The title "Looking at Luoqiao in the Evening" highlights the word "look".
"The ice has just formed under the bridge in Tianjin, and there are almost no people on the streets in Luoyang." The first and second sentences of this little poem say that the ice under the bridge in Tianjin has just formed, and there is almost no ice on the roads in Luoyang. pedestrian.
"The elms and willows are sparse and the pavilions are idle, and the moonlight directly sees the snow on Songshan Mountain." The third and fourth sentences of the poem say that the elm willows with fallen leaves and bare branches cover the quiet towers and pavilions, under the clear moonlight , I saw the white snow on Songshan Mountain at a glance.
The four lines of the poem all describe the sceneries seen, but the realm of the first three lines is completely different from that of the last line. The first three sentences describe the bleak atmosphere in early winter: the ice has just formed under the bridge, there are no pedestrians on the road, the bare elms and willows cover the quiet towers and pavilions, everything is silent and there is no sound. At this moment, the poet made a bold move: "The bright moon directly sees the snow on Songshan Mountain." The brushstrokes are powerful and majestic, extending the line of sight to the distant Songshan Mountains, adding infinite vitality to the silent picture, and showing a lot of interest in front of people. At this time, people suddenly realized that when the poet writes about the beginning of ice, it is to create a book for the snow; when he writes about people's deeds, it is to lay out the atmosphere; when he writes about the sparse elms and willows, it is to create conditions for distant vision. At the same time, from the "ice" of the first knot, to the "mo" of the unrivaled person, to the "elm willow" of the desolate and quiet, and the quiet "pavilion", the scenes are constantly changing, and each changed scene is related to the last sentence. The next step is Wangshan. In this way, from near to far, his vision gradually broadened. He suddenly found that under the clear moonlight, he could see the white snow on Songshan Mountain at a glance, and felt amazing pleasure and beauty. The sentence "Moonlight" not only adds to the brightness of the entire picture, making the soft moonlight and the reflection of the white snow complement each other, but also cleverly adds "intuition" to refresh people's spirits.
This poem describes the magnificent scene of "the bright moon shining on the snow". The sky and mountains, the moonlight and the snow light complement each other, and the top and bottom are silvery white. It is really beautiful. The poet opens up a wonderful and charming new realm from the desolate winter scenery of Luo City. The bright moon and white snow are both pure and pure things, showing a fresh and distant realm, embodying the poet's lofty ambition.
Predecessors have said that the beginning of Yunmeng's poem is the strangest, but this poem is strange at the end. It accumulates power and creates momentum through contrasting the front and back, and finally ends the whole story with a warning, which is the finishing touch.