First, observe carefully.
Careful observation is the golden key to improve the writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the object, you don't have to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation can we find broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. If you don't master "observation", the golden key to open the door, the "iron gate limit" of the composition will definitely be impossible.
Second, read more books
Extensive reading is the premise of improving the level of composition. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse.
Third, clever selection of materials.
Careful selection is an accelerator to improve the level of composition. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition.
Fourth, practice writing often.
Regular writing practice is the key to improve writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day, and then the Russian foundation will be solid.
Fifth, review frequently
Repeated revision is a catalyst to improve the level of composition. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".
2. What are the reasons for pupils' "difficulty in writing"? Why can't the fifth grade Chinese composition be written well? Many parents and teachers will have great doubts, such as children's poor foundation, children's poor hearing in class, or children's lack of rich life experience. If you want to know why the Chinese composition in the fifth grade of primary school is not easy to write, you must understand the child's state.
(Starting from accumulation)
There are mainly the following questions about students' writing status and opinions:
(1) Not interested in writing, just coping.
Interest is the driving force of learning. In junior high school Chinese learning, students' interest in writing has not generally improved. Most students are still in primary school or afraid of writing. Judging from the phenomenon that many children revise articles, there are many problems of skills and attitudes. Most students' works are rarely or never revised, and even if they are written, they will change their proportions. This shows that most students are in the state of performing tasks, and this attitude is the subjective reason for the general improvement of students' writing level.
(2) The theme of the composition is flat and distorted, and the life experience is not well used.
The proposition of composition is to write true stories and true feelings. It stands to reason that every student will encounter deep feelings in life, the joy of success or the pain of failure, and experience the joy of childhood or the ups and downs of growth. These real and rich life experiences and feelings can be excellent subjects for writing. We should see colorful life and complicated inner world in students' works, and feel fresh breath and real feelings. But unfortunately, life reflected in life is so dull and distorted that it is difficult to see the light of personality.
(3) The development of expressive ability is unbalanced, and most languages are pale and boring.
There are many reasons for language. Judging from the phenomenon of students, one is that some students' language corpora are very poor, especially adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives, adjectives. Second, these students usually use general narratives rather than specific descriptions of phenomena. Due to the lack of specific description and meticulous expression skills and certain language accumulation, it is not allowed to pursue novel and typical description and elegant language, and the vision is narrow.
(creation)
(4) the ability to study problems is not strong, and the comprehensiveness of thinking is not good.
This idea is a difficult point for students to write, and the problem is more serious. Some topics are unknown, just talking about the whole story of the problem; Some topics are difficult to show, and the materials cannot fully express the main idea; Some topics are very confusing, and polycentricity is really not centered. The shortcomings reflected by students in the exam are not only because they have no corresponding writing ability, but also because the comprehensiveness of thinking is unfounded. Only by understanding children's shortcomings can we improve the writing ability of Chinese composition in the fifth grade of primary school.
3. Practice writing to overcome difficulties (100 words) If life in junior and middle schools is a painting, the difficulty is to draw a colored pen; If life is an endless sea, then difficulties are undulating waves; If life is a statue, then the difficulty is the carving knife that carves the statue. Life will inevitably encounter some difficulties. Difficulties are like stone mills, but some people struggle on them. In fact, it is not difficult to overcome difficulties. As long as we have the same diligence as an old cow, the same perseverance as a tiger and the same ambition as a lion, we can overcome difficulties. I have personal experience.
That was in the fifth grade. One day, I read a question in an Olympic math book: "A and B go in opposite directions, and the distance between A and B is 2 1 km. A arrives at B, and B returns immediately after arriving at A. When we met for the second time, it took 34 hours. A traveled 9 kilometers more than B. What are the speeds of A and B respectively? " I was immediately attracted. What an interesting topic! I did it excitedly, but soon, I felt something was wrong. The first time I asked for better, how can I meet you for the second time after I turned around? I was stumped at once, and tried many ways I thought I could solve this problem, but I still couldn't find the right answer. Time passed little by little, and I used up a few draft papers, but I had no clue. I was so anxious that my forehead sweated and I gradually lost confidence. I just stopped writing.
