-write the second chapter of this chapter.
instructor
Some people say that at the end of the article, it is not you who write the article, but the article writes you. Yes, as the saying goes, "baskets are woven to close the door." The quality of the basket is directly determined by the closing quality. The same is true of composition.
Writing the end of the article can not only show its innocence in the ordinary, but also emphasize some artistic beauty.
1. Lenovo (or imagination) ending-Lenovo or imagination is used at the end to achieve concise and far-reaching artistic effects.
Association is a psychological process in which one thing thinks of another. Imagination is a purposeful, positive and creative thinking activity. They play an important role in writing activities. The imagination and association at the end is a poetic wave splashed from the author's heart, which often contains profound meaning and ideological content. For example, Mr. Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey" says, "This night, I had a strange dream that I became a little bee." The ending. In the dream, the author thinks of himself, which is the expression of his strong inner desire. He dreamed that he had become a little bee, and he was willing to contribute "excellent things" to society among the working people. The value of life lies in giving people "excellent things", which is the immortal truth that the author conveys to readers by association. Although there is only one sentence at the end of the work, it contains rich meanings and feelings, which is the effect of association and imagination.
Second, the lyrical ending-lyrical at the end of the article, reasoning with emotion, so that readers can strengthen their beliefs in the cultivation of feelings. The beauty of this ending is to ignite the fire in the reader's heart with the burning emotion of the article. For example, Peng Jingfeng's "Pear Blossom on the Post Road" ends like this-
I looked at this group of energetic Hani girls and white pears, and I couldn't help thinking of a poem: "Pears are everywhere on the post road."
The author quotes Lu You's poem, which makes the meaning of pear a pun, and points out the theme of this article: this blooming pear flower is not only a pear flower in nature; Or synonymous with Hani girl; It is also a symbol of the spirit of Lei Feng handed down from generation to generation.
When Mr. Zhu Ziqing read his father's letter with "I" in his prose "The Back", his father's back appeared again in crystal tears, and he said, "Alas! I don't know when I will see him again ",which pinned my son's deep thoughts on his father, aroused readers' sympathy, respect and praise for this kind and simple father who deeply loved his son, and deeply touched readers with touching affection.
Third, create an artistic ending-create an artistic conception through description and arouse readers' * * *.
The article pays attention to expressing profound thoughts and touching feelings through vivid pictures, so that the story inside is integrated with the outside world, and the deep meaning is intertwined with the pictures, thus moving the readers, infecting them and causing rich associations. In the article, the external things are objective things, and the internal information is the author's thoughts and feelings. Artistic conception is the artistic realm and picture formed by the integration of the two. Take "spring" as an example-
"Spring is like a newborn doll. It's new from head to toe and still growing.
Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.
Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward. "
A set of parallelism and three metaphors depict the "new", "beautiful" and "strong" of spring; Although there is no word "love", the author's love and praise for spring is beyond words; Although we don't focus on the description of specific scenery, the realm has come out. Doll, Little Girl and Youth point out the growing process of spring. Lead us forward expresses the author's strong feelings for a better future. In the author's description of spring, meaning and context are coordinated and unified.
Similarly, Mo Bosang's description of Ziying at the end of My Uncle Yule is not only a description of the real scenery, but also a foil to the disappointment and frustration of the characters. It can be said that meaning comes with context, and context begins with meaning.
Fourth, the O'Henry-style ending-both reasonable and unexpected, has a "sharp turn" artistic ending.
Zou Shihua's novel "A Word of Heroes" tells a story: a girl with natural beauty stepped forward when a gangster robbed a bank and was cut several times to save the state property. When leaders, colleagues and reporters visited the hospital and waited for her earth-shattering words, the first thing the girl said when she woke up was to ask for a mirror. The article finally wrote-
The hero struggled to lift the mirror and took a picture of his face for a while.
"Don't hurt your face ..." The hero added, and then smiled sweetly.
The two leaders looked at each other, and the pen in the hand of the Evening News reporter stopped in the air. Only the camera truly recorded the hero's smile.
The end of such a "sharp turn" was unexpected-unexpected to someone in the place; It also makes sense-a girl with a beautiful heart also loves beauty on the outside.
Yuan Mei, a Qing Dynasty man, once said, "Righteousness is rightness, poetic and melodious." The "sharp turn" at the end is one of Wen Qu's changeable techniques, which can make the plot of the article ups and downs and produce unforgettable charm.
There is no fixed pattern at the end of the article, but innovation and difference are the same. No matter which ending method you use, you should pay attention to change and innovation.
