I want to rewrite the ending of One Mountain in Gong Yu, instead of using the original.

I want to rewrite the ending of One Mountain in Gong Yu, instead of using the original. What ending do you want? The following endings are for your reference:

1, originally, the gods helped Gong Yu move mountains.

2. Without the help of the gods, several generations of Gong Yu family were exhausted, and dozens of generations worked hard and finally moved the mountain.

Without the help of God, Gong Yu's family tried to move mountains. After Gong Yu's death, later generations gradually lost their enthusiasm, and the matter of moving mountains went away.

Without the help of God, Gong Yu's family tried to move mountains. After Gong Yu's death, later generations continued to move mountains. All of them died young because of overwork in moving mountains. Finally, their family fell into poverty, and the last person died in the process of moving mountains.

5. If you apply the dog blood stories such as fantasy in online novels, you will find something when you move mountains and fall into the sea, and the great magical powers of Yu Gong and others will also move mountains.

Hope to adopt, thank you.

Rewrite Taihang Mountain and Wuwang Mountain, which cover an area of 700 miles and are extremely tall. Just south of Jizhou, on the north bank of the Yellow River.

An old man named Gong Yu is 90 years old, and God is on his back. Often blocked by the mountains in the north, the entrance and exit are tortuous. He called a meeting of the whole family, old and young. He said, "Why don't you and I try our best to eradicate this steep mountain, lead to the south of Yuzhou and reach the south bank of Hanshui River?" His descendants all agreed. His wife raised a question: "With your strength, you can't level the hill where Kuifu sits.". What can Taihang Mountain and Prince Wu do? " Where did you put the excavated soil and stones? Gong Yu's descendants said, "You can throw it on the edge of the Bohai Sea, north of the Tibetan soil." Gong Yu led three adult men who could carry heavy burdens, smashed stones, leveled the soil and transported them to Bohai Sea with dustpans. A neighbor, a widow named Jingcheng, and an orphan, only seven or eight years old, also went to help them. Only once a year.

Hequ wise man sneered and stopped: "You are really not smart. Even your spare capacity can't destroy every grass and tree on the mountain. What can you do with mud and stones? " The foolish old man sighed and said, "You are so stubborn that you are worse than a widow and a child. Even if I die, there are sons, sons have grandchildren, grandchildren have sons, sons have sons, and sons have grandchildren; Children and grandchildren are endless, but mountains will not increase. Are you still worried that you can't dig him? " There is nothing to answer about knowing beans in a meandering river.

Hearing these fears, the mountain god went on working and told the Emperor of Heaven. Yu Gong's sincerity moved the Emperor of Heaven. He ordered two powerful gods to carry the mountain, one in Shuodong and the other in Yongzhou. Since then, there have been no obstacles in the hills and highlands south of Jizhou and north of the Yellow River, and Gong Yu's wish has finally come true.

Yugong Yishan rewrote the ending in different ways. He is a persistent person. He always insists on what he does. One day, he found that there were two mountains in front of his house, Taihang and Prince of Wu, which were too out of the way. I made up my mind to dig it out bit by bit with my own shovel. On the east side of the river, there lived a man named Zhisou, whose handwriting was very clear. He told Yu Gong that this method was wrong and too slow. You can't dig it out until you die. Yugong said, it doesn't matter, there are descendants to dig after I die. He just digs, digs! Sure enough, when he was old and weak, a sudden cold snap took his life. His eldest son Ren Xiao is very filial. He called the whole family together and told everyone his father's last words. Everyone said with tears: insist. They have been digging. However, new problems soon emerged. Cold in winter, hot in summer, whirlwind in spring and heavy rain in autumn. In such bad weather, the children are getting sick gradually. Their mother went to take care of the children. Gradually, their father was exhausted. Because they not only have to build roads, but also their main business is farming. His second son, Li, said, "Stop digging and go to farm!" " ! Tell everyone to vote. Unexpectedly, except Renxiao, even Renxiao's son raised his hand and agreed not to dig. In Tomb-Sweeping Day that year, Renxiao called everyone to bow down in front of his father's portrait. Tears: Dear father, please forgive us! I cried! One by one, they got sick.

