qi Jun's childlike innocence is almost a paradise that life can never reach, which is both desirable and frustrating. In Qi Jun's more than 50 literary works, childhood, hometown, relatives and friends occupy most of her creative themes. She created an artistic world that only belongs to her with the traditional tender and sincere feelings and delicate and gentle brushwork of China. She once said affectionately, "Like trees and flowers, who can't have roots?" If I can forget my hometown, my relatives, my teachers and friends, my childhood, I would rather put down my pen and never write again in my life. "
Qi Jun constructed an "ideal country" for readers with his own writing style.
Homesickness is a theme of this article. Everything in my hometown is superimposed with my childhood impression, reflecting a happy and sentimental mystery. Spring wine, knowing how to drink, drunk my mother, drunk "me" and drunk countless readers. My innocence and loveliness, my mother's kindness and ability, and my hometown's simplicity and kindness have been lingering on the table of "spring wine" and "knowing how to drink", infiltrating into a thick beauty of human customs and customs. Qi Jun's prose is rigorous in structure, vivid in writing and fluent in style.
Is such a beautiful and happy town still there today? Maybe this is my hometown where I miss and raise myself, or maybe this is my hometown where I yearn for my soul.
Only by reading spring wine in this way can we taste the feelings and interests. Everything that has passed away is so clearly and beautifully displayed in the depths of memory, which reminds us of something sad or sweet.
Beautiful prose is often the result of clever conception. Qi Jun's prose conception is characterized by scattered form and scattered spirit. In order to make the prose concise, she pays great attention to the setting of "literary eyes" without revealing traces. As for the article "Spring Wine", Qi Jun concentrated many related fragments on the focus of "homesickness": various customs and taboos of the Lunar New Year, "I" as the representative of my mother took the lead in drinking spring wine in every household, and the villagers "got together" to establish a harmonious relationship of "drinking". Many years later, "I" copied the eight treasures according to my mother's method. At the end of the article, a deep sigh from the bottom of my heart is enough to touch all wanderers: "After all, it is not authentic hometown flavor. But where can I find my real family? " These contents make this article concise and powerful, and enlighten readers with the brilliance of its thoughts. In most of Qi Jun's scattered essays, short stories and ordinary things are written freely with similar fresh words and simple styles, which enriches readers.
Qi Jun's articles are all fiction. The characters in her prose are all lifelike. The description of mother in this article is particularly excellent. In fact, Qi Jun's most touching articles are almost all about her mother, and it can be said that her mother is Qi Jun's most important creative source. Qi Jun's mother is a typical wife and mother, full of "mother's heart and Buddha's heart". This mother is uneducated, thrifty, hardworking and spiritual. She is kind and generous, noble in character and strong in character. Mother's inculcation, love and care, hard work and example are the themes of Qi Jun's writing. Sometimes with a few simple strokes, the words stand up. For example, "when it's time to drink spring wine, open it for everyone to taste." Invigorating qi, strengthening spleen and improving eyesight! Mom always said proudly. She turned to me again and said,' But you can only lick one nail seam. Children who drink too much will have nosebleeds, which is too much. Here, the kindness and gentleness of the mother and the liveliness and naughty of the child are really vivid.
Qi Jun's prose is neither polished nor whitewashed. The style of writing is like running water, and Xu Ya is natural, elegant and meaningful. She writes with ease and is good at creating a meaningful and warm atmosphere. Qi Jun's writing is the essence and peace gained after the storm. When she writes characters and expresses her feelings, she has a distinct generosity and gentleness.
Qi Jun believes that a good article must be touching in language and meticulous in words. To achieve this step, we must do: 1. Easy; 2. purification; 3. Implication; 4. Sincerity. We can see these characteristics in the article Spring Wine. Qi Jun is good at using both lyric and narrative techniques to let his feelings show naturally in the narrative process. The characters portrayed by Qi Jun are vivid and delicate, and relatives, long-term workers and mothers are all vivid in her works. Especially the mother's tolerance, kindness and diligence are vividly depicted in Qi Jun's gentle and fluent description.
Qi Jun led China with such a style, telling his infinite attachment to his childhood and hometown.
Problem research
1. In fact, this article only describes a few things about spending the New Year in my hometown, drinking spring wine and drinking wine when I was a child. What's the point of such a simple content?
These contents make people taste at least the following kinds of beauty:
The beauty of folk customs: there are many taboos to welcome God and worship Buddha in the New Year; After the Lantern Festival, the offerings were piled up in a "vat". The excitement and happiness of children and the nervousness and busyness of parents drew a picture of China's traditional customs with only a few strokes.
