2. Poetry about figurative sentences is like a strong wind in spring, which blows at night and blows away the petals of ten thousand pear trees. Compare snow to pear blossoms.
I don't know who cut the thin leaves, but the spring breeze in February is like scissors.
The desert sand is like snow, and the Yanshan moon is like a hook.
What's it like to snow in succession? The difference between sprinkling salt and air can be simulated, but catkins are not because of the wind.
How much leisure, a wisp of smoke, the wind in the city, plum yellow rain. Compare sadness to tobacco and other things.
On the high cliff, it seems to be thousands of feet high, which makes people think that the Milky Way has fallen from heaven to earth. Waterfalls are compared to the Milky Way.
Look at the Dongting landscape. There is a green snail in the silver plate. Compare the mountain under the bright moon in Yin Hui to a green snail in a silver plate.
Free flying flowers are as light as dreams, endless silk rain is as thin as sorrow, and small silver hooks hang curtains.
But the petals are like her face, and the willow leaves are like her eyebrows. Whenever he looks at them, what can he do but cry? .
Yanshan snowflakes are as big as seats, and pieces of them blow off XuanYuanTai.
The grass is as green as Beth, and the mulberry leaves in Qin area are green.
3. Metaphorical poems and ancient poems 1, desert sand like snow, Yanshan moon like a hook.
2. If you want to compare the West Lake to the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate.
3. Like the strong wind in spring, it blows at night and blows the petals of ten thousand pear trees.
I don't know who cut the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors.
At sunrise, flowers in the river are better than fire, and in spring, the river is as green as blue.
6, poor September third night, dew like a pearl like a bow.
7. A breeze blew her cloak and fluttered with her movements, as if she were dancing with a rainbow skirt and a feather coat.
8. As soon as I hear the flute at night, I will collect incense from the wall and return to the front of the peak as sand as snow.
9. When the sun sets, the east wind complains about birds, and the fallen flowers are still like fallen flowers.
10 The Yangtze River in Wan Li is as white as training, and the mountains in Hu Aishan are as bright as lakes.
4. Metaphor and personification are both in a poem (the title should also be). Metaphorical verses are: thirteen beautiful flowers, cardamom that ended in early February (Du Mu's Farewell to One).
The phrase "cardamom" compares a girl to a flower.
2. Anthropomorphic poems include: the clouds want clothes and flowers, and the spring breeze blows the dew (Li Bai's "Qing Ping Diao * I").
"Cloud thinking, flower thinking" personified.
3. There are exaggerated poems, such as "Flying down three thousands of feet, suspecting that the Milky Way will fall for nine days" (Li Bai's Looking at Lushan Waterfall).
I learned this sentence a long time ago. Exaggerate the height of the waterfall to 3 thousand feet.
Metaphor: I don't know who cut off the thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors. -He Zhangzhi's Singing Willow
Personification: good rain knows the season, when spring comes. -du fu >
Exaggeration: The next day, the lotus leaf is infinitely blue, and the color of the lotus is different.
-Yang Wanli's "Chu Xiao Jingci Temple sends Lin Zifang"
Sorry, that's all I know.
5. Write a composition and cherish time with a topic and a metaphor.
An inch of time and an inch of gold, cherish time, you have to hold every minute in my hand tightly, don't relax, take it back! ! !
Economists say: "Time is wealth"; Military scientists say: "Time is victory"; The medical scientist said, "Time is life."
Time passes when we study; Time passes when we play; Time passed when we were eating; Time passes when we are sad. No matter what we are doing or thinking, time passes day and night like running water!
When reading, although time has passed, we have gained knowledge; When we study, time passes, but we gain experience; When we do something, although time has passed, we have accomplished something; When we play games, time passes and we get nothing. Therefore, the same time goes by, everyone gets different, because time goes by, everyone does different things.
Cherish time! ! ! ! Otherwise it will slip away quietly.
My figurative composition teacher said that we must learn to analyze sentences, for example, it uses figurative rhetoric to vividly express the author's thoughts and feelings.
