First, the original "Looking at the Sea"
On the east coast, climb Jieshi Mountain to see the vast sea. The sea is so vast that the islands stand high on the sea. There are many trees and plenty of herbs. The autumn wind is bleak,
Hongbo surges. A trip to the sun and the moon, if unexpected; The Milky Way is brilliant if it comes out from there. I am glad to use this poem to express my inner desire.
To the east, I climbed Jieshi Mountain and overlooked the vast sea. The sea is rippling, the mountain island stands (on the mountain island), the trees are lush and the grass is lush. Autumn wind blows, trees rustle and waves surge. The sun and the moon run as if they were all in the sea. The milky way is brilliant, as if everyone wants to be with the embrace of the sea. I am very lucky. Write a poem to express my ambition.
Second, the appreciation of works
The poem that can best express the poet's broad mind is: the trip to the sun and the moon, if it is out of its territory; The Milky Way is brilliant if it comes out from there. These four sentences can best express the poet's broad mind, which is not directly reflected in the poem, but contained in the description of the scenery. Of the 10 sentences about scenery, the first six sentences are about the magnificent scenery and the sea.
The next four sentences are about real scenes. With the help of strange imagination, the poet showed the spirit of the sea devouring the sun, the moon and the stars. The poet used the combination of reality and reality to express his political ambition in the form of the sea, showing his broad-minded mind and heroism. By describing the magnificent scenery of the sea, Guan Canghai showed the poet's broad-minded mind and ambition to make contributions.
Third, the writing characteristics of this poem.
There is no direct lyric in the whole poem, but the emotion is completely contained in the description of the scenery, describing the real scene at sea, writing the magnificent sea, revealing the poet's praise of the sea and writing the virtual scene, and writing the spirit of the sea devouring the sun, the moon and the stars through strange imagination. It embodies the poet's broad mind and lofty aspirations. Whether it is real or virtual, it is full of passion and achieves the effect of blending scenes.