Genpox, on the night of October 12, 2006, took off his clothes and went to bed. He just saw the moonlight on the door and got up happily for a walk. Thinking that there was no one to play with, I went to the Tianhou Palace to find Zhang Huaimin. People didn't sleep, so we walked in the yard together. If the water under the court is empty and bright, the algae in the water (xìng) is horizontal (héng), and the bamboo and cypress are covered. What night is there no moonlight? Where is there no bamboo and cypress? It's just the lack of free people like us.
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On the night of 2006 10/2, I took off my clothes to get ready for bed and saw the moonlight shining into the doors and windows, so I got up happily and went out for a walk. I thought no one could travel with me, so I went to Chengtian Temple to find Zhang Huaimin. Zhang Huaimin didn't sleep either, so we walked in the yard together. On the ground of the courtyard, it is as clear and transparent as water. The algae and shepherd's purse in the "water" are interlaced, which turned out to be the shadow of bamboo and cypress in the moonlight. What night has no moonlight? Where are there no bamboo and pine and cypress? It's just the lack of idle people like us. Remarks: As "the water is as bright as the sky", that is, "the moonlight is as clear and transparent as the water filling the courtyard", it is not really "water", so "water" should be quoted in translation.
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Chengtian Temple: Located in the south of Huanggang County, Hubei Province. Six years of Yuanfeng: A.D. 1083. Yuanfeng, the year number of Zhao Yong, Song Shenzong. At that time, the author had been demoted to Huangzhou for four years because of Wutai poetry case. Solution: untie the tied things. Desire: I want doors: one refers to the door of the room and the other refers to the window. Here, I mean that the window is happy: happiness and happiness. Happy, happy, happy. However, the emergence of ... lines: there is no pleasure in walking: I don't think anyone can play with me. Read, think, think. No one can have fun with others. Sui: So, just. To: to. Zhang Huaimin: The author's friend. Dream of fame, the word Huaimin, Qinghe (now Qinghe, Hebei) people. Yuanfeng was also demoted to Huangzhou in six years and lived in Chengtian Temple. Sleep: Sleep and lie down. Walking in the atrium: walk into the courtyard together, walk together, walk together. Atrium, courtyard. The courtyard is as empty as water: it means that the moonlight is full of the courtyard, just like the water is full of the courtyard, clear and transparent. Xìng: They are all aquatic plants. Here are aquatic plants. Algae, the floorboard of aquatic plants. Eleocharis tuberosa, a perennial aquatic plant, has heart-shaped leaves, green face and purple back, and yellow flowers in summer. Empty and bright: clear and transparent. Crossing: crossing and mixing. Guy: It turns out that yes, but there are few idle people: there are just few idle people. But, just. Idle people: people who have free time. Idle people: here refers to people who don't seek fame and fortune and can wander around the scene leisurely. At this time, Su Shi was demoted to Huangzhou Yingyong's agreement. Here, he is an official with a position and no power, so he is very idle and calls himself a "idle person". Ear: Modal particles are equivalent to "JIU" and mean "Jiu".
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The first part (the first natural paragraph): The first sentence points out the reason and time for a night outing tomorrow, and is moved by the beautiful moonlight, so it means a night outing. The second part (the second natural paragraph): Metaphorically describes the moonlight in the courtyard. The third part (the third paragraph): Two rhetorical questions are thought-provoking. The author expressed his feelings about moonlight.
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polysemy
Sui: Sui went to Chengtian Temple. The intention will be to attack the rear. (Make a hole) Wolf cover: Cover with bamboo and cypress. It turned out that the wolf fell asleep before enlightenment and put on the cover to lure the enemy. Wolf Dan: But there are few idle people like us. (Only) But touch the ruler in the barrier. (Only) Find "ventriloquism": Find Zhang Huaimin. Failed, looking for the end of the disease. (Soon) Peach Blossom Garden
Different meanings of ancient and modern times
But if there are few idle people like me, Dan: As the old saying goes: Gang; Modern meaning: however, the conjunctions indicating turning point: ancient meaning: auxiliary words, indicating a definite tone, equivalent to "gang" and "gang"; Modern meaning: nouns, ears. Idle people: ancient meaning: people who can calm down and change without seeking fame and fortune; People who have nothing to do with things in today's sense enter the house in the moonlight: ancient meaning: multi-finger door; Modern meaning: windows, people's thoughts and happy people: ancient meaning: thinking; Today's significance: commemoration, nostalgia, reading.
