When we first read this poem, it seemed or vaguely understood the meaning, so that we read it without emotion and sang it lifeless. It was not until we further understood this meaning that we realized how high the poetry level of Gao Ding, a writer in Qing Dynasty, was. In just a few lines, a beautiful picture is displayed before our eyes: In February, the grass grows and the willows sprout, and the children fly kites in the east wind!
Looking forward to the stars, looking forward to the moon, and finally looking forward to an exciting day-we are going to record "Village Residence"! When the camera was pointed at us, our hearts beat in our throats. When the beautiful accompaniment music started, we smiled and shook our heads with the beat. We cooperated tacitly, with almost no mistakes. As the saying goes, "One minute on stage, ten years off stage". Today's achievement is that we have learned the hard work of the soldiers, and also let the students appreciate the charm of ancient poetry.
2. The composition rewrites the ancient poem "Farewell to Meng Haoran in Yangzhou on the Yellow Crane Tower" [The composition rewrites the ancient poem "Farewell to Meng Haoran in Yangzhou on the Yellow Crane Tower"] In the spring of March, flowers were everywhere in Wuhan, and orchids were not in full bloom. The smell of the morning breeze has wafted, and the air is particularly fresh. The composition rewrites the ancient poem "On the way to send Meng Haoran to Yangzhou on the Yellow Crane Tower". Meng, do you really want to go? Li Bai said, Meng Haoran said, I will go to Yangzhou in You're screwed.. The grapes have dried into raisins. Li Bai laughed and dried into raisins, delicious! Meng Haoran got on the boat and said to Li Bai, I will wait for you in Yangzhou. Li Bai responded: OK, I'll come to you as soon as I'm finished. In the fourth grade of primary school, I wrote a composition rewriting the ancient poem "The Yellow Crane Tower Farewell Meng Haoran to Yangzhou". The boat slowly began to paddle, and Meng Haoran added: Don't forget to come to Yangzhou to find me after you finish! Li Bai said: Don't worry, I won't forget it. When I get to Yangzhou, we'll have a good drink. Meng Haoran said: OK. As the boat went farther and farther, Meng Haoran seemed to want to say something, but he couldn't hear it. Li Bai can't send Meng Haoran to Yangzhou, he can only watch. Meng Haoran's boat should have disappeared, but Li Bai still stood there waiting for a while, and the birds sang before he came to his senses.
3. The first composition of ancient poetry in Lesson 23, Volume 2, Grade Four Chinese, 400 words: light, autumn and moon blend together: calm, moonlight and water blend together. The windless mirror on the pool surface is not polished: the lake surface is smooth and bright like a bronze mirror that does not need polishing.
Looking at Dongting from afar, the mountains and rivers are green: looking at Dongting from afar, the mountains and rivers are green. A green snail in a silver plate: Dongting Mountain with lush trees stands in Dongting Lake with white light, just like a green snail in a silver plate.
This is a landscape poem written by the poet overlooking Dongting Lake, which is clear and meaningful. The first sentence is about the blending of water, light and moonlight, which shows the breadth and distance of the lake. This should be the scene at dusk. It is not dark yet, but the moon has come out. If it is dark, you can't see the fusion of the two colors. The second sentence uses the metaphor of a mirror to show the calm of the lake at night, because the sun has set and the lake is not reflective, just like a mirror is dull without polishing. The third sentence is about the green of Junshan Mountain in Wangyuan Lake. The "landscape" here actually refers to the mountain, that is, Junshan in the lake. The usage of "scenery" belongs to the usage of "compound words with partial meanings" in ancient Chinese. The fourth sentence uses another metaphor, comparing Junshan floating in the water to a green snail on a silver plate. The whole poem is full of pure scenery, with detailed descriptions and vivid metaphors, which is very interesting to read.
The "landscape" here actually only refers to mountains, which are green and green. The usage of "scenery" belongs to the usage of "compound words with partial meanings" in ancient Chinese.
The second sentence uses a mirror to compare the calm of the lake at night, which should be the scene of dusk.
The lake is like a bronze mirror poem "Looking at the Dongting", which needs no polishing. The explanation is as follows: Liu Yuxi's original text is meaningful: lake light and moonlight.
This is a landscape poem written by the poet looking at Dongting Lake from a distance, like a mirror with dull luster without polishing.
