Seventh grade unit composition

In our daily study, work and life, it is inevitable to contact or use composition. Composition is a style composed of words, which expresses a theme through language organization after people's ideological consideration. Have no clue when writing a composition? The following are seven unit compositions of grade seven that I carefully arranged. Welcome everyone to refer to it, I hope I can help you.

When I was very young, my father said to me: We are descendants of the Chinese people, and the Yellow River is our mother river.

So, seeing the Yellow River has become my wish! I am obsessed with collecting poems and pictures of the Yellow River. When I read Wang Wei's poem "To the Fortress", "The desert is lonely and the long river sets the yen", the spectacular sight of the Yellow River at sunset will emerge in my mind. In my dream, I approached her again and again, but it was so vague that I could never see her face clearly.

Finally, CCTV produced a large-scale TV program "Yellow River", which made me appreciate the elegance of the Yellow River on TV.

Photo: On both sides of Hukou of the Yellow River, the mountains are opposite, like a huge teapot. The swift river flowed out of the 50-meter-wide hukou and suddenly fell into the deep pool, stirring up bundles of water columns, which was very spectacular. The yellow waves in the air are surging like dragons, with splashing waves and transpiration of water vapor. Seven colors of rainbow are hung on the yellow water in the pot all year round. Really: "A pot of Yellow River takes over the world", "Shili River beach listens to thunder". Water column, water droplets and water mist turn from yellow to gray, from gray to blue, like clouds and smoke, forming a magnificent landscape of "underwater smoking". Isn't this the scene described in the famous sentence "How the water of the Yellow River moves out of the sky and into the sea, never to return" by Li Bai, a poet in the Tang Dynasty? The melody "The wind is roaring, the horse is barking, the Yellow River is roaring, the Yellow River is roaring ..." was born.

The book says, "Jiuzhaigou's water is too delicate and pretty, a little foreign;" The water in Taihu Lake is too small, unlike water, and the taste of literati is too heavy, but it seems to be for people to play. " However, the Yellow River water is another feeling. Listening, my ears are getting deaf, and I can only see people opening their mouths, but I can't hear the sound; Look, my eyes are blurred, too, watching the rotating yellow transpiration rising from the river and falling in despair. Yellow fog like smoke rises at the bottom of the river, and yellow particles with water diffuse between heaven and earth, colliding with faces and permeating the air. Life, real life is arrogant here.

Let me dream of the Yellow River, and one day, I will really feel your charm!

Since ancient times, human beings have been exploring "the origin of human beings", which resulted in the first "creationism" that human beings were directly created by God, but it was denied by Darwin's "evolution theory". However, in modern times, there have been some phenomena that cannot be explained by evolution. For example, a skull from 6,000 to 5,000 years ago was found. After analysis, the IQ of the person represented by this skull is thousands of times that of our human beings, and it is impossible for human beings to reach that level no matter how clever they are, and it is still the time of ancient humans; In a broken wall pattern, a true portrayal of the combination of man and life on earth is drawn-these phenomena all point to "alien intervention in the origin of human beings", so the theory of "aliens" appears as the origin of human beings.

First of all, I want to make sure that aliens must exist. In that vast universe, there are hundreds of millions of galaxies like the Milky Way, not to mention the size of the solar system. Among so many galaxies, no planet is as habitable as the earth.

Let's get back to the point. I think the "alien theory" has some truth, because the ancestors of human beings are two kinds of apes, but human beings have not found the fossils of the ancestors of these two kinds of apes, which questions the "evolution theory". However, if aliens intervene, this phenomenon makes sense.

The main idea of "alien theory" is that a group of aliens came to the earth, and for various reasons, they could not live here for a long time, so they managed to impregnate a female ape with high IQ, add their own genes to it, and leave offspring on the earth, and the offspring they produced gradually became the present human beings.

But I doubt this statement, because no matter how high the IQ is, human beings are made of meat, not steel, and the pressure of space flight is too great for ordinary human beings to bear. Even if they can, it will take millions of light years from the nearest living planet to the earth. Even if people are willing to wait, machines can't "wait"! In any case, it is impossible for aliens to visit the earth in person, let alone create humans on the earth.

