A good composition should start with simplicity, novelty and beauty.
Jane means to be concise at the beginning and not to repeat it. For example:
Everyone has a home, some are happy, some are happy and warm, some are United and harmonious, and some are indifferent and lonely. Similarly, I have a home, but my home is different from other homes. My family pays attention to democracy and loves science. I have such a home.
What could have been written clearly in one sentence, but there are so many long-winded narratives in front of it, which makes the beginning seem very slow. Can be modified as follows:
If you want to ask me what kind of home I have, I can answer you in one sentence. I have a family that values democracy and loves science.
Cut all the nonsense, be straightforward and clean.
The so-called new is that the beginning is unconventional, novel and unique. For example:
I am a bird, a bird without wings. I am fluttering in the wind and rain, but I don't want to lose my way.
A voice calls from the bottom of my heart: I want to fly, I want to fly high ...-inscription.
I am a middle school student, running around in the sea of questions all day. I want to fly high
The author wrote down his heartfelt wishes in the form of "inscription". "Fly high", be the master of learning, and find the lost personality from the overwhelming homework. Such a beginning is striking.
The so-called beauty is that the beginning can give people a sense of beauty.
First of all, we can use images to describe, for example:
1. Through the window, I saw the Sophora japonica blooming again. Still so white, crystal clear and fragrant. bud of Chinese scholar tree
Finally, under the dim light of the road, the bloated body of the 5 1 bus appeared. People who waited for more than an hour at night began to get active. Crowd car
Secondly, appropriate rhetoric can be used to quote poems. For example:
1. Motherly love has a long history like a long river and is as fresh and sweet as spring water. I am also the lucky one bathed in the sunshine of maternal love. Endless love
2. "Nothing to do, it seems that I have met Yan." Every time I think of this poem, I can't help but think of the face of the nursery, the flowing nursery and the money in my ear. advisor
In short, as long as the content is fresh, the form is novel and the language is bright, such a beginning will give people a sense of beauty.
There are many ways to start an ordinary article, as follows:
First, cut to the chase and get to the point.
Don't beat around the bush from the beginning and go straight to the point. In Tolstoy's words, it is "running to the goal from the beginning." Narrative writing based on people can directly explain the characters and themes through the description of portraits, dialogues and actions. Narrative narrative can point out the time, place and related background of the event from the beginning. For example:
1. The sky is dark and the sky is high and the clouds are light. Summer is coming ... Summer.
Several crosses show the characteristics of summer incisively and vividly, go straight to the theme and be fascinating.
2. Outside the window, the rain hits the banana; Within the curtain, Yi Deng is like a bean. Grab a cup of tea, hold a good book, and keep a quiet night alone. Tea on a rainy night
Only two sentences were used at the beginning, which was concise and endless.
Her name is Wang Jingjing, and I am the monitor of Grade Two. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable. With such a good monitor
Father picked up the hoe and drew a complete circle. "Bang", a clod was broken.
"Dad, let me come back and help you!" I finally threw up. The beautiful arc is only half drawn, and the hoe flies forward according to Newton's second law of motion. paternal love
5. Teacher Tang is ill.
At the end of the party, the students all sat in their seats sadly. The classroom is as silent as stagnant water.
Second, write landscapes and render the atmosphere.
At first, people wrote scenes and rendered the atmosphere to set off the characters and unfold the story. For example:
6. The blooming season is full of flowers, but I have no intention to watch them, because at this time I lost my old friend-Qiang. Classmates and friends
7. The morning sun came out and the lake clothed it; The new moon has come up, with the stars as companions; Spring is warm in bloom, and green leaves set it off; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for them ... Everything in the world tells us the story of love. Forever love
8. The summer night is deep. Occasionally, frogs in the water and cicadas in the trees come, and the breeze blows, bringing coolness. I meditated and couldn't sleep for a long time. I just read a senior one. By chance, my first novel was published in the newspaper. I was so happy that I even forgot everything. Actually, I was carried away by time. It was not until tonight that I realized that I seemed to be missing something. Love, in the invisible
Third, lyrical discussion, determine the tone.
Use a few short comments and affectionate pen and ink to start the article, or infect the reader, or point out the main idea and lead to the following. For example:
9. Turning over a heavy page of history, it seems that I heard the earth-shattering cry of young students in Beijing more than 80 years ago, as if the burning flame of Zhao Jialou was in front of me. Forever May 4th Banner
The author introduced us to the May 4th Movement with affectionate style, and let us meditate in the long river of history.
10. Whenever night falls, the clouds in the western sky will touch the wings of my heart and lead my confused thoughts to that vast and distant place to find my father. ...
Dad, can you see me? You are alone, floating in heaven. Can you take care of yourself? My sister and brother are fine now, but my mother is hard at home. "Dad, I tell you ..."
The author's true feelings bring readers into the author's emotional world and create a sad atmosphere for the article. Let readers follow the author's ideas to taste the hardships of the mother after losing her father, the strength of the mother, the loneliness of the mother and the sincere feelings that make people cry.
1 1. The summer vacation is finally over. Like a long-awaited bird, I rushed out of the "birdcage" and flew to my hometown. Go to grandma's house to relax your muscles and get some fresh air.
I decided to learn roller skating this summer vacation. I can do it.
12. Grandpa is my favorite relative. I spent my childhood with my grandfather. Grandpa took my hand and taught me to walk. It was grandpa who made me understand a lot of truth since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood growth. I love grandpa.
Fourth, set up suspense and lead to the following.
Setting suspense is a way to start, deliberately leaving a mystery and stimulating readers' psychological expectations. Setting suspense at the beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's thinking and produce fascinating results. For example:
13. I think I will never forget the warm smile on that rainy day. ...
Rain, smile
That rain, that day, where is the particularity of that smile, has a strong attraction and appeal.