The beauty of human feelings: every household invites them to drink spring wine in turn, which is a scene of "every family helps others get drunk"; Some people in the village are in urgent need of money, so they have to hold a meeting ... In the first month, the head always buys wine as a reward, and the mother is happy to treat the greenhouse and hold out her own "eight treasures wine" to entertain people; At this time, the lights are brightly lit and everyone is in high spirits. My mother was so happy that her cheeks were praised by others. Smiling mothers and villagers are unforgettable.
2. The language in this paper is vivid and vivid, and several examples are given to illustrate it.
Metaphor strange image: "I came uninvited, bulging like a bee, carrying a big bag in my hand."
Be good at using details:
"I have sneaked my finger into the cup several times, and I don't know how many sweet wines I have licked under my nails."
After drinking for a while, I got "two" printed handkerchiefs, so I was "extremely happy".
A lively and lovely little girl has been fully portrayed in several details, so that the lively and naive little girl immediately moved on the paper and smiled at the reader with a slight tilt of her head ... (making the article more vivid. )
This is the difficulty of this paper. Students are experienced and easy to understand the happiness of Chinese New Year. However, the feelings of missing hometown and relatives contained in this article are not susceptible due to the limitations of life experience. At this time, teachers should introduce Qi Jun's life and experience to students, or introduce other similar articles by Qi Jun, so that students can have a deeper understanding of the works on the basis of knowing others and exploring the world.
Brief introduction of the author
Qi Jun was born in ouhai district, Wenzhou City, Zhejiang Province on July 24th, 2007. He used to be a professor of Chinese Department in institute of chinese studies, Taiwan Province Province and Central University. There are more than 30 kinds of essays, novels and children's literature works, including Deng Qingwen's Childhood, Forever Lovers, Sweet Water in My Hometown, Friendship with Teacher Qianshan, Sleeping at Night, Rain in Osmanthus, Snuff Rain, Reading and Life, etc.
Frozen malt pulp
Frozen mash: spring wine. This is a kind of wine brewed in cold winter for drinking in spring. According to "Poetry, Wind and July", "The rice was harvested in October, so the birthday was celebrated with spring wine". Legend: Spring wine, frozen mash also. In Song Dynasty, Zhu Yizhong wrote in "The Classic of Wine" that "holding an urn in the winter mash and making wine in the winter moon make people hold an urn quickly and taste thin". Du Mu wrote in "Twelve Rhymes to Send My Brother-in-law Zhou Cui" that "the rain invades the cold dream and the plum attracts the frozen mash".
Qi Jun, a contemporary female writer, once wrote an article called Spring Wine to express her nostalgia for the custom of drinking spring wine in her childhood, thus recalling her childhood.
use
Spring wine, called spring wine in Taiwan Province province, spring tea in Hongkong and New Year's party in Japan, means to get together with friends and relatives for tea, snacks or dinner after the Spring Festival. Generally, it is held from the Spring Festival holiday to the end of the month (after the Meiji Restoration in Japan, it was changed to the Gregorian New Year, and the New Year was held during the Gregorian 65438+ 10 month). Companies, enterprises, governments, public utilities, communication circles and political institutions often hold spring wine, on the one hand, to reward employees who have worked hard for one year, on the other hand, to thank cooperation units and customers.
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Spring wine teaching plan
Teaching objectives
Knowledge and skills
1. Taste the key words and sentences of the article, learn the interesting details of the article and realize its functions.
2. Understand the homesickness theme expressed in the article.
Process and method
1. According to the accumulated life experience, create a reading atmosphere and understand the meaning of the article.
2. Through the analysis of the text, we can understand the characteristics of Qi Jun's prose, such as rigorous structure, vivid writing and fluent writing.
Emotions, attitudes and values
Taste the beauty of hometown customs expressed in the article and the deep homesickness expressed in the article, so as to get a good emotional experience.
Teaching emphases and difficulties
1. Understand the role of detail description in expressing the theme of the article.
2. Understand that the author expresses his deep homesickness by describing the local customs of his hometown.
3. Experience the characteristics of Qi Jun's prose, such as rigorous structure, vivid writing and fluent writing.
Class arrangement
1 class hour
teaching process
I. Introduction to the text
1. Introduction
A cup of sweet spring wine is the treasure of the festival, the pride of the mother and the best memory of the author. Let's enjoy ourselves with the author in this sweet "spring wine"!
2. Introduction to the author
Qi Jun, born in 19 18, is a contemporary female writer. Formerly known as Pan Xizhen. Zhejiang Yongjia people. Graduated from sanjiang university Chinese Department. Settle in America. Qi Jun started her creative career by writing prose, and now she has become a great prose writer. Her name is always associated with prose. Qi Jun has published more than 30 kinds of essays, novels and children's literature, and is the author of the TV series Orange is Red. Most of her works are set in children's stories, and most of them are set in her hometown of Wenzhou, Zhejiang. The local people in her works depict the simple life of rural society in China. Qi Jun's works have a unique style. Especially in prose, the sincere feelings in works are touching. Coupled with the elegance of the pen, the article exudes a charming atmosphere.