Grandma saw it and ran over to guide me: "Wen Jie, you failed when you met such a little difficulty." What should you do if there are still so many difficulties in life? " Now you should try to overcome the difficulties! "After listening to my grandmother's words, my face turned blue and red. I understood what my grandmother said, so I raised my pen again and settled down to think. I tried to draw a picture to express my meaning, and suddenly I had an epiphany. Didn't Party A and Party B go there three times? ! Thinking of this breakthrough point, my confidence suddenly doubled, and my thoughts flooded into my mind like running water. After some calculations, I finally got the answer to this question.
I am ecstatic and excited beyond words. I shouted happily to celebrate my victory over the difficulties.
From this, I understand that as long as I stick to what I do, I can succeed. Difficulties are like springs. You are strong, it is weak. You are weak, it is strong. Let's face the difficulties bravely and overcome them!
4. Why do you write so little double love on page 1 104 of the fifth grade Chinese book? I remember when I was under 7 years old, my father always told me to write hard, and my words should be strong and dignified.
That day, I ran home happily and showed my father a calligraphy I wrote. The teacher praised me after reading it. Unexpectedly, my dad's face sank and he shouted at me. What did this say? Words are not like words, and paintings are not like paintings. I was so humiliated that I ran to the teacher to explain. The teacher stroked my head and said with a smile, it must be dad's fault. See how well Lingling writes, I am smiling through tears again. Since then, I have been living a life of ice and fire, but their love for me is the same.
Practice writing after class "wonderful" and "terrible" Today I learned the words "wonderful" and "terrible". There is a kind mother and a strict father in the article, which reminds me of my parents and an incident a year ago.
My dream is to be a chef, so I often appear in my kitchen. I was addicted to dessert these days and planned to make a cake.
"Tintin Mao Mao, plop, oh, Didi.
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After an hour of tossing, the cake was baked. Although the color and shape are not very beautiful, I am not pessimistic. I confidently hold this self-righteous cake out for everyone to taste.
My mother tasted it and asked me in surprise, "Baby, can this only be made by you?" Delicious! "I nodded, and my mother kissed me again. I really want to float to heaven at once. Although I didn't drink, my face was redder than drinking. Although I didn't eat honey, it was sweeter than my heart. At this moment, my father pushed the door into the room and looked at me curiously. I quickly cut a piece and handed it to my father, looking at him confidently.
"ah! Who made this? It tastes terrible! Why is there so much sugar! Why is there a big egg shell here, and it's still raw.
This is simply one of the worst things in the world. "Dad said.
I was hit and fell from heaven to hell. Tears fell like rain.
Then my father saw the terrible kitchen, and his hair seemed to stand on end. It is not the bull's-eye, but the "fire" that makes him fight for face. Mom quickly comforted me.
Afterwards, I tasted a piece of cake made by myself, and I have to admit it was terrible. But my mother has been encouraging me to "sink fish and fall geese" and "close the moon and feel ashamed of flowers"
Dishes; But my father has been helping me cook by going up a flight of stairs.
The starting point of "wonderful" and "terrible" is the same, that is love. There are two forms of love in life. One kind of love is maternal love. He always builds our confidence and encourages us to keep moving forward with kind words. Another kind of love, like the author's strict father, always warns us that there is still room for improvement.
We should "seriously grasp" these two kinds of love, so that we can keep moving forward. I feel the same way. In the third grade, the composition was tested in the final exam. Because we didn't learn to write a composition until the third grade, and it was terrible. I either forgot punctuation or wrote wrong words, but I tried my best.
After returning home, my mother read my composition and encouraged me to say, "This article is really good. If there are no typos and punctuation marks, it must be a masterpiece. " After listening to my mother's words, my heart is sweet.
"Really?" Father said, "Let me see." I took my masterpiece with confidence and gave it to my father carefully. After reading it, my father said sternly, "Not so good, why is there no punctuation?" And there are many typos, and the handwriting is so bad.
5. Write a 700-word composition. When the sun recedes, its dazzling brilliance; When the bird sings the last song in the tree; When the only ray of sunshine spilled into the campus, I slowly walked out of the office.
The Third National Youth Bingxin Literature Competition
bronze
One thing has always stayed in my heart.
Li Mingzhe is a junior one student in Shixia Middle School, Futian District, Shenzhen.
When the sun recedes its dazzling brilliance; When the bird sings the last song in the tree; When the only ray of sunshine spilled into the campus, I slowly walked out of the office.