Famous articles and sentences
Story: There are two roommates. The one by the window tells the other about the beautiful and moving scene outside the window every day. The one who is not by the window is very upset: why shouldn't he get this chance? One night, the man by the window got worse. The other person should have rung the bell, but he didn't do it for the window seat. The next day, the medical staff quietly carried away the body ...)
As soon as the doctor left, the patient struggled painfully, propped up on one elbow, panting in his mouth ... he stuck his head out of the window.
All he saw was a pile of bare walls.
-Windows in tigert.
Storyline: Under the leadership of a general, a Red Army unit is in sturm und drang. As can be seen from the gale report, Xiao B can't calm down and his grades can't go up; Xiao c is steady and his grades are good.
Little b's father often lets him learn from little c, but little b looks down on little c instead.
Once, the teacher told everyone that the composition newspaper was soliciting contributions, so both of them contributed.
One morning, in the classroom.
"Little B, your article has been published." A classmate shouted. "Really? Show me. " Xiao B, who is competing with his classmates, heard the sound and ran over. He grabbed the newspaper and looked at it. Sure enough, his article was printed. He threw the newspaper to that classmate. "Haha, our composition has been published." Small b barking, standing in front of small c, "? ……"
"Little C, there is your article on it, too." Shouted the classmate with the newspaper. "What?" Small b a surprised, grabbed the newspaper stare big eyes, good! Xiao B paused and said to his classmates, "When the manuscript fee comes, it's my treat and I'll buy you something delicious. What about you? " He asked Xiao C, and Xiao C said, "I want to buy some books for everyone!" " ""good! " The students cheered, but little B was a little jealous.
"Now, let the monitor read their works, and we will appreciate them." A classmate suggested. Little B is proud again: "Let you see our level." But he didn't say it out loud
The monitor read the newspaper carefully and smiled. Everyone is puzzled. Looking around, it turns out that Xiao C's article was published in the column of composition garden, while Xiao B's article was published in the column of article hospital.
[Comment] This essay, lively and cleverly arranged, highlights the expression and personality of Xiao B, just as Xiao B is proud and full of pride. The article writes: "Xiao C's article is published in the column of the composition garden, but Xiao B's article is in the column of the article institute." This is the end of typical O'Henry style. Unexpectedly, it is reasonable to make people laugh.
Yesterday reappeared.
Shao lijing
"When I was young, I liked listening to music …" Whenever I heard this song, it would remind me of yesterday.
Looking back on the good old days and feeling yesterday, how unforgettable she is! Maybe yesterday brought you bitterness and boredom, but it doesn't matter. Think about tomorrow, a brand-new day, and you will have golden hope and surging passion.
There is a beautiful memory hidden in everyone's heart. Perhaps it is that memory that left a deep impression on you. You might want this to happen again?
I have the same wish.
I yearn for the sea, and an unusual experience of watching the sea as a child gave me indelible feelings for the sea. I often wander in the vast sea, relishing its poetry and painting.
My father knew what I was thinking, and he took my mother and me to the seaside and rented a house by the sea. My parents went their separate ways, and I stared at them alone, as if yesterday was just around the corner, and I felt a kind of intimacy that I had never felt before.
As night falls, a bright moon quietly climbs into the sky, and the bright silver light shines on the sea, sparkling, adding a bit of mystery to the sea. I can clearly see every movement of the sea, and I can even hear its heartbeat. It's very cold at night by the sea, so my mother helps me put on a blanket. I snuggled up in my mother's arms and listened to the sound of the waves. The sea seems to be telling countless stories. I have a desire to know him, but my father said, it's too late today, so let's get early tomorrow. As long as you get up early, you can still see the sunrise at sea.
I endured a night of missing and urged my father to watch the sunrise early in the morning. Climb a mountain by the sea, climb to the top of a high mountain, overlook the sea, enjoy the beauty of the sea and enjoy the sea breeze blowing head on. That smell can only be expressed in one word-cool.
Suddenly, rosy clouds appeared in the sky. The sun stood up shyly like a girl after a bath. With the charm of youth, the sea is covered with a dazzling gauze, which adds infinite charm. ...
Good times are always short-lived. Yesterday reappeared and gave me good memories.
[Opinion] Reproduce yesterday's beautiful yearning and unforgettable experience. The author's pen is full of emotion. At the end of just 20 words, I used the word "beauty" twice to convey my feelings to readers, which was lyrical and received good artistic effects.
Writing and practice
Classroom composition
1. Write a composition on the topic of "accident" and learn to use O 'Henry's brushwork.
2. Write an article with the title "Goodbye, Alma Mater", which can be a narrative, a character or a landscape, and learn to use one of the other three ending methods.
Practice writing after class
Choose any narrative in the column of "Stones from Other Mountains" in this book and change its ending to an imaginative, artistic or lyrical ending.