However, in the aspect of rhyme, there are some phenomena, such as falling (jumping) rhyme, closing rhyme, overlapping rhyme, inverted rhyme, strange rhyme, squeezing rhyme, linking rhyme, overlapping rhyme, colliding rhyme, dead rhyme, three-yin level tone and so on, which will affect the harmony of rhyme rhythm in metrical poems and need to be avoided as far as possible.
1, falling rhyme (rhyme)
Rhyme means to put two (or more) rhymes, such as? Incense, sunshine, river and window? They all have the same vowel, but they are not in the same rhyme. If you use these words in the poem, it will rhyme.
Example:
Autumn (Du Mu)
In the autumn night, candlelight reflected the screen, and Fan slapped the fireflies with his hand.
Day and night are as cool as water. Sit and watch the morning glory and Vega.
Rhyme? Screen, fluorescent, star? Are they all in Pingyunshui? Xia Ping Jiuqing? Inside. Like the second sentence? Fireflies? Replace with? A warbler? No, not poetry, but belonging to it like this? Rhyme? Because? Warbler? Where are the words? Shimei hachi? Ministry, rhyme, can't be messed up.
Step 2 rhyme
Rhyme means that the rhyming words you choose are inconsistent and incoherent with other meanings of the whole sentence, but you really can't find good words to use, and it's no good making do here. Especially when writing rhymes and rhyming poems, they are often used for rhyme, regardless of the meaning, so this often happens? Rhyme? Phenomenon.
3, heavy rhyme
In a poem, it is not allowed to repeat a word as rhyme. Like a word? Spring breeze melts rain and moistens flowers? Write the second sentence? Bees and butterflies shuttle just for the scent? This is not allowed in poetry.
Step 4 rhyme backwards
To rhyme, turn normal words upside down, such as these words? Wind and rain, successively, fresh, generous, sad, delicate, merchants, harps and so on. It is awkward to write them backwards. Use whatever you are used to, and don't deliberately reverse the word order of your habits for rhyme. It doesn't matter whether some words are positive or negative, and some words are not. Release? Mountains and rivers? Written? Kawayama? Feeling bad? Write phoenix? Phoenix? Is it funny? You let it go again? Kirin? Write it down? Qi Lin? Try it? Everything in nature is beautiful, not for rhyme.
5. Dumb rhyme
It refers to rhyming with ambiguous words in tone. Not all flat words are suitable for rhyming. Some words don't look like or sound loud, so don't use them forcibly, or the whole poem will feel depressed. ? To write a good poem, you must first choose a rhyme. Will those dumb and lazy people give up cheaply? . This is what teacher Yuan Mei taught us.
6. Vague rhymes
Is to rhyme with uncommon words. For example, under six anesthesia? Hey? Word, how many people know? Another example is in Champion and Dongli? Hey? Word, remote control? Some people like to find some uncommon words to show off. In fact, he didn't know that he was showing off a poetic disease. The old man Yuan Mei was talking about? Du Li, everyone, don't use rhymes. You can't use them, but you despise them? .
7. Squeeze and rhyme
Squeeze rhyme, also known as? Offend rhyme? Or? Rhyme? This poem is disgusting. If you have a rhyming sentence, don't use it. Otherwise, you will make a serious pronunciation mistake and read it badly.
Example:
Where we meet, the grass is tender and the cliffs are thousands of peaks.
Where is his appointment? A pine tree on a cold stone.
This poem uses the rhyme of Two Winters in Shanghai, but what are the opening sentence and the last sentence? Meet? And then what? Peak? These two words are also in the rhyme of Erdong, so that's it? Squeeze? Yes But be careful. Rongrong? The word "two" is overlapping and does not belong to? Squeeze rhyme? .
8. Complex rhyme
In a poem, words with the same or similar meanings appear repeatedly. Like betting? Worried? Words, and then bet? Worried? Words; Bet? Flowers? Words, and then bet? Hey? Words; Bet? Is it sweet? Words, and then bet? Fang? Words. This rhyme should be avoided as much as possible. It's the same as rhyme
9, rhyme:
It refers to the last word of a sentence without rhyme. Rhyme? Accordingly, we call it? White feet? For example, in the third sentence of the quatrain, words with the same vowel as the rhyme feet are also used.
Generally speaking, if it happens? Rhyme? The rhyme of the whole poem lacks change, and it is sticky and astringent to read, which is not appropriate.
For example:
In the forest, the moon marks move, and the clouds are winding, the wind is sparse and the bamboo shadow is low.
Tears in the dream, the night falls downstairs and the spring sounds.
This poem is lively and basically good. But we always feel uncomfortable when reading. Is this because it was washed here at the end of the third sentence? This word appears? Rhyme? what's up Hard wound? . ? Wash? When the words come out, what's next? West? Words are completely suppressed. When I read there, I felt relieved. West? I can't understand the rhythm of words.
10, rhymes:
It means that the rhyme feet of two adjacent rhyming sentences use homophones as rhyming words. Even rhymes? Chorus? . Rhyme is harmful to the rhythm of this poem, especially in seven verses. Therefore, poets also pay more attention to the creation of the four wonders. So look for it in ancient quatrains? Li Anyun? Poetry is difficult.
Technically? Rhyme the Ten Commandments? It is a high-level requirement for poets and a rhyming skill. ? Ten commandments? The problems pointed out do not violate the general rules of poetry rhyme, nor are they rigid rules of poetry creation. However, they do damage the beautiful and harmonious rhythm of poetry, sometimes even seriously? Hard wound? . Therefore, in order to write a good poem, these problems are basically to be overcome.