One Mountain in Gong Yu was originally Taihang Mountain and Wuwangshan Mountain, 700 miles away from Fiona Fang and high in Wan Ren. Ben is in the south of Jizhou and the north of Heyang. The fool in Beishan is 90 years old and lives near the mountain. Punishing the traffic jam in the north of the mountain, I got together in my room and made a plan: "I will try my best to cross the south of Henan and reach Hanyin, ok?" Vague promises. His wife expressed doubt: "with your strength, you can never destroy the mountain of the chief father, such as the palace of Taihang." ? What about dirt and stones? "Zayue said," Throw it at the end of Bohai Sea, north of Tibetan soil. "Then lead the children and grandchildren to bear the burden of three husbands, detain stones and plough the soil, and transport them to the end of the Bohai Sea. Shi Jing, my neighbor's widow, had a man, so she began to help him. Cold and summer are easy to celebrate, and the beginning is the opposite. Hequ smiled and stopped: "I'm sorry, you don't like it." "With the strength of the old age, you can't destroy a hair of this mountain. What are things like dirt and stones? " The foolish old man in Beishan said, "Your heart is firm but not broken. You were never a widow or a weakling. Although I am dead, I have a son; Children have grandchildren, and grandchildren have children; A son has a son and a son has a grandson. Children and grandchildren are infinite. If the mountains don't increase, why bother? " Hequ died knowing his mistake.

The snake-drying god heard this and was afraid, so he told the emperor. The emperor felt very sincere and ordered Kua's two sons to fetch two mountains, one in the east and the other in the south. Since then, the south of Hebei and the yin of Han have never been broken.

("Liezi Tang Wen")

Rewrite the ending of Gong Yu Yishan's composition 600 and rewrite the ending of Grade Three Gong Yu Yishan.

Things have changed.

One morning, Gong Yu was drinking tea at home. Suddenly, his descendants shouted, "Another big mountain!" "Indeed, this is a much bigger mountain than the Taihang Mountain and the Prince of Wu.

"Listen, this is the order of God, and no one can violate it!" The snake god said proudly.

Yu Gong was so angry that he went back to his home and picked up the hoe he had used for more than 70 years, which meant moving a bigger mountain. "You are too old, you'd better retire!" "Let's do things like hoeing mountains!" "Last time was sent to help, but this time ..."

Every day, the stupid old man watches his children and grandchildren work around. The mountain is in the eye and the heart is crying.

Finally, one day, he picked up the hoe and felt a little heavy. The grandchildren advised him, and the silly old man said, "I can do it!" " "And then left.

In the cold winter and hot summer, Gong Yu kept waving his hoe, and the stone trembled under his firm eyes. Day after day, Yugong kept waving his hoe and vowed to move the mountain. His neighbor came to help. Soon, they all left again. Each of them said, "I can't do it. The mountain is too strong. " Yugong didn't speak, but waved his hoe.

The Emperor of Heaven is angry. He called Fengbo the Rain Master and Leigong Dian Mu. He woke up all the monsters and beasts. He said he wanted that mountain to be the grave of stupid old people against his will. The sky is as red as blood, and there is a ghost fire on earth. Between thunder and lightning, the silly old man never stopped. He waved a hoe on the ground. Suddenly, a bolt of lightning struck him ... and his descendants cried around him. "Move ... move mountains ..." Yu Gong said with difficulty. "I can't ..." The children answered in tears. "Yes, yes." Yugong wrote the word "horizontal" on a stone with his bloody fingers, and his hand stopped ... Yugong died.

Later, someone saw this stone in another place-on a mountain far from Yu Gong's home, people called this mountain "Hengshan Mountain".

Yugong Mountain rewrote Yugong Mountain.

Author: Yao Yao (Grade 3) Published: 200 1/9/22.

Taihang Mountain and Wuwangshan Mountain, covering an area of 700 Li, are very high. Just south of Jizhou, on the north bank of the Yellow River.

An old man named Gong Yu is 90 years old, and God is on his back. Often blocked by the mountains in the north, the entrance and exit are tortuous. He called a meeting of the whole family, old and young. He said, "Why don't you and I try our best to eradicate this steep mountain, lead to the south of Yuzhou and reach the south bank of Hanshui River?" His descendants all agreed. His wife raised a question: "With your strength, you can't level the hill where Kuifu sits.". What can Taihang Mountain and Prince Wu do? " Where did you put the excavated soil and stones? Gong Yu's descendants said, "You can throw it on the edge of the Bohai Sea, north of the Tibetan soil." Gong Yu led three adult men who could carry heavy burdens, smashed stones, leveled the soil and transported them to Bohai Sea with dustpans. A neighbor, a widow named Jingcheng, and an orphan, only seven or eight years old, also went to help them. Only once a year.

