There are many kinds of sentence patterns in Chinese, but the whole sentence is the most popular among readers. What is the whole sentence? The whole sentence is relative to any sentence, that is, a group of sentences with the same structure and roughly equal words. It is embodied in sentences that use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, duality, repetition, truthfulness and circulation. Its advantages are the harmonious beauty of phonology, the neat beauty of rhythm form, richer content and deeper meaning. When using this form, we should be careful not to pursue the form deliberately, but to focus on the profound meaning of the content. For example:
2 bees pick flowers to make honey; Silkworms eat mulberry and spin silk; Cows eat grass and milk. As the spirit of all things, people who have learned scientific knowledge should not just repeat the wisdom of their predecessors, but should create something. If an article only uses parallelism rhetoric, it will inevitably appear dull and not profound enough. Because this paragraph lists two unquestionable common sense in real life first, it makes the latter view more acceptable. In the composition of the examination room, using this method to start or end often has unexpected effects)
(3) Why don't you like the beginning? Unfortunately, I have never seen a towering mountain; I still regret not seeing the majestic mountains and the vastness of the sea; I still regret not seeing the vastness of the sea and the vastness of the desert; It's a pity to see only the vastness of the desert and not the mystery of the forest. There are endless scenery in the world, and I have a feeling of youth. (I always lead out the full text with questions, and then answer the reason "I like to start" with parallelism and real rhetoric. The language situation is smooth and progressive, which lays a solid foundation for the sentence "I have a feeling of youth"
In the examination room composition, if you can concentrate on pen and ink and write a beginning or an end in the form of a whole sentence, it will definitely light up the "literary talent" of the whole article, so it is not difficult to get the highest score of development level.
Second, mosaic famous sentences
Proper quotation of famous sayings and aphorisms can enrich the language and enhance the expression effect of the article. The article can't be full of words, but if you can quote some wise and incisive epigrams with rich ideological connotation, it will often add a lot of color to the article. For example:
I will choose to give up and find a more suitable goal. Since I can't find a "prosperous land of flowers and willows, a gentle and rich country", why not find a pure land where there is moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream? Since we can't appreciate the beautiful scenery of "the bright moon is born in the tide", why not cook a pot of chrysanthemum wine and invite the sparse stars to drink together?
I like Li Qingzhao, who is full of heroic spirit in grace. Although "people are thinner than yellow flowers", she also sang Xiang Yu who rejected Jiangdong. I am Shi, with extraordinary talent, but calm in the face of shock. Although he yearns for the great cause of "heroic spirit and heroic hair", he is permeated with the natural harmony of "light makeup and heavy makeup"; I like Lu Xun, who hates evil and is soft-hearted. Although it is "pointing fingers", there is also deep affection of "bowing your head and being a willing ox".
(3) Choosing fraternity means choosing to cherish feelings. All the way through life, I care about everything. Affection, friendship and love make life full of emotion and beauty. "The thread in the hands of a loving mother makes clothes for her wayward son" is the love of the family; "However, although China holds our friendship, heaven is still our neighbor" is the concern of friendship; "When * * * is cutting candles at the west window, but talking about the rain in the evening" is the yearning of love. Every life can't go out of the range of emotions. It is those emotions that make people live well, work hard and cherish every minute. Cherish emotions and make life more touching and unforgettable.
The above three fragments selected from the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination all took the famous ancient poems and sentences, which achieved twice the result with half the effort in expression, and also showed their own cultural heritage to the marking teacher. If the language from the author's pen is compared to a crown, then the appropriate epigram is like a pearl embedded in the crown. Candidates who have accumulated rich ancient poems and famous sentences in their chests above the examination room should not use this to display their talents!
Third, turn virtual into real.
The purpose of turning emptiness into reality is to make abstract and implicit concept words concrete, visual, knowable and influential. For example:
What is happiness? Happiness is the breeze blowing in the early summer morning when you open the window. It is your peace of mind when you sit alone listening to music, and your gratitude when you take over the work from your mother. Happiness is always by your side.
(2) Friendship is a life-long savings that benefits a lot. This savings is to give all help in a difficult situation, to give severe advice on the wrong road, to help you sincerely when you fall, and to wipe away your tears when you are in pain.
