In narrative style, this paper is original. The title "Visiting Friends in the Mountains" gives people the impression that the author is going to visit friends in the mountains, but after reading the third paragraph of the article, readers will suddenly realize that the original author is going to ancient bridges, Woods, mountain springs, streams ... some friends in nature. The whole story is described in this way, which makes the reader enter the picture and the author's state of mind, as if these are all natural. It also belongs to each of our readers, so it feels more cordial. According to the needs of expression, the author also appropriately changed the narrative person. For the "friends" in the mountains, the author sometimes uses the third person to describe them, and sometimes has strong feelings, and uses the second person to address them, which makes the feelings more fully expressed.
This article is imaginative, novel, childlike and romantic. For example, "I close my eyes and I really become a tree." My feet grew roots, and I went deep into the soil and rock strata, breathing the vitality in the depths of the strata. My hair grows into a crown, my hands become branches, my thoughts become tree juice, which rotates and flows in the annual rings, and finally grows tree seeds, which are carried by birds to distant mountains and waters. " The high forehead is engraved with the wisdom of metaphysics, and the deep canyon is filled with clear Zen. Looking up at you, I think of hermits and monks of all ages. You are also a silent Zen master, and you wrote it with a scroll of heavenly books? "In my imagination, the cliff seems to have become a wise man. Therefore, imagination makes the scenery lifelike, the aura flying, and the writing vivid, like a flowing stream, stirring up beautiful waves from time to time. After reading this article, you will never feel dull and trite. You will always be moved by the author's innocence and infected by the passion flowing between the lines. Really, if you feel the author's heart with your heart, through