When writing a poem with a title, you should combine it with your own personal experience! 450 words, brothers and sisters, please help!

Where are the paths of immortality that may be connected?

The moon melts in the pear blossom courtyard, and there is a gentle breeze in the catkin pond. People under the forest and by the waterside provide guidance, and there is a path that may lead to the connection of immortality.

The "Implication" written by Yan Shu of the Song Dynasty gave me the feeling that it was not the poet's original intention. Silly, when I first saw it, I thought it was someone like Li Qingzhao, but after reading many poems and books, it backfired. Man's masterpiece. Somehow, I was particularly impressed by the last two sentences. Being a bit forgetful, I actually recited them after reading them once, and I have never forgotten them.

It was also the second day of junior high school. After that, the high school entrance examination looked at everyone with its sharp eyes. It was gradually approaching us, and what I was most worried about was sports. During the summer vacation, I had to learn breaststroke to cope with the exam. However, I simply just " "Landlubber", can't swim at all, and is even a little afraid of water. The results of the first day's study can be imagined. I can only use the word "miserable failure" to describe it. It refers not only to the study, but also to the upcoming exam.

The next morning, I secretly encouraged myself on the road. Suddenly, I remembered that poem. So, I told myself that reciting this poem silently in my heart might make me less afraid of water. Smaller. However, the cold water almost made me forget other thoughts. It was not until the fourth day that I remembered this poem, the "order" I gave myself. However, I still violated it. I just remembered It, but I didn't recite it silently. "Remembering" and "reciting silently" cannot be equated. Because I suddenly realized how naive and ridiculous I was. How could a poem that I couldn't understand the poet's true intention give me spiritual comfort?

When I got home, the first thing I did was to turn on my computer and look up the meaning of that poem. The result was quite different from what I thought: "The people under the forest and the waterside guide you, and there are paths to immortality that may connect you." It is written clearly that the poet lost his way by the forest and relied on a person to point out the way. It is implicitly written that the poet had some thoughts in his heart and hoped to be freed from them and reach a state of emptiness without desires or pursuits. "No desires and no pursuits" We are really too far away. Even if the "thoughts" in my heart - swimming are relieved, I can still think about other troubles. Only then did I realize that troubles are caused by people. We should not complain about the goddess of fate, but should Reflect on yourself. Tao Yuanming did not give up for five buckets of rice, but he lived a life of "doing whatever he wished". He was a typical person who reached the realm of emptiness. Why can't we learn from him? Even if we never succeed, But we have worked hard, so there is no need to have regrets.

"Immortal fate" is just fate with immortals. I can't even remember which gods are popular among Chinese people, so how can we talk about "immortal fate"? ?How can the "immortal fate" be "connected"? I feel that I am a bit ridiculous. Therefore, I have to rely on my own strength for swimming. Just wait, I will work hard! Just treat it as a desire-free thing Let's work hard to achieve the enlightened realm!

This essay was written by myself, but the title is "Where are the connections between immortals?" If I use poetry, it should be "There is a road between immortals and there may be connections." 》The so-called "road" is your own efforts,

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