Hequ wise man sneered and stopped: "You are really not smart. Even your spare capacity can't destroy every grass and tree on the mountain. What can you do with mud and stones? " The foolish old man sighed and said, "You are so stubborn that you are worse than a widow and a child. Even if I die, there are sons, sons have grandchildren, grandchildren have sons, sons have sons, and sons have grandchildren; Children and grandchildren are endless, but mountains will not increase. Are you still worried that you can't dig him? " There is nothing to answer about knowing beans in a meandering river.

Hearing these fears, the mountain god went on working and told the Emperor of Heaven. Yu Gong's sincerity moved the Emperor of Heaven. He ordered two powerful gods to carry the mountain, one in Shuodong and the other in Yongzhou. Since then, there have been no obstacles in the hills and highlands south of Jizhou and north of the Yellow River, and Gong Yu's wish has finally come true.

The reason why Gong Yu moved mountains (original) See Liezi Tang Wen in the original text, that is, the prince of Wu in Taihang blocked their family's trip. So the old man made a decision and decided to move the mountain.

[Finally] When the snake god heard about it, he was afraid and told the emperor. The emperor felt very sincere, so he ordered his second son to bear two mountains, one is Tuoshuodong and the other is Yongnan. Since then, the south of Hebei has never stopped.

The original story of Yishan in Gong Yu is Taihang Mountain 1, Wuwangshan Mountain 2, Fiona Fang 3700 Li, Wan Ren 4 Gao, Jizhou 5 South, Heyang 6 North.

Yugong in Beishan is seventy or ninety years old. He lives in Bali, which faces the mountain. Punish the traffic jam in the north of the mountain 10, and enter and leave 1 1. Meet in the room, ask for 12, and say, "You and I are here 13, which means we are in southern Henan 14, Hanyin 16, OK?" Mixed feelings 17. His wife questioned 18 and said, "With the strength of 19 Jun, it is impossible for Zeng 20 to hurt Taihang, etc. 2 1 Qiu 22." There are still 24, 25 and 26 earthwork? "Zayue said," Throw it at the end of Bohai Sea, north of Tibetan soil. "Then he led his descendants to carry 27 loads and 28 husbands, knocking on stones and plowing the soil, and transporting the dustpan 29 to the end of the Bohai Sea. Neighbor widow, 30, has a widow, 365,438+0, and I started to help her. Cold and summer are easy to celebrate 33, starting with 34.

The 35 branches of Hequ 36 stopped laughing and said, "I'm sorry, you're not good for me." With the strength of old age, I can't destroy one of the mountains, Mao Sanba, whose 39 is like earth and stone? Gong Yu of Beishan had a long rest for 40 days and said, "Your heart is solid, 465,438+0, impenetrable. You were never a widow or a weak son. Although I died 42 years ago, I have a son; Children have grandchildren, and grandchildren have children; A son has a son and a son has a grandson; Children and grandchildren are infinitely 43, and the mountains do not increase. Why bother 44 and be unfair? " Forty-five times when he was wrongly killed in a river bend.

The snake god heard this and was afraid. He also told the emperor. The emperor thought he was sincere, so he ordered the second son of Kuafu 50 to bear 565,438+0 for two mountains, 53 for Shuodong, 52 for Yongnan and 54 for Yongnan. From then on, the south of Hebei, the yin of Han, no longer broke fifty-five Yan. [3]

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Taihang Mountain: Between the Loess Plateau and the North China Plain.

2. Wu Wang: Between Yangcheng, Yuanqu and Jiyuan in Henan.

3. Square: Fiona Fang refers to the area, here refers to the surrounding area.

4. Ren: An ancient unit of length, with seven or eight feet as one.

5. Jizhou: Ancient place names, including Hebei Province, Shanxi Province, the area north of the Yellow River in Henan Province and the area west of Liaohe River in Liaoning Province.

6. Heyang: the north bank of the Yellow River. The north of the mountain and the south of the river are called Yin, and the north of Shan Zhinan and the river is called Yang.

7. and: adverbs, almost.

8. Living facing the mountain: living facing the mountain, that is, living in the north of the mountain.

9. Chen: Be careful, which means "to suffer, to suffer for ...".

10, plug (se): blocked.

1 1, detour (yū): zigzag, detour.

12, gathering rooms: calling the whole family to discuss. Room, home

13, ru: you. Here in the plural, it means "you".

14, Bi Liping: Do your best to eradicate the steep mountains.