Flexible use of parts of speech
Steps: Take a walk with nouns as verbs. Example: Walking in the atrium.
inverted sentence
Walking in the atrium: walking in the yard together. But there are very few idle people like us: there are very few idle people like us. (attributive postposition)
elliptical sentence
Take off your clothes and sleep: (i) Take off your clothes and sleep. (omit the subject)
Special sentence
Why is there no moon at night? Where is there no bamboo forest? It's just the lack of free people like us. It expresses the author's lonely and desolate mood, the depression of unsuccessful career and the open-minded outlook on life.
Thoughts and feelings of editing this paragraph
The feelings expressed in Night Tour in Chengtian Temple are subtle and complicated, including the sadness of relegation, the feeling of life, the joy of enjoying the moon and the leisure of walking. When the author "undressed and wanted to sleep", he "entered the house by moonlight", so he "set off happily". Moonlight is rare and can't help but make people happy. However, no one enjoyed the moon with him, so he had to go to Zhang Huaimin and he was demoted. How many sorrows and feelings about life have been relegated! Two people strolled in the atrium, which was very leisurely. Compared with "idle people", it contains all the meanings.
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After reading it, savor it carefully, as if there is a gurgling water flowing through the pebbles, and a fresh tune pops up, giving people unlimited beauty enjoyment. After a long period of meditation, I gradually realized. The "beauty" here first comes from the "truth" of the content. The bright photos of the oriental moon aroused the author's interest, thinking that it would be a fly in the ointment if there were no "musicians", so he sought a companion. At this time, the illusion was interesting and the emotion was touched, so it was logical to write this scene. Everything was so harmonious and natural that there was no feeling of carving. This beauty comes from the purity of language. Notes, like taking them home, are narrative. Although there are no surprises, you can't add, delete or change any words. Need to point out the date and note the travel notes. "Moonlight into the house" and "Happy to start" are mutually causal, and few figures are practiced! When writing the scenery under the courtyard, use the word "ethereal and bright" to reflect the ethereal and frank artistic conception. It is very appropriate to compare the shadow of bamboo and cypress to algae in water, and the word "horizontal" more accurately shows the posture of algae, as if it were within reach. Then the author took a sharp turn and asked two questions in succession, which were both natural and rhythmic, expanding time and space and thought-provoking. This "beauty" comes from the "essence" at the end. Judging from the structure of the article, the sentence is a "combination", so stop here. Semantically, it has rich connotations. On the surface, the word "idle people" refers to self-mockery that Zhang Huaimin and I are idle people who come out to enjoy the moon, but in fact we are proud of it-the moonlit night is everywhere, and only when people appreciate it is beautiful. Only the moonlit night here and now is the luckiest, because people with elegant taste come to enjoy it. Secondly, Idle People contains the author's sad mentality. The author has great political ambitions, but he has been belittled again and again. Deep down, why does he want to be a "idle person"? The complacency of the "idle people" who enjoy the moon is nothing more than masturbation when they are demoted to "idle people". In short, travel notes are written in a letter based on true feelings, starting at the right time and ending at the right time, just like running water, seeing skills without skills, and reaching the realm of "hitting the nail on the head and being natural and eternal, extravagant and pure".