The third sentence is about the green, smooth and bright of Junshan in Wangyuan Lake:
Looking at the Dongting dynasty from a distance is like a snail on a silver plate: looking at Dongting from a distance, the day is not dark and the moon is out. There is a green snail in the silver plate. If it is dark, you can't see the fusion of the two colors. The whole poem is purely about scenery. Looking at Dongting from afar, the mountains and rivers are green. The first sentence begins with the blending of water, light and moonlight: the author of the Tang Dynasty compared Junshan floating in the water to a green snail on a silver plate. Looking at Dongting Lake from a distance, there is a green snail in the silver plate, which not only describes it in detail, but also does not reflect light. The moonlight and water color blend together, showing the openness of the lake. There is no wind on the surface of the pool and the mirror is not polished. It is very interesting to read, that is, Junshan in the lake: Dongting Mountain with lush trees stands in Dongting Lake with white light, because the sun has set: calm.
The fourth sentence uses another metaphor, which is very vivid.
4. Write a composition about ancient poetry, about 450 words, in the tone of fifth grade primary school. Don't recite poems from the age of four. Of course, adults forced it. When I was a child, I had to learn by rote, so I was very afraid of reciting poems.
After school, I became literate, and the teacher called some poems, but only to explain them. It was not until I entered junior high school that I became familiar with poetry appreciation.
Many poems only have an ordinary story, sometimes it is too small to mention, but the poet can write it into a famous sentence through the ages and spread it widely. This is the charm of poetry. There are many schools of poetry, such as bold and graceful, and different schools of poetry have their own unique aspects.
Many of Li Bai's poems belong to the uninhibited school. There is an atmosphere of "flying to thousands of feet for three days, and it is suspected that the Milky Way has set for nine days", a sense of complacency of "laughing at the sky and going out is our Artemisia selengensis people", a confidence of "Dapeng rises with the wind one day and soars in Wan Li", and also "I want to cross the Yellow River, but the ice-choked ferry will climb Taihang Mountain" and "I left my food bar and cup, and I can't eat or drink.
When he is not reused, he has sufficient self-confidence; When he was in a high position, he was complacent and heroic; When he saw the ugly side of the imperial court, he had a great personality and despised the powerful. When he leaves because of this, he will also be depressed and confused. If you want to taste poetry, you must understand the poet's life experience and even social background.
It is not difficult to understand, but what you get will only be superficial and meaningless. When you really understand it, feel it and understand it, you will get endless feelings and real meaning.
You can even feel that you are breathing with the poet, sharing joys and sorrows. You understand his feelings and even have the impulse to comfort him. We are enjoying poetry, poets and society, and we enjoy it.
I was deeply attracted when I read The Difficult Road in Shu. The poet's unpredictable brushwork vividly depicts the dangers of Shu Road, artistically shows the winding, majestic and rough face of ancient Shu Road, and depicts a colorful landscape painting, which is fascinating.
I was deeply attracted by his wild imagination. He created a broad artistic realm for me and fascinated me with his romantic colors. If you really want to appreciate a kind of poetry, you must also appreciate the beauty of other factions.
Du Pu's "Hope for Spring" will make people sad, and war will separate people from their loved ones and leave their homes. Meng Jiao's Ode to a Wanderer reminds people of my mother's care for me in the past, and a warm feeling comes to my mind ... Every time I appreciate it, I can feel different and throb.
This is the charm of poetry, and I want to be intoxicated with the charm of this poem! Never appreciate it. It's a new harvest to appreciate it. -Zhu Guangqian-Inscription 1 Poetry is the most extraordinary.
The earliest poems came from the ancient working people, who can be said to be the representatives of the chin-li people. Later, it was gradually favored by literati, so Chun Xue like Nineteen Ancient Poems appeared. These are all things I just felt recently.
I wasn't like this when I was a kid. (2) because of my good memory, I recited the five-character and seven-law of the Tang Dynasty almost once, and I never forgot it, but I can't taste the general rhyme.
Even if there is, it is only a kind of obscurity of "the so-called Iraqis are in the water". Long-term swallowing dates eventually led to "indigestion" until I read Li Bai's "Into the Wine".
Looking at that gray-yellow paper, I looked helpless. But I didn't know there was Gan Kun in it until I looked carefully.
I was shocked by the first sentence-"didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River moved out of heaven and into the ocean, never to return?" It seems that I have been standing on the surging river bank, watching the Yellow River merge into the East China Sea with China's five thousand-year complex.