But what is the explanation for finding that the IQ of the skull is thousands of times that of the earth? I don't think aliens can visit the earth in person. There is only one explanation, that is, aliens with super high IQ have mastered the technology of information materialization. He encoded his own genetic genes so that the encoding can carry light to emit, so the light will not die, so no matter how long it takes, this light will still be there. When it travels millions of light-years later, it will come to the earth and use the materials or creatures on the earth. The aliens who produce and provide this information are exactly the same as humans. When he became an entity, he began to combine with the mother ape, so that his descendants evolved into human beings, and drew patterns to record the scene at that time. However, when he had a high IQ, he died, and his skull became a high IQ skull fossil that we now find.

The "alien theory" is a very sci-fi statement, and it is estimated that it is difficult for humans to verify it. We can't verify it until the human IQ is extremely high!

There are many theories about the origin of human beings, such as the sea ape theory, the combination of land and sea ancestors theory and so on. These are people's guesses and can't be verified yet. However, humans are constantly evolving. As long as we protect our earth, we will get the answer one day. Therefore, the task of mankind now is to pay more attention to protecting our only home, the earth, while conducting research.

The seventh grade unit composition 3 J.R Lowell once said: "The best institution of higher learning is the mother's knee." Dante also said: "There is a most beautiful voice in the world, and that is the call of mother."

Mother, a person who only knows how to pay for her children without asking for anything in return; Mother, a person who can ignore herself for the sake of her children; Mother, a great and sacred title. She warms her young heart with love and is careful. ...

An ever-popular maternal love describes the greatness of a mother. What is always popular is not the silk scarf in the text, but the invisible maternal love. A silk scarf explains the profound meaning of mother.

The child is a piece of meat that fell from the mother, and it is her treasure. In the eyes of mothers, children are always so small and worrying.

Young people, we may not know much, but what we must know is the love given by our mother, the silent love. A person, the most should return, should also be his mother. What a mother pays for her children is something that the children can never repay.

Do you know the pain of a mother when she gives birth to a child? Do you know how many times mothers cry for their children's ignorance? Do you know how many times she has been sad? For what? Is it a kind report for children? No, she doesn't want to repay her kindness. She wants the future of her children.

When mother's hands wrinkle up day by day; When the mother's face grows old day by day; When my mother's black hair turns white day by day; What can you think of? Do you know how many of these white hairs are yours?

To tell the truth, I don't like China's traditional plays at all, because in my impression, they usually just keep singing and have no interest.

However, seeing a Huangmei opera on TV a few years ago changed my view of them.

The performer's voice is so soft and the music is so beautiful. It gives people a refreshing feeling after listening. I think this is its charm.

The origin of Huangmei Opera can be traced back to the Tang Dynasty. According to historical records, as early as the Tang Dynasty, Huangmei tea-picking songs were very popular. After the development of folk songs in the Song Dynasty and the influence of drama in the Yuan Dynasty, folk operas gradually took shape. Huangmei County's opera style is more prosperous. During the Chongzhen period of the Ming Dynasty, Zeng Weilun, the magistrate of Huangmei County, recorded a rural drama October in On Huangmei Feng Jiao. In the ninth year of Daoguang in the Qing Dynasty, in Biejilin's Poem of Asking Flowers and Waterfront, a description of Zhi Zhu's ci is even more vivid: there are many rice and sunflower in Yinshan, and Taibai Lake catches waves. When I met this year's club owner, the villages sang tea-picking songs together.

Huangmei Opera is not only beautiful and moving, but also has such a long legend.

I think the traditional dramas in China are getting less and less popular now, and they are replaced by pop songs. Although pop songs do have their advantages, we can't forget China's traditional operas because of them! As long as you feel it with your heart, it is not difficult to find the beauty of China's traditional operas. So, please come with me to feel the beauty of China's traditional drama. I believe everyone will like it!

If I could go back in time, I would like to go back to my childhood. -inscription

"Where is the time? I am old before I feel young ... "The familiar melody lingers in my ears. I can't help but feel the rush of time and think of that wonderful time-

One day eight years ago, my parents held me in their broad and gentle hands. My father was on the left and my mother was on the right. We walked on the wide concrete road, walked past the high-rise buildings, and enjoyed the tranquility at night. I opened my watery eyes and asked in a gentle voice, "What is beauty?" Dad looked at me with a smile and replied, "It's a wide range of beauty! Just like when you play, it's beautiful. " Mother said softly, "It's beautiful for you to walk with your parents now." We had a wonderful time together. "I nodded puzzled. It was a happy time when I was 66 and carefree.