3 chic is a beautiful scenery that persists in everyone's heart. The connotation of chic is all-encompassing. "Picking chrysanthemums under the hedge" is a pure chic, "It is better to walk" is a joyful chic, and "pointing out the mountains and inspiring words" is a heroic chic. Jewelry and heavy makeup are not chic; Blind conformity, chasing fashion is not chic; Nonsense, glib, not chic; Boasting and comparing with each other is not chic at all.
"Happiness", "friendship" and "chic" in the above paragraphs are abstract nouns. If you simply explain the concept, it is difficult for readers to resonate. By interpreting specific events in life, the author can easily arouse readers' perceptual experience and make people have rich associations. Writing time, ideals, beliefs, self-esteem and self-improvement in this way ... can't they all be vivid and vivid, and the image is touching?
Fourth, be skillful in application.
China has a long history and left many famous sayings. Poems and songs, movies, songs and advertisements, many sentences are familiar. The transformation and application of famous sentences and new wine in old bottles will often achieve the ideal effect of turning decay into magic if they can be easily used in composition and embedded in their own articles.
(1) Some students satirized some abnormal phenomena today and changed the first sentence of My Humble Room Inscription to "If your score is not high, you have the right to have sex; Not much, money is spiritual. "
(2) A student preparing for the college entrance examination has to do 1 1.35kg paper in one semester, so he can only think about surfing with a floppy disk in class.
(3) "Cloned sheep, no father, no mother. Famous people publish books, which is a mess. Tell everyone a secret: so-and-so actually cloned his parents' signatures! "Little radio" announced loudly. "
(4) A true warrior dares to face horrible scores and severe criticism.
⑤ Blood can flow and head can be broken. Never mess up your hair.
The above sentences reveal a trace of "rebellion" in humor, but they are full of youthful atmosphere of campus life. Between Zhuang and he, the personality is vividly displayed, which makes people laugh. If you can break the rigid and boring language routine in the exam and write the article brilliantly with original words, you will naturally be well received.
⑥ Open the mooncake box and see that there is a mooncake box with seven stars and a moon inside. There is a single moon cake surrounded by seven bottles of wine. It is really "the manufacturer's intention is not cake, but wine", and the intention is good. -"Chinese Teaching in Middle Schools" 1998.2 (Ouyang Xiu's famous sentence "The meaning of drunkenness is not in wine" exposes the manufacturers' good intentions, satirizes humor and is easily accepted)
⑦ Can Han Han's "lateral breakthrough" and its phased achievements be regarded as a personal interpretation of "innovation"? -Jiangsu Education Research, 200 1.4 (the word "lateral breakthrough" was originally used in football matches, and here "breakthrough" belongs to its common meaning, which appropriately wrote the "alternative" way of Han Han's success)
Fifth, change the part of speech.
It is also an important measure to enhance the expressive force of language by adapting to the characteristics of context and obtaining vividness and profundity with the help of temporary changes in parts of speech. For example:
Rain has a kind of magic: it can diffuse into a mood, penetrate into an atmosphere, engrave into a memory, and of course, sometimes it can be poured into a disaster.
(2) Moonlight is hazy in water vapor.
③ "Seven-color Flower", a poetic kindergarten name, is also very feminine.
The words added in (1) belong to intransitive verbs and cannot take objects. Here, the author temporarily regards them as transitive verbs, and adds objects after them respectively, which vividly highlights the magic of "rain". (2) Once the adjective "hazy" is verbalized, it adds a lively interest, which makes people feel that moonlight is like a mixture of water vapor and is full of air. If it is replaced by the normal narrative of "moonlight appears hazy in this water vapor", it will make people feel dull and boring. ③ Genus nouns become adjectives. The word "female" has changed from referential meaning to qualitative meaning, expressing rich connotations: tenderness, beauty, exquisiteness, delicacy and elegance.
Belinsky believes that no matter how good the content of the article is, if there is no literary talent, "just like a woman with an ugly face but a great heart, you can admire her, but you can't like her." What's more, due to the limitation of space, the composition in the examination room should be carefully packaged in the "coat"-language, instead of putting all your eggs in one basket on the content that is not easy to create "bright spots".