There is an atmosphere of "a hundred rivers go east to the west" between heaven and earth, which makes me, like Li Bai, unable to see the lovely person in the mirror on the shelf. Although it is silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night. Reminds me of Zhang Jiuling's poem "Stay in the Clouds, Waste a Hundred Years" and Cao Cao's outlook on life "If the morning dew shows, it's hard to go to Japan". Seeing this, I feel a little depressed from my agitation just now.
5. The ancient poem "The Shepherd Boy" was rewritten into a 450-word composition. Vilen, lush with green grass, is full of vitality under the sunlight, like a huge emerald carpet stretching to the sky.
On the Yuan Ye, an old cow leisurely tasted the green grass, and the little shepherd boy ran and moved slowly and carefully between Yuan Ye under the temptation of butterfly dance.
In the evening, the sun, which has been active all day, gradually converges its light and becomes gentle, like a red lantern with a soft flame, hanging on the edge of Yuan Ye and the sky. Maybe it was suspended for too long, only to see it sink slowly and stop smoothly as soon as it touched the ground. It seems that with the support of vilen, it once again playfully jumped onto this huge green bed. The endless Yuan Ye was dyed dark green by the sunset. Looking at the sunset on the Yuan Ye, the little shepherd boy was too surprised to blink, for fear that the red lantern would be swept away by a giant hand in the blink of an eye. The little shepherd boy watched with wide eyes. Suddenly, the sunset shivered twice. Finally, like a naughty little rabbit, he quietly got into the grass with a light and agile tapping sound and said "goodbye" to the little shepherd boy.
That night, the wind blew gently again, and the clouds seemed to feel the end of the sunset glow. On the horizon, the slightly reddish clouds also dispersed. Reluctantly, he put on a black veil and walked away.
It's getting dark and the fields are much quieter.
Suddenly, with a light flute, the silent vilen suddenly came alive again. Then, the flute became louder and louder and closer. Following the sound, I saw an old cow walking slowly. It turned out to be a little shepherd boy. I saw him wearing a hat and hemp fiber, sitting on the back of a cow, playing the flute tirelessly, teasing the evening breeze, with a little coolness. The grass on the Yuan Ye seems to understand the flute and dance together in the hazy twilight. The flute went through the Woods, jumped over the Yuan Ye and drifted far away. ...
At the entrance of the village, the white-haired grandfather of the shepherd boy is waiting for his little grandson who lives alone to return from grazing. The appearance of an old man and a young man has added some warmth to the cool vilen and small villages.
The shepherd boy and grandpa are full, and it is completely dark, but there is still a faint light of the moon in the air. The shepherd boy, who had been herding cattle for a day, was already very tired at this time. Like a tired kitten, he snuggled up to the woodpile, took off his hat and hemp fiber, looked up at the moon with his beloved bamboo flute in his hand, missed his kind mother, and fell into a sweet dream country with wonderful reverie. ...
Shepherd boy (Lv Yan)
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The grass shop is six or seven miles away from the field, the flute is long and the night wind is three or four.
Come back from a full meal at dusk, and don't take off your hemp fiber.
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① Yokono: Guangyuanye.
2 get: tease.
Hemp fiber: a brown or straw-colored coat used to shelter from wind and rain.
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Green grass, vast Yuan Ye, endless. The flute sounded intermittently in the evening breeze, melodious, as if playing with the evening breeze. The shepherd boy returned from grazing and had a big meal at dusk. He didn't even take off his hemp fiber, so he lay happily on the grass on a moonlit night.
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The poem "1( 16) Pictures of Shepherd Boy's Works of Art" shows us a vivid picture of Shepherd Boy coming home at night. We saw the quiet and leisurely life of the shepherd boy. Through the poem, we also see the author's inner world's yearning for a life away from the hustle and bustle and enjoying a happy life: the vast Yuan Ye is covered with green grass; The evening breeze is blowing the weeds. I haven't seen the shepherd boy come back yet, but I first heard the melodious and approaching flute of the shepherd boy coming from the wind. The flute sounded intermittently and fluttered with the wind. The shepherd boy came back and had a good meal. It's already after dusk. He didn't even take off his hemp fiber, so he lay in the open field to rest on a moonlit night. It shows the carefree and innocent nature of children. There are scenes, feelings, characters and voices in the poem. This vivid scene appears in our field of vision from far and near.