Graded appreciation
The full text is divided into three layers, the first layer is narrative. The first sentence points out that the time of the incident was "October 12, the sixth year of Yuanfeng", and Su Shi was demoted to Huangzhou as a deputy history because of the four-year Wutai poetry case. That night, the moonlight shone into his room. The author wanted to sleep, but he was fascinated by the beautiful moonlight and got excited. But he thought that no one could enjoy this kind of fun, so he set off for Chengtian Temple not far away to find Zhang Huaimin. When he was in Su Like, he was also demoted to Huangzhou and made friends with Su Shi. That night, Zhang Huaimin didn't sleep, so they went for a walk in the middle of the yard together. This narrative is simple, indifferent and natural. Write about the scenery on the second floor. The author cherishes ink as gold, and only uses eighteen words to create a quiet and charming night scene with clear moonlight, mottled bamboo shadows. Readers can use their imagination: the moonlight is crystal clear, as clear as a pool of empty water. Even better, there are aquatic plants floating and wandering in the "water", and suddenly they are like entering a fairyland. The beauty of the author is that the shadows of bamboo and cypress trees set each other off against the moonlight, and the metaphor is accurate, novel and appropriate, which renders the beauty and solemnity of the scenery. It also reflects the cool and clear characteristics of moonlight. Set off the author's leisurely mood (night in court) and go to the third floor for discussion. The author regrets that there are no bamboos and cypresses anywhere, but apart from him and Zhang Huaimin, I'm afraid not many people have leisure and elegance to enjoy the scenery. The crowning touch of the whole article is the word "idle people", while Su Shi lives in Huangzhou, "not allowed to sign books to do business". He is just a nominal official and the other side of the Confucian ideal of "helping the world and the people". The moonlight is beautiful and the bamboo shadow is beautiful, but people can't know it. It is a pleasure for these two people to enjoy it! Su Shi's thoughts span Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, which makes his attitude towards life extremely inclusive and can be said to be modest and comfortable. Of course, his chapters in adversity can better reflect his personality charm! (Lyric under the Moon)
Writing skills
1. The metaphor is vivid: the courtyard is as empty as water, the water is full of algae and flowers, and the bamboo is shaded. 2. Combination of front and side descriptions: Why is there no moon at night? Where is there no bamboo and cypress? But few idle people are like me. 3. Grasp the feeling of the moment: the courtyard is as empty as water, the water is interlaced with algae and covered with bamboo. 4. Combination of virtual and real (dynamic and static): Bamboo and cypress (solid and static) are compared to algae (virtual and dynamic) in water.
Exquisite appreciation
"Moonlight Entering the House": Lonely on a cold night, "undressing for sleep", at this moment, the moonlight quietly entered the door. The word "into the house" symbolizes moonlight. Moonlight seems to understand the loneliness of the relocated guest and take the initiative to accompany him. "set out with pleasure": it is the author's reaction; Write that he was sleepy, put on his clothes, and saw the moonlight greet him with joy like a long-lost bosom friend. A "sinner" who was demoted by the imperial court, we can imagine that he was cut off from friends and left out in the cold; Only moonlight has no snobbery, and still visits him on a lonely cold night. Four words write the author's joy and excitement. "Idle people go to Chengtian Temple to find Zhang Huaimin": The author and Zhang Huaimin are both relegated people, so the author thinks of Zhang Huaimin. "Huai Min is still awake and walking in the atrium." The author and Zhang Huaimin have a deep friendship. "What night without a month? Where is there no bamboo and cypress? But few idle people are like my ears. " -it contains the author's sad feelings of ups and downs in his official career and the philosophy of life he gets from it, and gets some comfort from the pain. The last sentence has at least two meanings: first, for those who seek fame and gain, they are stubborn and trapped in the vast sea of officials and cannot extricate themselves. How can they enjoy Leng Yue Wonderland? Secondly, it shows the author's carefree and comfortable state of mind, and of course it also reveals his complaint about not being loyal to the court. "The courtyard is as empty as water, and the algae in the water are intertwined and covered with bamboo and cypress."
Specific analysis
"The courtyard is as empty as water, the algae and grass in the water are interlaced, and the bamboo and cypress are hidden." "Water is empty and bright" describes the clarity and transparency of moonlight, and "Flowers are crossing" describes the beauty and elegance of bamboo and cypress reflection. The former gives people a quiet feeling of spring water, while the latter has the dynamic beauty of swaying water plants. The whole artistic conception moves in stillness, and the quieter it moves, thus creating a clean and transparent world and reflecting the author's aboveboard mind. With highly concise pen and ink, the author touched a kind of ethereal, clear, swaying shadow and illusory wonderful realm.
The author's mental state
The joy of enjoying the moon, the leisure of walking, the sadness of belittling, the feeling of life, and the generosity of feeling frustrated! -This article reflects a sentence of friendship between the two people: those who have fun will go to Chengtian Temple to find Zhang Huaimin (only Zhang Huaimin can accompany them to have fun); Huai Min didn't go to bed either (they both suffered the same pain and felt the same); Walking in the atrium (the two are very close); But few idle people are like me (have the same experience, the same mood, the same interest, and are really like-minded friends). "Algae and aquatic plants intersect" shows that the moonlight was thick, clear and bright. Idle people: People who can wander around leisurely without seeking fame and fortune (here referring to Su Shi himself and Zhang Huaimin) are not simple idle people.