Back to the present, I find that there is a difference between me in the past and me now. I am no longer so clever to my parents, obedient to them, even tired of them, tired of them. I'm tired of their advice; They treated me gently, but all they got was my harsh words. I used to make my parents happy? Where have you been? Did time take it away? Take away the good times before my parents and me?

No, as a matter of fact, we can keep that wonderful time.

I often think how wonderful that time was. Always miss, always dissatisfied with myself now. I found that I really changed, became different, became strange, and became unlike myself. The good times have changed with me. That wonderful time had to be sealed in my heart, sealed in the crystal of memory, and silently remembered. In fact, you don't have to remember that wonderful time, but you can have it now.

I often sigh at that wonderful time, but forget to grasp the present time. That wonderful time left me not only beautiful and unforgettable, but also grasping the present, cherishing the present and creating the wonderful time now …

I hummed Wang Zhengliang's Where Has Time Gone, thinking about that wonderful time and savoring the truth it brought me. ...

The sixth name of the seventh grade unit composition: the same name as a this beautiful city in Zhejiang Province. (surnamed Jin)

Gender: Just like mom.

Age: We spent 12 Children's Day.

Appearance: small eyes and small mouth, neither tall nor short, neither fat nor thin, just so-so.

Advantages: I have the ability.

Rice is indispensable in our life. When it comes to cooking, you must say "Hum! Anyone can do this, so is it capable? " Don't worry! Don't worry! Listen to me. Take your time.

Cooking, water is the most critical, how can we put more or less water? I have a good idea.

One afternoon, my mother was on a business trip and asked me to cook the rice. Cake! I've never done it. Okay, what should we do? There are four people in my family. I have filled three cups of rice with a measuring cup full of rice. Because my brother is only six years old, he can't eat much. Next, drain the water, which is very difficult. I carefully put the water above the water 1 Five to two. About five centimeters. Boil! Ha! Everything except the east wind! I watch TV with great interest.

I was fascinated when the doorbell rang. Mom and dad must have come back. I hurried to the kitchen to see how the meal was cooked first. Hmm! Not bad! Enter the heat preservation state. When I opened the door, my mother immediately came straight to the point: "How was the meal?" "all right! Ok! " I am proud to say. Dinner is ready! Dad took a bite first and put it in his mouth to chew. "How did that happen? How about it? " I can't wait to ask. Dad just played the devil's advocate with me, and when I got impatient, he slowly said, "Well! Not bad! " Mom also took a bite and said, "I didn't expect you to be okay!" " ""You just found my buried gold now! "

My mother asked me to cook for several days in a row. I became a veritable "rice scouring expert" in my family. My mother always tells me every time she cooks and asks me how the water is. I proudly said, "Good! All right! Not much! " Dad always smiles and says, "Yo! I quite like it! "

Disadvantages: I am sloppy.

There are no perfect people in the world, and everyone has shortcomings. Although I am handsome in appearance, I am also a veritable "sloppy"!

On Sunday night, my mother went out shopping and told me to turn off the gas stove when the water was boiling. My mother urged me again and again, and I agreed. I wandered around the kitchen for a few times and felt bored, so I went to watch TV. I was fascinated by it, and my mother didn't know when she stood behind me fiercely. My mother asked sternly, "Where's the boiling water?" At this moment, I remembered boiling water! God, when I came to the kitchen, my mother obviously turned off the gas. There is water all around the gas stove, and there is only a little water left in the pot. "You say you! I'm not worried about anything. It's not like I came back early and my house caught fire! Can't you do things seriously? " Mother scolded loudly.

Doing things is the same as studying, a little carelessness will cause great losses, so I have been overcoming this shortcoming! !

This is me!

A tentative plan for the composition teaching in Unit 7, Grade 7;

1, combined with the requirements of unit composition training on page 33 of the textbook, on the basis of students' completion of the big composition, comment on the composition of unit 1, so that students can master the basic methods of character appearance description in practice and comment.