The word "shop" shows the gentle comfort of the grass and grassland.
The word "Nong" expresses a kind of interest, conveying the melodious flute sound in the wind and the meaning of the shepherd boy playing the flute.
Six or seven miles and three or four sounds here do not refer to definite figures, but to highlight the silence of the vast countryside in Yuan Ye in the evening.
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Expressed the author's inner yearning for a safe and comfortable life.
6. In the fourth grade of primary school, I chose a 350-word ancient poetry reader. A cool breeze is blowing. Don't we have a big umbrella on the boat? The boat is like a calf, so it doesn't take much effort. The conversation between the two children reached the poet's ears, and the birds in the tree sang and listened.
Suddenly there was the sound of children playing. They clapped each other, surrounded by mountains in the distance. "So I learned ancient poems and made up the story" Crossing the Boat and Being Anren ". In early summer, the poet also smiled with relief. I have my own way! " "But we don't have such a big piece of cloth on board, can we blend together? We can open an umbrella.
The two children cheered. Strangely, when it didn't rain, an umbrella was opened and said to be a sail, and ripples appeared on the water, breaking the silence just now: "Oh! He was surprised at the children's endless whimsy. In one go, the poet stopped: "I once saw a big ship moving forward." The poet Yang Wanli came to Anren County, Hunan Province. The eight-year-old boy struggled to paddle, and he was relaxed and happy. Two children opened a big umbrella, and Yang Wanli wrote a poem: "Boat Crossing Anren" [Song] Yang Wanli, a fishing boat with two children, can make the boat go faster.
Go home and write a poem. The murmur of the river! "Second with a grain of salt, let's build a sail.
One day, hold it high! Another child asked in confusion, everything was so calm and beautiful in the fog: "I'll show you." The first child said confidently? "The second child asked, when the sail is used, it is refreshing. The poet closed his eyes. He went for a walk by the river, with a light green color. He always hangs a big cloth on the boat, and he is even more surprised by the child's perseverance. It's really pleasant. Maybe two children are tired of rowing? If you put down the paddle,
The breeze blows, the sparkling river and the reflected shade form a beautiful landscape painting: "Hey, how can he make sails with his eyes open!" " "The first child said, many innocent and lovely children, don't cover your head but make the wind, two sevens. This article is for reference, with the green bamboo forest by the river, the ship stops? " The first child said that the idea is good, but can it be done? The laughter like a bell reached the poet's ears: "Why don't we put down the oars, so I saw a fishing boat rowing slowly, and the children's laughter sounded like a band playing beautiful light music:" Don't worry, one of their children said and rushed forward at once.
At this time, a strong wind blew and the ship stopped for a while.
In my life, I have many good friends: classmates, books, animals, and, by the way, the most friendly friend-ancient poetry.
The story is the first good friend I made when I was a child. When I started reading, my mother told me beautiful ancient poems. I listened with relish and never forgot. Ode to Goose describes the scene of geese swimming in the water. "Silent Night Thinking" tells the family's feelings of missing their hometown. "Persuade" reminds me not to waste time and study hard; Looking at Lushan Waterfall depicts a spectacular scene.
Later, I gradually lost interest in ancient poetry. I was lucky enough to know an amiable and beautiful teacher Ma in the first grade of primary school. She is like our mother and sometimes our close companion. Her face is always cheerful, which makes people feel kind and warm. She made strict demands on us to recite poems every day. At first, many students didn't quite understand, and I didn't quite understand the teacher's intention. In order to encourage me, Teacher Ma offered to recite poems in a competition with me. See who recites the most poems. The teacher used some clever methods and recited the poem quickly. I recite poems according to the teacher's style. Gradually, I became more and more interested in reciting poems. Under the guidance of my teacher, I have recited 65,438+043 poems, and won the glorious title of the third king of poetry recitation in the fourth grade poetry competition. Now, I am more interested in reciting poems.
I love ancient poetry, and I love my teacher even more.
8. Rewriting Ancient Poems in the Fifth Grade of Primary School 300 words There is a family by the stream, and a family of five lives in a shabby hut.
But it can be seen that they live happily. There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. It can be seen from their red faces that they are slightly drunk, leaning together and drinking and having fun together in Wu dialect.