14. The wall clock walked leisurely and rhythmically. "Tick-tock, tick-tock ..." It's almost 4 o'clock. Why hasn't mom come back yet? worry
What is my tomorrow like? I often ask myself this question when I am running around in my life at two o'clock and one line, when I am struggling in the boundless ocean of problems. Facing tomorrow
16. At the beginning of Lu Xun's "Blessing", he wrote that Sister Xianglin died in the blessing of people in Luzhen, which naturally aroused people's concern about the fate of Sister Xianglin and stimulated readers' interest in reading novels.
V quoting poems and highlighting the center
Starting with poetic quips and famous sayings can not only stimulate readers' imagination and interest, but also improve the taste of the article; It can not only reveal the main content, but also highlight people and things.
17. "Man, his greatest enemy is himself. As long as you believe you can do it, you are the winner. " This is my favorite sentence. Every time I see it and the report card that is no longer clear before bed, the dreamlike past comes to my eyes. pass
18. "Mom, you are a lotus leaf and I am a red lotus. The raindrops in my heart are coming. Who is the shadow of my sky except you? " Every time I see Ms. Bing Xin eulogizing her mother's words, I can't help but think of my little loving mother, who bears the burden of family life alone. Endless maternal love
Sixth, use rhetoric to enhance literary talent.
The ancients said, "Words without words are not far away." It can be seen that literary talent plays an important role in the article, and the clever use of rhetoric and literary talent is undoubtedly very attractive. For example:
19. Less childish, more mature; Less impetuous, more stable; Less attachment, more strength-junior boys are quite eye-catching. Junior three boy
The author used three parallelism sentences in one breath, which are catchy and powerful to read. Contrast is used in parallelism, the language is concise, the praise and criticism are clear, and it is rich in literary talent. Another example.
20. Time is a piece of paper, the goal is a pen and success is a word. When we add up countless successes, life becomes a dazzling article. Time flies. So be sure to pick up the target pen and practice writing. Life is like practicing calligraphy. Life is like writing.
The use of metaphor makes the article easy to understand, simple and vivid, novel and unique.
Seven, clever use of inscriptions, revealing the true meaning
Setting a meaningful inscription can often get unexpected results. For example:
2 1. My mother once said to me, "People living in this world are destined to catch up with the sun. However, while you are chasing the sun, the night is also chasing you. If you catch up with the sun, its heat will melt you; You are caught by night, and its darkness will engulf you. If you learn to stay between the sun and the night, you will learn to grow. " Facing the sea, spring blossoms.
This inscription containing philosophy firmly clasps the reader's heartstrings, and then the author explains the meaning of philosophy with two life pictures that condense the meaning of life, so that readers can understand the true meaning of life in poems and paintings.
Eight, break the boundaries, time and space dislocation
Deliberately break the boundaries between time and space, or look back at history, or look forward to the future, or east and west, north and south, or up and down, and express real life in an almost absurd way to attract readers' attention. For example:
22. "I'm a shoo-in today." A distant voice traveled through 2200 years of time and space and fell from the sky.
-This is voluntary service. Reflections on Reading Self-recommendation
Voice, suddenly brought the reader's thoughts into the depths of history, naturally led to the theme of the article.
23. What is beauty?
With this eternal question, I rode the horse of time on the avenue of space. What is beauty?
Then the author writes that beauty was discovered in Yue State in the Spring and Autumn Period, Hangzhou in the Southern Song Dynasty, and Paris in France in the15th century, and draws the conclusion that as long as we are good at discovering, enjoying and being brave in creating, beauty will surely come to us. Give people a refreshing feeling.
No matter which way you start, as long as you can fully display your personality and talent, effectively attract readers' attention, and naturally lead out your own words, you can all be regarded as the "Phoenix Head". Of course, I believe there is a better way to "all roads lead to Rome". The above is for reference only, if it has the effect of attracting jade, it should be "lucky company"!
Supplement:
come straight to the point
"Straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to the writing method of directly cutting into the subject when writing an article. Candidates should express their views at the beginning. This method is widely used in writing all kinds of articles, accounting for a large proportion. Its expression angle can be direct narration at the beginning or direct pointing; You can not only reveal the main idea at the beginning, but also get to the point. This kind of writing is crisp and neat, and it is the first choice at the beginning of the composition in the examination room.
Manufacturing conflict
Ceng Laoshi introduced that the composition genre of the senior high school entrance examination is mainly narrative. When writing, candidates should be good at creating contradictions at the beginning of the article and unfolding stories in contradictions in order to be fascinating. When writing, if candidates jump out of the conventional "chronological" thinking and create conflicts, they can quickly grasp the reader's heart and attract the marking teacher to read on. In addition, showing the contradictory focus of the event to readers at the beginning of the article is conducive to enhancing the prevarication and readability of the article.
Environmental description can not only render the atmosphere, but also contrast the characters and promote the development of the story. Writing a scene and plot description at the beginning of the article can provide the background for the story, bring the reader to a specific story atmosphere and play a fascinating role.
Make good use of famous sayings
Quoting some aphorisms, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning of the article can attract readers and highlight the center. This way of opening is also an easy way for candidates to master and use. Most candidates will remember several ancient poems, aphorisms or famous sayings. If the beginning of famous aphorisms is properly used, it can often enhance the momentum of the article, but candidates should try their best to be accurate when quoting them to avoid intellectual errors.
Without deviating from the theme, candidates can also quote some common couplets at the beginning of the article, and even quote the familiar lyrics in the song, thus leading to the following narrative lyric. Such a beginning is not only easy to arouse readers' singing, but also can increase literary talent, killing two birds with one stone.