The teacher also said that to learn to use rhetorical devices, the most common is metaphor. If we want to say its advantages, we can express them vividly ... My metaphor sentence 1: Life is like a flowing stream, which is as slow as silence, but in fact, it has crossed thousands of miles. Example analysis: The author compares his life to a stream, which is not as turbid as a river or as dark as a ditch. It is just a proper analogy to a stream, which reminds people of the winding green water at the foot of the mountain and clearly reflects the beautiful scenery, vividly expressing the author's love and praise for life, and thinks that life should be as clear as a stream.
Then, the author describes its quietness, which is not as utilitarian and debatable as the secular world, but only listens to the "slow" flow of nature. The artistic conception is elegant, fresh and fragrant, and life is so ordinary and not vulgar, always accompanying people, "as if it were still and silent". Then, although the author still expresses his feelings with a calm brush stroke, the brush stroke has changed and the stream has inadvertently rushed to the distance.
And almost the same crystal clear in front of me is not what I saw before. Calculate the time, only to find that time has passed and life has not changed. The author implicitly expresses the feeling that time flies and happiness is short with clever language.
My analogy 2: Maybe just for a moment, I feel like a pendulum, and my life's career just keeps swinging as time flies. Example analysis: the pendulum is a symbol of time. When the author realized that time was "flying", he looked back at himself and compared himself to a pendulum. This is an innovative way of writing.
Here, the swinging back and forth of the pendulum is not only its own work, but its only meaning in this world. It still has life, just because it is "constantly moving", which proves that it still has breathing and heartbeat.
But unfortunately, it is always manipulated by time. The author himself is a pendulum, which is linked with the writing background at that time. The social competition is fierce, but there are many contents to learn and less time. In order not to be eliminated by society in the future, the author has to be busy against time. With the passage of time, from primary school to junior high school, high school and university, she has been forced by time to find a job, and she has always obeyed and obeyed the requirements of society, as if this was her life's mission.
The author vividly expressed his helplessness to time and his sorrow to his own destiny with appropriate metaphors. The third sentence of my metaphor: the ranking of this achievement is like a sharp knife with cold light, which is polished. The farther you sit, the closer you get to the danger.
Example analysis: When the author wrote this sentence, her pendulum-like mission was undoubtedly learning. In the competition, if you want to get ahead and prove that you have completed your mission seriously, you must get the post-test ranking, which is what the author calls "performance ranking".
This is very common, but the author compares it to a "sharp knife", and it also shines with cold light. It shows that the ranking has killed all students' dreams. Cold light is not only cold enough to penetrate people's hearts, but also chilling. How difficult it is for them to climb up along the smooth "polished" blade. But when the author climbed to the top of the mountain, she felt that she was not the first in glory, but the top of the mountain was very cold and the air on the top of the mountain was very thin. The huge pressure made her shoulders numb, but she had to resist.
The author skillfully uses metaphors to vividly express the bleak, helpless and desolate mood. General comment: Three figurative sentences, from beautiful and quiet to cruel and sad, completed the natural transition and great transformation in just a few crosses.
The metaphor is very appropriate, connected with reality, and the content is well connected, expressing true feelings and profound thoughts and reflecting practical problems. After appreciating my three figurative sentences with narcissism, I showed them to the teacher with joy. "Do you think you are a famous writer? Such an ordinary sentence, who has the leisure time to slowly interpret! " Therefore, I can only spend more than an hour to finish my appreciation and show it to others. I wonder if you have time to read so many words about common metaphors? .
7. What are the concrete compositions? In recent years, the composition questions of the senior high school entrance examination in Guangzhou and other places are often figurative propositional compositions.
For example, there are traffic lights in my heart (Guangzhou in 2007) and seeing a new bud of hair (Guangzhou in 2008); Innocent rain (Wenzhou, 08), a landscape (Nantong, 08), a landscape left in my heart (Ningbo, 08), growing footprints (Jining, 08), looking up at the blue sky (Neijiang, 08), a warm moment (Yancheng, 08) and a beautiful moment (Yantai, 08). It was a song, the spring breeze caressed my face, that year should be the winter that God gave me, giving up is also a kind of beauty, and the wind and rain are also beautiful, for the bronze chrysanthemum in my heart, for the sunshine in my heart, for the rainbow in my heart, for the autumn leaves falling in my heart.