Characteristics of the article
1, metaphor, illusion, association 2. The combination of dynamic and static shows that he is like the author's confidant.
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Su Shi (1037 ~1101) was a famous writer and calligrapher in the Song Dynasty. One of the eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties, with profound words and moderate words, was named "Dongpo Jushi" at the age of 66. Emperor Gaozong of the Southern Song Dynasty spent six years as a scholar, chasing posthumous title's "literary works". Su Shi was born in Meishan, Meizhou (now Meishan, Sichuan), his brother Su Zhe (1039 ~112) and his father Su Xun (1009 ~ 1066). It is the same as "Cao San and his son" (Cao Cao, Cao Pi, Cao Zhi) at the end of Han Dynasty. "Three Sus" are the general names of eight famous prose writers in Tang and Song Dynasties, namely Han Yu and Liu Zongyuan in Tang Dynasty and Ouyang Xiu, Su Xun, Su Shi, Su Zhe (Su Xun is Su Shi's father and Su Shi is Su Zhe's brother), Wang Anshi and Ceng Gong in Song Dynasty. Three of them (divided into two schools in Tang Dynasty and six schools in Song Dynasty) have works such as Seven Sets of Dongpo and Dongpo Yuefu. This article is selected from Dongpo Zhi Lin. Politically, it belongs to the old party with Sima Guang as its leader. During the modernization of Yuan You, Su Dongpo thought that the new law was not completely unrealistic, so he opposed the complete abolition of the new law. When Shao Sheng described it, Su Shi was even demoted again and again, and finally went to Hainan Province now. Su Shi's frustration is closely related to his political choice. He is knowledgeable and versatile, and has high attainments in calligraphy, painting, poetry and prose. His calligraphy is called "Song Sijia" with Cai Xiang, Huang Tingjian and Mi Fei; He is good at painting bamboo and strange stones, and also has outstanding opinions on painting theory and calligraphy theory. He was a literary leader after Ouyang Xiu in the Northern Song Dynasty. His outstanding prose works mark the victory of the ancient prose movement that began in the Western Wei Dynasty and went through the Tang and Song Dynasties. His prose is as famous as Ouyang Xiu and is called "Ou Su". Poems such as Huang Tingjian are collectively called "Su Huang"; His words are magnificent and bold, and his words are graceful and restrained. Known as "Su Xin" with Xin Qiji in the Southern Song Dynasty, * * * is an uninhibited poet. Su Shi's Night Tour in Chengtian Temple is selected from the first volume of Dongpo Zhi Lin. Su Shi's famous poems include Hunting in Jiangchengzi Mizhou and Dingfengbo. Su Shi is the fifth son of his father Su Xun. In the second year of Jiayou (1057), he joined his younger brother Su Zhe as a scholar. Dali was appointed as the judge and signed the book Fengxiang House. In the second year of Xining (1069), he returned to the DPRK after the expiration of his father's funeral system and sued the court for being a judge. Disagreement with Wang Anshi's political views, opposition to the implementation of the new law, self-employment, and imprisonment for General Hangzhou. Move to Mizhou (now Zhucheng, Shandong Province) and Xuzhou. In the second year of Yuanfeng (1079), he was involved in Wutai poetry case, and was responsible for granting Huangzhou (now Huanggang, Hubei Province) an assistant ambassador. He was placed in this state and was not allowed to sign books or official documents. Empress Dowager Zhe Li Zong came to the DPRK and was reinstated as Langfengzhi Dengzhou (now Penglai, Shandong Province); Four months later, he was transferred to the doctor of does; Before the end of his term of office, in addition to his daily life, he moved to the Sheren of Zhongshu, moved to the Hanlin bachelor's office, and learned about the imperial edict and the tribute of the Ministry of Rites. Yuan You went out to know Hangzhou in four years (1089), and later changed to know Yingzhou, Yangzhou and Dingzhou. In the eighth year of Yuan You (1093), Song Zhezong was in charge and was demoted to Huizhou (now Huiyang, Guangdong) and Danzhou (now Danxian, Hainan). Hui Zong acceded to the throne and returned to the north for forgiveness. Yuan (1 10 1) died in Changzhou (now Jiangsu) at the age of 66 and was buried in Tancheng County (now jia county, Henan).