"59", looking at the bright numbers on the test paper, I was at a loss. Wandering downstairs, but afraid to go up. Of course, if I go up, I have to add food tonight. Looking at the familiar window for the last time, I chose to leave. I came to a grassy meadow, threw away my schoolbag and lay comfortably in the grass. Looking up, the naughty clouds in the sky were painted with a touch of shyness by the sunset. Trees and houses beside the grass were also covered with a golden coat by the sunset, and people walking in the distance added a hazy beauty to the sunset. The beauty of the sunset is short-lived. Soon, a bright moon climbed up.
Touching my deflated stomach, I sat helplessly on the grass. At this moment, I only heard a loud noise. I looked back and found an old man. From a distance, those eyes are so calm. Once the wind, frost, rain and blood, once the joys and sorrows, it has seen too much right and wrong in the world. The old man walked for a while, then sat down and took out a book from his arms. When I looked carefully, it turned out to be Braille. Could it be that the old man is there-maybe I'm hungry and screaming, and the old man has noticed: "Who is it?" Who is there? "I waved in despair:" Grandpa don't panic, it's me, a student. Grandpa closed the book and asked, "Why don't you go home so late?" "I ... I ..." I stammered. " I must have failed the exam! "Grandpa lovingly touched my head and said." Well, "Grandpa looked at me and said seriously," Young man, it's not small to listen to your voice. You know, whenever you encounter difficulties, you should face them bravely. If Edison hadn't made unremitting efforts, would he have invented the electric light? When you grow to such a big age, you should take responsibility ... "At this moment, my disappointing stomach kept screaming. Hearing this, Grandpa smiled and said to me, "You are hungry. Come on, I have cookies here. "Take grandpa's cookies as if they weigh one thousand pounds, and tears blur my sight. ...
Grandpa stood up and said to me, "I should go." Young man, work hard. "I quickly got up and said," I help you go home. ""No, no, "Grandpa waved and looked at the sky and said," Look, the bright moon and shining stars in the sky are my eyes. " Looking at Grandpa's far-away back, I bit off the biscuit and strode home. In an instant, sweetness filled my whole heart.
6. How to write the so-called "small practice" is to practice writing in a small scope and short space around a certain key point or center. In reading teaching, guiding students to practice writing in a planned way can not only slow down the slope of composition, improve students' writing ability, but also promote students' deeper understanding of the text content. Then, how to guide students to practice writing effectively in reading teaching? Let's talk about my specific methods. First, change the angle and rewrite it. Let students process, reorganize and re-express the text content, which can not only help primary school students deepen their understanding of the text content, but also create opportunities for students to practice writing and improve their ability to use the language. In the teaching of ancient poetry, this method can often be used to provide students with opportunities to practice writing. Most of the ancient poems selected in primary school Chinese textbooks are easy to understand. On the basis of students' understanding of poetry, we can guide them to think of themselves as poets and rewrite these ancient poems into self-describing modern texts. For example, when teaching the poem Sleeping at the Maple Bridge, in order to let students fully feel the loneliness, loneliness and sadness of the poet Zhang Ji at that time, I designed such a lead: In the bleak night of autumn wind, the poet Zhang Ji came to Jiangnan by boat alone and parked his boat at the Maple Bridge. The sky is full of frost and cold. He looked at the maple trees by the river and the lights on fishing boats, and listened to the sad cries of crows and the melodious bells of Hanshan Temple. He must be too sad to sleep. I believe Zhang Ji must have a lot to say at this moment. Can you help him take out his heart? In this way, let students enter the poet's spiritual world through role experience, and their feelings will be unusual, and they will have something to say and write. This method can also be used in modern Chinese teaching. For example, the text pomegranate introduces the growth process of pomegranate, which allows students to introduce themselves as lovely pomegranate. When introducing yourself, you can learn from the text and observe it in illustrations and life. The growth process and fruit characteristics of pomegranate were introduced respectively. Of course, you can also reverse a certain condition in the text to guide the influence of the change of imaginary conditions on things, so that students can strengthen their understanding in the positive and negative contrast. In the eighth inning, Bruce lost seven games in a row, but he didn't lose heart. After seeing the spider web successfully for the eighth time, he was also inspired and encouraged. In the eighth war, he finally drove away the foreign invaders and resisted this time. Let the students realize the truth that "where there is a will, there is a way" from the comparison. Second, the author often uses the art of "blank space" to leave some content to the readers themselves. In the article, some places are written implicitly or concisely, leaving room for students' imagination. When