Second, read the text aloud and perceive the meaning as a whole.
1. Cumulative words:
Lycium barbarum (gou3qi3) threshold (kan3) freehand brushwork (yin3) and (cou4) are neat.
Chou (chou2) stew (wei 1dun4)
2. Students can read freely.
Requirements: Read the text aloud, read it fluently as far as possible, read the emotions in the text, and experience the deep affection in the text.
Thinking: What did the author describe in his article when he was a child in his hometown? Who are the characters in these events?
Third, overall perception.
1. What did the author tell about his childhood in his hometown?
Summary: drink spring wine and wine for a period of time during the New Year.
2. Who appeared in these events?
Abstract: Mother "I" am a neighbor of Abiaoshu Township.
Fourth, learn to discuss.
The author describes people and customs with some details. Please find out and talk about the function of these details. (group discussion)
1. mother: hospitable and generous.
"She always smiles and says,' Just touch it, I don't have any weight.' But as always, she was careful to tell others. It can be seen that everything she does has a steelyard in her heart. "
"Mother never attends meetings, but she is always happy to treat everyone in the living room, which can add a little joy."
Uncle Abiao, the gardener, is very enthusiastic.
"Uncle Biao, the gardener, also painted the glass cover of the gas lamp with butter, lit it with it and hung it in the middle of the drawing room, so that everyone could practice their fists while eating wine.
The lesson plan "New People's Education Edition 8th grade Language Book I" Spring Wine Lesson Plan II "comes from the Internet!
Drink alcohol, especially when in high spirits. "
3. The neighbors are warm and generous.
"So if a countryman thanks someone, the verbal words are' I'll treat you to twelve dishes'."
"At the end of the banquet, everyone will be given a printed handkerchief first. My mother and I also have one, so I got two, and I am very happy. "
"In particular, every household takes turns asking them to drink spring wine. I represent my mother. I always take the lead, come uninvited, eat like a bee and go home with a big bag in my hand. "
4. "I" is innocent.
"In particular, every household takes turns asking them to drink spring wine. I represent my mother. I always take the lead, come uninvited, eat like a bee and go home with a big bag in my hand. "
"In fact, before she finished, I had secretly put my finger in the cup several times, and I didn't know how many sweet wines I licked under my nails."
Research summary:
Q: Why can the author remember the details of life in his hometown during the New Year so clearly and describe it in such detail decades later?
Clear: I have feelings for my hometown.
Q: What are your feelings for your hometown?
Clear: local conditions and customs. (Mother, drinking) This is actually what the author calls hometown flavor.
Through the author's meticulous description, the sweetness, interest and strong simple human feelings are vividly on the paper.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) course summary
After reading the article, from the author's memory, we seem to follow the author back to her childhood and feel the rich local customs of the author's hometown; That strong sense of hometown appears between the lines.
Now we feel the author's homesickness again. Let's look at the last two paragraphs of the text and feel the author's homesickness. Pay attention to slow down the pace when reading aloud and grasp the deep homesickness. )
Hometown is where you have relatives. Since the taste of hometown is so unforgettable and so happy, the writer wants to get it back.
The author tried to find the hometown flavor, but failed. So she finally said in confusion, "but where can I find my real family?"
6. Extracurricular development (point out the festivals described in the following poems)
A. firecrackers are one year old, and the spring breeze enters Tu Su from send warm.
The rising sun sheds light on doors of each household, New peachwood charm is put up to replace the old. Wang Anshi's Yuan Ri
B as a stranger alone in a foreign land, I miss my relatives twice every holiday.
When I think of my brothers' bodies climbing high, I will feel a little regret for not being able to reach me. On Wang Wei's Mountain Holiday Missing Shandong Brothers
C. when will there be a bright moon? I take my glass from a distance. I don't know about palaces in the sky. What year is tonight? I want to go home by the wind, but I'm afraid of Qionglou Yuyu. It's unattainable! Dance and enjoy the shadow of the moon, which is in the world. The moon turned into a scarlet pavilion, hanging low on the carved window, shining on the sleepy self. The moon should not have any resentment against people. Why is it round when people are gone? People are sad and happy, and they are separated and reunited. The moon will darken or shine, and it will become round or round. Nothing is perfect, even in the past. I hope people will live for a long time and have a good scenery thousands of miles away. Su Dongpo's Water Tune
Seven. distribute
1. Write an article about a traditional festival.
2. Read literary works about homesickness after class and recommend them to classmates.