The old man said, "I said, wife, you are drunk." The old woman said, "You are drunk, I am wide awake!" " ""Ha ha ha, ha ha ha! " Laughter overflowed from the room.
Behind the hut are lush bamboo forests and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly.
The eldest son of the old couple, carrying a hoe and a straw hat, went to the bean field in the east of the stream to weed. The air outside is fresh and the grass is green beside the stream. There are green lotus leaves in the stream, and some still have lotus leaves.
The chicken is cackling, as if to say, "Where is our house?" ? The second son is knitting a chicken coop with his fastest speed. Knitting, knitting, I'm almost finished.
Chickens seem to know that the second son is knitting a chicken coop for them, so they fly around the second son and sometimes peck his little feet in a friendly way. As for the youngest son, he knows nothing. He can only lie on the side of the stream, playfully teasing the fish, peeling the lotus flowers to eat, and nagging: "One, two, three …" The way he shakes his little feet is really cute! What a happy family this is! Ask for praise.
9. The ancient poem "Yong Liu" was rewritten in 400 words. The jasper of Tang and Zhang is dressed as a tree with 10,000 green silk tapestries.
I don't know who cut the thin leaves, but the spring breeze in February is like scissors. Willow in early spring and February is new and charming.
So where should I start writing willow? There is no doubt that the beauty of its image lies in Naman's long branches. Once a year, it grows new green leaves and hangs down, which has a charming posture in the spring breeze.
Compared with the slim figure and graceful waist of a beautiful woman, it is fascinating. "Jasper makeup is as high as a tree", beginning with Vitamin beauty; "Thousands of strands of blue silk tapestry hang down", and these countless hanging silk also became her nepotism.
A word "Gao" sets off the graceful charm of beautiful Tingting; A word "hanging" means slender waist swaying in the wind. There are no words "willow" and "waist branch" in the poem, but the beauty embodied by weeping willows and willows in early spring is vividly written.
"Southern History" said that Liu Yong was the secretariat of Yizhou and presented several Shu Liu plants. "These stripes are very long and look like silk threads." Emperor Wu of Qi planted these willows in front of Taichangyun Palace, but he didn't give any appreciation, saying only that they were "romantic and lovely".
Here, wicker is called "green silk tapestry", which may be the hidden use of this famous allusion about willow. But it's a waste, and you can't see any traces.
"Jasper makeup" leads to "moss tapestry" and "who cut it". Finally, the intangible and unpredictable "spring breeze" is also vividly depicted by "scissors". These "scissors" cut out bright green flowers and plants and put on a new makeup for the earth. It is a symbol of natural vitality and a wonderful inspiration given by spring.
From Jasper Makeup to Scissors, we can see a series of processes of the poet's artistic conception. A series of images in poetry are closely linked.
Some people may think: There were many famous beauties in ancient China, Liu. Why should we compare them with Jasper? I think this has two meanings: first, the name Jasper is related to the color of willow, and the words "green" and "green" in the next sentence complement each other. Second, Jasper will always leave a young impression in people's hearts.
When it comes to jasper, people will think of the widely circulated poems such as Song of Jasper, When Jasper Broke Melon, and Jasper's Little Girl. Jasper has almost become a general term for young and beautiful women in ancient literary works.
Comparing jasper with willow, people will imagine that this beauty has not yet reached its heyday; This willow is still a small willow in early spring, and it is too late to cover the crow with dense leaves; This is also related to the "thin leaves" and "February spring breeze" below. "Jasper adorns trees" means writing the whole, saying that sorghum adorns jasper.
Use "Jasper" to describe the green crystal of willow and highlight its color beauty. The tapestry of ten thousand drooping green silk is a description of willow branches, saying that drooping willow branches are like thousands of ribbons, highlighting their gentle beauty.
"I don't know who cut out the thin leaves" is about willow leaves, which highlights the delicate and delicate morphological beauty of willow leaves. The three poems are divided into different parts, and each sentence has its own characteristics.
The third sentence and the fourth sentence constitute rhetorical questions. "I wonder who cut the thin leaves?" -ask yourself; "The spring breeze in February is like scissors."
-self-answer. This question and answer, from willow cleverness to spring breeze.
It is said that cutting out these delicate willow leaves can certainly cut out bright green and bright red flowers and plants. It symbolizes the vitality of nature and the creativity of spring.
This poem eulogizes the infinite creativity of spring by praising the willow tree.