15, which refers to the south of Henan: all the way to the south of Yuzhou. Be direct. Yuzhou, an ancient place name, is located in the south of the Yellow River in Henan Province.

16, Hanyin: Han is Hanshui; Yin, the north of the mountain or the south of the water is called Yin.

17, offering doubts: asking questions.

18, with.

19, mixed feelings: all agreed. Miscellaneous, one after another. Xu agreed.

20. Loss: decrease.

2 1, Zeng: adverb, which can be translated as "Lian" ... and ... "and is often used with" no ".

22. Kuifu: The name of a Gu Shan is located in Chenliu Town, Kaifeng County, Henan Province. Qui.

23. Hill: mound.

24. and: in addition.

25. Placement: Placement.

26. Hey: interrogative pronoun, where.

27. He (hè): The meaning of bearing.

28. Husband: An adult man.

29. dustpan (jρběn): dustpan, an instrument made of bamboo or wicker. This means putting mud and stones in a dustpan.

30.shuāng: widow, widow.

3 1, left male: orphan, single orphan, posthumous child.

32.chèn: After the baby's deciduous teeth fall off, they change teeth and grow permanent teeth. The beginning here means age, about seven or eight years old. Hey, get another tooth.

33. It's easy to celebrate in cold and summer: changing seasons in winter and summer refers to a year. Simple, exchange. Festivals and seasons.

34. First time: Only once. But over and over again. How about it? Modal auxiliary words.

35. Hequ: An ancient place name, located in the west of Ruicheng County, Shanxi Province.

36.ǒ u: Old man.

37, Hui: the same as "Hui", smart; Shame means stupidity.

38. The words "such as ... him" in front of it strengthen the tone of rhetorical question.

39. Take a long breath: sigh.

40, a hair: a grass and a tree, born in the vegetation on the ground, here refers to a small part of the mountain.

4 1, your heart is solid, solid-you are stubborn, stubborn to the point of unchangeable. Cars, children.

42.kuì: Do your best.

43. Although I am dead: Even if I am dead. Although, even if. It is used between subject and predicate and has no practical significance.

44. bitterness: sadness.

45, death (wú) to answer: There is nothing to answer. Death means "nothing".

46. Snake God: The mythical mountain god holds a snake in his hand, so he is called the snake god. Fuck, wait a minute.

47. I am afraid: I am afraid that he will continue to work. The first is Yu Gong. It's, uh, stopped.

48. Emperor: The legendary Emperor of Heaven.

49. Feeling sincere: I was moved by his sincerity. Be moved.

50. Quayle: A powerful god in mythology.

5 1, negative: back.

52.cua: same as "cua", placed.

53. Shuodong: It is the area east of Shuofang, which refers to the east of Shanxi Province.

54. Yong: Yongzhou, in today's Shaanxi and Gansu areas.

56. Dragon section: monopoly, hills, highlands.

57. Liezi: This is the name of an ancient book, which belongs to China's Taoist works in the pre-Qin period. There are two opinions about this book: one is that it was written by Li Yukou in the early years of the Warring States Period; The other is written by people in the late Jin Dynasty, and there is no conclusion. Many fables and legends are recorded in the book.

58, refers to the ancient meaning: straight, always. Meaning: finger

59. Zeng, the ancient meaning: Nai, and. Today: Once.

60, Mao, ancient meaning: vegetation. Modern meaning: hair

6 1, Yang, ancient meaning: Shan Zhinan, north of water. Today: the sun

62, Yin, ancient meaning: the north of the mountain, the south of the water. Today: cloudy

63. Zhu, the ancient meaning: Yes. The meaning of today; All kinds, many

64, Lotus, ancient meaning: Hey. Today: Lotus

65, rest, ancient meaning: sigh. Meaning: rest

66, although, ancient meaning: even if. Meaning: Although

67, yes, the ancient meaning: stop. It means: already

68. Fang, ancient meaning:. Modern meaning: often refers to a rectangle.

69, punishment, ancient meaning: suffering, suffering ... modern meaning: punishment

70, cold and summer are easy, and the beginning is reversed. (Reverse: through "return", return, here refers to round trip)

7 1, sorry, you don't like it. (Hui: smart, smart)

72. Hequ died knowing his mistake. (death: preach "nothing", nothing)

73. Face east. (Measures: Adoption of the Measures and Placement)

74. It refers to the south of Henan and reaches Hanyin. (refers to: straight, straight)

75. Since then, the south of Hebei, the yin of Han, has never stopped. (Dragon: children's "dragon", highland)

76. Sorry, but you don't like it. Inverted sentence: You are not kind, even you are too smart.

77. What about dirt and stones? Inverted sentence: the interrogative pronoun "Yan" comes first.

78, so the rate of descendants who bear three husbands. Inverted sentence: the attributive "Sanfu" is postpositioned.