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Su Shi's Night Tour in Chengtian Temple is selected from the first volume of Dongpo Zhi Lin. Su Shi's famous poems include Hunting in Jiangchengzi Mizhou and Dingfengbo. Su Shi is the fifth son of his father Su Xun. In the second year of Jiayou (1057), he joined his younger brother Su Zhe as a scholar. Dali was appointed as the judge and signed the book Fengxiang House. In the second year of Xining (1069), he returned to the DPRK after the expiration of his father's funeral system and sued the court for being a judge. Disagreement with Wang Anshi's political views, opposition to the implementation of the new law, self-employment, and imprisonment for General Hangzhou. Move to Mizhou (now Zhucheng, Shandong Province) and Xuzhou. In the second year of Yuanfeng (1079), he was involved in Wutai poetry case, and was responsible for granting Huangzhou (now Huanggang, Hubei Province) an assistant ambassador. He was placed in this state and was not allowed to sign books or official documents. Empress Dowager Zhe Li Zong came to the DPRK and was reinstated as Langfengzhi Dengzhou (now Penglai, Shandong Province); Four months later, he was transferred to the doctor of does; Before the end of his term of office, in addition to his daily life, he moved to the Sheren of Zhongshu, moved to the Hanlin bachelor's office, and learned about the imperial edict and the tribute of the Ministry of Rites. Yuan You went out to know Hangzhou in four years (1089), and later changed to know Yingzhou, Yangzhou and Dingzhou. In the eighth year of Yuan You (1093), Song Zhezong was in charge and was demoted to Huizhou (now Huiyang, Guangdong) and Danzhou (now Danxian, Hainan). Hui Zong acceded to the throne and returned to the north for forgiveness. Yuan (1 10 1) died in Changzhou (now Jiangsu) at the age of 66 and was buried in Tancheng County (now jia county, Henan). This article was written in the sixth year of Yuanfeng in Song Shenzong (1083). At that time, the author had demoted Huangzhou for four years. In July of the second year of Yuanfeng, the famous "Wutai Poetry Case" in history, Li Ding picked out Su Shi's poems about the new law and said that he slandered them. In August, he was arrested and imprisoned. After a long trial and torture, he was almost killed. 1February, the author was released from prison and demoted to Huangzhou to be an assistant forever, but he was not allowed to "sign books to do business", that is to say, he was an idle official with positions but no rights. In this case, the author wrote this essay, describing the scenery of the moonlit night beautifully and recording a fragment of his life at that time. It also reflects the profound friendship between them and the infinite feelings of few confidants.
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On Su Shi's Night Visit to Chengtian Temple
(Huo) Su Shi himself commented on his own literary creation, and there is a very incisive passage: my words are like fountains, which can be published everywhere. On the flat land, it gurgles, although it is difficult to travel thousands of miles a day. It twists and turns with rocks, shapes with things, and is unknown. The knower always does what he should do and often stops at what he can't do. That's all! Others, although I can't know. (Wen Shuo) This passage can be supplemented by another passage of his: "A person who used to be a writer can't work for it, but he can't help working for it. There are clouds in the mountains and rivers, luxuries in vegetation, and depression. Although the husband wants nothing, can he get it? " The most important point here is that literature is a kind of "depressed" thing and has to be displayed to the public. If you have a "source of springs" on your chest, you can "get away with it at all costs"; Without ambition, you can't write a good article on your own. Su Shi is indeed a great writer with "the source of welcoming the Spring". As far as his prose creation is concerned, "ten thousand yuan" overflows into political theory and historical theory, and Wang Yang is vast; Travel notes, letters, prefaces and postscripts and other essays are all over the mountains, swaying and smoky. There are