Changed to five words:
To the west of Jia Ting of the mountain temple, the level of the clouds is low.
In several places, orioles are fighting over trees, and swallows are pecking at the mud.
The flowers are becoming more attractive, and the grass can even cover the hooves of horses.
The east side of the lake is not enough, with green shade and white sand embankments.
After changing three or four sentences, it becomes: Orioles are fighting for trees in several places, and swallows are pecking at the mud. The removal of early, warm, new and spring makes the poem bland and lacks the breath of spring.