79. Tell the emperor. Inverted sentence: the premise of adverbial "Yu Di".

Vernacular translation

The legendary Taihang Mountain and Wuwangshan Mountain, 700 miles high in Fiona Fang, were originally located in the south of Jizhou and north of the north bank of the Yellow River.

There is a man named Gong Yu at the foot of the North Mountain. He is almost ninety years old and lives in the mountains. He suffers from the traffic jam in the northern part of the mountain area, so he has to make a detour when he comes out or goes in. He called the whole family to discuss and said, "I will try my best to dig that steep mountain with you and go all the way to the south of Yuzhou and reach the south bank of Hanshui, ok?" Family members have expressed their approval. His wife questioned him and said, "With your strength, even Quiff Mountain can't be leveled. What can you do with Taihang and Wu Wang? Besides, where do we put the mud and stones? " They said, "Throw it on the edge of Bohai Sea, to the north of Tibetan soil." So Gong Yu led three children and grandchildren who could carry the burden up the mountain, chiseled stones and dug dirt, and transported them to the Bohai Sea with a dustpan. Neighbor Shi Jing's widow has an orphan, only seven or eight years old, skipping to help him. Winter and summer change seasons, and you can go back and forth once.

The wise man on the bend laughed at the foolish old man and stopped him from doing so, saying, "You are so stupid! With your remaining years and strength, you can't even move a grass on the mountain. What can you do with mud and stones? " Gong Yu of Beishan sighed and said, "Your thoughts are so stubborn that you can't change them, even orphans and widows can't compare with them. Even if I die, I still have a son; Son gives birth to grandson, grandson gives birth to son; A son has a son and a son has a grandson; Children and grandchildren are endless, but mountains do not increase. Are you afraid of digging rough? " The wise men on the river bank have nothing to answer.

When the mountain god who caught the snake heard about it, he was afraid that he would continue to dig, so he reported it to the Emperor of Heaven. The emperor was moved by Yugong's sincerity. He ordered the two sons of Hercules Kwae to move two mountains, one in the east of Shuofang and the other in the south of Yongzhou. From then on, there was no mountain barrier from the south of Jizhou to the south bank of Hanshui River.

The fragment of "A Mountain of Yugong" was rewritten as "A Mountain of Yugong"

Author: Yao Yao (Grade 3) Published: 200 1/9/22.

Taihang Mountain and Wuwangshan Mountain, covering an area of 700 Li, are very high. Just south of Jizhou, on the north bank of the Yellow River.

An old man named Gong Yu is 90 years old, and God is on his back. Often blocked by the mountains in the north, the entrance and exit are tortuous. He called a meeting of the whole family, old and young. He said, "Why don't you and I try our best to eradicate this steep mountain, lead to the south of Yuzhou and reach the south bank of Hanshui River?" His descendants all agreed. His wife raised a question: "With your strength, you can't level the hill where Kuifu sits.". What can Taihang Mountain and Prince Wu do? " Where did you put the excavated soil and stones? Gong Yu's descendants said, "You can throw it on the edge of the Bohai Sea, north of the Tibetan soil." Gong Yu led three adult men who could carry heavy burdens, smashed stones, leveled the soil and transported them to Bohai Sea with dustpans. A neighbor, a widow named Jingcheng, and an orphan, only seven or eight years old, also went to help them. Only once a year.

Hequ wise man sneered and stopped: "You are really not smart. Even your spare capacity can't destroy every grass and tree on the mountain. What can you do with mud and stones? " The foolish old man sighed and said, "You are so stubborn that you are worse than a widow and a child. Even if I die, there are sons, sons have grandchildren, grandchildren have sons, sons have sons, and sons have grandchildren; Children and grandchildren are endless, but mountains will not increase. Are you still worried that you can't dig him? " There is nothing to answer about knowing beans in a meandering river.

Hearing these fears, the mountain god went on working and told the Emperor of Heaven. Yu Gong's sincerity moved the Emperor of Heaven. He ordered two powerful gods to carry the mountain, one in Shuodong and the other in Yongzhou. Since then, there have been no obstacles in the hills and highlands south of Jizhou and north of the Yellow River, and Gong Yu's wish has finally come true.

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