1. The article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
3 ... it is practical, contains simple and profound philosophy, and is exciting and moving to read.
This article is full of * * *, between the lines, you can feel the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
The narrative of the case is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.
6. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
9. The article is meticulous, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
10. The close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
1 1. The article can be described in fresh and interesting language ... Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest and laughter, which is a masterpiece.
12. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, which is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.
13. The full text is fresh and elegant.
14. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and the description of the environment sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
15. Be concise at the beginning.
16. The article is novel at the beginning and has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
17. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
18. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
19. The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers.
20. The beginning is touching and has true feelings.
On the evaluation of friendly composition
1. This article can describe things about … in fresh and interesting language. Between the lines, it is full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece.
2. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are the two major characteristics of this article, and it is also the content of this article ... richer and more vivid.
3. The full text is fresh and elegant.
4. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description.
Be concise at the beginning.
6. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
7. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
8. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
9. Make an extraordinary start to attract readers.
10. The beginning touches people's hearts and has real feelings.
Evaluation and recommendation of friendly composition
1. Human nature has many weaknesses, and inspirational can effectively overcome some weaknesses, strengthen beliefs, overcome difficulties and achieve success. But now that we have grown up under the doting of our parents, we lack this spirit.
2. Han Yu taught us that "industry is good at diligence, but play is barren"; Lei Feng taught us that "we are the masters of the country, and we should think of the country everywhere"; Gu teaches us that "every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world". These celebrities tell us the importance of inspiration.
This is a lyric composition. With the theme of "inspirational", the little author materialized himself into a snail to express his feelings. The article is fluent in language and sincere in emotion, and can be combined with its own reality by selecting typical cases, which is rich in meaning and content.
This is a speech about "Inspirational success begins with faith". This speech is complete, logical and clear-cut. The discussion on the need to persist in life meets the requirements of the theme and can be in line with the audience's heart during the trial. This is a good speech.
This author is proficient in literature. The process of argumentation is advanced step by step, from everyone needs to read, to learning to choose books when reading, to reading good books will benefit endlessly, and finally to be a man and combine life and reading organically. It can be described as one go.
6. This argumentative paper has distinct views and unique opinions. It is pointed out that art should be rooted in small people and works of art should have the consciousness of civilian perspective. This paper refutes the theory of "inspiring young people" and the theory of "expressing the ancient culture of China" by refuting arguments, and finally criticizes the producers and actors of domestic TV dramas for being too commercialized and not doing enough in quality.
The author of this article told us "the power of faith" in the form of a speech. This is not surprising. The author thinks that "there is a power ... endless danger." The beginning of this sentence shows the power of faith. Taking "Lie Bin", "Zhou Enlai" and "Ma Fei" as examples, the author shows us the great success brought by "faith" and appeals to people to establish firm faith and firm heart to serve the country.
8. This article is ingenious and innovative. The article is from point to surface, with profound thoughts. Express gratitude to parents and teachers. This article makes us feel the silence of parents' love. The teacher's teaching should be deeply remembered and always grateful.
9. This is an argumentative essay. With the theme of "inspiring the Chinese dream", the author uses the methods of comparative argumentation and case argumentation. Put forward facts and make sense, and explain your views in combination with real life. The level of demonstration is clear, the structure is clear and the philosophy is clear.
10. Inspirational composition evaluation comments This is a complete and wonderful writing article. The opening of the article sets the scene, which naturally leads to the following. It uses appearance description and action description, and the characters are vivid and prominent, depicting an image with perseverance and constant pursuit of the most inspirational.
1 1. This is a speech to show your own style and make your youth fly. The teacher read your article and knew that you are a child who loves life very much. "Youth is an altar of wine and a bunch of brilliant flowers", which vividly writes the beauty of youth. The full-text language is fluent, natural and vivid, which is a good exercise.
12. This speech is full of the flavor of the times, and it is very typical to elaborate around honesty and integrity. The language of the whole article is infectious and full of momentum, and the best decission has infected all the audience present.
13. The notebook is beautiful and neat, just like the street in a seaside town, but it is not dirty ... The straight handwriting makes people feel very comfortable ... Your calligraphy is as beautiful as printed ... I am ashamed that my calligraphy is not as good as yours. ...
14. Whatever, the handwriting is not like a cat's ... The handwriting is not in the middle of the grid, of course it looks unpleasant ... Is it because the wind is too strong today that it is blown like this ... I don't believe that your handwriting is not good and you will always be so sloppy ... Write carefully and patiently, and you will write better than me. ...
15. This rich content is similar to what the writer wrote ... Your practice is real, and reading is really a great enjoyment ... Your composition is very specific, and I enjoy reading it ... You must like to treat it as a document, so you can write so many words. ...
16. The dry content is like boiled water, with no taste at all. It's better to add some beautiful words ... it's not as good as Vivienne Liu's words or other poor students' names. Don't you feel a little embarrassed ... Your composition is like a 90-year-old woman's mouth, dry and empty, and it leaks straight. ...
17. Smooth and vivid sentences, like Lushan Waterfall, are very smooth ... This metaphor is very appropriate, which shows that you have always been very careful in observation ... How did you come up with such a clever anthropomorphic sentence ... How appropriate this rhetorical question is to be used here ... This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time ... The ancient poems are quoted just right, and I will use the poems I have learned in my composition in the future.
18. The composition is uneven and uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, and you will easily fall down if you are not careful ... The sentence seems to be cut off and incomplete ... If you read it carefully after writing, you will find something meaningless ... Don't be afraid of trouble, all the good articles have been changed ... You can't always expect others to help you correct it, but learn to correct it yourself. ...
19. These parts are clearly divided ... These parts are properly divided ... Each section has a meaning and different paragraphs. ...
20. The hierarchy is chaotic. One section contains so much content that I feel breathless when I read it ... There are too few sections to add ... The middle part can be divided into several parts ... One or two departments should not be separated, but merged ... This section has little to do with the above sections.