How to write a good ending of Chinese composition
First, the topic at the end of the article
This is a common way of ending, that is, kickback at the end of the article, which makes the topic more distinct and prominent. For example, at the end of this example, the topic of "return" is cleverly rebate.
In fact, many texts we have studied end like this. For example, at the end of the first volume of the sixth grade Chinese textbook "The Only Audience": "Later, playing the violin became a hobby that I couldn't give up, and I was able to play many tunes skillfully. At various literary parties, I have the opportunity to play violin music in front of hundreds of audiences. At that time, I always can't help but think of the deaf old man, my only audience in the morning ... "
Second, the photo should be
"Starting, inheriting, turning and combining" is the basic law of writing. At the end of the composition, the word "harmony" is embodied. Therefore, it is not enough to just click on the topic, but also to echo the details of the beginning and the text, so that the article as a whole is round and coordinated. For example, at the end of this song "Return": "Looking at their distant backs, I ran happily into the rain. Listen carefully, the sound of rain seems like a song, which makes people feel warm. This is a song of love, a song of return. In the beautiful song, I spread my arms and spun out a graceful dance ... "Just like the second paragraph," It was cloudy as night, and soon a shower came down quickly ". The same rainy day, different mood, both a line runs through and gradually deepens, showing his originality in writing.
At the same time, this is also in harmony with the psychological description of the fourth natural paragraph, which strongly highlights the theme of "reward"
Third, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi.
At the end of many excellent works, in addition to kickbacks and taking care of the previous articles, they also played a pawn role. What does Zhang Xianzhi mean by "ambition"? In fact, it is the author's expression of "emotion, reason and meaning". Generally, it involves the expression of "people, things, scenery and things" from the beginning. Only by understanding the expression of "people, things, scenery and things" can the author express "emotion, reason and meaning" completely and clearly. In other words, "emotion, reason and meaning" can be seen at the beginning, the text can be seen, and the end is invisible. Zhang Xianzhi's death is to sublimate the theme, shape the literary soul and make the finishing point. The article "Return" is quite special-the title is the theme, so the title at the end of the article will show the ambition of the pawn.
There are also many excellent examples about Zhang Xianzhi in our Chinese books. For example, at the end of "Learn to See a Doctor" written by Bi Shumin, a famous female writer, it clearly expresses the author's good intention to let his son see a doctor himself: I hope his son will be independent as soon as possible. Finally, she wrote: "son, don't complain about my indifference when you are sick." One day, you will leave me and face life independently. What I can help you in advance is to dictate a road map to you. It may not be so accurate, but it is better than nothing. "
Fourth, short words have long meanings.
No matter what the ending is, it should be concise and thought-provoking, and strive to give readers a wonderful enjoyment of lingering sound. If you make a long speech, it will dilute the text, usurp the host's role, and give readers the feeling of "gilding the lily", and the appeal of the article will be greatly weakened. The following are the endings of two articles familiar to sixth-grade students, hoping to give you some inspiration.
The end of "mahogany"-now, the mahogany saplings in front of the window have grown to the height of the roof, so elegant and comfortable, showing great vitality. People who plant trees will not come again, and the redwoods will not wither.
The end of light-it's been a long time. In the bright light in front of Tiananmen Square, I thought of my dear comrades.
Of course, there are more than four ways to write the end of the article. Here, it is only for students facing the primary school graduation exam.
As the saying goes, "Knitting clothes and trousers is at the beginning, and knitting baskets is at the end." A good article should have both a fascinating beginning and a fascinating ending. Especially the composition in the examination room, because the ending is directly related to whether the theme of the article is clear, profound and novel, so it is highly valued by the marking teacher. The end of the article is directly related to the composition score.
Extended reading:
How to write a good beginning of a composition
Principles to be followed at the beginning:
1, centripetal At the beginning, we must closely follow the main content and central idea of the full text in order to highlight the center.
2. simple. Language should be concise, and it is best to come straight to the point.
Frequently asked questions at the beginning:
1, beating around the bush, too far from the point. I always beat around the bush when I put pen to paper. Some people compare it to a big-headed doll.
2, the same format is fixed. It was just a few words at first.
3, the pursuit of tricks is self-defeating. It is well written, and the expression of thoughts and feelings is unclear, unclear and untrue.
The beginning of a general composition:
1, dot. Cut to the chase, don't beat around the bush, the first sentence is directed at the title of the article.
Novices had better use this method. For example, at the beginning of Kingfisher, "Kingfisher likes to stop on a reed by the water." Another example is Edison.
2. Explain. Explain the "four elements" of time, place, people and events at the beginning, such as the beginning of "Taking Death as Home": "193 1 year (time) in late autumn, Comrade Wang Ruofei was unfortunately arrested in Baotou (place) (event)"
3. descriptive. Or describe people, animals, buildings or the surrounding environment. Give a clear impression. For example, the beginning of Swallow: "A suit of black feathers, smooth and beautiful, a pair of handsome and light ..."
Step 4 ask questions. Ask questions at the beginning, or attract readers' attention, or stimulate readers to think, or make suspense fascinating. For example, the beginning of Underwater World: "Do you know what the depths of the sea are like?"
5. quote. Start or quote famous aphorisms to point out the center; Or quote the language of the character to highlight the character; Or quote poems to arouse readers' singing; Or quote proverbs, explain things, and so on. For example, "Guilin Landscape" begins: "People say that Guilin landscape is the best in the world."
6. Lyric style. Speak your mind from the beginning and be emotional. For example, "Farewell to China I Love" begins: "Farewell to China I love and China I love wholeheartedly!" Patriotism and affection came out at once.
7, the total starting type. Always get the full text at the beginning. For example, The Great Friendship begins: "Marx and Engels are good friends. They * * * have research knowledge, * * * have ... "
8. Lenovo. The beginning of the article is from far to near, or from one thing to another, and then from other things to what to write, thus setting off what to write. For example, "Spring Silkworm" begins with the association from spring to sericulture, from sericulture to foster mother, and then recalls the scene of raising silkworm by foster mother.
9. Flashback. Start with the result of the matter, be fascinating, and then go back and describe the reason and process of the matter. For example, Memories of Sixteen Years ago begins: "April 18th, 1927, I will never forget that day. It was my father's disaster, and it has been sixteen years now. "
The ancients said, "The beauty of an article lies in the sentence." A precise ending will make the whole article shine. The ending method is colorful, and there is no fixed pattern. The key is to be good at choosing an appropriate and clever ending according to the needs of the content of the article.