only 85 words in the article "Night Tour in Chengtian Temple", which naturally flows from the chest. "What should be done" and "what should be stopped" cannot be divided into paragraphs. But it is not the "flat ground" of DC. Only a few dozen words. If "On the Flat Ground" is DC, what is its charm without rest? Read this article carefully, although it is natural and popular, but it is "tortuous and rocky" with distinct layers. "On the evening of October 12, Yuanfeng six years." It's like keeping a diary, honestly writing the year, month and day, and then writing the word "night". What should we do next? What the hell are you doing? There is nothing wrong with "undressing and sleeping". But just as I was undressing, I saw "Moonlight Entering the House" and felt that there was nothing to do, so I "set off happily". What are you doing? I have been "walking" alone for a while, but I am not very "happy". It would be nice to have another person; Suddenly thought of a person who can * * * "have fun", so I went to see him. These thoughts and actions are expressed in the following words: "Those who have no enjoyment, go to Chengtian Temple to find Zhang Huaimin". Have you met Zhang Huaimin? What did you say when you saw him? What kind of "fun" did you ask him for? Does he agree? In the pen of ordinary people, this is all to be written. The author only wrote two sentences: "Huai Min is still awake and walking in the atrium." Then I wrote this scene: the courtyard is as empty as water, algae are flying in the water, and bamboo forests and cypresses are hidden. When you walk in the atrium, your eyes are attracted by the moonlight in the courtyard, creating an illusion of "water is empty and bright", so that you can see all kinds of aquatic plants criss-crossing. Why are there algae and water plants in the yard? Looking up, I saw bamboo and cypress, and at the same time I saw the bright moon in the blue sky. Only then did I realize that it was not "algae" and "grass", but the shadows of "bamboo" and "cypress" under the moonlight! The metaphor of "moonlight is like water" is often used, but its clever use varies from person to person. It can't be said that the author didn't use this metaphor, but his usage is very different from that of ordinary people and his artistic effect is also very different. Literary thinking is like a surging river, "twists and turns with rocks". Where is it now "unstoppable" and "stopped"? Because of seeing "moonlight entering the house" and "happily starting", it should stop at the month; Seeing "Flowers are Blooming" turned out to be "Shadow of Bamboo and cypress", which should stop at "Bamboo and cypress"; Who appreciates the moon? Who watches bamboo and cypress? It's him and Zhang Huaimin. We should stop him and Zhang Huaimin. So I summed up all this and wrote the following words. Then I stopped leisurely: Why is there no moon at night? Where is there no bamboo and cypress? It's just the lack of free people like us. A few strokes, a piece of life. Narration is simple and clean, picturesque, and lyricism lies in narrative and scenery. Narration, scenery description and lyricism all focus on writing people; When writing about people, it should be emphasized that "leisure" entering "night" means "undressing to sleep" and "leisure"; See "Moonlight Entering the House", then "Set out happily" and "Nothing to do"; With Zhang Huaimin "walking in the atrium", even the "shadow of bamboo and cypress" was seen so carefully and clearly that both of them were "idle". "What night without a month? Where is there no bamboo and cypress? " However, only "the two of us" go out to enjoy the moon and see the bamboos and cypresses on winter nights, because others are busy people and "the two of us" are "idle people". The "idle people" at the end is the finishing touch, comparing the "leisure" of "the two of us" with that of others. Only when he is "idle" can he "swim at night" and enjoy the beautiful scenery on the moonlit night. After reading the whole article, the figures, moods and scenery of the two "idle people" are vivid. (Excerpted from Reading and Appreciation, Beijing Publishing House 1987, abridged)
Words only have short periods, and meanings only have long periods.