studying this kind of articles, I fully grasped these "blanks". By filling in these blanks, students can not only deepen their understanding of the text content, but also improve their imagination and language expression ability. Speaking of "Goujian and his wife came to the State of Wu ... and suffered humiliation", students can already feel that Goujian and his wife suffered humiliation, tribulation and hardship, but the word "humiliation" is not suitable for them. In order to let the students understand "humiliation" more thoroughly and enrich the image of Gou Jian in their minds, I said with deep affection: "Students, Gou Jian, as the king of Yue, involuntarily became the servant of the king of Wu in desperation, raising horses and grinding rice for the king of Wu, and suffered humiliation. Is that all? " Imagine: In the biting winter, on the full moon night of Mid-Autumn Festival, when Gou Jian is ready to be a cow and a horse for him, how will the prince of Wu humiliate him? "The students' hearts were deeply shocked, and they eagerly took out their pens, trying to get it off their chest. In addition to guiding students' imagination around keywords, sometimes ellipsis in the text is also a resource that can be fully utilized. In the class of teaching applause, I talked about Xiaoying, who was encouraged by applause. "She stopped being depressed, started chatting with her classmates, playing games, and even walked into the dance studio of the school ..." Xiaoying, who is cheerful, will also. Let students expand their imagination, so as to deepen their understanding of the theme. People should care and help each other. Warm others with love, at the same time, cherish your own love. Third, lead by example and imitate writing. Children are born with imitation ability, and imitation writing is an effective training form that plays a bridge role from reading to independent writing. Teachers can provide students with some imitation examples to guide students to imitate writing and reduce the difficulty of homework. Stimulate their interest in writing, and then improve their writing ability. Imitation writing can be divided into imitation writing and imitation paragraph, and imitation paragraph can be the main part of writing practice. Natural paragraphs have several paragraph structures. For example, in the textbook of the first volume of the third grade, students are most exposed to the general paragraph structure, and the concept of this structure may be vague, so it is necessary to analyze this structure before writing practice and tell the students, for example, when teaching the Pearl of the Orient in the fifth paragraph, "At night, the whole of Hong Kong becomes a sea of lights ... like a flashing river." I first asked the students, "Where did you see Hong Kong at night?" "The students said: We can see it from the" shining lights in the harbor "and" strings of bright car lights on the road ",and then tell them that this natural section is called the general sentence with the phrase" At night, the whole of Hong Kong becomes an ocean of lights ",followed by the specific scene of the ocean of lights. This kind of structural section is called general section type. Then strike while the iron is hot, and let the students write according to the fifth paragraph. Let students learn how to live and how to use this structure in class. In addition to structural imitation, they can also carry out imitation training of rhetorical devices. There are many figurative sentences in the text of West Lake, and the figurative words in the figurative sentences can be described as rich and colorful-like, like, like and like, which can be learned first.
7. How to write the whale's self-report?
Hello everyone! I am a blue whale. People call me "whale" because my body is like a fish. I really don't like this name, because I'm not a fish at all! Why do you still call me whale?
Why am I not a fish? Because I am viviparous! Born like this, unlike those fish and shrimp, it is said that it is viviparous, but it is actually born with eggs! Hee hee ... in addition, I am a mammal and grew up eating milk like human beings. This time, do you know why I am not a fish? I am a mammal!
We swim in the ocean all day now, but don't get me wrong, our ancestors didn't live in the sea. Ancestors began to live on land like cattle and sheep now, and breathe with their lungs like them-which also shows that I am a mammal. Later, the environment changed, everything changed, and our ancestors became living in shallow seas. Then the environment changed again, and the big land where our ancestors lived was completely submerged by the sea. The ancestors' limbs evolved into fins to adapt to marine life.
I, the blue whale, am a baleen whale. We mainly eat shrimp and marine animals, starting from eat small fish. In short, the small ones are our favorite. We opened our mouths, sucked that little seawater into our mouths, filtered it out of our beards and swallowed it into our stomachs. My neighbor is a killer whale. They have teeth, so they are collectively called toothed whales. We are collectively called baleen whales. They jump directly on big fish or marine animals and bite them directly. We eat more than two thousand kilograms per meal. Wow ... I'm hungry again ...
We always sleep together, with our heads inward and our tails outward.
This is us-the whale family! However, due to over-hunting by human beings, there are only more than 50 blue whales left. Please help us!
This is me, us-whales.