2. Make a general discussion on the writing methods of five texts and four texts in the first volume of Colorful Seasons, the seventh grade, so as to deepen students' understanding of these texts. In fact, when I was talking about the five texts in Unit 1, I had analyzed the author's writing ideas separately, which paved the way for this class and the last composition class. )

3. Because this composition needs to be combined with the writing idea of "from Baicaoyuan to Santan Yinyue", I arranged to have this teaching after this class.

Teaching objectives:

Learn to grasp the characteristics of characters and write their personalities.

Teaching time:

One class.

Teaching process:

First, students read the third paragraph on page 33 of the textbook.

Second, the teacher quotes: According to the different description objects, the description can be divided into two types: character description and scenery description. (Show Slide 2) Teachers can quote classics.

The teacher linked the contents of the unit "Colorful Four Seasons" in the first volume of grade seven, and asked the students to recall the relevant contents of "grasping the characteristics of the scenery and describing it"; At the same time, the teacher combined the "one side" of Unit 1 with the "From Baicaoyuan to Santan Yinyue" of Unit 2 to let students know more about the method of "describing by grasping the characteristics of characters".

(Show slides 3 and 4)

Listen to the students read aloud: excellent fragments about portrait description.

Grade 06 1 class 1: excerpts from five students: Zhao, Chen Chuanqiu, Tan Ende and Zhu Yongchao (that is, the assignment for the first composition class is 1).

Class 4, Grade 2.06: A fragment description of five students (that is, the assignment for the first composition class is 1).

The teachers commented one by one and pointed out the advantages and disadvantages of each composition.

4. Please ask a student who speaks Mandarin well to read the composition "Teacher's Eyes" written by Grade 06 1 Ban Zhao.

The teacher gave key comments.

1, this student mainly wrote about the teacher's eyes, and wrote three things around the eyes, with details and omissions. The first two things are omitted, and the third one is written in detail. This is the detailed arrangement method of the article My Teacher that she imitated.

2. Zhao reasonably adopted the method of appearance description, caught the teacher's eye and wrote sincere feelings between teachers and students, which is a major feature of this paper. Ask the students to think about which text of Unit 1 she imitated in this composition. (Students can basically answer correctly)

3. At the end of this composition, she appropriately summed up the teacher's eyes with the rhetorical method of metaphor: "The teacher's eyes are the stars shining with wisdom. It is the guiding light in our hearts. " This is different from the ending method commonly used in primary schools. She didn't use the method of "how lovely and kind the teacher's eyes are, how much I love the teacher". Students, pay attention to learning this method when writing in the future.

Fifth, practice.

Exercise 2 on page 33 of the textbook, under the guidance of the teacher, students practice the ideas of composition.

1, Q: What should I do first to finish this topic?

Some students answered: complete the question. Remind students to pay attention to the requirements of the topic according to the situation of the composition topic in the final exam.

2. Take the compositions of two students, Gan Xueliang and Wu of Class 4, Grade 06 (they were written by this class). These two essays highlight the characteristics of Luo Lina's "provocative works", so the title of their essays can be changed to "She is a provocative person".

If you want to write such a composition, how will you finish it?

The students began to speak loudly.

3. Teacher's example: The description of "Feng Chili" in A Dream of Red Mansions mainly introduces Wang Xifeng's appearance-I didn't hear his voice first (Chongqing dialect describes this situation as "flying fork"), appearance (phoenix eye, drooping eyebrows, pink face hiding spring power), movement (rushing forward to hold Lin Daiyu's hand) and language.

Verb (short for verb) Task:

1, use "maybe ... maybe ... maybe ..." and "needless to say ... just ..." to make sentences.

2. Preview "three Lycium barbarum beans" and pay attention to new words.

Postscript of teaching:

1. This composition class, because the students have already written it, and because of the explanation in the first composition class, the writing quality of the students has been obviously improved.

2. Students generally welcome this form of composition class. After class, I asked several classmates, and they said, "This composition class made me clearly understand how to describe the appearance and portray the characters, and gained a lot."

3. It is very effective for teachers to study teaching materials and teaching methods in their spare time. As long as they are willing to pay, study and find ways, any problem will be overcome.