-Reading an essay by Su Shi (Wu) The key to writing this article is that the author grasps the characteristics and then expresses it in carefully refined language. On the night of Yuanfeng's 20061October 12, the word "night" of "night tour" was deducted from the pen and entered the topic. "undress and want to sleep, moonlight enters the house." The author was about to fall asleep when he saw the cool moonlight and peeped out of the window. In this way, the "night" mentioned above is concrete. More importantly, it is pointed out that the characteristic of "night" is the harmony of moonlight, not the high black wind. The author grasps this feature and develops pen and ink. Moonlight into the House, such a good night and moonlight, activated the author's feelings, so he "set off happily". The reason for this action is to imitate the night scene of "Moonlight Entering Home". "Those who are happy without thinking, then go to Chengtian Temple to find Zhang Huaimin. Huaimin stayed up and walked in the atrium. " Here, the location of the night tour, fellow travelers and so on are explained. Words such as "Zhi", "Zhi Qiu" and "Zhi Bu" are precise and concise, and explain the coherent process clearly. "Going to Chengtian Temple" is another topic, but the journey to Chengtian Temple is omitted because it has nothing to do with the theme. What is the scene of Looking for Zhang Huaimin? Because it has nothing to do with the theme, it is also paid for. In this way, the people and things that "Yi You" must explain are only expressed in the simplest and most economical language, and the rest are no longer embellished. In particular, the scenery of the night tour is more distinctive: the courtyard is as empty as water, the algae and grass in the water are interlaced, and the bamboo and cypress are hidden. "Water is empty and bright", and a pool of water is clear and transparent. Write the color of water first, and then write about the things in the water: "algae and grass intersect", criss-crossing, swaying. After writing the scenes under the court, I jumped out of this sentence: "Gai Bai Shu Ying also." The meaning of words suddenly changed and the language was surprisingly successful. The author writes about stagnant water and algae in the water first, all for the purpose of writing bamboo and cypress projections, and applying ink from the opposite side with visual illusion to form waves and rhythms of words. Bamboo and cypress can be projected under the court because the author does not make a stroke, which is precisely the ingenious use of pen and ink. There is not a word "month" in the whole sentence, and there is not a word that does not write "month". The bright moon is in the sky, the courtyard is as empty as water, and you can see the moonlight; "Algae and grass cross in the water", which can be inferred from the clear moonlight. Moonlight passes through the branches of bamboo leaves and cypresses and projects on the ground, which will form such a wonderful scene. The empty water and algae are intertwined, which adds three points of beauty to the moonlit trip. In this article, Su Shi uses the word "moon" everywhere to write night trips, which has one characteristic. He writes about the moon, unlike Zhang's "Moonlit Night on the Spring River" in the early Tang Dynasty, with only a few strokes, and the realm is exhausted. This is the second characteristic. Su Shi wrote the night view of the moon, not explicitly, but implicitly. Su Shi starts with the shadow of bamboo and cypress, and clearly says that the moonlight is empty, which is the third feature. Because of its characteristics, the whole description is accurate and vivid. Literary works all contain the author's thoughts and feelings. If it is not enough to be satisfied with the scenery and narration, you must also express the author's thoughts and feelings, which will be memorable. Here, on the one hand, we should enrich the objective content summarized in the language; On the one hand, we should express the subjective content, that is, the author's thoughts and feelings are far-reaching. Su Shi's prose also provides an example. This article is about scenery, but there is affection in it. When the author saw "moonlight entering the house", he "set off happily", and his joy was beyond words. "Thinking without happiness" is a kind of psychological activity, which contains the regret of few bosom friends and a faint sigh, which makes the mood slightly shaken. After a turning point, the author suddenly remembered Zhang Huaimin. "Sui" seems to be unthinking, but it reveals that only people are bosom friends who appreciate the moon. The word "beg" clearly shows the eagerness to visit friends. The word "one" of "I have not slept with the people" shows "the harmonious heartbeat of the sacred unicorn" and the joy of knowing each other. In the pouring moonlight, the two "strolled in the atrium" and strolled among them, and their pleasant mood was pinned on the synchronized brisk rhythm. From "thinking without thinking, enjoying oneself" to "strolling in the atrium", the author's leisure has experienced many twists and turns, and finally stabilized in Rong Zhi's peaceful state of mind. The author looks for friends to visit the temple, writes about the beautiful scenery of the moonlit night, and then introduces the scene in front of him and tells his life story: "Why is there no moon at night?" Where is there no bamboo and cypress? But there are few idle people like my ears. "Su Shi suffered from literary inquisition and was demoted to assistant ambassador of Huangzhou Yingyong. He was almost in exile and unhappy. But he is still enterprising, and visiting the temple on a moonlit night is a concrete action to relieve depression. The soul damaged in the political whirlpool can only be recovered in the cool moonlight night and seek spiritual sustenance from the beautiful scenery of nature. There is no bright moon at night, there are no white shadows of bamboo branches, but there are few people like me. "The vastness of time and space, the big system is small, and there is no expression, but its feelings are self-evident and deep in words. And this kind of feeling has its particularity, which is manifested in broadmindedness. The author is not indulging in the abyss of feelings, but seeking liberation. This broad-minded state of mind reflects Su Shi's ideological situation in this period, and also makes this essay look chic and elegant. (Selected from Appreciation of Ancient and Modern Masterpieces, Beijing Publishing House, 1989 edition)