8. Write a small pen about Seattle, Chief of Sogua Amish, India
How can you buy the warmth of the sky and the earth? We don't understand.
If the air loses its freshness and the running water loses its crystal, can you still buy it?
We reds regard every side of the earth as sacred. In our memory, in our life, every crystal pine board, every beach, every breath in the secluded forest, and every introspective insect are sacred. The fragrance of sap passes through the forest and permeates the memory of the red people since ancient times.
When the white man roamed the interstellar space after his death, he forgot the land where he was born. Red people will never forget our beautiful birthplace after their death. Because the earth is our mother, and mother and child are one. The green and fragrant flowers are our sisters, the deer, the horse and the eagle are our brothers, and the rock cliffs, the dew on the grassland, and the body heat emitted by people and horses are all our family members.
The commander-in-chief of the Washington capital sent word that he would buy our land. He wants more than land. The Grand Commander said to leave a protected area for us to live a comfortable life. In this way, the Grand Commander became our father and we became his children.
We will consider your conditions, but this business is not easy, because this land is sacred. Crystal water in streams and rivers is not only water, but also the blood of our ancestors for generations. If the land is sold to you, please remember that this land is sacred. Please teach your children and grandchildren that this land is sacred. Every image in the clear lake represents a kind of spiritual significance, reflecting countless historical sites, various rituals and our way of life. The sound of running water is not loud, but it is the voice of our ancestors.
Rivers are our brothers. They quench their thirst, transport our canoes and feed our children. If the land is sold to you, please remember and teach your children that rivers are our brothers. You should love it and be considerate of it, just as you love your own brother.
White people can't understand our thoughts, I know.
In the eyes of white people, any land is the same. You can rob at night, take what you need and leave. For a white man, the earth is not his brother, but his enemy, and he wants to conquer them one by one.
White people can abandon their fathers' graves. The place where the father rests and the place where the child was born can be ignored by him. In his view, heaven, earth, mother and brother can buy, sell, plunder and sell at will like sheep and beads. He was insatiable. After devouring the land, he turned it into a desert.
I don't understand.
You and I have completely different lifestyles. Every time a red man sees your city, his eyes hurt. There is no peace in a white city. There is no place to hear the sound of leaves scattering and insects flapping their wings and playing in spring. The noise of the city makes our ears uncomfortable. At night, we can't hear frogs quarreling by the pond, and we can't hear nightingales whining. This life is alive?
I am a red man, I don't understand.
The sound of the breeze gently sweeps across the ground, and the fragrance of the breeze is washed away by the afternoon rainstorm or soaked in rosin, which is what the red people want to hear and smell most.
Red people cherish the atmosphere: people, animals and trees have the right to share the air and breathe it. White people never seem to notice that people live by air, just like people who have been sitting dead for many days, they can't tell the stench. If we sell the land to you, please remember that we cherish the atmosphere. Air supports all life, and its spiritual strength is shared by all.
The wind greeted his grandfather's first breath when he was born and sent away his last sigh. If the land is sold to you, please turn it into a sacred place so that white people can taste the enhanced flowers on the pasture with the wind.
Ask your children to know that the bones of our ancestors are buried underground; Teach your children to respect the earth and tell them that the earth is nourished by the lives of our loved ones; Tell them how red people educate their children. The earth is our mother, and the fate of the earth is the fate of mankind. If people spit on the earth, they will spit on themselves.
We know for sure that the earth does not belong to human beings; People belong to the earth, and everything works together. Maybe you and I are brothers. Wait and see, maybe, one day, white people will find that they believe in the same god as we do.
Maybe you think you can have God, just like you buy a piece of land. Actually, you can't. God is the God of all mankind. God has equal sympathy for human beings and does not pay dividends. God regards the earth as the most precious thing, and hurting it is the creator who blasphemes the earth. White people will eventually disappear with the wind, perhaps faster than other races. If you defile your bed, you are bound to suffocate in your own filth.
The physical body dies because of years, and only the power given by God can shine brilliantly in the world. It is God who leads you to live on the earth, and it is God's ignorant will that makes you manipulate white people.
Why is there such a difficult fate? We don't understand.
We don't understand why bison were slaughtered, wild horses became tame horses, the forest was full of the smell of people, and the beautiful mountain scenery was destroyed and defiled by wires.
Where is the jungle? It's gone.
Where is the eagle? It's gone
Life has come to an end,
Is not only the beginning of colorful life.